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Impressions

Prologue



He - Your First impression opens and closes the door of opportunities

She - It takes a moment to judge someone but a lifetime to understand them


There is a saying that First impressions are the Best impressions but I have Doubt...Are first impressions really the best impressions?



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thank you Lakshu Darling..mmmuuaaahhh😳





Part - 1


Handa House

Handa house, Rather Handa mansion is located on the beach road facing the sea in Mumbai and the location of the building itself says how rich the Handas are.

Handa are into music business, they have a few recording theaters and they sell music, they release filmy music, they make private albums, arrange concerts. They are into everything related to music.

And today the house is being decorated, everyone in the family is busy with one or the other work.

The head of the family...Sukhdev lal handa.. is sitting in the garden and having his morning tea... he is father of two sons and a daughter.. his elder son is Inder handa, elder daughter-in-law is Rano handa, second son is Rajveer Handa and his wife Simran Handa.. and daughter Jasmeet chadda...and son in law Joginder chadda.. who is a doc by profession...

Inder And Rano are parents of two sons and a daughter... his eldest son is Brij and youngest son is Tej and only daughter Geet

Rajveer and Simran one son and two daughters, son is Arjun, who is Geet's age and daughters are sur and taal who are twins.

Jasmeet have one son and one daughter... Son is Armaan... who is also a doc like his dad and daughter Sargam...

Inder, rajveer, brij and tej are seeing the business.. even simran helps them...but Rano is a dedicated house wife. She is the heart and brain of the house... she is the homemaker

And today...every single family member is present... as A boy is coming to see their eldest daughter.. Geet...

Geet is the beautiful... just like her mother... but is not like her... she is mischievous and loves to play pranks on everyone... she doesn't even spare her Darji.. and her two assistants are sur and taal... they love to be with geet...

Geet is also a part of the Handa musicals... she is their singer... she sings in the name, Anamika... but nobody apart from family and few other office staff knows this... she doesn't want to be a known public figure... she is happy being unknown...

As they are into music.. the elders made sure the children learn music... only Geet learnt vocal... others learned instruments...

And today... they are waiting for the Khurana's...

The khurana's are well known business family and they are into construction business...

Khurana constructions is founded by Late Amarnath Khurana... His wife is Savitri Devi... They have one Son and one daughter... Manjeet Khurana is present MD of KC...and his wife is Shilpa Khurana...

Maan Singh Khurana , the groom, is the only son of Manjeet Khurana .. he is presently working with his father... Maan is an MBA degree holder from Oxford...

Preeti Malhotra is daughter of Amar ... she is married to Ram Malhotra... They have a Son and a daughter... Daughter, Sonam is elder and is married to Dev Ahuja ...they have a cute daughter Annie...

Ram and Preeti have a Son names Aditya Malhotra who is of Maan's Age

Maan and Adi are cousins but they are the best friends ... they share everything... literally everything.. they have no secrets... Adi knows Maan more than anyone and Maan knows Adi very very well...

Today he is going to see a girl cause of his family's pressure... rather his dadi's pressure... she is not keeping well these days and wanted to see Her Grandson married...

The proposal came through Dev Ahuja... Dev is also a doc by profession and is a very good friend of Armaan... he had seen Geet a few times and liked her very much... When Armaan shared the news that they are searching a suitable boy for Geet... He talked to Dadi and made the proposal to Armaan for Maan ... Armaan talked to his elders and they are impressed with Maan and got ready for the introductions... And Finally the day has come...

The Handa's are excited coz this is the first marriage proposal for the young generation... Brij and Tej are not ready to marry unless Geet is married... They want Geet to be married first... So Geet has to bow down infront of her family...

Geet is a postgraduate in Maths and Music... She is just like her mother... only thing that differes her from her mom is her stubbornness, a trait she got from her darji... And she is proud of it... this is the only concern that Rano has...

Rano is calling everyone... specially the bacha party...

Rano - Suno bacho... aaj mujhe koi shararat nahi chahiye... Agar koi bhi sharart karte dikha mujhe toh unka weekend party cancel and they will get punishment... though those words are for Sur and Tall... she doesn't want them to feel bad so she gave warning to everyone young... even to Brij anf Tej...

Brij - Maa... Aap hume toh chod dijiye... saari shaitani toh aapki laadi betiyan hi karti hain... sab se pehle apni badi beti se kahiye ki koi shararat na kare Maan ke saath...

Tej - Ha.. maa brij sahi keh raha hain.. aap pehle geet ko samjhayiye.. aur jab inki captain kuch nahi karega toh uski vanar sena kya karega... unhe bhi chup hona padega... She said looking at sur aur Taal...

S&T - Teji Veerji... hum aap ko chodenge nahi... aapne hume vanar sena kaha rukiye abhi dikhate hain ki hum kya karsakte hain... Waise bhi aaj Sargam di aane wali hain.. toh aap ki khair nahi...

Tej - Toh Vanar sena ka ek aur member aane wala hain.. dekhte hain kya karte ho tum log... He turned to his Chachi and said... kaha se uthake laayi chachi aap inhe...poore ke poore bandar hain... shakal se bhi aur akal se bhi...

S&T were red by his comment... they shouted veerji and started to hit him... Tej started to run from there and the twins followed him... every one laughed seeing them fighting like kids... All the boys of Handa house have a habit of irritating and pulling the legs of their sisters...

In the mean time Joginder came with his family... Armaan too took leave as Dev will be coming and he has to do the introductions... The twins pulled Sargam to Geet's room to take revenge from the boys...

Rano pulled Armaan to the side...

Rano - Armaan beta .. tujhe ache se pata haina woh log kaise hain... hum tumhari baat pe bharosa karke hi maine darji ko aur inhe manaya hain...

