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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajal2005

Amazing update

Loved it
Geet is like a shield to maan's every problem
Continue soon


thank you...
will update tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehapriya

Geet has been a life saver all long unknown to her and she was a savior in work too. Now time for Maan to save his damsel in distress. Waiting for next part...


Originally posted by: love2_soma

oh no...geet be careful...maan geet ko safe rakhna...

nice update...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



Thank you...
i am glad ur both liked it...
will update tomorrow...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

welcome back! thanks 4 reposting! superb update! well written! Geet manages 2 save Maan! she is nw in danger! Hope Maan will save her! update soon, hope u will write a new story soon


Thank you dear...
i m glad you like it...
will try writing new one...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

lovely update...
maan big businessman and so many enemies
but geet saved him
now working for him
now his enemy will behind her


thank you for reading my story... i too read ur story... amazing works...will update tomorrow...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetysaran



thank you for reading my story... i too read ur story... amazing works...will update tomorrow...


hey I never knew you are a writer that too so good ...
please do write more .. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming


hey I never knew you are a writer that too so good ...
please do write more .. 😊


Thank you dear...
will try writing new one...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2:

As soon as maan came to K.C. He found that culprit who leaked the information. Sekar was fired from his job.

EVENING 6:

Maan: Geet... I think Mr. Taylor's project design has to be completed tomorrow as he wanted to see the design's immediately.

Geet: No problem sir, its half done. I will stay tonite and finish it today itself.

Maan: ok Geet then let me help you with that so that we can finish it sooner.

Maan , Geet along with Adi was working on the project design as it is Geet's habit to switch off her mobile, there was a call for her which was transferred to her cabin. The phone was ringing continuously'

Maan: Geet can you attend that phone.

Geet: Sure sir.

In phone:

Geet: Hello

Man: Hello.Is this geet...

Geet: Ya.. Speaking...

Man: Sorry mam, your friend has met with an accident this evening but not to worry. She only had little injury but she is safe now and taken to her apartment.

Geet was shocked and she had tears in her eyes. Seeing geet face maan approached her.

Maan: Geet what happened?

Geet came to her sense: Sir, my friend pinky has met with an accident.

Maan was shocked: ok geet... Don't worry nothing will happen to her. you take my driver and reach their safely. We will handle here.

Geet: ok sir. I will take a leave.

In phone:

Geet: Sir, thanks for ur help. i will reach to her soon.

man: Its ok miss. take care(with evil smile)

The man who called , was so happy that his plan had succeeded.

Geet left the office , In hurry she left her mobile in the cabin. After sometimes when Maan was going through one of file he saw Geet mobile on the table. He saw it was switched off so he thought of switching it on. So that Geet or someone may call to her cell, he can inform them that her cell phone is in her cabin. As soon as he switch on, he received call . he read the caller id as "pinky". Maan felt something fishy so he took the call.

Pinky: Geet.. how many times to say you... why can't you call me when your coming late. Your such an idiot.

Maan was shocked: Hello...this is Maan Singh Khurana. Are you pinky.

Pinky: Sorry sir, I thought it is geet.. is she in office.

Maan(st): How can this be...geet said pinky met with an accident... but in phone her voice sounds to be perfectly alright. Something is wrong.

Maan: No actually she just left home. Her mobile is her cabin. Sorry, I am in middle of something can I will call you later.

Pinky: ok fine. Bye.

Saying so, he hangs up the call and moved towards Adi.

Maan: Adi, something is wrong. Geet said her friend pinky met with an accident but just now I spoke to her. She sounds fine. I think geet is in danger. Find out where driver is.

Saying so, maan left the cabin. He took his car and went in search for geet.

In car:

Driver: Mam, I think the road which leads to your apartment is blocked.

Geet: Ya... I don't know why. Its already late. I don't want to waste time by sitting here. I think I can walk from here.

Driver: Ok mam, but be careful.

Geet: Sure nakul sir. Thank you.

Geet left the car and started walking towards the apartment. Meanwhile Maan got a message from Adi that driver left her near the apartment. So maan speeded up towards her apartment.

Meanwhile maan too came closer to her apartment. He stopped his car and he saw geet walking in a long distance. Suddenly maan saw a truck rushing towards her from back side of geet. Maan shouted for geet but it was all in vain. Before he or she could react. The truck hit geet and passed away.

Maan shouted : Geett...

He rushed towards her. There geet was laying in the pool of blood. Maan felt as if his life is over. He was tears in his eyes. He immediately took geet in his arms and took her towards his car .

Maan: Geet...Pls wake up... Can you hear me...

