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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 20 :

Awesome... Fantabulous... Rocking !!!

It was just simply WOW !!! I have no words to describe... The way you have exposed Dev... It was just superb... A selfish person like him deserved to be treated like this only... And I am all the more glad that rather than Maan hitting him physically... It was Geet's verbal exposures that have shown him the mirror...

You have out done yourself this time... It was so wonderfully written... I am spell bounded... Don't actually know what to write

Thank you sooo much 👏



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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 20

Oh, now Dev wants to shake hands with Maan...where were his manners in NJ? Selfish jerk...
Tanvi being protective of Maan was cute...and see the irony of the situation, a father has to introduce himself to his daughter in front of practically a stranger and that too almost after 2 years...(I am guessing that is Tanvi's age) (Ok, Maan's reaction to Tanvi misbehaving with Dev was funny yet deep too...he is just taking solace in the fact that Tanvi does not like Dev)

What the hell he wants from Geet if he thinks Geet is angry and rigid...stupid guy...
did not like him taunting Maan like that...
Dev's excuses for not calling Geet earlier were pathetic...ok, with each passing line, my anger on this guys is increasing like anything...
Am glad that Geet's parents took stand for her this time in front of Dev...it was much needed for Dev to realize that Geet is not alone...

Ohk, so Geet threw a shocker for Dev...liked it...why should girls always adjust to things...If he so wants to move on with them, then surely he can live in Delhi...nice one
Dev was clean bowled by Geet and is now stuck in his own pretense of being a good guy...
It is good that Geet told his feelings about her friendship with Maan to all...everyone deserves to know how disgusting he is...
Such a manipulative jerk Dev is...I knew it that he cannot change this easily...am glad Geet knew all about his intentions and took a stand...way to go girl...I am glad Dev's chapter is closed for once and all...but I feel he should have been given some sort of punishment but again he is losing Geet and Tanvi, this itself is the biggest punishment ever...but that loser will not realize this now...

Am glad Maan's family is there to support them and Maan is there for Geet...she is a strong girl and I am sure she would overcome this too...Maan just needs to be a friend for Geet and support her and I am sure he will always support her...

Nice and much needed part...:)


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Posted: 7 years ago
CH 20
Wow!!!! Wow !!!!!Wow!!! what a mind blowing update, what a wonderful job Geet did, Tanvi was not less she gave a wonderful response to handshaking of Maan and Dev, did not like Dev touching Maan and her Maan was happy seeing Tanvi,s reaction to Dev. Dev started his sorry puran to everyone but as soon as Geet put her first condition Dev apne asli rang mein aa gaya and started his bakwas but this time Geet was all ready to face this bevkoof jo Geet ko emotional fool keh raha tha. Geet disclosed everything in front of everyone which she inquired and Dev was shocked knowing Geet knows his true reason to come to India.By made him sign the legal papers Geet closed the chapter of Dev in her life forever and in this way gifted Maan his GF forever, loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 21 :

Beautiful as well as carrying a very serene and peaceful feeling...

Of course it was much needed for Geet to cry out the entire burden that she had been carrying since the day that selfish creature had called her...
And of course I'm so glad that Maan was there for her when she needed him the most...

Finally a burden was lifted bringing peace to the entire family ... Which they rightly celebrated... it was actually the first time after Geet's return that they all enjoyed there time truly...

Tanvi's antics are super cute... You actually gave hope to us at one point of time that she might just call Maan as Papa after seeing a father son interacting with each other... Nevertheless will wait for even that to happen

And finally... The wow moment... Maan realised that he is in love with Geet too...

Can't wait to read further...

Can we have two passwords at a time... The wait is killing 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next one...


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: its_me

Chapter 21 :


Beautiful as well as carrying a very serene and peaceful feeling...

Of course it was much needed for Geet to cry out the entire burden that she had been carrying since the day that selfish creature had called her...
And of course I'm so glad that Maan was there for her when she needed him the most...

Finally a burden was lifted bringing peace to the entire family ... Which they rightly celebrated... it was actually the first time after Geet's return that they all enjoyed there time truly...

Tanvi's antics are super cute... You actually gave hope to us at one point of time that she might just call Maan as Papa after seeing a father son interacting with each other... Nevertheless will wait for even that to happen

And finally... The wow moment... Maan realised that he is in love with Geet too...

Can't wait to read further...

Can we have two passwords at a time... The wait is killing 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next one...


Thanks pooja for the beautiful comment.. I'm truly loving as well as enjoying them
Well about two pws together . I can give but in return i need separate comments for each update.. You gave one comment for two updates last time. You know . I'm as greedy for comments like you are greedy for PW😆🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

Thanks pooja for the beautiful comment.. I'm truly loving as well as enjoying them
Well about two pws together . I can give but in return i need separate comments for each update.. You gave one comment for two updates last time. You know . I'm as greedy for comments like you are greedy for PW😆🤣


😉😛😉😛

Deal 👍🏼

Comment will Chapter wise...

Pakka ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: its_me


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Deal 👍🏼

Comment will Chapter wise...

Pakka ❤️

Wait for tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 21

Along with Geet, Maan's pain and turmoil are understandable...he was on the verge of losing both Geet and Tanvi with just a phone call from Dev...the girls that have come to mean him so much...one he loved so much and the other his friend that he has started to love...

Tanvi is really an angel...her trying to cheer Geet up was so sweet...and Maan getting to witness that was really nice...am glad both Maan and Geet talked it out...sometimes you just feel better when you have someone to talk too...loved how she stood string before that jerk and how others supported her too...

loved how both the families made an effort to forget the past and move on and went on a nice family dinner...that was a refreshing change for them...Tanvi is so cute trying to imitate the little kid at the hotel...lovely scene...Ice cream time was fun...it was nice to see how Geet herself asked him to join her at the court...she really trusts him...

the car scene was lovely...Our Maan is hooked by Geet and how...now not only Tanvi but Geet too would be the reason for him thinking about marriage...but am wondering how will he approach her again...he took so much time last time...LOL...

Nice update...
hoping to see things shaping up from next part...loved the lover boy talks of Maan :)


Edited by sahibasharma - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: its_me


Can we have two passwords at a time... The wait is killing 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next one...



I really like this idea of getting two passwords at a time 😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
CH 21
Beautiful Update
Geet poured her heart out and cried and as usual Maan was there for her to console her, Maan got a sigh of relief after that jerk,s departure and shared his fear with Geet, loved their emotional hug full of care and concern. The whole family was tension free specially Maaneet after so many days and celebrated this occasion by dining out, loved their family moments.OMG!!!!!!! Tanvi is just super smart baby who was observing the boy calling his father a papa and she tried to call Maan as papa, it was her first attempt next time tu bol he degi, I was imagining Maan,s reaction. Aww!!!!! Maan has realized his feelings for Geet is love and has accepted it whole heartedly,

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