Armaan - App mujhpe bharosa rakhiye mami... main Geet ke liye aisa waisa ladka chununga kya... Maine sab pata kiya hain... Dev mera khas dost hain.. humne saath mein padhayi ki hain...aur ab same hospital mein kaam karte hain... Aur Maan Dev ki wife ke bhai hain... toh Family ki koi chinta nahi hain ... bas aapko Maan pasand aajaye toh hi baat aage badhegi na...

Rano - haa.. par maa hoon na... ghabrahat si horahi hain... aur toh aur agar baat aage nahi badhi toh tumhare aur tuhmare dost ke beech mein kadwahat aajayegi na...

Armaan laughed at his mami's thought - Mami... aap bilkul nishchint rahiye... Agar aapko Maan pasand nahi aaya toh bhi koi problem nahi hain... hum bache nahi hain ki koi matter ko hamari dosti ke beech mein aane de... waise bhi Dev Geet ko jaanta hain aur usne khud baat chedi hain...

Rano - tum nahi samajh rahe ho Armaan.. aisi hi baateoin rishton mein kadwahat lati hain.. main nahi chahti tum iski wajah se dev jitna acha dost kho do...

Armaan - Mami... aap kahe toh main aap ke saamne Dev se baat karoon... Appko tasalli hojayegi...

Rano - Nahi rehne do agar tum itna kehrahe ho toh main maan leti hoon.. bas sab sahi se hojaye toh main babaji ke darshan karke aaongi... Rano folded her hands and prayed for the almighty...

Rano - acha .. tum jao Armaan... Brij aur Tej ki thoda help karo... Mujhe kitchen mein kaam hain...

Armaan - Ji mami...


Armaan went away and Rano headed to the kitchen where her both sister in laws are chatting sitting on the table and having their Tea...

Rano - tum dono aaj bhi shuru hogaye... simran tune check kiya sab ready hain kin ahi... aur Jassi tu jaake Geet ko dekh woh ready hui ki nahi... mujhe toh tension horahi hain...

Jassi - Arrey bhahi... itna kya tension lena... Dev apna hi ghar ka ladka hain... maine use bachpan se dekh hain... ( she means to say from collage days --- thoda exaggerate hogaya na.. kya kare kuch log aise hi hote hain) koi baat nahi hogi... aap tension na lo.. sab theek se hojayega...

She made Rano sit on the chair and got her a drink to cool her down...

Geet's Room...



Geet is getting Ready...


Drashti Dhami


S&T are complaing about teji and his comments about them ... Geet and Sargam are laughing... Sargam is doing her internship with her father... she is also a doc by profession but a fresh pass out...

Sargam too joined them... Haa Di... teji Virji aise kaise kehsakte hain... Hume...Vanarsena kaha... Not done... unhe sabak sikhana hi hoga...unhone humse panga liya hain.. chodenge nahi... Ab yeh vavar sena ko lanka mein aag lagana hi hain..

S&T - Haa... Geet di... kuch toh idea do na...

Geet - hum... Dekhte hain... lekin aaj nahi... Maine mama se promise kiya hain ki koi shaitani hain... Ek baar mehmaan chalejaaye tab dekhlenge unhe...

S&T were disheartened by hearing this... Di... plz... Na... kuch toh idea do...

Geet- abhi nahi... but baad mein ... mera promise hain ...pakka unhe chodenge nahi...

S&T - okk di... They were sad but finaly agreed as their captain.. Geet Di said to wait..

Sargam - chalo ab di ko thoda arram karne do...

S&T - Di maan jiju kab aayenge...

Geet - woh abhi tere jiju nahi bane hain... Toh unhe jiju kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain... Maan ji kaho bas... ya bhaiyya...

S&T - Toh kya hua... agar abhi nahi hain toh...zaroor banenge wohi hamare jiju... kun ki hamari di hain hi itni pyaar aur beautiful.. saying tis Sur aut Taal both kissed Geet on her cheeks...

Geet hugged her sisters and then returned their kiss... Sargam too joined them...

Sargam - We will miss you Di... Aap Delhi chale jaayenge toh...

S&T - haa di... sab se zyada hum miss karenge aapko... aap chali jayenge toh hum pranks kispe khelenge.. aap toh team leader ho na...

Geet - tu inti senti mat ban Sargam... Aur tum dono suno...Abhi itni jaldi nai jaane wali hoon ... Shaadi toh bohut door kibaat hain... pehle lakda Geet ko pasand aana chahiye na...

Jassi came in and saw them in a group hug...

Jassi - oye chodo meri bachi ko... hawa aane do use... Uske kapde aur makeup kharab hojayenge...

Sargam - Maa aap bhi na... kuch nahi hoga...

Jassi - tum log jao...bhago... she aksed sur aur taal... they ran out calling their mother for some snack...

Jassi - Geet... idhar aa... mere paas baith thodi der... Pata nahi kab waqt mileja tujhse aise baat karne ka...

Geet - Bua.. aap bhi na... Sargam aaphi pe gayi hain... abhi abhi who bhi senti horahi thi... Aur main akhi nahi jaarahi hoon abhi... aap sab log kyun bhul rahe hain ki yeh sirf ek meeting hain.. its just a proposal...

Jassi panicked hearing her... Geet.. tu sach mein ready haina use milne keliye... Agar tere dil mein koi hain toh batade...

Geet - bua... itni pareshani... haa... main ready hoon use mine keliye aur Naa... mere dil mein koi nahi hain...

Jassi - meri kasam khao phir...

Geet - offo bua... main sab ki kasam khake kehti hoon ki mere dil mein aur zindagimein koi nahi hain... ab ok na... chodo yeh tension...

Sargam - Maa... abhi aap jaayiye... aap di ko pareshaan karr rahe ho... dekho kaise banadiya... ab di ko phirse makeup karna padega...

Jassi - theek hain theek hain... jaa rahi hoon main... Tu ache se ready hoja Geet...

Jassi kissed on her fore head and left the room...

Sargam - toh bolo Di... Ladke ka photo dekha...

Geet - Haa.. dekha haina...

