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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: eshalli

Awesome update dear
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm


Thank u so much dear😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

it's shocking that maan had an obsessed lover who he never loved and she is anika.never expected it.can't believe that she is the one who is after geet's life.who is helping her?anika's intro in fb was nice.nice prank on ranjeeth


Thank u so much jaso di😳
Anika..😲
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Awesome update

I think mysterious man uncle only killed anika
Geet got maan father all r angry with him but she is trying to solve what happened to rana
I think pammi is responsible for his condition


Thank u so much dear😳
let see ur guessing right or wrong😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree


Awesome, lovely n wonderful updates


Thank u so much dear😳😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

my pleasure dear😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 41

Poor Maan he is not aware about the Jasmine and sweet dish and what it signifies so innocently he asked everyone and it seems like they all could not answer him and when finally Raghav uncle explains Maan he is so embarrassed but why did Geet get angry when she also knows that Maan is not aware of her traditions
Daadima longing for her son and wishes to see him back in her life and her grand children but Maan and Vicky were adamant that they don't need him
Daadima was deeply hurt she is a mother so she would feel a different pain
Vicky explains Choti about his parents and notices she carries the same pain as him

Thanks once again for the character sketch its true I've forgotten about these new characters


Thank u so much for sweet comment bhai😳😳😳.
iN angry time girl not think any logic bhai😆
vicky shared his pain to choti and in her talk he guessed her pain also..😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 42

Oh that was so sweet Maan buying the flowers and sweet dish for Geet but it was just to see
her reactions
but he also promises once they officially married then he'll buy flowers and a sweet dish every night for her
so Daadi was the one that saw Maan coming out of Geet's room
and she decides that both will not be together until the marriage but this is dangerous as Pammi now can get to Geet easily and what about that mystery man he still has not been found
Pammi telling her kids that she loves them and the entire family and it does seem like they not interested in her talks
Geet and Maan's bedroom scene small but cute indeed


Thank u so much for lovely comment😳😳😳
yeah devil pammi..😡
maaneet always cute na😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmajain

awesome update
poor maan usko pata hi ni Jasmine aur alvaa ka raaz sabse puch liya aur jab raguram unlce ne bataya tho maan sharam se paani paani hogaya
maneet romance cute
dadi missing her son vicky angry with dadi
dadi ke restriction maneet parr
choti and vicky moment very sweet
geet making vicky realise his love
geet and shasha cat fight superb
shasha ko acha jawab diya geet neet
waiting for next

Thank u so much for lovely dear😳😳😳
yeah maan embrassed😆
updating now😉
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Thanks for liking and comments dearies, If any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part..i am sorry..

Part 49

Pammi enter in mansion , her legs strucked in her place..her whole body shivering seeing that person..pammi closed her eyes.

Pammi (mind): no , he is not real..how its possible..he become alive..with storming in her brain.

Sam shaked pammi arms : bua, see rana uncle come back..with shocked face.

Pammi open her eyes : so he is alive..how ..with murmuring voice.

Pammi legs start move to rana with fear step and mind thinking if he said anything to maan..he will kill me..what I will do..with shivering body.

Pammi : rana..with shivering voice..

Rana angry glare to pammi : why ...u ..did it..

Pammi fake tears face: forgive me rana..with kneel down in front of him.

Rana: u ...forgiv...e me ...

Pammi (mind): why he ask me forgiveness..if he did not remember anything..with hope voice..let check first.

Pammi cupped his hand and teary face: where u went ..in these years , where u stayed..without our children and ur family , how its possible for u..with crocodile tears.

Rana: a fter...I am not .remember..anything..

Geet come from kitchen : Maaji, babuji not remember anything..he lost some years of memeory because of accident.

Pammi: if he get memory back with curious voice.

Geet: doctor said , he get or he never get memory back in his life time.

Pammi relif lightly : oh..how he come back our home , geet beta with sugar coated voice.

Geet: I am only bring him back to mansion..

Pammi (mind): I guess it..u only do this how maan accept him to mansion, even he is rudeless person in business field but infront of her, he behaved like kid..what magic she did it for him..he roaming behind her ..

Geet : maaji, what u starring me

Pammi smile: I admiring ur talent...

Geet : babuji, u need rest..i already informed doctor, she come to mansion for ur check up.

Pammi: why doctor with fear face.

Geet : nothing maaji, oh babuji have stammering and his legs have paralysed attack.and need complete check up...

Pammi: after doctor arrived infrom me, I need talk with doctor.

Geet : Ji maaji..

*******

Pammi shouting in phone: bhai, u said right, he dead..how he come back alive.

Pammi bhai : what he come back..how its possible..if he said anything to anyone with fear face.

Pammi: thank god, he got memoeryloss otherwise we r finish by maan hand.. maan kill us fraction of sec..

Bhai: time god..

