Bauchhar ek padee hai barasate abhee hai bakee..A MG SS-Shot 7 Page 19 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shot 5:


She was shocked as well as confused , a tear drop fell down her eyes unknown to her own self...she was staring towards Maan...she walked out of the canteen like a statue as she continuously stared at Maan.


She turned her face in front as she got out of the canteen , Maan suddenly turned back as he felt someone staring at him but the one who has lost her everything on him had already left.

" Maannu...What happened???" Raisha asked as she saw him turning.

Maan nodded in a " No" and turned back smiling innocently.


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Geet came out of the canteen, as now she couldn't control herself and so she started crying, she sat under a tree in the collage garden and remembered the time when she drew the sketch of Mishal ,continously crying.

Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyan
Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Sau aansoo roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyan


She gripped her legs and dug her face in her own lap as she remembered her madness for Mishal.

Dil ka musaafir baat na maane
Mud mud dekhe raste puraane
Zidd chhodta hi nahi (nahi..)


She remembers how she first time met Maan the last day and how she had completely dream t of spending a happy life with him , a life full of Love.

Dekh raha hai kaanch ke sapne
Ik na ik din hain jo tidakne
Ishq mein tooti cheeze jag mein
Koi jodta hi nahi, dil jaane na
Sau aasoon roye do akhiyan
Sau aasoon roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyaan
Wo ankhiyan..


" I love you Mishal...but however hard I try I can't deny the fact that you don't love me...I realized it before but I didn't accepted but now..." She Said to herself still crying , her love was going away from her ,forever.

O..
Jaane waala jaane nahi
Jaane se uske jaan gayi
Aate jaate phir wo dikhe
Palkon ne chhaane mod kayi


" I wish you never came in my life Maan...I wish you never did...I was happily leaving in thoughts of My Mishal but you...you came and even didn't allow me to live in my Mishal's thoughts...I hate you...I hate you Maan...I hate you the most..." She cried badly as she remembered the time they spent together.


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Guzra huaa pal guzra nahi
Uska laga rang utra nahi
Hothon se chhuti nahi gaye saajan ki batiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhe neendon ne
Kabhi na soye wo akhiyan


Her vision was becoming blurred due to so many tears , not many children were in the garden because of the lectures and those who were didn't saw her , but suddenly she saw Maan and Raisha coming out of the canteen , she tried wiping her tears in a hurry and got up immediately , she walked to her classroom in a speed as Maan could only see her back.

" Geet , what has happened to her..???" Maan thought.


" Mannu...What has happened why are you behaving so differently today." Raisha ji again asked.

Maan was about to reply when suddenly.

" Hey Rohan , I was searching you from so much time...where were you????" Raisha ran to a boy leaving Maan.

Maan moved towards them as Raisha hugged the boy , Maan stared at it and changed his direction , he went towards the classroom sadly.


Wo.. o...
Kaise koi roke bhalaa
Haath laqeerein chhod gayin
Laakhon dil ke tukde kiye
Dhadkan ko bhi tod gayi


" You are different Maan..." He remembers how everybody always tells him this thing , even Raisha.

He entered his classroom as Geet who was hiding behind a wall stares at him, Maan tries to smile so that he can behave " normal" while Geet sees his smile.

" He is more happy than he is with me..." She thinks sadly.


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Kabhi theharega dard kahin
Koi gunjaaish dikhti nahi
Chanda bin jiya na lage
Jal kaajal si ratiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Maara hai jinhein neendon ne
Kabhi na soye woh akhiyan


" I won't meet you ever Maan..." Geet thought as she moved to her class.

Drops of tears fell down both of them's eyes.

Wo.. o...
Sau aansu roye
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye do akhiyan
Sau aansu roye..
Maara hai jinhein neendon ne..
Kabhi na soye... woh akhiyaan..

" By the way , you are able to handle 'MS.' Maan..." Rohan asked Raisha with a cruel smile.

" Mannu...Off course , I am gonna win the bet for sure, the bet was of 7 days...2 days left...I will handle him for two more days..." Raisha laughed as she said this.

"You are able to handle that mumma's boy...???"

" Quite difficult...but I will do that , don't worry..." She said as she moved from there.

Precap: A leap of:
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Enjoy...

Edited by .Piyali.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Saddy update poor geet she had a heartbreak seeing maan with raisha broke her completely and ran away maan felt someone staring at him geet broke down shattered poured her anger over herself cursing maan hating him maan was distracted he was sad raisha was trying to get his attention but he wasn't himself even maan was believing he is feeling different raisha had a bet she will keep maan as her bf for 7 days she is playing with his emotions hope maan realize his feelings for geet soon so that he can breakup with raisha before she breaks him completely
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Poor poor Geet!! All her dreams came crushing down...when u have hopes and expectations when they don't get fulfilled it hurts a lot and Geet feels so shattered, ek tho Maan doesn't love her (yet 😉)and she believes he is in love with another girl and is happier with that girl than Geet...All these days she was in a happy blubble and now this revelation has bursted the bubble...feel so sad for her...but I am so happy that Maan has some connection with Geet they way he keeps turning back and feels it when she is around and when she is sad... Soon love will enter his heart hopefully ...
😡So it was all a bet for that stupid girl... She is so heartless for playing with a person like Maan who is so innocent and sensitive...once he gets to know how sad is he going to feel...but glad if that's going to bring Maaneet together...
The title of the story is quite interesting as well...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

nice maan and geet moment...
for short while...
to know maan is committed
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Emotional Part.😭
Geet became broken on seeing Maan with Raisha,it was so sad.😭
This Raisha😡 was Disgusting.
I hope everything will be fine.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Nice update
Poor geet is shattered
Maan feeling different
Hope he understands his feelings for geet soon
Don't want that witch raisha to win her bet
Maybe geet avoiding maan will make him understand his feelings
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Superb love it
Poor geet,maan is so innocent.
Please do pm me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
Thank u for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
poor geet is shattered.shocking that raisha doesn't love maan.she is with him only to win the bet.is rohan her real bf?what bet is it?poor maan will be shattered.anyways its happening for good.he will get a gem like geet because of raisha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Geet saw Maan with another woman & remembered about her past. Sad that Geet wept but no one was around. On the other hand Maan saw Raisha with someone else & was disappointed. Waiting 4 the leap.

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