Sargam - Wow.. di.. mujhe bhi dikhayiye na... Armaan bhai ne kisi ko nahi dikhaya sivaaye aapke..

Geet - wahi pada hain table pe dekhle... Geet replied cobing her hair...

Sargam at once jumped and took the pic from Table - haaye... kitna handsome hain... uff... yeh AYM looks... Kaatilana hain


Gurmeet as Maan in construction side



Geet - AYM... who kya hain...

Sargam - Arrey Di .. AYM nahipata.. Angry Young Man... Dekho pic mien hi dikha raha hain inka attitude...

Geet - tu aur tere short forms...

Sargam started her rant about how handsome Maan is and she started her research on him... Geet just sat there listening to her sister...




What Next?😆



Two more parts to Go..😳








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Part # 2



In the Mean time... The Khurans arrived...

Armaan introduced his family and Dev introduced Khuranas...

Maan took blessings of Darji and Rano...

Darji welcomed them formally as the head of the Family...

Manjeet sat with Shilpa.. Maan with his Dadi.. Savitri Devi.. and Dev stood with Armaan...

Savitri Devi - Sukhdev ji... aap ki pawriwar ko dekh ke bohut acha laga... Aap ke ghar mein toh ronak chayi hui hain...

Darji ji..- Savitri Devi ji... Hum sab ek saath rehte hain.. jassi toh aati rehti hain jab jogi aur Armaan hospital chale jaaye ... Bas aise hi bachon ko dekh ke din guzarjata hain...

Savitri Devi - aap bohut lucky hain ... itne saare bache hain ghar mein... humare ghar mein toh sirf Maan hain... ab bas yehi ummed hain ki uske 4-5 bache ho...

Maan in a low voice to his dadi - Dadi... aap bachon tak pohunch gayi... maine abhi ladki dekhi nahi hain aur naa hi haa kaha hain...

SD - badi jaldi hain ladki ko dekhne ki... She turned to Darji and said... aap Geet ko bulayenge... yaha koi besabri se intezaar karr raha hain...

Darji laughed and said Zaroor...

Darji signled Rano and Rano sent Armaan to bring Geet and she went to kitchen with simmi for the refreshments...

Maan - Dadi yeh sab kya hain... aap plz mujhe embarrass mat kijiye...

Armaan and Sargam Brought Geet to the khuranas...

Geet touched SD's feet... Sd blessed her and made her sit beside her...

SD - Geet aap pehle mujhse baat kijiye... baki logon se baad mein baat kijiye ga..

Geet slowly sat beside SD...

SD - aap ki hobbies kya hain...

Geet was expecting a typical dadi who will test her in everything... but here SD is too cool and directly went to her hobbies...

Geet - ji kuch nahi... I mean khuch khas nahi hain...

SD - toh aap free time kya karte hain...

Geet thought of telling her daily routine...

Geet ji.. - main subah thoda riyaz karti hoon... Darji ke saath mere morning tea... Phir Brij veerji ke saath office jati hoon.. waha unki help karti hoon... Sham ko jaldi aajati hoon... Mamma thoda khana banana sikharahi hain... Sham ka waqt sab ke saath guzarjaata hain... bas yehi hain...

SD - toh aap riyaz karti ahin... kya aap hume apna gana sunayenge...

Geet abhi... she questioned...

Manjeet - Maa.. aap chodiye Geet ko... Jise Geet se baat karni hain use toh baat karne dijiye...

SD - oh.. Haan... Maan keliye aaye haina hum... Main hi introduce karadeti hoon...

SD - Geet bete.. yeh mera pota hain Maan... Aur Maan .. yeh hain Geet.. jisse aap dekhne aaye hain... aur nahi dekh rahe hain...

Everyone laughed at SD's remark

Sur & Taal - arrey dadi ji... aap beech mien se hatenge toh hi dekhenge aur baat karenge na...

Simmi closed their mouths and glared at them... signaling to keep quiet...

Rano - ji.. Maaf kijiyega Maa ji... Bache hain... Unhe pata nahi hain ki kaise baat karni chahiye.

SD and Shilpa who were looking at the twins laughed..

Sd said - koi na Rano beta... sach hi toh kaha hain... main in dono ke beech mein baithi hoon toh dono ek doosro ko kaise dekhenge aur baat karenge...

SD to Maan and Geet - Chalo bacho ab main jaa rahi hoon... mujhe kabab mein haddi nahi banna... toh aap dono aaraam se baat kariye...

With that SD stood up and joined her bahu on the adjacent couch...

Maan and Geet were sitting aside each other not at all seeing each other or talking.. Geet is nervous and... Maan was playing with his fingers and Geet with her dupatta...they didn't know what to talk among so many people...

Maan looked at Dev for help...

Dev - Darji aur Dadi... mujhe lagta hain hume indono ko akele baat karne dena chahiye... dekhiye dono kaise baithe hain ... aise nahi lagta ki woh dono school principal ke saamne baithe hain... Nervous and tensed...

Armaan - Right... mujhe bhi lagta hain ki indono ko thodi der akele baat karni deni chahiye...

Darji - Theek hain... Geet puttar ... Maan ko garden mein leke jaao...main thodi der mein kisi ko bhejunga...

Maan stood up and looked at Geet... She replied to her Darji... ji Darji...

In Garden

Geet - ji baithiye...

Maan sat on the chair and said Thank you...

Geet saw the kettle placed on the table in front of her and asked...( ab yeh mat sochna who waha kaise aaya hain.. Rano ne bhijwaya hain...)

Geet what will you have... Tea or Coffee..

Maan - Coffee

Geet - Black ya normal

Maan - Black...

Geet poured the black coffee in the cup and asked him... Sugar...

Maan - no sugar...

Geet - aap bina cheeni ke coffee pete ho...

Maan nodded.. she gave him his cup and started preparing her tea... she added 2 cubes of sugar in her tea... and started slowly sipping her tea...

Maan finished his coffee and asked... So Geet... what are your expectations from this marriage...