Pammi: when u come back , my every plan going flopped only , that stupid geet , she trust maan more than her..she never think , he betray her in dream also same like that maan, he madly love with her..he held her pallo ( saree pallo) roaming everywhere , she going as he going behind her..he changed like play toy for her..

Bhai: not bad, we need to praise her talent..if her talent have little brain in my daughter and u, we get khurana property before itself.

Pammi: don't blame me, everytime...when u come back to mansion.

Bhai: before marriage, I come back their life with smirked face.

Pammi: come soon, u r children r waste fellow..they r nothing ..with angry tone.

Bhai: I am coming..last few months how penentrate everyone like good daughter in law..doing same..

Pammi : yes..with irriate face.

Bhai: ok..cut the call..

*************

Office..

Receptionist called geet and she attend the call.

Geet: hello..

Recep: mam, some one come to meet her, he have no appoint with him..he said, he very close to maan sir..

Geet : ok , I am coming..

Geet come to reception area..her chappal touched floor water, geet eyes moving to upper and her leg slip before she reached to ground , one strong arms held her waist..she closed her eyes insake of sudden slip..

Man : are u alright..with genine voice.

Geet open her eyes and look at person..: yes, ..i am alright..she stand her own legs as he helped her..

Geet turned back and maan stand in angry face..

Geet : maan sir..with slow voice.

Maan: why u come to my office with angry voice.

Man pout face: wow, long back, I come to see u..but u ask me, why u come to my office with dramatic tone..

Adi come to reception area and eyes popped seeing that person..

Adi hit his back : hey flirty..with angry face..

Man: alteast , u remembered me not like him..with puppy face.

Adi hit his forhead : we search u everywhere..but where u lost..with angry tone.

Man: talk later , first give hug for ur friend..

Adi hugged him : I miss u, our gang miss u so much, flirty..

Maan straighty went to cabin with angry face..

Adi: u need to manoify him...

Man: its easy for me..with smirked face.

Geet (mind): kya easy..calm valcono easily kya ..with chuckling face.

Maan cabin

Maan hit his hand to table forcely : how dare, he come back with angry face..

Man silently enter in maan cabin, man seeing maan back only..

Man (mind): uff..he angry so much..what will do..let fallen his legs ..but its not suitable for me.

Man run to hug maan in back side : maan, plz forgive me...I am sorry..i am sorry..its my sin , without inform u all..i went to abroad..after I did not contact u..sorry for that , plz forgive ur best friend..

Maan: u r worst friend not best friend with grinned teeth.

Man: sorry maan..if u want slap me also but forgive ur friend.

Maan tried remove from his hug but man held him tightly..

Maan : leave me idiot..

Man: no, until u forgive me..i am not leave u..

Maan hit his private part and man realize his hand from maan..

Man screaming : ouch,..hey stupid, till now I am not father of my child, u try to snatch my father wish from me..with painful face.

Maan lips crept smile: flirty ..

Man : hey man, u smiled ..so u forgive me..

Maan back to rude face: no, I am not..

Man: I know, u smiled..Great MSK lieing ..with chuckled face.

Maan : Ranjith,stop ur drama..

Man hugged maan: how r u man..

Maan: I am fine, what about u..with smiling face.

Adi and geet enter cabin..geet surprised seeing their hug..

Geet : not bad..with murmuring face.

Adi: u both, patch up..i called sanskar , he coming and give his payback time for u, ranjith..with smirked face.

Ranjith: thank u , my dear friend..with grinned teeth


Ranjith look at geet: hi beautiful with flirty tone..

Maan glare to ranjith and rolling his eyes..

Geet: hello...young man..with same flirty tone while winked eyes to maan.

Ranjith held geet palm : by the way, what is ur beautiful name..

Geet saying before maan remove his hand from geet hand..

Maan : geet, plz bring black coffee and ranjith for..

Ranjith : maan, if I get ice..its ok for me with pout face.

Geet: why not, which flavours , u want sir..

Ranjith : any flavours but I need ice with crying fake..

Geet chuckled seeing his face..and maan got angry..

Maan: geet bring one black coffee and soft drinks for him.with ordering tone.

Geet nod her head (mind): MSk ordering me..if he order me na, he know what I do with him..poor boy with smirked face and geet left the place.

After minutes , sanskar enter in maan cabin..he start his scold session to ranjith...they start and remembered their college days..

Geet enter maan cabin with poen and poen served every one coffee and soft drink to ranjith and poen left the place.

Ranjith look at geet: thanks sweetheart..with flirty tone..ranjith kneel down infront of geet and geet weird look at him and raise her eyes as look at maan , maan eyes already started burning him through his eyes ..geet naughty look to maan

Ranjith held her palm in his kneel down position :u look so beautiful..u come with me dinner, tonight..

Maan , adi and sanskar angry glare to Ranjith..

