MG FF- Someone Like You THREAD 8 - Page 48

Will be eagerly waiting for the next beautiful chapter... somehow I have a feeling it will make us cry even more... at least for sometime.

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

ohh no no no😆i love separations and tragedies if you should know..

happy endings are just mundane for me😉

Nahiii, not this time Not for long at least. Pretty please!! They are two conplicated souls so I understand this can take time to mend... but I hope they do discover love eventually. Maan is not going to fight for mankind like kanha afterall and Geet does not have a great support system like Radha either. They need each other to support one another at every walk of life! They have to come back together else the story will be incomplete... they are humans, can't live through the same separation that Kanha and Radha went through.

Ms Writer- have you considered compiling your stories into a formal word document and publish it as a electronic book via Amazon? Find out the process and start working on it. At the beginning it might be a small viewership but eventually it will build up and grow. Give it try!

I'd buy your electronic Maaneet novels.

The song was a perfect choice Ms Writer..., where do you get these ideas from?

Marvelous, extremely captivating update. One could feel the longingness Radha felt when she saw Kanha leaving her and their reference you always put up with Maaneet's situation is overwhelming. Maan's confession was truly heart thudding with full of apprehension and anticipation. The way he shared his likings one by one and finally the most precious one has really got her stunned. The confession shocked Geet as she always thought unworthy of her to have been loved by someone like Maan. The song choice was so apt, more so in Maan's point of view. My awesome writer, I am in love with your style of romance . The way you describe every situation is like one visualising the whole scene right in front of your eyes. Hope Pooja helps Geet in understanding Maan and there is nothing wrong in falling in love again. So so beautifully written. Can't wait for the next update.

Yeah, can't wait for the next update... really. Just like everyone else here.

Never mind let's move to our few words 😛

I'm just here to paste that nothing else 😆

I'm still drooling over your sweet reply 😳

First I thought I'll not comment but finish of my reading then thought I can at least write few words for one chapter if not comment as something is better than nothing...

That the least I can do for both of our benefit... My energy will be saved and your time also will not waste in my long comment... Also I've not enough energy to write a proper comment my health is acting very weird after this journey anything it will trouble me with uninviting pain so I'm better off with few words ...best of luck to me 😆

Chapter 60.It Was Something That Was Meant To Be...

Finally Marium is here with her date with "Someone Like You" And I hope I'll be having some awesome time sharing my feelings with the author telling her how it was to read her after almost like whole 2 months never mind fault was her only had she not written so beautifully I would have finished my comment with few words but she always do opposite and I end up elaborating my comment always...

Wish I would have at least written so many things on my exams paper also but text books and study seems boring but story of Maaneet is something I should call magic yea that's right so your story always had an bad affect on me it always brings so much with just one chapter I get failed to make it short...

Let's see how long we can write few words and you can read we have 6 chapter to finish so best of Luck to both of us

Ana and Arush Sound so good together finally this girl has step ahead and send him friend request after searching him on social network life has become so easy digital life I see...

Unless imagine old Time if there was no internet then it would have been impossible to contact within seconds huh we should not go there but move on to our story and comment...

I'm feeling sleepy already how I will finish Allah knows...*** yawning***

It's good experience to read but bad to comment 😔

Had she moved on from Raj Ana was thinking about her brother and geet I'll say yes she is but buddhu ladki ko khud PATA nahi that she had moved on and accepted new ones in life...


Their Childish fight at nightclub was really unusual of both of them but things like that happens in our life when we are angry so it's okay and it's good that both of them is realizing their mistake...

Raj looks same like before aree baba ye ladka Etna handsome hain umar toh bas number banke reh gaye he's still the same hot and handsome... Hayee I'm in my dreamland with Hrithik 🤗

Mr.Sensible toh devdas ban gaye lagta hain Miami jake ...not even replying her text...😕
Bechari geet ...

Why Can't she confess she doesn't want to see anybody she should be straight forward with her family I mean Raj and pooja she should express her feelings with them instead of seeing boys ...