Geet - nothing much... I am expecting a friend and companion in him...as long as he can assure he will be there for me .. I have no complaints...Maine hamesha mere mumma papa ko dekha hain... unki dosti bohut gehri hain.. mujhe bhi aisi hi dosti chahiye apne aur apne husband ke beech... mamma kehti hain expectation jitni kam ho utni hi khush rahenge hum...

Maan - umm...

Geet - aur aapki expectations kya hain...

Maan - kuch zyada nahi...mujhe jhoot se bohut nafrat hain... main kuch bhi bardaash karsakta hoon bas yeh nahi.. ... mujhe aise log mere life mein nahi chahiye...


Maan said in a tone Geet couldn't get... she was not sure he is just saying his view or indirectly taunting her...

Geet - umm.. koi wajah...

Maan - hain... par abhi woh zaroori nahi hain... Aur aapko kuch poochna hain...

Geet - abhi keliye nahi... Agar baat aage badhi toh ek doosre jo janne ki koshish karenge..

Maan - I love to hear lies when I know the truth... he murmured and then said - interesting..

Geet - What?.. come again...

Maan - nothing .. lets go ...

Geet - are you sure you said nothing.

Maan - why.. did you hear something...

Geet - I think so...

Maan - First be sure Ms. Geet... then question me...

Geet gave a confused look and Maan started to Go and she followed him thinking about his weird nature...

Both the families mingled well by the time Maan and Geet came inside... Sur and Taal were sitting with SD and are talking to her and SD is laughing with them...

Darji saw Maan and Geet...

Darji - lo ji bache aagye... itni jaldi hogayi baat aap dono ki

SD - toh kuch decide hua...

Darji - Geet puttar.. yaha aao...

Geet went to her Darji... He made her sit with him.. Geet sat on the hand rest of his chair... - Bolo puttar.. toh tumhara kya jawab hain.

Geet hadn't expected her darji would ask her infront of everyone.. she is yet to decide... she don't want to let her family down.. but this is her life and she needs time to think ... and more over Maan looked indifferent to her... she need to know him first...


Geet said Darji.. - kya aap mujhe do din ka time denge... I will tell you after two days...

Darji smiled and looked at SD... SD nodded.. hume koi problem nahi hain... hum bhi apni baat tabhi batayenge maan se baat karke... I think Maan ko bhi time chahiye decide karne keliye...

But Maan had something in his mind ... He said to Dadi


Maan - Dadi.. par mujhe time nahi chaiye... maine faisla karliya hain...

SD - Boliye Maa.. aapka kya faisla hain... SD was smiling .. she was sure Maan is smitten by Geet and he doesn't want to delay his marriage...

Maan - Mujhe yeh Rishta... Manzoor nahi hain...

SD stood up and said What... Maan aap yeh kya kehrahe hain...

Maan - aapne sahi suna dadi... mujhe Ms. Geet se shaadi nahi karni...

SD - Maan... agar aapko mazoor nahi that oh aap ghar jaake bhi bolsakte the.. lekin aap ne yaha inkaar karke unka hi nahi humara bhi apmaan kiya hain... SD said in a tone filled with Anger...

Geet stood silently... she doesn't know what to say or Feel... She not emotionally attached to Maan and she is definitely not in love with him to feel anything about the rejection... but she feeling bad for her family... they have some expectations from this rishta

Maan - aap meri poori baat suniye Dadi... Aap ko ache se pata hain ki mujhe jhoot se kitni nafrat hain... and jabse hum yaha aaye hain Ms. Geet ne jhoot ke alawa kuch aur nahi bola...

Armaan - Maan... you are crossing your limits now... Aapko Geet pasand nahi aayi.. koi baat nahi ... lekin aapko koi haq nahi hain ki aap uski istarah se insult kare...

Maan - No.. Armaan... I am not crossing any limit.. but I am here to open your eyes... Geet is not what you all think her to be... She is living a dual life... She is like Haathi ka daant dikhane ke ek aur Khane ke ek...

Brij - Bohut hogaya Darji... main apni behen ke khilaf ek shab bhi nahi sununga... App kahenge unhe jaane jeliye ya main baat apni haath mein loon...

Inder Brij... Hum bade hain yaha... baat karne keliye... tum chup raho...

MK - Maan... bohut hogaya.. galati hamari hain jo tumhe yaha leke aaye...

MK tunred to Darji and folded his hands hume maaf kardijiye Darji... Maan ki taraf se main maafi maangta hoon...

Maan - Aapko ko kisi se maafi maangne ki zarrorat nahi hain Who bhi meri taraf se... meri koi galati nahi hain ... Aap ko pata bhi hain iss ladki ne kya kiya hai... Iski wajah se kisi ki zindagi barbaad hogayi..


Rano sab log plz meri baat suniye... Mujhe lagta hain maan ko apni baath kehkne ka mauka dena chahiye... mujhe jaana hain geet ne aisa kya kiya jo maan ne yeh sab kuch kaha...


Maan turned around and saw Geet... Geet is now surrounded by her siblings and all are ready to pounce on him... even the little girls Sur and Taal are alo glaring at him


Maan - maine aapki Geet ka aisa roop dekha hain jiska aap log andaza bhi nahi hain... agar koi aur kehta yeh baat toh shayad main bhi yakeen nahi karta... itni achi acting ki hain aap ki beti ne...




Geet ne aisa kya kiya ki maan ne aisa ilzaam lagaya?



Last Part - Next Week😆



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Precap
Geet to Khosla yeh mat sochna hume pata nahi chalega agar tum usse phir se job pe rakhoge toh ... mere aadmi hamesha yaha nazar rakhenge... woho ladka ek baar bhi yaha dikha toh ussi waqt healty ministry ko phone jaayega... yaad rakhna... Geet said pointing her finger to khosla..

Geet said to her friends... come on guys.. ab mujhe yaha nahi rehna.. yaha ka khana nahi khana...