But there is no response from her. He immediately rushed towards the hospital...

Maan shouted: Geett...

He rushed towards her. There Geet was lying in the pool of blood. Maan felt as if his life is over. He has tears in his eyes. He immediately took Geet in his arms and took her towards his car.

Maan: Geet... Pls wake up... Can you hear me...

But there is no response from her. He immediately rushed towards the hospital. Geet was taken to OT.

Maan(st) in tears: Geet.. Nothing will happen to you. I don't know why I was feeling some connection towards you before but now I understood Geet... I am in love with you. I love you Geet. I can't live without you.pls Geet... don't leave me and go... Pls...

Immediately Maan took his mobile and called his dad.

Maan sobbing: Dad...

Dad: Maan... Is everything ok son. Why are you crying?

Maan: Dad... I really need you now dad... pls dad... I need you...

Dad: Son , where are you now.

Maan: Dad I am in the city hospital now. Pls dad... I want you here...

Saying so, his mobile phone fell on the floor and he sat on the chair lifeless where tears are rolling down from his eyes continually.



...to be continued below...

Edited by sweetysaran - 8 years ago
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Maan's dad arrived there within 15 mints. He was shocked to see Maan in that condition. He went near him and kept his hand on his shoulder. As soon as Maan saw his dad, he hugged him and started crying.

Maan: Dad, I can't see her in this state... pls dad, do something...

Dad: Maan... what happened? Who is she?

Maan: Dad, I love her.. I really love her dad. I can't live without her...

Dad: Maan... stop crying... nothing will happen to her... trust me Maan.

Maan's dad made Maan calm when both saw doctor coming out of the operation theater.

Doctor: Mr. Khurana...

Maan: Doctor, is she fine?

Doctor: Yes, Mr. Khurana. She is out of danger now.. we are shifting her to the room. You can see her after that.

Maan(with hugh smile): Thank you doctor. Thank you very much.

Maan turned towards his dad and hugged him.

Maan: Dad... she is ok... she is fine dad. I got her back.

Dad: Yes Maan, I am very happy for you. Come let's go see her first.

Maan and his dad went to the room where Geet was admitted. Maan has tears in his eyes when he saw her. Both of them approached towards her.

Maan: See her dad. How innocent her face is...(he took her hand in his) you know dad... she saved my life twice. She was one who saved me from the road accident and from the bullet shot. I am pretty sure, that man who is after me has done something to her now, she was the main reason because of whom I got that highway project.

We have to something dad. I was silent till now because they were only after me but I can't risk Geet's life in this dad.

Dad: Maan, I got all the investigation done. This work is done by none other than Mr. Kapoor.

Maan: That's it dad. I can't wait any longer; he will have to face me before hurting her again. He will come to know what will happen for messing with Maan Singh Khurana.

He immediately made some call and after his call he had a smile in his face.

Maan: wait and see Mr. Kapoor.

Next day:

Geet woke up from her sleep only to find Maan sitting by her side.

Geet: Maan sir.

Maan: How are you Geet...

Geet: I am fine Maan sir. Thank you. I have only little bit pain.

Hearing the word pain, Maan's anger grew more but he controlled himself and spoke to her.

Maan: Don't worry Geet, everything will be alright.

While they were speaking pinky entered the room.

Pinky: Hi Geet, I am so worried for you. How are you now...

Geet smiled: I am fine pinky. Where have you been?

Pinky: Sorry yaar, I just went out to grap you some coffee.

Geet in low voice: ok pinky. Listen to be first. I need a favor from you. pls don't inform anything to my parents. I just don't want them to worry.

Pinky: But Geet...

Geet: Pls pinky...

Pinky: ok... ok...

All the while Maan was smiling seeing their conversation.

Maan: Ok Geet... I will meet you today evening. Take care of urself.

Geet: Thank you sir for helping me...

Maan: It's ok. Take care.

For one month, Maan day started and ended by visiting Geet in the hospital. Maan didn't say about his felling to Geet because he was waiting for this cat and mouse game to end. Geet too was very much comfortable with Maan. She too started feeling something for him. Pinky too became Maan's friend. By seeing both of them caring for each other, she was sure that both love each other.

One day:

Geet: Pinky, did you see Maan sir today...I didn't see him from morning.

Pinky: Why Geet...(with a smile on her face)

Geet: Nothing...I just asked...

Pinky: Your missing him... don't you?

Geet didn't say anything...

Pinky having a small smile on her face: Speak to me Geet...

Geet: Pinky.. nothing like that ...