Ohh Mr.Sensible reached her apartment now that was unexpected and their talk Aww girl you stole my heart there again in this chapter I can't express how good it feels to read them patching up it's really some beautiful experience and I've a question agar inko aise milana hi tha then why did you make me cry women ?

I've cried at least an hour that day reading chapter 58 that nightclub thing why did you scare me so much... Not talking to you Miss.Kawaii 😡


Ana got reply from Arush Yipeee I like this boy 😉 Premchand ko pehchanta hain but anatara ko nahi 😆 Anatra se yaad aaya I've a friend name Antara ...

And other friend name Sanjana to whom I used to send screenshot of SLY after reading chapter 1 she asked who is Anatra???

And I was like what is she asking I said did you forgot Anatra is our friend her other name is Bristy don't you remember and she said aree not our friend I'm asking about story I was then like ohhh aise bolo na Ana she's Maans younger sister
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Okay we should be completing our comment now ...

Ahh new year wishes I see both of them wishing and both phone conversation was my favourite I've just Loved loved this chapter... You have written it really beautifully...

Huh abhi bas ek ka khatam huya baki hain 5 or chapter... Jaldi jaldi khatam karte hain okay...This one is quite short comparing to others 😛 Hope baki sab bhi aisa ho 😆

Well they were my few words not proper comment ...you know how I comment right 😉


Chapter 61.Betakalluf...

Arush is quite Smart guy and I already like his equation with Ana both will be quite a pair together...

Actually after their patch up everything feels so so good to read... I can feel the happiness of geet like it's me who talks with him it's me who is egarly waiting to go back home and waiting to run into his arms... It feels ages that they were together ...it feels empty when both are not together but from when they talk and sort it out it feels homely...

Pooja had point it out she has changed a lot and her new habits to listening this old song only remind me of Maan and all those moments which has spent on study room...

Geet in the mean of sharing her own life end up telling Maans that's how they are now connected with each other which she's not realizing...

She's thinking she's not capable of him but in love this thing can never be an issue she's yet to realize many things
..Little storm is yet to see many truth of this life... Who has even asked her to give love to anyone this came automatically she's thinking she's doesn't have more love in her life to give someone that place but geet Maan has already taken his own place in your heart which is difficult to erase...

Egarly waiting for that moment when they will meet again...

You know I feel scared often to face the truth to face that coming phase when they will not be together again I don't want to think about that but I can feel it's coming the way they both are opening their heart to each other confessing their feelings and how much important they are sharing all those only indicating the time is there...

She's so scared to lose him but she will chose on her own to Leave just cause she feel she doesn't deserve him I'm feeling her pain already...

Their being together give me feel of at being home it's feels really soothing to read that they are right there beside walking along in this path... You have really beautifully written that moment here this meet was excellent...

He's an introvert I wasn't surprise at all but knowing he's point of view it feels good to read... You know what when I was reading this chapter I've feel you feel the same like Maan said Being the eldest he have to act strong and set example but sometimes he shut himself on his own ...do you feel the same??

A writer write many things from his own..

A story sometimes depict author thoughts it more works like mirror sometimes... Whatever it was it feels really good to read you again after so many days and this chapter was one of the best the way you have presented everything it was wonderful...

4 more chapter to go...

Chapter 62.Time Flew So Fast Like It Were On Fire...

I'm feeling the same like time really fly so fast I can't believe the moment is here and he can confess anytime soon that's really unbelievable for me now I'm already feeling so upset thinking of prologue how did we walked this long way ??

I'm feeling like going back to past and live in those moments only...

It's been really a year that Dadima gone it feels so unreal how come we didn't realized we have come so far how many things has changed in one year how much Maan geet has changed..

Both meant so much to one another now everything feels like a dream now... She has come only for him they both already aware of their importance than why geet can't accept her own feelings why even I'm asking I already know it better...

Losing your Loved ones can never be easy I can never imagine my own self without anyone member of my family if ever it happens there will be no Marium like this it's not in me to accept that loss that's why I feel so connected with Maan regarding dadima's demise...