Every body left from there after creating a scene... and loss to the owner and the waiter...




Part #3B



Maan Aise hain aap ki beti... aap log use sanskari aur aagya kaari beti maante hain .. par woh hain nahi...

Rano stood ther looking at Geet.. Geet showed no reaction to it...

Inder - aaj humne apni hi beti ka ek naya pehlu dekha.. thank you Maan... par hum usse bachpan se jaante hain toh hum use ek incident keliye judge nahi karenge... Aapne use ek baar dekh ke impression banaliya.. theek hain... Woh aapki marzi.. lekin main mere hi ghar mein meri hi beti ki burayi nahi sununga... He folded his hands infront of him and Said thank you..

SD Inder Aap bhi wahi galati karr rahe hain jo maan ne kiya... lekin hum who galati nahi karenge.. Geet ko mauka dena chahiye apni baat kehne ka...

SD turned to Geet Geet beta kya aap ani safayi mein kuch nahi kahenge...

Geet Ji nahi... Jaise Maan ne kaha.. Maine who sab kiya... Woh sach bolrahe hain...

Everyone gasped.. but no one said anything...

Armaan kyun kiya Geet... kuch toh wajah hogi... kyun ki main jaanta hoon... hamari Geetu aisi nahi hain...

Geet Haa.. Armaan... wajah toh hain...

Geet turned to Brij Brij Veerji .. App mohit ko zara bulayenge...

Brij Mohit ko...

Geet App plz... bulayiye...

Brij went away to call Mohit as he understood why Geet want him there...

Geet App plz... do minute wait kijiye...

Everyone was waiting for that Mohit and were wondering who is this mohit...

Brij came back with a guy.. he was in his early 20's and when Maan saw him... he felt familier ...

Maan tum... Maine tumhe kahi dekha hian...

Geet yeh wahi waiter hain Maan Ji .. jisse aaapne uss din dekha tha.. khosla ke restaurant mein...

Mohit looked at Geet and Geet nodded...

Maan tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi.. mujhe pata hain Geet ki wajah se tumhari naukri chali gayi... sab kuch boldo.. aaj tumhare saath Maan Singh hurana khada hain... Uss din main kuch nahi karsaka.. lekin aaj nahi... aaj main khada hoon tumhare saath...

Expression of Rano at once changed... She started to smile through her tears...

Mohit Kya bolrahe ho ji aap... Geet Didi ne toh meri zindagi bachayi hain... Aur main inka hamesha abhari rahunga...

SD Beta.. kya aap hume bata sakte hian ki kya hua.. aur aap Geet se kaise mile...

Mohit once again looed at Geet.. and she nodded Ji... Mera asli Naam Manohar hain... Manohar Pandey... Main UP ka rehne wala hoon...ek chota sa gaon hain hamara... Main bachpan mein wahi tha... mere maa baap guzar gaye jab main 5 saal ka tha... Tab se meri nani ne hi meri dekhbaal ki... maine mushkil se school complete ki hain... Meri nani bhi chali gayi jab mein 15 ka tha... Aur marte marte mujhe apne malik ko soump kar chali gayi.. meri nani unke ghar mein kaam karti thi ...Meri nani ne meri parwarish keliye karz liya tha... apne malik se... aur meri nani ke baad who karz mere upar aagayi... main unke yaha kaam karne laga... aur kuch time baad unke bete ne mujhe yaha Mumbai leke aaye kaam karne keliye...Unka yaha hotel hain... Mujhe bas hotel mein khana aur rehne ki jagha milti thi.. aur kuch nahi... aur hotel mein jo tips milte the woh bhi waha ka malik leleta tha yeh kehkar who meri karz mein jama karr raha hain... 6 saal aise hi guzar gaye.. lekin meri zindagi mein koi sudhar nahi aaya...nahi mera karz chuka paya... Maine wahi kaam karne walaga... kahi aur jaa bhi nahi sakta na... lekin maine waha rehke ek baat seekhli... Woh hain Gana... Waha jo gane bajte the who sunke main bhi gane laga... subah sham bas gana hi meri zindagi bangaya...

Mohit took and small gap... Maan was wondering what is he saying how is it related to what Geet did...

Mohit continued Mujhe mahine ke ek Sunday chutti milta tha... who bhi sirf adha din ... main uss din bahar jaata tha... aise hi ek Sunday main ek mall mein gaya.. aise hi ... aur kahi jaane keliye mere pass paise bhi nahi hote the... hotel ke sabse nazdeek wahi maal ha... Adha ghanta chalo toh mall aajata tha... Aur uss din Mall mein kuch chal raha tha... Uss din Rafi saab ka janam din tha aur waha unko yaad karr rahe the unki gaano ke zariye... gane bajarahe the.. main peche jaaake baith ke dekhne laga... thodi hi der mein waha bheed jama hogayi... sab ko pooch rahe the... unki gaane ganae ko kehrahe the... Aur kuch log garahe the... main sabse peeche kahde hokar unke saath gana garaha tha... Itne mein ek madam aayi aur mujhse kaha ki mujhe stage pe jaake gana chahiye... Mujhe darr tha...main gaya hi nahi... Toh who chaligayi... Lekin stage pe jaake mujhe bulaya... sab log mujhe hi dekhrahe the... aur mujhe bulane keliye taliya bhi bajane lage... mujhe jana hi pada... bohut dara hua tha... lekin Gana toh gana hi tha... aur maine dheemi awaz mein shuru kiya... Aur pata hi nahi chala ki gana kab khatam hua... Sab log ne bohut tareef ki... mujhe bohut acha laga... Aur ladki koi aur nahi.. Woh Geet didi hi hain... Unse maine pheli baar mila uss din...

Mohit looked at geet with gratitude...