Pinky: Geet don't lie. I can see it in your eyes. You're longing for him. Admit it Geet. You love him. I can see how you're happy when you're around him.

Geet: Yes, pinky. I love him. I don't know from from when but i...

While she was speaking he saw Maan coming towards her room.

Geet: Pinky, hear me. Pls don't say anything to Maan sir. He is coming inside now. Be normal.

Maan came inside the room.

Maan: Hi Geet, how are feeling now.

Geet: I am fine Maan sir.

Maan: Ok Geet. Today you're discharged. I will take you home. That's why I am here.

Geet: Sir, why you. We can manage.

Maan: No more speaking Geet. I am taking you home. That's final.

Maan took Geet to her apartment after she was discharged from the hospital. Meanwhile Maan executed his plan. He got all information about Mr. kapoor in the past one month. The next day's newspaper and news channels carried his information.

"Business man Mr. kapoor was arrested due to his illegal deals, non tax payment which sums about crores and crores of rupees. He also created forge foreign companies and investment to increase the stock value. His construction company is sealed and all his properties are all freezed. He is left with no money and is behind bars now".

After reading the newspaper Maan and his family is all relived now but Maan's dad only knows that this is all because of his son, Maan . One day Maan asked his parents to sit with him in KM as he wanted to speak to them.

Maan: Dad, mom I have to say something to you both.

Dad and mom (together): Ya Maan say.

Maan: You both know that I love Geet... but till now I didn't say about my feeling to her. I want everything related to Mr. Kapoor to end first. I am thinking to propose to her tomorrow but before that I thought of getting permission from the both side of the elder's because I don't want Geet to even worry whether my parents or her parents will accept this relationship or not. I always wanted Geet to be happy. I know that I can make her happy by doing so dad.

Dad: Maan, I am proud of you son. Thanks for respecting us. I am very happy for you son.

Mom: Maan, I know your choice will be the best. I too liked Geet so much. So son, go for it. Bring my daughter in law sorry daughter to this house soon. Go...

Maan: Thank you very much mom ... and hugged both of them .

After getting permission from his parent's, Maan went to Geet's home town.

Geet's house:

Meera Sharma (Geet's mom) heard door bell ringing so she asked her husband to open the door. Veera Sharma opened the door and saw some person standing. He couldn't recognize him.

Maan: Good afternoon sir. Veer Sharma...

Veer: Yes. I am. May I know who you are?

Maan: Sorry uncle. I am Maan Singh Khurana, Geet's boss. (Saying so he took blessing from him)

Veer: Long live son (surprised). Pls come in.

Maan: Thank you uncle.

Geet's mom too came and sat where they are seated.

Maan: Namaste Aunty.

Meera: Namaste son.

Maan: Uncle I am here to speak about your daughter Geet. I love her uncle.

Veer and Meera both got shocked.

Maan continued: Sorry uncle. I know that this will be a shock for you both but I didn't say my feeling to her still now. Before that I want to take permission from you both, my parents are happy about my decision. If you both are happy too then my parents will come and meet you, to ask Geet's hands for me.. I really can't live without her. Firstly, this life which I am living is because of Geet. Unknowingly she has saved my life twice. I just wanted to live rest of my life with her.

Veer and Meera had tears in their eyes.

Veer: Thank you for respecting us son. I liked the way you respect elders and asked for our opinion. I am very happy for this relationship.

Meera: Yes son. Me too happy for my daughter, she will gets a wonderful person as her husband. We both agree to this relationship.

Maan(with hugh smile): Thanked them and bid bye to them.

At night:

Maan decided to propose to Geet , so he planned for a surprise for her. He called pinky and spoke to her to bring Geet to Khurana mansion. At first , Geet got confused why pinky brought her to KM. she managed by saying Maan sir what's to speak to you.

Geet: Pinky, why you brought me to KM that too in this hour.

Pinky: I don't know Geet. Maan wants to speak to you. You go straight to terrace. He will be waiting for you.

Geet: But pinky...

Pinky: No but's and if's ... You go first. No one will kill you. It is KM. ok...

Geet: Pinky.. pls...

Pinky: Geet go yaar... Maan sir is waiting for you.

With lot of confusion Geet went to terrace.

Geet was shocked to see the decorations made in terrace and she saw Maan too standing there and looking at her seeing him her heart started beating faster.

Geet: Maan...( that's all she could manage to say)

Maan: Geet..I am happy you came. I wanted to say something to you.

Geet: Ya... say me.

Maan came closer and took Geet's hand.

Maan: Geet... I love you. I can't leave without you. I was almost dead when I saw you, when you met with an accident. That accident changed my life. It made me realize how much important your to my life. Do you know Geet. You saved my life twice before. You're my life saver Geet' I just want to live rest of my life with you.