Geet tried control her laugh :first, u need ask permission for three of them.

Ranjith : three person..

Geet: yes, my bhai, my jiju and my hubby with smirked face.

Ranjith : what u already married ..who s that three idiot in ur life and my main villain , ur hubby..where he is ..with grinned face.

Geet pointed his back and ranjith turn back as six eyes angry glaze to him..

Ranjith standing from kneel down position with sheepish face: why everyone angry with me..

Geet side hug to sanskar and adi : first point out sanskar , he is my bhai and next her hand pointed to adi ,he is my jiju..and geet come to maan side and he is..

Maan pulled her and place his hand in her waist : I am our main villain..her hubby..meet my wife, Geetanjali Maan singh Khurana..

Ranjith : hello, bhabhi..how r u..

Geet mouth ope widely :what bhabhi..with in fraction of second, I am changed to ur bhabhi..

Ranjith : bless ur devar and save from ur three idiots.

Geet : sorry , Mr ranjith, u not my devar..i have already one devar..he is very possessive with me.he cannot share his devar place to anyone.

Ranjith : u mention that Vicky duffer..with chuckling face.

Geet angry glare to ranjith : Mr, don't call him to duffer..he is my devar..


Ranjith : opps over protective bhabhi for over possessive devar..

Geet look at maan: what ever, maan..i am going to mansion..i need pack my things..u come with me..

Maan : no geet, u go with siva..i already informed him..with in few minutes, he come to office..u go with him.

Geet : come home soon with bossy voice.maan nod his head..

Ranjith murmuring voice to sanskar and adi: if iam seeing real or dream..

Adi : why u have doubt..

Ranjith : girl bossing MSK..he also nod his head like puppy .

Sanskar : she is my sister..with proud tone while rasing his collar

Ranjith : insake only, I have a doubt..

Sanskar : oyie, In our college day, u already got big lecture from her..dont forgot it..

Ranjith shout : she is our maan ka toofan mail..

Geet : what..

Ranjith : nothing..

Geet : jiju, bhai and maan come back soon..and u also come to our home..with polite voice.

***********

Mall..

Geet, swara , choti ,Vicky , maan , pinky and sanskar ..yes, maan already clear every crowd for ladies shopping..

Geet : uff ur bhai bina..without crowds , how shopping it become fun.

Swara: yes, bhahbhi..we get boring in this place..let say to bhai, bring jewel and dress to mansion with pout face.

Choti : yeah di..it boring..

Geet : ok , first we chose some dress only even though tomorrow wedding planner come to mansion, u say what dress u want for every marriage ceremony..they design ur dress for u..

Pinky : geet, marriage for u not for them with smiling face.

Geet smiled : ok..first select some costume..

Girls started their shopping but never end ..

Boys irriate more..

Maan: when they shopping going be finish..

Sanskar: god only know this..

God : even, I am also don't know that..with pout face.😆

Maan : mishty..

Geet : yes..maan.

Maan: choti , calling u to dressing room..

Geet head seeking choti but she not here..may be need help for change her dress..geet nod her head and went inside to dressing room.

Geet : choti not here..maan enter in dressing room and locked his dressing room door.

Geet : so, its my hubby plan.


Maan pinned her to wall : yes..no one give space spend time with u..with pout face..

Geet nod her head with pout face..

Maan : I help u..change ur dress with naughty face..

Geet: no need, I have my hand..i don't need ur help..

Maan hand rubbing her bare shoulder like massage..geet enjoying his massage like lightly moaning his name..

Maan lips placed her bare neck and his lips lightly move to nape , her collar bone..

Geet held her dress tightly and lighty bit her corner lips.

Maan one hand roaming her bare back and other hand searching her bare wasit ..

Geet : maan..with moaning voice..

Maan : hmm..he busy with senusual kiss ..

Geet : if some one come ..with slow voice

Maan look at geet blushed face..without say anything he placed his lip to her lip ..he sucked her lower lip and geet give more space him to control her..her hand held his hairs as she pulled him more to her..both enjoyed their romantic kiss..after few minutes, he leave her lips and come back to neck as place kissing to her low neck..

Geet push him lightly with blushing face..Maan pout face..

Maan: why u push me..with baby angry face

Geet : if someone come to see..

Maan hug her once again: no one come..

Geet once again push him: no..stay away..before our gang searching us..we need go..lets go..tried open to lock but maan tried lock the door..

Maan: I am in romance moods, don't spoil my moods..

Geet pinched his cheeks: u everytime romance mood only na..today what special MSK..with teasing tone

Maan hug her back : because of u going to Chennai.tomorrow.after one weeks, I cannot see u..i miss u so much..after our marriage ritual , no one leave u alone..so today I spend full day with u..

Geet: then office..

Maan: ur pyaari jiju..here na..

Geet rolled her eyes: After haldi, we did not see each other..with pout face.