Geet Main waha promotional event keliye gayi thi... Hamare new album ka launch keliye .. Jo rafi saab ke gaano ka hain... Waha maine pehli baar mohit ko dekha... bohut hi acha gaya tha usne gana... poora mall sunne laga uska gana... Phir usko cash prize bhi diya... 5000 aur hamre naye CD... Main samajh hi paayi ki woh itna kyun roya uss din... Uski wajah hain uske haath mein 5000 ke note...usne kabhi 500 ke aage nahi dekha... main apne aap ko rok nahi paayi... usske leke gayi baat karne... Main aur mohit Pizza hut mein gaye... uss din usne apni zindagi ke baare mein bataya aur kaise uska owner use exploit karta hain... main use kaha usko waha naukri karne ki zaroorat nahi hain.. woh bahar aa sakta hain... lekin yeh maanne keliye tayyari hi nahi tha... Kehta gaya ki usko karz chukana hain... maine kaha main doongi paise... mohit nahi maana... Main uski restaurant ka address liya aur wo waha se chalagaya...

Geet main kuch karna chahti thi uske liye... uski awaz itni achit thi... agar woh bina riyaz ke aur guidance ke itna acha ga sakta hain .. aur use sahi disha mile toh toh who aasmaan chuyega... maine mann banaliya main kaise bhi karke mohit ko waha se bahar lake aaoongi... Maine agle din karan ake saath waha gayi... aur sab study kiya... woh khosla insaan nahi hain... woh mohit ko bohut maara ... kyun ki usne bahar jaake kuch paise kamaye... mohit se baat karke pata chala who 5000 bhi leliya uss khosla ne... aur Mohit ko khana bhi nahi diya uss din...

Geet mujhe bohut gussa aaya... main complaint karna chahti thi... lekin karan ne rok liya... aur kaha use mohit ko hi nuksaan hoga.. kyun ki khosla use chodega nahi... khosla ko mohit ke roop mein ek free mazdoor mila hain aur woh use jane nahi dega... Main samajh gayi thi.. mujhe mohit ko waha se nikalna hain akise bhi aur khosla ko pata bhi na chale ki kya aur kyun hua ..

Geet Tabhi maine aur karan ne plan banaya... Hum hamare group ke saath restaurent jaayenge aur waha hungama karenge... taki use majbooran mohit ko bahar karna pade... mujhe pata tha woh mohit keliye apna restaurant ko khona nahi chahega... uss din mohit ne mujh par soup nahi giraya.. woh toh dara hua tha... toh main khud soup apne aap giraya... Mujhe kuch nahi hua uss din.. kyun ki karan ne pehle ki keh rakha tha mohit se ki ek soup bilkul garam na no... toh mohit thanda soup laya... aur sab hamare plan ke hisaab se hua... khosla ko mohit ko bahar bheja hi pada... maine Rahul se kaha ki woh khosla pe nazar rakhe taki woh mohit ko dhodh na paaye... Rahul ek mahine keliye waha chakkar kata raha... aur Khosla ke andar darr baith gaya ki uspe humne nazar rakhi hui hain...

Geet Ussi din main mohit ko ghar leke aayi... kyun ki mujhe pata tha.. agar yeh bahar raha toh khosla ki nazar mein padne ke chances hain... aur iska naam Manohar se mohit kardiya.. taki koi pehchaan na paaye... aur dressing bhi...

Mohit yaha aake mujhe bohut pyaar mila... maine apni poori zindagi mein kabhi utna pyaar nahi paaya.. jitna in 4 mahino mein mila... Aur main apni poori zindagi Geet didi ka karzdaar rahunga... unhone mujhe ek nayi zindagi di hain... unhone mujhe album mein gana gane ka mauka diya... He said folding his hands...

Brij patted Mohit and said aisa bikul nahi hain mohit.. tumhari awaz ko toh pehchaan milna hi tha... Geet bas zariya bani tumhe logo tak pohunchane ka...

Maan was standing there not knowing what to say...

Inder ab poori baat sabke saamne aagyi hain toh mujhe kuch kehna hain...

Inder turned to SD and said Aap se milke bohut acha laga maa ji... lekin mujhe maaf kardihiye... Main apni beti ka haath aise insaan ke haath mein nahi desakta.. jo usse jaanne ki ya pehchanne ki koshish hi na ki ho... Ek baar dekh ke uski chavi banali maan ne apne mann mein...

SD Hum samajh sakte hain Inder... Hume bhi bohut acha laga aap sab se milke...

She turned to her Son and said ... ab hume chalna chahiye...

SD to Darji Sukhdev ji... Main aapse maafi maangti hoon apne pote ki behavior keliye... hosakte toh use maaf kardijiye...

Darji Maafi nahi SD ji... Maan ne jo dekha wahi sach maan liya... ismein koi kuch nahi karsakta... Agar main bhi maan ko aise dekhta toh shayad main bhi use galat samajh ta... hum bade hain toh hume hi smajhna chahiye...bachon ko... garam khoon hain.. toj jaldbaazi mein faisle lete hain aur nuksaan unka hi hojata hain

Sd went to Geet and Said Aap se milke bohut acha laga Geet... hume zindagi bhar afsos hoga aisi ladki ko humne khodiya... aur Aapki gana nahi sunneki... ek di hum zaroor aayenge.. sirf aapka gana sunne...

Geet smiled and said mujhe bhi aapko milke bohut acha laga dadiji... aur aap ko wait karne zaroorat nahain mera gaane sunne keliye... She turned to sur and Said... Sur... jaake woh meri personal album haina.. woh leke aao...

Sur ran to Geet's Room...

Geet aur aapko bura maanne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain dadi.. aapke pote keliye mujhse bhi achi ladki milegi... aur meri mamma kehti hain jodiya upar se banker aati hain.. aur hume bas intezaar karna chahiye...

Sur came down with a CD... Geet gave it Dadi and said Dadi .. ismein meri saare gane hain jo maine gaye hain... ab aap jab chahe sunsakte hain... aur main aapki feed back ka intezaar karungi...