Geet has tears in her eyes. He kneeled down before Geet and took a ring from his pocket...

Maan: Geet , will you marry me?

Geet in tears: Yes... Maan... I will...

Maan got so happy, placed the ring in her hand and hugged her.

Geet: I too love you Maan. I don't know when you became my everything. Life without you is nothing for me Maan... I love you Maan. I love you so much...

Suddenly , Geet broke the hug and asked Maan.

Geet: Maan... I want to ask my parents first. Their blessing is which I needed the most. I don't know what they will say...if...

Maan(while smiling): Don't worry Geet... I have spoken to my parents and your parents. They are so happy for it. I don't want you to worry about that when I am there for you. I don't want you to worry for even small things in your life.

Saying so, he kissed her forehead.

Geet: You talked to my parents... I can't believe it. I love you Maan. This is the happiest day of my life. I am very gifted to have you in my life.

Maan: Me too Geet. I am the happiest person in this world now.

After one month, Maan and Geet marriage was fixed by their parents, which was a grand finale in the Delhi.

After 8 years:

At KM

Maan(in phone): Adi, I forgot to inform you yesterday. Cancel all the meetings which are scheduled this evening. I have to attend Rochan's annual day function today.

Adi: No problem sir. I will do it.

Maan: Ok adi. Schedule that meetings tomorrow morning.

Adi: Ok sir. Will do.

As soon as he kept his phone, his son came running to him...

Rochan: Good morning dad.

Maan: Good morning son.

Rochan: Dad, I am so much excited about today's annual day celebration. Your coming right dad.

Maan: Yes son. I will come for sure. See I just now called Adi to cancel all the evening meetings.

Rochan hugging him: You're the best dad. I love you.

Maan : love you too son . By the way where is your mom and princess?

Rochan: Princess just now woke up. Mom will bring her now.

Maan: Ok son. You go get ready for the school it's already late.

Rochan: Ok dad.

After sometimes, Geet came along with Maanvi, princess for three of them. Maan kept his paper down went towards his daughter who was in Geet's arms crying. Maanvi is 2 years old now.

Maan: why my princess is crying?

Maanvi said Dada.. and extended her cute little hands. Maan quickly took her in his arms.

Geet: See Maan, till now she was crying, after coming to you she stopped.

Maan with smile: she is always papa's daughter.

Geet made a golgappa face.

Maan: Geet get ready by 5. I will come and pick you up for Rochan's annual days function.

Geet: Ok Maan but it is up to your daughter, if she drives me crazy while dressing her up then...

Maan while kissing her cheeks: my princess will get ready soon. Right na princess.

Maanvi: dada...saying so she too kissed Maan's cheeks.

At 5 in school:

Welcome to the annual day celebration to one and all present here and a special welcome to our chief guest, Shri Sushil Kumar Shinde, minister of home affairs who has made a visit on our request. As per the schedule we will have our dance celebration first and finally prize distribution. Coming up is the host dance made by class 11th.

After all the dances are completed, price distribution for class toppers and various other competitions started.

Maan and Geet are very much proud that their son got three prizes for class topper, drawing and speech. After getting all three prizes Rochan came to Maan and Geet.

Maan hugging Rochan: I am very proud of you my son.

Rochan: Thank you dad but you owe me a gift.

Maan: Sure son. Anything for you.

Geet: That's my boy. While hugging Rochan.

Rochan: Thanks mom.

After settling in his seat , Rochan took Maanvi to his lap and gave her his trophy . Maanvi was so happy seeing trophy in her hand. Seeing that, he kissed her cheeks.

Rochan: This is for you princess.

Maanvi gave a hugh smile and started playing with her brother. When function gets over they went to their car.

Maan: So what next?

Geet: Can we go out for dinner or something.

Maan looked at Rochan

Rochan: It's a nice idea mom. Moreover grandpa and grand mom might have came by now from Australia right. We will ask them to join us.

Maan felt very proud of his son being so responsible so they headed towards a hotel where they enjoyed together as one complete family.

...They lived happily ever after...

Edited by sweetysaran - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely ending...
loved it very much...
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hi thanks 4 da perfect OS! great update, wonderfully written! Geet met in an accident. Maan tensed! she is fine! Maan tells his parents abt Geet n they r happy! he seeks permission from Geet's parents! they r awed by Maan n agree! Maan confesses n proposes! she accepts n reciprocates! 8 years later n Maaneet blessed with two adorable kids! perfect end! pls post a new story soon

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