This time of confession has came so fast he's ready to do it cause she really need it now and deserve to know.

She will be leaving for London will she really go back there leaving everything here and this confession may give her better another reason to do it... I'm so afraid...

And this incident scared me off but thank Allah she's fine and also Ana but Maan he decided to confess NOW 😲 Ohh my I'm so nervous anxious and what not feeling like biting my nails but that's not a good habit Ignore me I'm sometimes on my nonsense mode..😆

Chapter 63.Someone Like You

Is it ending??? Do you remember The very First chapter tittle was Same "Someone Like you" and here same I'm already scared that dreading moment will be on this chapter ...

One question he said he had fallen in love with her at 1st meeting and I'm confused which one their 1st proper meeting was at office and he had seen her before twice 1st at pics when he had clicked her along with Ana and Kabir when he deleted her pics... And in rain when the song was at background ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si ...

You know I'm smiling right now recalling those past moments everything is so fresh in my mind it's hard to believe prologue is here and she's gone giving him letter...

Arush and Ana hmm badiya chal raha hain dono mein chakkar

Things are changing for better between both...

Miss.Kawaii you know I so much Miss reading sly miss being at thread and spamming for no reason talking nonstop there I miss my home I really miss those days 😭

I miss calling you Miss.Kawaii I miss talking with you...

Geet wasn't ready to leave NYC but seems like he's confession really give her reason to run away from here and she's going away will he not stop her??

Arush is here to meet Ana so sweet ..
He had seen geet but what's use of it she's going away... Tell you what I totally disliked this portion of this chapter didn't feel good at all reading this last half where she's crying to go back and leaving this letter 1st half is better and who's this who got the letter????

I'm suspicious is it maan or anyone else??

2 chapter more to go

Chapter 64.Traceless Star

I had a feeling that Kanha and Radha will be in coming chapter and it happened well I'm happy to read them after such long time it was good to read...

Geet what could I do with this girl she doesn't even know what she feel for Maan she's still confused don't know about her own feelings she's unsure and what is the need to name their relation it still can be kept unnamed she just have to be there with him not running away... What can I even say to her I know her now for such long time and yea She's in so much turmoil wish Maan could understand her situation...

And this new twist it was Ana who read it...
Don't know if Maan will get to read it or not??

He's already so restless what it will be like that moment he will read...

I can't even bring myself to imagine in that state of Maan it will be painful but I've faith in him he will not give up he had to fight for both cause little Strom isn't even that strong to fight for them...

Flashback is quite anticipated now that moment of confession I'm so egarly waiting to read...aww she wear sari good choice for this confession and also occasion I have loved the whole flashback you have written it in really really beautiful way...

Chapter 65 the last one sorry but I can not bring myself to comment on this one you have written it so so amazingly that when I've find myself finish reading A tear drop from my eye it was so overwhelming his confession was so beautiful one of the best confession I've ever read you have made me fall in love with this story all over again I can scream it thousands time that I love this story so so much more than anything... He's confession has put me on high pedestal.I've always been so emotional when it comes to sly it's cause I'm so attached with this story... Many times it happened I become speechless after reading one chapter and could not comment this chapter was one of them...

I could not believe that confession moment happened on Study room wowww Also they danced it can't get any better than this...I've really really Loved loved his confession his confession... This one chapter the best and most beautiful chapter of sly that made me so speechless that I don't know what to say 🤣

Inn sha Allah I'll read his confession several time more before I properly comment on this chapter right now I am so emotional that I am feeling loss of words to say how this chapter was... I need time I really need to read it more and more before saying anything about it... It was really brilliant and I'm not that worthy to tell you how good you were in this chapter cause you deserve more and more appreciation..

If I would have been in a good health state I could have comment but Last two days going very bad with me...I can't do more than this...

I'LL READ AND COMMENT later.
You know one thing I felt for this writer she's wonderful in her own writing and that is why I'm huge fan of hers... love you Miss.Kawaii this chapter was really really Wonderful amazing excellent marvelous beautiful baki words tum khud manage karlo isse zayada mere se bola nahi jayega 😆