Predestined!#T1 Maaneet FF MG [THREAD 3 Opened]7th sep

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nigah

@nigah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#921

Nice update ...loving the way you write and express their feelings...well a new character seems to be interesting... and about maan and geet , they did'nt miss a chance to grab opportunity😆 ...hope so things are going to be better soon ...

And the story is getting interesting day by day...

Hope you update decorating the enigma soon...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#922

hey! hope u r well! thanks 4 updating! beautiful update! excellently written! Ahlam full of questions! was Maan acting or what? he calls jaan n is touchy feely n kisses her! he says he loves her! Geet stunned! she goes with the flow as well! Mana tries 2 2 get rid of her but unsuccessful! Ahlam asks hw they met n Maan explains! loved hw he described their first meeting! Geet surprised! Ahlam genuinely happy 4 Maaneet! Geet n Ahlam talk n Maan worried! y does he nt want them 2 get close? Geet curious abt Ahlam! they exchange phone numbers! Geet's thought well portrayed! she finds Maan's behavior weird! she realises she loves Maan! Maan questions interrupts her thoughts! update soon

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i rok

@i rok

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Posted: 8 years ago

#923

Great update...
maan acting in infront of ahlam but for geet wanted it to be real...
geet feeding maan
maan acting all lovey dovey..
maan describes his first meeting,geet thinks he might have feelings..
geet and ahlam being freinds..she wants to know more about maan and his past..about his life and parents
maan still wannna know why she wearing his shirt...
lets see what happens next..update soon

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#924

excellent update maan predenting all lovey dovey in front of ahlam and geet is no less traping him in his own game...so ahlam is positive here she was genuinely happy for maan and geet and wasn't jealous of her maybe she was just attracted to maan...why maan didn't let her tell geet how they met and isn't he happy about geet and ahlam's bonding what is he hiding from geet...so geet finally realised that she loves maan and she is all Set to find why he is like this and what is his past...maan now all set with his questions now waiting to see what geet answers him in her style...contine soon...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#925

no one is less...geet n maan going hand to hand...

lovely update...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#926

Amazing update
I kinda like this ahlam
She is so genuine
Maaneet moments were awesome
The way he described their encounters
Wonderful
Geet finally realised
Her sweet coconut !!! Her husband
She loves him !!!
The new frndship between her n ahlam might give her an insight abt maaans past
WIting for more

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: priya_21
congrates for month anniversary

thanks a lot dear!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#928

Nice update dear

Loved it!!

Maan was pretending all lovey dovey infront of Ahlam . Geet who knew what's cooking in maan's brain trapped him in his own web of pretense and game. Loved Maaneet soft on and warm hearted act to the core. Ahlam was genuinely happy for Maaneet and the curious cat inside her wanted to know abt maaneet's first meet . Loved the way Maan described their first meet and Geet observed affection in maan's eyes for her whilst describing their first meet but shuggred off her thoughts. But lookslike Maan meant each and every words from heart. It was like Maaneet's each gestures towards each other symbolizes their feelings and unsaid love , which they protrayed as a act.

Geet and Ahlam clicked together in an instant and Ahlam seems to be positive person who wants Maan's happiness. Maan wasn't pleased with Geet & Ahlam's camaraderie and wants to keep geet way from Ahlam for some reasons. Ahlam may give insights about Maan's past and about his family as family well.

Geet's thoughts were revolving around their foreplay and she realised her feelings for Maan. She realised that she loves Maan. Loved geet's monologue.

Maan was back with his questions which brought Geet back from her thoughts and new found endurance for Maan.

Thanks for the pm !

:))

Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago