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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for coming dear.😳
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new story

very interesting
geet lost her memory in accident
maan n geet are going to marry
continue soon

Thanks so much dear.
sure will cont. very soon.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss.Hoshiarpur

Interesting. He is hiding something

Thnaks a lot dear.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Have replied all now.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnaf52

congrats for new story deepti. .
interesting start. .
maaneet are in love ..
geet forget her memory. .
Maan delay engagement. ..some reason. .
he also want to know geet love him before accident. .
early waiting for maaneet engagement. .
thanks for pm

Thanks a lot Sapna dear.
so glad you loved it.😳
thanks for coming and for the feedback.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a lot friends ..for giving awesome response to this story 🤗

I am so happy ..you loved it.😃

here's posting part 2

hope you like this one too

and pls keep giving your valuable feedback ❤️










scroll down for part 2 in next post.😳
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Geet's POV

"I lost my memory and I can't remember what happened that night but surely I was going some where to do some imp work ..i guess..and I met an accident but even after trying to recall ..i am failed to do so and I feel so helpless ..i only know now that Maan's and ours family are friends and so we were family friends too..we were buddies as Maan shave shown me pics also ..but I can only assume ..have no memories in my mind of that..and now our marriage is fixed and I will be his wife soon..and my heart says Maan is a good person and he loves me truly..but still what was the reason of me going in so hurry that day..

I can't give stress to myself much ..if something happen to me ..Maan will be shattered ..i won't try now but I pray to God that pls give my memories back ..pls ..i want to know and if its related to Maan ?than what?

I want to start my life afresh but now living cluelessly and I now am dependent on my parents ..family ..Maan and his family ..my friends ..for my memories ..they only tell me if I want to know something ..

But still feel Maan is hiding something ..may be for me ..but I need to know it surely.

and I am so lucky to have Maan in my life ..no one can do what he did for me..he is a gem.






Maan's POV

"Uff how I make her understand that I am doing it for her only..if she will give stress to herself ..and something happen to her ..i will be shattered ..

Everytime she talks about marriage ..i feel like to tell her but how can I ..my own guilt is not letting me tell her ..and even if I tell her ..what if it will have adverse effect on her ?and I don't want anything wrong happen to her ..if she get me wrong than what? I don't know about her feelings for me ..before that accident

..may be she too liked me but I am not sure na..i realized my feelings only after that incident ..but after that night ..next morning ..this happened so I don't know about her reaction..

That night ..again and again I am having FBs of that night ..that incident ..it was such a b'ful moment of me and her ..but not our coz by that time we were just friends ..nothing else and don't know it was inner feelings who came out or it was the effect of alcohol but whatever it was ..i felt guilty after that ..and from that day living with this guilt ..

It was a b'ful night ..so cloudy ..so lovely breeze flowing..me and Geet were coming back from a b'day party of our friend Rohan and Geet's father ..Mr.Handa asked me to drop her home after party ..generally we do this ..both of us attend parties and I used to drop her home ..we were so comfortable with each other and her parents also trust me so much .. and love me too very much ..

In that party ..some friend mixed alcohol in soft drink and Geet drank more of it..so I felt like she might lose her control ..so I thought to drop her home early now and we left the party..

We were in the car and me too was feeling dizzy but was trying to control myself and driving car slowly ..i guessed I also drank some drink ..mixed with alcohol ..though we friends not used to drink but it was a prank played and it was mixed lil or more in every drink I guess from my condition..

Whether changed color and it started raining ..first slow than heavily ..Geet was singing many songs one after another and I was stopping her to do so ..i thought it would be good if I would have taken some friend with me ..but now what could I do ..i was trying ..and than my car stuck at some place ..i was trying to fix prob. But have to stop car for a moment ..i saw ..she unlocked the door and went outside ..i stopped her but no use ..she was under effect ..

I also went outside ..OMG!! she became all wet and to my surprise ..she was dancing in the rain..no one on the road..just me and her ..i came near her and she pulled me towards her ..i resisted but she pulled again and started singing

"Ye mausam ka jadoo hai mitwa ..na ab dil pe kaboo hai mitwa.."

"tum bhi gao na Maan ..dekho na ..kitna accha mausam hai ..kitni pyaari baarish hai .."

"Geet chalo der ho gayi hai ..uncle -aunty wait kar rahe honge na ..chalo..ye kya pagal pan hai ?"

"Ye pagal pan nahi hai ..i love rain .."

"Toh ghar jakar bheeg lena ...abhi chalo .."

"Nahi ..ghar jaane takt oh baarish ruk jayegi na ..Maan ..i want to dance ..i want to be drenched in rain.."

Again she changed song and sung..

"Zara sa jhoom loon main ..zara sa ghoon loon main ..aa tujhe .."


And rather singing she came near me ..i wanted to take her from there but she grabbed my collar and started hummimg the same song ..she was so close to me and don't know but i felt urge to kiss her ..I still wanted to reject this feeling but seemed my inner feelings coming out ..(I can say mine only coz I didn't knew about her feelings ) and my hands grabbed her by her waist and pulled her towards me ..she was humming now but slowly ..and more or less we both were under influence of alcohol too..and coming closer with each passing moment ..rain drops showering over us and i found her more b'ful that time ..my wet hands were on her wet waist and holding her more tightly ..and in no moment my lips touched the corner of her lips ..