SD took the Cd and kissed Geet's fore head... We will definitely beta... Bye... hum dua karege ki aap ko aap ka mann pasand Jeevan saathi mile...

Khuranas left..

In their Car...

Manjeet and Shipla went in One car and Maan and SD went in one car..

Dadi asked the driver to play the Cd...

And with the humming of the song itself...

Maan yeh toh gazal ki awar hain... ... Anamika Geet hain... Oh.. No... maine kya kardiya... Yeh toh meri Fav singer...

SD- Gazal... yeh gazal kaun hain...

Maan- Anamika .. Maine use naam diya... Gazal... Uski awaz sunke mujhe bas yehi naam sijha... waise bhi Anamika ka naam toh milna hi tha na..

SD Waise Maan aapne sahi naam diya... Gazal ka doosra naam Geet hi toh hain...

Maan yeh maine kya kardiya Dadi...

Maan was already feeling bad for his behavior and his words to geet and now with the revelation that anamika is Geet he felt he has lost ... The most precious woman...

Maan Dadi... kya ab kuch nahi hosakta... kya ab hamari koi future nahi hain...

Dadi ab sab kuch aapne hi toh bigad diya hain... ab kya future hoga aap dono ka...

Maan nahi Dadi.. main itni aasani se Geet ko jaane nahi doonga... Mujhe galat fehmi hui... toh ab main hi sab kuch theek karunga... Geet toh aapki bahu banke hi rahegi... Yeh MSK ka wada hain...

That's it Guys ... App sab Maan ko Best of Luck Wish karna... Takiwoh geet ka dil jeet sake...



This is the End Guys...



Our first impressions are generated by our experiences and our environment, which means that we can change our first impressions... by changing the experiences that comprise those impressions...

(taken From Google😳)



Kehte hain ki First impression is best Impression... pata nahi ki woh kis hadh tak sahi hain... mera experience kehta hain ki yeh kuch instances mein galat hain... maine jo impression banaya ek khas keliye woh toh bilkul uska ulta nikla... toh kisi ko itna jaldi judge nahi karte...


I am dedicating this to the special person in my Life😳



Epilogue ka sochungi...😆.. not sure...

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Maan turned around and saw Geet... Geet is now surrounded by her siblings and all are ready to pounce on him... even the little girls Sur and Taal are alo glaring at him


Maan - maine aapki Geet ka aisa roop dekha hain jiska aap log andaza bhi nahi hain... agar koi aur kehta yeh baat toh shayad main bhi yakeen nahi karta... itni achi acting ki hain aap ki beti ne...



Part # 3A


Inder stood silent... And Dargi agreed with Rano...

Maan narrated the incident where he saw Geet


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4 months back..

Maan finished a meeting with a client in Pune and was returning.. it was past lunch time. Maan didn't even have his bf as he started early to reach Pune on time... he and his staff came for lunch...as they were very hungry .. so they came to the restaurant they found on their way... It was not some five star restaurant but it was decent and neat... Maan agreed seeing the place neat... And his staff's expectant faces..

They had their food .. they were about to finish .. Maan heard loud voices... he saw in that direction... He saw a group of people.. may be 8 or 10... came and asked for table...

The person showed the table and the group joined two tables and sat ..Even after joining the tables the chairs were less... so they took more chairs and adjusted themselves around the table causing inconvenience to others but they didn't bother.. ... the manager requested them politely..the people didn't listen to them... The manager tries to talk with girls.. but a guy in the gang shouted at him...

Guy Karan singhanina naam hain mera... Jaha chahe complaint karo dekhta hoon kiski himmat hain mujhpe haath daalne ki...

Maan observed him... He is wearing torn jeans... a sleeveless shirt.. and then a jacket which is also without sleves... showing his well built muscles...

A girl made the manager move from there assuring they would not make noise and asked him to serve food...

But the boys and girls started talking loudly and disturbing everyone.. but no one dared to say anything after seeing Karan and his threat...

The waiter came with the food and started to serve... The waiter was a young boy.. he seemed new and was shivering serving the food...

Everyone taking something or the other and the table was chaos..

The waiter came to a girl clad in short skirt.. Sleeveless top and curly hair... she has a very fair skin and big almond eyes.. the waiter started to serve her soup.. she took the bowl from the tray and with shivering hand was about to put in front of her and suddenly the soup fell on the girl and she shouted in pain... Aaahhh...

Everyone was shocked seeing her crying in pain... The dress was short and the soup directly fell on her legs.. and they turned red...

One girl pulled out some tissues and started to clean her... but it caused more pain and the girl again shouted in pain...

Karan shouted Oh god pari... kya karr rahi ho... usse aur dard horaha hain...Take her to wash Room...

Maan saw that ... The Girl pari took Geet to Washroom.. he saw her then.. her dress was really in a bad shape and he don't know how much she got burnt by that soup... But it looked really bad...

Geet and Pari came back after a while.. Geet got changed and now her dress looked fine...

Geet Kaha hain woh waiter... bulao usse...

Karan yehi hain... bhagne ki koshish karr raha tha.. maine jane nahi diya... yeh dekho.. and he pushed the waiter infront of Geet...

Geet gave a tight slap on his face...

The Poor waiter who was a young boy was shocked... He had tears in his eyes...

Geet How dare you...Are you blind... dikhta nahi hain kya

Waiter Madan ji... galati hogayi... mujhe kisi ne peeche se maara...

Karan came and pulled him by his collar... Matlab kya hain tumharah.. tum humpe ilzaam laga rahe ho... hum sab dost hain... tum tumhari galati hume pe mat daalo...

Pari Geet ke paas toh main hi baithi thi.. tumhara matlab maine kiya yeh sab.. maine geet ko hurt kiya... She too shouted at the waiter...

Rahul Pari.. hum sab jaante hain tum aisa kuch kahi karogi... Apne aap ko bachane keliye tumhe phasa raha hain...

