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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 5 - all were surprised to see maan there. His wish that she can study further as per her wish made all stunned. His thoughts felt them like alien. They were stunned to see him treat like a princess. They never saw such behavior with wife. But it made geet happy and contended with her life. She can anytime talk with him with his gifted phone. All only teased her in diff words.

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Part 6 - Sweet part. Maan bribed rajji so that he can feed her after sangeet & mehandi function. Oh...rano telling all about her duties, was so funny. Geet got more confused with her hinting.

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Part 7 - They got married. Geet was worried about what rano told her about hurt. But nave geet still didn't know about it as maan made her comfortable in their room first, let her accustomed her in new house.

Handas were angry on her for getting up late. Loved how maan took her from their raging eyes into kitchen.

Geet already felt comfortable with maan and in Khurana mansion. Lovely confession.

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Part 8 - Liked the way geet getting adjusted with the house, people, maan and his money. She knew not to mess with nt and pammi and ignored them always.

So they still not consummated the marriage. With the help of annie lending the novels, geet now knew what hurt' her mother was talking and she was getting ready for that.

Trip to shimla, she was excited but maan knew she can't bear cold weather. She too wished the physical closeness, like maan.

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Part 9 - Oh...maan wanted to wait at least one year, so that geet could be more mature. She was sad at first as she wanted the same.

Geet accepted that she have a boyfriend as maan suggested not to reveal her married status in collage.

Oh...maan had a past and he lied that he didn't had any girlfriends.

Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 10 - Maan asked geet to call him maan as gift of KC fasting. Oops, how he made her call his name. lol. Geet wanted their first anniversary a big bash and maan suggested to take help of Linda, their event manager. She wanted to make it special and asked Linda to arrange for their suhag raat also.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Epi - Nice ending. Geet got internship in KC by her hard working. She wanted baby but even after two years maan felt she was still young. But geet too was adamant that she will not make love to him. Maan finally gave up and agreed to her wish.

So finally its not his dream but your thought to change the storyline. Nice one.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi dear, can you please make an Arshi version of this story? I always envision this concept in my head for a long time but except Tia, no one ever write Arshi story in this style... I don't really like the way Tia developed the later phase of her story, but I love the way you write here, please make Arshi version.
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Posted: 7 years ago
WOW!! I am speechless..
I loved the story so much that I read twice before commenting & hopefully will read again after i post this comment..
coming to the story..
I never thought of such a plot ever..
there are different stories regarding maaneet, with different scenarios, different background & even entirely different characters..
But this one is epic..
everything is same yet not the same..
In this you retained the entire plot without changing a bit ye changed everything..
Loved your creative thoughts & ideas..
if got a chance to change his past, I am sure maan would have wanted to do the same.. prevent geet from facing all the miseries..
here's geet's character was also, shy, meek & innocent.. But it was not a different geet but the same original one with different shade to her character.. the one before tragedy striked..
the concept took away my heart seriously!!
Plus loved to see the same rude & arrogant maan being all love sick & wooing his lady love was a treat..
all the negativities were removed here, brij never went to jail, geet did not have to cut ties with her family..
But one thing came to my mind.. what about pammi & NT.. they can never turn good.. did pammi not plot against maan?? & also dev-nandini never happened??
overall.. just loved the plot.. keep writing such beautiful stories always..
May God bless you with even better ideas..

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Posted: 7 years ago
nice concept..



sweet story...😃😃

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