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K1k1k1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1131

Asomse part 9 to 13 mann and geet getting naught each day and Sameera in love with mann I feel sorry for her when she find out thing that Dev and geet in love
Dev try get lady love sweet
Dadima is wait for her son to annoyance manneet engagement

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Part 14 to 21

Geet and mann enjoyed time together in the rain but she got stalker following her mann her late one day and he point gun at her he ask follow him she get sarcred and kick him and run when chance her she ring mann over agin and he answer tell hurry up somebody changing her mann panic tell driver to go fast Sam worried what happen he tell and see geet and jump out car asking if she okay and kiss her Sam not lone close and little jelous everybody worried want happen mann as go at th. say why nobody told get her body guard which she hates there take nick out of mann sam want spend time with mann but never get too

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K1k1k1

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Posted: 7 years ago

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22 to come 27
Mann been look after geet spending time with her son her room and been naughty which geet like too but he wsnt do everything for her but nurse help too there still get time together because working from home he getting to over protective with geet and can't live with our her dadima ask Annie to get geet for breakfast sam day she get today she happy that her mann will go with her today in the car spend time together go upstairs she she geet door shut thing she sleep but hear noise and go in the room which shock her what manneet are doing she get angry and thrn mann hear something sh knock again
Geet tell she be down soon
Mann try to get hold of geet she not answering he worried Sam can see in his face ask him want up such say he worried about geet thrn text her she reply back he smiles
Dev and geet are try make nt jealous while dancing together mann get son upset why did geet lie to him
Want go happen now

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1134

kabhi kabhi purane babies ko yaad karna padhta hain...Haww...I thought it got locked lol!!!

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manju-ujnam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1135

Hi! I liked mortal promises.. I read 2 chapters in the blog.. They are very close to revealing each otheer that they love one another.

and then I look into the number of chapters available. Sure there are lot.. That moment I understood it is their saga.. a beautiful journey..

Please let me be part of it.. can you please give me its password :)

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1136

Originally posted by: manju-ujnam
Hi! I liked mortal promises.. I read 2 chapters in the blog.. They are very close to revealing each otheer that they love one another.
and then I look into the number of chapters available. Sure there are lot.. That moment I understood it is their saga.. a beautiful journey..
Please let me be part of it.. can you please give me its password :)

Hey sweets.. Welcome to Mortal promises...

I am glad that you want to read it... I saw your pm and replied you there...

Bear in mind this is my very first story and the earlier updates have a lot of errors and I used a much simpler language to have a grip at the audience...

Chapters - They are already 51 chapters and ongoing... 😆 I don't know if you will be able to hold your interest till then... However try it on your own risk...😆

Thanks and regards!! 😳⭐️

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1135582

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1137

Hi i have stumbled across your stories

And I love your writing. Read your os and ss. I really want to read this story. Please share the password.

Part 1 is very very intriguing. I love how you describe everything and mesmerised with how you build the chemistry.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1138

Chapter 1

Geet is in km for her studies. She is restless for some reason. She kniws maan from childhood. Dev is maan's brother.

Finally she met with maan and she is nervous by his presence. Maan is angry bcuz she didn't meet him. Geet is explaining him but maan is quite direct with her. He is showing dominance over geet. Seems there is something between them.

Maan likes geet? Geet clearly likes him.

Dadi comes and asks how everything is going.

Outstanding start. Loved how maaneet interacted. Very interesting title.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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I am bad with words. But still i will try to comment regularly.

Chapter 2

Geet assured dadi everything is fine. Dadi wants geet to talk to maan. Maan will be the one dropping her to her classes.

Geet is waiting for maan in his room and falls asleep. Maan comes from shower and his towel slips. Lol. That was so unexpected.

Mostly i have read the opposite thing but yaha to ulta ho gaya.

Maan is quite funny when he is alone with her. She is angry on maan. Wow so they have something going on. What relationship they shared is being talked about?

Oh i loved how maan kissed her and said he missed her.

But geet is angry.

What happened really eager to know. Maan hides his pain. Such a sweet emotional part. Loved the passion.

Looks like both are in love. But something happened. did they meet in this 5 year?

Please give me the pass of chapter 3. Want to read further.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: foslaa
Hi i have stumbled across your stories
And I love your writing. Read your os and ss. I really want to read this story. Please share the password.
Part 1 is very very intriguing. I love how you describe everything and mesmerised with how you build the chemistry.

Hello dear. Welcome to mortal promises. Thanks for giving a thought of reading this.

I am glad and humbled by your kind words. I replied your pm.