She was shivering now ..coz of rain or coz of my touch ..I don't know ..but definitely ..I couldn't keep myself away from her..and with my face coming close to hers I was feeling her face also coming close and either it was my hidden love for her ..which i didn't realize that time or my heart took it as permission from her side ..I claimed her lips and felt her arms around me ..than sliding towards my back ..the feeling I can't describe ..but I started kissing her ..softly and gently ..but when she also give in ..our kiss became deep and it was long too..



The rain ..sound of water droplets ..the atmosphere ..me and her alone there ..all had impact on us and we lost in each other ..

I came in senses with a jerk ..when my phone vibrated in my pocket ..



and than I realized what we have done ..infact what I have done ..as she was not in her senses properly but it was me who could feel what's happening ..who could see what happened ..as she pass out in my arms ..after I broke the kiss..

Now I was standing there with her in my arms ..we both were drenched and I took her to the car..network was not much to help ..so I drove right to one of our friend s house ..Nikita lived near form that place and that too alone so I told her that Geet in drunken state ..did all

this ..dancing ..singing and now I can't take her in this condition to home ..i will warn our group for not playing such pranks in future ..this was first time ..alcohol been there in party ..but as of now Uncle will ques me that you guys do all this and may be he will not allow Geet to go

outside parties .. she agreed to me and said she will take care of her and in morning she will sent her home ..or go with her and will talk to uncle that coz of late night ..she is here but she will call uncle now to inform ..so i need not to go to Geet's house now ..



I thanked her a lot and I hid the kiss matter ..how could I tell her ?and coming back after talking to uncle on phone .. and assuring them about Geet ..in whole way I was thinking ..how could I do this ..? I cheated her .i kissed her ..and when she was not in proper senses ..first of all she is my friend ..just friend and on top of that ..i never seen her like that..she is a good friend..a lovely girl and I have breached the trust now ..I cheated my friend ..her family ..her parents ..they trusted me most and if they will come to know than they will think that I have taken advantage of her..



They treated me like family member and what I have done ..many may think that its only a kiss but it was a blunder done by me..

my mind was divided ..one said -totally not your fault..you were under influence of alcohol but other said ..what ever but I am guilty for what I did ..how could I became that week


one mind said ..your inner feeling of love was that strong ..and love is not weekness ?


but other said ..but this love you never recognized ? there was only friendship and after thinking much I concluded that yes it was friendship and I agree that may be feelings for her developed in me but it does not give me right to lose control ..i did wrong and now one thing I have to confirm ..Geet said in party that she wants to tell me something so what it could be ? and also I will tell her all this and than everything is up to her ..


I couldn't slept that night and I was thinking ..now what will happen? I called Nikita few times more and she also was wondering ..why I am so worried? Her father knows that she is with me ..and her mother too is fine with it ..so I should just chill..and I can meet Geet in morning too..



I told her to pls inform me when they will be ready ..I myself will come to pick and I will drop her..I need to talk to Geet too..so she (Nikita) don't need to go to Geet house..I will do that..she agreed and I had a sleepless night ..

~~~~O~~~~


Next morning ..I got ready soon and was waiting for Nikita's call ..but her phone was switched off when I called her ..I went towards her house ..and I was on the way..when I got a call from Uncle that Geet met an accident and she is in hospital ..

I somehow controlled myself and said ..I am coming ..I was not in a state of thinking anything more ..it was all so shocking and strangely happened ..

Later on I came to know from Nikita.. that Geet woke up early and asked Nikita to drop her home ..without telling anyone ..she will tell the reason afterwords ..so she dropped her on her scooty ..

And than Uncle told me than that after sometime Geet left home saying .. " I will inform Maan that I have reached home safely and I am fine..and I am fine but I have some imp work ..so I will be back in sometime but pls don't call Maan..pls Dad .."


Uncle said "Ok beta ..you wanna give surprise to him I think ..ok we won't call him but pls tell him..he will be worry o/w..ok"

"Ok Dad..I will inform him...ok bye .."

~~~~o~~~~



So Geet was coming to my place or somewhere else I don't know ...but she was badly injured in that accident .. her scooty dashed into a tree ..in order to protect a kid who was crossing the road..and her mother was yelling from behind ..kid was safe but Geet in danger..and after 4 days ..she came into senses and we almost lost hope but almighty helped us ..listened to our prayers...and Geet was back ..but her memory was effected ..it took much time ..she recovered and slowly slowly was coming back to normal life and was depend on us for her memories..just than in those days ..i realize how much I love her and what she meant to me ..i found my hidden love ..for her ..for her only ..i just wanted her back at any cost..

but also since than this guilt is in me ..neither I could not tell her and explain her and nor she could tell me ..what she wanted to tell me ? in the party and on the next day ?

Now situation is -Geet loves me so much ..I love her so much too..she is my life ..now without her I am nothing .she wants to marry me ..me too..but she don't remember the incident and I don't want to cheat her by marrying her but not telling the truth.

~~~~O~~~~

Geet was knocking at the door.

"Maan Maanu ..kholo na ..open the door ..surprise for you .."

Geet self talk "Maan will be surprised to see these outfits ..our dresses for engagement ..Dad decided the date and I have decided to live in present ..to live for my Maan..but keep trying to bring out truth ..if Maan is hiding something ..it has to be out. .Oh !Maan I love you so much."

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Thanks friends.❤️

Deepti.😳




Edited by RM14 - 8 years ago
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This update is mainly about the reason of Maan's guilt and both Maaneet POVs..
hope its not too long update.😳

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Updated.😳
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hello! thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! superbly written. Past well incorporated! Maan n Geet's POV well written! so that's y Maan felt guilty! update soon

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