Reposting separate in life part 18/11 11B 12 13 14 15 on pg 17

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Hi my first story Prologue I have come with name if it been used for this story please let me knowHi guys I going start my first story soon of Manneet this go to start when Manneet separate 4 year ago when Mann asked geet to leave when he lost his Memory there got an divorce. Now he has his memory back two year ago and been look for geet since but no luck he was sort of forced to get in enaged to samera (she nice person in this) because bussiness geet Met an old friend prem (who got construction empire in newyork) after her divorce and he offered her job to help him run his business which she accept and ow she an ruthless bussiness lady and partner.But the big catch his that geet was pregnant with Mann child at the time which he doesn't know he sweet little Armann kapoor you find why he surname different in the story.Prem and Mann signed deal together for big contact for indian government but prem doesn't no geet was married to Mann and this were Mann and geet will meet.

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Mann Singh khurana. And his family Vicky dev nadnani and dadima were attending lavish party in Delhi which was host by the khurana family it was joint deal with an famous construction bussiness man Prem kapoor who has company outside in Newyork usa.
Both company were doing joint venture for the indian government which was worth million for both company it was contract that prem had asked mann do with him in indian, he know that Mann is number construction company in indian so with his help and knowledge of indian it felt right to prem to ask him and Mann accept because of the design were amazing he never seen anything like it want to meet the architecture who had design these plan so and party was plan for this contract.

Dev and nadnani were greet the host and the party, dadima was with Mann and Vicky wait for prem and his business parter to turn up. Vicky could see that Mann was very tense and ask him bro wat wrong mann replied I don't no but I feel has geet is he in this hotel around me I feel her aroa around me.
Vicky hold Mann shoulder I know bro watt your feeling but we been looking for geet 2 year now and there no sign of her all detective agency have been look too but nothing . Vicky went back in the past remembering how his brother had suffered since he got his memory back and looking for his Jaan wat he put her threw when asked for an divorce and she begged him not to do this but he didn't listen to her once she pleaded with him and explain wat there love was to her he was her life she was his Jann and junoon but no he was Mann Singh khurana after all he got watt he want in life and that was for leave his house.

Dadima new wat Mann was going threw after he got his memory back and wat he did to geet all he does his work 24/7 or go to do his Thai chi, One of dadima old old quaintance asked for Mann ristha for his granddaughter sameera she was very highly educated and would match Mann stands.
Mann refused at first then dadima got ill that doctor said one more heart attacked will end her life so mann accept the proposal due his dadima health all she want was for him to settle down in life and she new geet would want that too .
Dadima went back into the past thing want geet said to her ,
Dadima I know I am leaving Mann and this house but promise me you will alway be there for my Mann and stand by him no matter want come in his way please marry him again so he can have happy life at least one of us will be happy in life ( both were crying together as geet said all this to her). I will moved on with my life too but even if Mann get his memory back I will still never come back too him because are love was not strong for Mann to understand watt we had and want we went threw to be together in life he was my strength for society .
See geet I have kept my promise too u I hope u happy were ever u are in this world has tear drop from her eye thing about her Vicky new want dadima was thing and gave her pick hugs and clean her tear way Vicky was strength of these two people now.

Samera and her granddad walk in to the function She was wearing long black gown with long loose black hair she was studding any Man would marry her but she was engaged to Mann such to keep her grandfather happy she had no feeling for Mann but never said anything to nobody to keep her honour of her family she kept quiet and got in engaged to him.
She touch dadima feet and got blessing in return and said hello to dev nadini and Vicky and walked over to mann to was with other work associate she tap his should and he turn around to see and gave an weak smile and polite said hello and asked how she was and how was her degree at uni she replied back say she we'll and doing good in her final year and then there hugged Mann excused him self to see prem coming in she nod and looked him go well she watch somebody she had fall in lover with has tear came down when she turned around to wipe them.

Mann approached prem and shook hand with smile so did prem and said honour to work with him.
Mann took prem introduce him to his family he touch dadima feet and she replied back give him an blessing Live long live and then he shook hand with dev and Vicky who he know and met nadini and sameera too the buhu of khurana family.
Prem said Mann you lucky yo have lovely family mann thank him
Waiter were handing out drink too everybody now and then mann asked prem we're the guest of honour for the party kept for prem replied she should be he soon
Mann asked she yes said prem my fianc and parter who design these building for are company she amazing women and very committed to wat she does in life.
May I ask her name Mann said yes her name is?prem phone rang and he excused him self And apologised for phone call mann nod and smile he under stood it bussines.