Maan: who said,my maa is south india..there no restriction groom seeing bride until marriage..

Geet: so u did big research for our marriage..

Maan: yup..

Geet: hmm..u waste ur time to speak in our first night also with smirked face..

Maan naughty : our first night , no speak only action...now I give one demo for our first night..with lusty eyes roaming her body shameless..

Geet pushed him to wall and open the door..two person fallen to her legs..

Geet : choti, vikcy..what r doing here with angry voice..

Choti and Vicky get up from floor with sheepish smile : oh...we searching u, we heared some sound come from trail room..so..

maan: so u both eavesdropping..with angry face

Choti and Vicky unison: no..now only we come..with sheepish smile.

Geet tried move that place..but choti held her wrist..

Choti get something in her bag and give to geet..

Geet: make up set...

Choti chuckling face: u need most now..with teasing tone..

Geet turned look at mirror..and her eyes kajol and lip sticks messed up and her lips so sore ..nape have some little love marks..

Vicky give kerchief to maan: bhai..this is for u..with teasing tone..

Maaneet embrased and geet hide her face to maan chest..

Maan grinned teeth: u both get lost the place or not..

Vicky : no..

Choti dragged Vicky to outside : enjoy jiju but come soon..with winked eyes.

Maan: they went out sweethearts ..with his hand starting his work..geet pushed him..

Geet: today devil not leave me..they make my life hell through their teasing ..because of u ..


geet applied lips stick in her lips and kajol in her eyes.

Maan gulped his saliva seeing her cheer lip glowing more insake of lipstick..he want eat her cheer lip once again..but he fear about his sherni ..( yeah Great MSK fear about geet..)

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Next day ..

Dadi and girls waiting for important person..

Choti: dadi, they r not coming yet..

Dadi: see..they arrived.

Pinky : who dadi..

Dadi: Ana's wedding planner owner..we give contract to their company only for maan and geet marriage..

Two girls walking in attitude way and she wore long skirt and top with scarf in their neck..both wore same colour dress ..and feld their hand infront of dadi..

Girls : Namsate madam..

Dadi: Namastey Beta..

One girl: I am MGF ( Maaneetfavo) and she is my twin sis, fantasy .

Dadi : come sit and then we discuss about marriage arrangement.

Servant serve coffee to wedding planner..

MGF & Fantasy: No, mam, we don't need anything..Thanks for ur warmly welcome.

MGF: mam, where is bride ..

Choti: see, di coming in downstairs..

MGF : she look beautiful like angel..

Dadi: yes , our angel ..

Fantasy : We do marriage arrangement like paradise..in earth u seeing heaven in ur angel marriage day..

Dadi: thanks beta.

Geet sit next with dadi ..sam also come to hall and sit next with them.

Choti: di..what u themes select for marriage arrangement..

Suspense ..voice come from entrance..

MGF & fantasy smiled: They came..

Pinky : who that two young girls..

MGF : Naaz & Pooja..our assistant but they like our sisters..fantasy nod her head ..

Naaz: sorry didu, we struck in traffic..

MGF : no problem , baby..

Pooja: before , we came, u started marriage preparation work didu with pout face.

Fantasy : kutty, we did not started yet..come sit and we do our work..

Pooja smiled: then Ok

MGF : mam, Fantasy doing superviszing groom side ritual and Naaz her assisitant..u need anything,u will inform naaz..she do whatever u want..and me and Pooja doing supervising bride side ritual..i think its ok for u, mam..

Dadi: yes beta..

Pinky , swara and choti: then our dress..with pout face.

Fantasy : don't worry girls, we have best designer..u will get every ceremony suitable costume for u..mainly our bride and groom dress very special costume for them to every ceremony..

Sam: I need also special one..with attitude and arrogant voice

Pooja & Naaz (mind): we select special dress for u.with evily smile.

MGF (mind): opps they start thinking evily with her..poor sam, what torture get by them. With nods their negatively..

Fantasy : thanks for trusting our work..we do our best..

Dadi : today, we leaving pollachi..when u all come to pollachi.

MGF : we already started our work in pollachi..after two days, everyone got personal wedding invitation, mam..ok we leaving..we do more work for wedding..its not ordinary ..Great Maan singh Khurana weds princess Geetanjali Varman Chakravarthy..its very special wedding planning for us..thanks for contract..

Pooja & Naaz: didu, then our dress also made by our designer..

MGF : yes darling..

Dadi: I hope u give ur best..

MGF & fantasy smiled: we hope, we never break ur trust..

MGF & Fantasy: we meet u in Wedding ceremony..

Part end..

NEXT PART



Maaneet wedding invitation - pg 103 & next part ( 50 th part )

THREAD 5 - wedding part


Dadi : geet beta, u r here then who married with Maan..with shocked face..


Geet shocked and tears flowing in her eyes..

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