Mann was so curious who was this lady and why did his heart beat so fast when prem talked about her why did he feel he know her as if the soul connect together he had this anxious feeling inside has if his Jann his geet aroa was around him Vicky asked him are u ok Mann he replied no why do I feel geet present Vicky as if she near me I can't explain this feeling why
Vicky said the because geet in your heart body and soul mann she your aroa were you go u will feel her around you come bro let go and meet the rest of are guest well were wait for are main guest as There went to leave mann turn around and see an shadow coming at the entrance it was quiet dark the hall with dim lights and candle he felt somebody present and silently shout out geet.
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welcome back. hi thanks 4 da reposting! wonderful prologue! superb update! well written! Maaneet divorced! Maan gt his memory back n regrets! he meets Prem! Maan senses Geet around! update soon, pls update ur other story as well
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Geet. Came out the car as the driver opened the door she had felt very nervous since she came back too india after 4 year she had promised her self that she wouldn't bring her old memory back with her she got her self together and moved toward the function which she was invited too .

Has she approached the venue her phone rang it was her little Man Armann her main reason to live he was only one who bought smile to her face in the past 3 year. She had become and she
Ruthless women in last four year in her life nobody messed with her she was very strong willed and serious about want she did in business world and in her personal life too.

Mamma were are u as Armann cried I no like nanny sia she want me go bed I don't want to go night night mamma, come to Armann home pleass I want cookie and choc milk please no night night nanny sia very bad hain to Armann mumma she no give me snack I not tired he said crying.
Geet asked him "kya hua y my strong baby is crying making him calm with her word mumma miss u baby will home soon with papa when he heard her voice my champ is big boy na no crying beta ok mumma, ok then champ pass phone to sia then he hand the phone over to is nanny and say mumma Gus's with sia upset mumma champ
Hi sia why Armann crying so much geet said. Sia replied I think his missing usa and you new place and people and with u and prem gone. To this party he feeling alone with out you two and I will give him milk and cookie and then settled him to bed . Sia handed the phone back to Armann so geet spoke to him champ mum will be home soon sia go give u choc milk ok beta then you go sleepi ok I love u champ love mumma 1 2 3 night mumma good boy she said and put the phone made her to the party smiling how stub her son was ( like somebody we all now he he)

Geet he said when he saw her at the door was it her or an luscious no it was his geet wearing white sari and her hair up in tight bun she looked like angel coming down the step every looked shocked even dadima was about to faint nandini got hold of her and asked if she was ok dadima nod yes well dev bought glass water Mann faced said it all to Vicky when he saw him that this was his Jaan and Vicky babhi ( Vicky hadn't seen picture of geet Mann burnt them all when she left him because he hate her at that time with memory loss) she looked like angel how dadima described her.

Mann start to move toward her slow make sure he was not dreaming geet notice everything had gone quiet in the party and she felt an aroma in the room she felt his present in her soul she new he was here and then her big brow eyes Saw him from the door a small tear drop from her eye such as she start to move somebody shout geet!
Prem saw her coming in while he was on his phone and excused himself from the phone and called her. She looked at prem with smile when he approached and hugged her with kiss on the cheek
Mann stood there looking at both them he got so angry and was ready to punch prem for touching his geet dev stop him and said no bro not he this an party your question will be answer by geet her self please bro! He looked at dev and nod his head and walked away, geet faced such drop when she saw the whole khurana family here why !
Prem said to geet come I will introduced to are new business partners as took her hand toward Mann she walked with him like dead soul and in shock.
Prem said Mr khurana meet by parter and the lady who design the building Plan geet Handa and of course the lover of my life my fianc he said, Mann was ready to ripe this guy apart how dare he call my Jann his life I going kill him fought Mann but strayed calm such looking at geet face.

Geet put her hands together and said hello mr khurana nice meet you mann was shocked that she didn't even shake hands with him does she hate him this much for wat he did to her and excused himself prem introduce her to rest of khurana family she touch dadima feet she said kushi row and smiled and hugged nadini
Asked how she was nandini I very happy di prem was shocked and asked how do u know each other geet replied that nadini his her massi daughter so there are sister and prem smiled meeting somebody from geet family because she never talked about then and he didn't want to ask about her past because it upset her so much she was strong women now. Sam Was standing there watching want was go on and then dadima said this Mann fianc sameera there shook hand and smiled geet thought Mann has moved on too why does she feel jealous inside no geet you strong remember your promised to yourself.

Mann was at the bar watching all this having an drink he wander if geet was feel jealous about sameera and how would she react find out that Mann got his memory back he want to talk to her alone hug and kiss her feel her did she want the same he had to get alone and talked too her his Jaan it was killing him inside that prem was hold her shoulder while he was introduce her to people.
Vicky came to Mann and said I can see why you fell in love with her she is an angel bro Mann had tear in eyes which he wiped before somebody saw them.

Geet was feeling his eyes on her she new he got his memory back the way he looked at her that junoon he gad in his eyes for her. Geet thought she moved on now so she will stray strong
She said prem why didn't you tell me the contract was with khurana family he looked her and he replied he want to surprise her with the news that there were doing business with number one company in India she such nod her head then her phone rang it was newyork office she excused her self from prem because it was too noise at party take phone call.


She such finish her phone call in the lobby when she bump in to Mann her whole life came flash in front of her, Mann saw walk out and followed her looking that nobody notice his leave this was his chance to speak her.
Hello Jaan he said while look at her she did responded too him such stare at him, Mann went to touch her face with his palms but she stop him no mr khurana don't touch me as she went to move back to the party.
He grabbed her hand and pulled toward his chest and dragged toward quiet corner in the lobby and said Jann please listen to me such once let me explain please as he touch her face and pushed his body on her she felt like she was in heaven Jann he said while kissing her forehead a tear drop into his hand from her big brown eyes and he slight his hands down to her waist bring her close then she came back to her sense she pushed him off and said mr khurana 4 year is long time so I've have moved on and look of it so have you I am not that geet anymore do u understand so don't ever touch me again and stray out of my personal life and I stray out of yours too were he to do an business deal so let such do that do make myself clean mr khurana, and as she walked way! by the way Congrats on you engaged to Sam she look like nice girl best of luck and walked off leave him
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loved this story
already don't know how many time read it but still
this story have its charm
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wonderful update! so they meet! bt Geet congrats on his engagement n leaves! update soon

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Chapter 3
As geet walked away Mann such watched her disappear in to the venue he punched the pillar and his knuckles were bleeding but the pain was in his heart not from the hand, why does she hate me this much for want I did too her no Jann you can't such give up on us like this you got to let me talk to you I love you more than anything in this world and this Mann does not exist with out his geet.
Vicky was looking for Mann and then saw geet coming back in to the party he new by geet face she was with Mann so he made way out And found him in the lobby lost bro what happen to your hand it bleeding Mann replied Vicky I've such lost the lover my life forever she moved on how can she do this when know she mine Vicky I can't see her with anybody Vicky, I possessive of myJann I know now my love wasn't strong enough when I lost my memory Geet used say we one soul we feel each aroma we didn't need word for are lover are soul said everything what we felted for each other and mind new what we were thing too I lost her Vicky as tear came down Mann eyes she right I should have know what bond we had when I lost my memory that time if my love was strong like hers I wouldn't have not be alone in the world like I feel now. It would been better if we never met like this at least I would of thought my Geet still waiting for me in this world not with somebody else has he walked away in pain.

Vicky looked at his bhai walking away! No bro I will bring bhabi back to the km and back to u that promise from me to you and I need talk sameera about this she will understand mann problem and I know Sam marrying him for her family happiness and are business merge plan to help her grandad sam know Mann is divorced and never asked about is past she doesn't want to ask him by upsetting him about his ex wife . Mission manneet start now smirked Vicky .

Geet walked back in with tear in hers eyes why did she let him kiss her and touch her like that she want too kiss as much he did she still loved him even now after watt happen 4 year ago she still felt his touch even after all this time which made her shiva thing about him I cant go back I made an promised to myself that I have to stray focus and do what we came here to do and go back to usa with prem and armann and continue our life. Prem approached geet everything ok geet yes she replied such pari sorting out appt for the office he nod and smiled hold her shoulder.

Dev and nandini were on stage and asked his bro and family with Sam to come on stage and then called prem with geet too sign final stage of this joint deal which there did in front the press everybody clapped in the party Mann was stare at geet all along he did like prem been near her she could feel his eyes on her but didn't looked at him once has geet was coming down the step her sari got court in her heel she went to slip but somebody strong arm grabbed her waist and arm she had closed eyes she new it was Mann that touch was know to her she looked up saw him(have mahi moment) and he whisper are u ok jann ! Prem ran up to her geet are u ok I'm fine she said let go of Mann arm Thankyou mr khurana she replied that pinched his heart when she called Mann buy his surname prem phone started to ring and he excused him

Vicky nudged dev and his babhi too get the party moving.
Dev said now the deal signed let party music please he took nandini to dance floor and Vicky suggest to Mann take Sam for dance Mann looked at him with is angry eyes, Mann took Sam on to the floor we'll staring at geet wanting too know if she was feel jealous she about to walk away when Vicky asked Ms geet will you give me the pleasure of this dance don't worry I'm nice guy he smiled she smirked at his sense of humour and nod yes he took toward dance floor.

Next Song playing tum bi ho from flim Aashiqui 2
As slow music stared geet was about excuse her self but Vicky came near Sam and Mann said let switch partner he quote Sam smiled at Vicky and looked at Mann he nod to her it ok and then Vicky pushed geet toward Mann and winked at him to say go bro! Mann smirked at Vicky tactic geet got very annoyed and was going to walk away when Mann took her hand
With press standing there he said don't make an scene the press are watching he took her waist and start to dance with her she looked him very angry. Their dance to song so close to each other geet was get weak from his touch when tear came now geet eyes he saw then wipe with his thumb ( it quite dark on the floor and song tum bi ho Lyrics Were upsetting her) Jann please talked to me let me explain since I got my memory back I been looking for u please believe since the day u left I punished myself let u go please give us an chance he whispered in her ear I love you Jann .
She bit her lip look angry at him were was your love went you ask me for divorce I begged u Mann not to do this did u listen once no your big ego wouldn't let u I cryed and even said u let me stray here I won't even ask you to be your wife I stray as servant but you told me u hate the sight of me in this house I married you for money and statues not love those your word Mann why are u asking me come back now because got memory back remember wat we had together no mr khurana u should know we were one soul you used say we can read each other's Mind word were not need to be set isn't that wat you used say Mann talked now she said he such looked at her in believe she was right there were on soul and he didn't feel that when he threw her out his life. Geet please i can't change past but we can still have future together I love u Jaan come back to your Mann or I will die with out you in my life I live for you geet he was saying all this while there still dancing.

Geet quote what furture Mann you my past now I have life with prem in the usa I moved on with life that geet his dead and gone. I don't love you anymore and there is no Mann Singh khurana in my future do you understand me. Stop lying Jann I can see it in your eyes that u have feeling for me geet and that you don't love me swear on my life he said too her she looked at him with tear Mann replied you can't can you geet because I see the love in your eyes for me even now when u saw today you want run into my arm and hold be forever . No Mann I promised by self that I will never let u hurt be again I hate you do you understand I hate you he pulled her closed to his body and kissed her like there kissed the first time geet responded back too him his tough was in her month licking her lip she pushed him away and slap him hard on the face everybody the heard the slap the whole venue stopped how darn u touch me I hate u she replied. Mann said if u hate me so much Jann why did u Kiss as well that tell me you still have feeling for me don't you! Shake her shoulder she pushed him away saying No I don't mr khurana stray out my personal life do u understand I despise u Mann and ran out before look at dadima saying sorry.

Mann put his hand threw his hair pushed it back looked every body in the party and when too run after geet but dev and Vicky stopped him let her go bro she need time please Mann pushed is brother out of the way and went thought the back door
Sorry ladies and gentlemen party is over everybody start to leave. Prem saw all this happening when he was coming back from the lobby and was shocked he saw geet running out and followed her geet he shouted she looked at him and said why did we come back to india prem please I want such want to go home to Armann has she cried he took off his jacket put around her and called the drive to take them home he didn't want ask her anything because she was very upset and he trust geet more than his life he will wait till she ready too tell him about her past.

Mann left there and drove like an mad Mann thing of geet word I hate u she said no he thought getting angry he stop the car by the cliff and screaming geet you can't hate me arrr he said and then land on his knee screaming geet I love u.


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Nice. Poor Geet and Maan gone thru a lot. cant wait to read more.
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