Geet tumne hamara din kahrab kadiya hain... tumhe pata bhi hain woh dress kitna costly hain.. tumhari annual salary se bhi mehengi hain... Aise choto log toh bahane dhhodhte hain hum jaise logo se baat karne keliye...

Karan kya hua Geet...

Geet kuch nahi .. yeh bohut sweet tarike se behave karr raha tha... mujhe touch karne ki bhi koshish karr raha tha... Jab maine bhav nahi diya toh mere upar soup gira diya.. chote log aise hi hote hain... jitney chote inki zindagi utni hi choti inki soch bhi... disgusting... Geet made a face

Karan yeh hamare saamne itna kuch kiya aur tumne bataya nahi... main isse chodunga nahi... And karan lifted his hand to punch him...

By then the waiter was pleading them saying he was not doing any such thing... and saying sorry for the soup incident... But nobody was ready to listen...

Just then the manager came...

Manager Sir kya hua sir... aap log lunch kyun nahi karr rahe hain...

Karan left the waiter ... and turned to him Kya hua... yeh tumhare iss waiter ne meri friend pe buri nazar daala... aur usne bhav nahi diya toh uspe garam garam soup daaldiya.,.. tum aise loo ko rakhte ho kaam pe...

Waiter Saab... nai.. aisa kuch nahi hain .. maine aise kuch nahi kiya... bas galati se soup girgaya ... Maine maafi bhi maangli saab.. lekin yeh nahi maanrahe hain... Aap kuch kijiye saab... The waiter pleaded the manager..

Manager bacha hain saab... chod dijiye... kehraha haina ki galati hogayi... Aap apna dil bada karke use janedjiye...

Geet kyun jaane de... usne mera itna nuskaan kardiya pata bhi hain woh dress kitni ki hain.. ab woh pehene layak hi nahi hain...

Madam gareeb hain jane dijiye madam ji... pehli galti samajh ke maaf kardijiye..


Waiter - Haa.. Madam.. pehli galti samajh ke maaf kardijiye... The waiter Fell on her feet and held her legs...


Geet Pushed him and said - Dekha karan.. abhi bhi mujhe touch karne ki koshish karr raha hain...

Rahul pulled him and made him stand between the boys...


Geet turned to the manager and said kyun maaf karoon.. lagta kya hain mera... ab toh bilkul bhi maaf nahi karungi... Ya toh woh rahega ya main...

Manager thought to send the waiter so that he can manage the situation oye.. jaldi jaa... Yaha kyun khada hain...

Geet bewakoof samajh rakha hain kya hume... Agar abhi use job se nikalo.. warna acha nahi hoga...

Manager - job se nikalna... madam ... janedijiye na... he turned to karan and said... Sir.. aap boliye madam ji jo... bechara kaha jaayega

Karan Geet ne jo kaha wahi correct hain.. iski saza yehi hain... abhi issi waqt use naukri se nikalo...

Manager Plz.. Sir... this is just a small matter... woh maafi maangraha haina.. toh jane dijiye na use... Main isse ek mahine ka salary nahi doonga... Chod dijiye sir...

Karan acha badi fikar hain tujhe iski job ki... chalo theek hain... Ek kaam karo.. tum job chod ke chale jao... tab manenge... kya kehti ho Geet...

Geet yes u r right... waise bhi yaha ka malik kaun hain... Pata karo guys... She said turnig to her friends... Rahul just googlged and came to know the name of the owner...

Rahul - .. milgaya koi Shyam Khosla hain... no bhi hain... ruko abhi call karta hoon..

Manager uski koi zaroorat nahi hain sir... main hi hoon Shyam.. yeh mera hi restaurant hain...

Geet Oh.. tum hi ho ... Ab bolo... isse naukri se nikalte ho ya apni restaurant gawana chaht ho... Geet smirked at him...

Shyam Khosla aap aise kuch nahi karsakte... Mere bhi contacts hain...

Rahul acha kaha tak hain tere contacts... MLA MP.. CM ya PM... hum bhi toh jaane...

Karan Tum jaante ho yeh kaun hain.. he said pointing to Rahul... Yeh hamare Home minister ka beta hain...

Shyam Khosla Kya...

Rahul Haa... mere Dad yaha ke home minister hain aur mere uncle health minister hain...


and they started their drama..

Pari Rahul.. yeh dekho yeh roti mein baal hain...

Another Friend Sheetal OMG... yaha dekho iss kadi mein chipkali hain...

Shyam Khosla Jhoot sab jhoot... mera restaurant aisa nahi hain... Main khud dekhta hoon kitchen.. aap jhoot bolrahe hain...

Rahul Correct, lekin sabit kaise karoge... main abhi jaake tumhare restaurant ke khilaf health ministry mein complain karunga... kyun ki main Home mister ka beta hoon meri complaint ki top priority hogi... abhi ke abhi department ke log aayenge aur aapki iss restaurant ko seal karenge.. aur aap jaante hi hain ki kitne din lagenge govt departments mein.. ek.. ek hafta.. ek mahina... ek saal .. ya kabhi nahi...

Khosla started shivering hearing Rahul Aap aisa nahi karsakte...

Geet hum aisa hi karenge... Rahul yeh sunne wala nahi hain... tum batao uncle ko abhi.. call karo unhe... tab pata chalega iss khosla ko...

Waiter was standing there saying nothing.. the matter was never in his hands to say something...

Geet aakhri mauka derahi hoon... iske baad main kisi ki bhi nahi sunungi... Ek baar matter uncle tak pohunch gayi toh hum kuch nahi karsakte hain.. sochlo... iski nauri ya tera yeh restaurant... Tujhe bas Ek min ka time deti hoon..

Manager was in dilemma... he was already sweating ..

Geet said _ Done... Rahul Call ur uncle..

Rahul stated to tap the numbers... and Khosla Said madam Plz.. wait... I am ready to send him away.. aap plz meri restaurant ko baksh dijiye...

Geet smirked at her victory and gave a hifi to Karan

Geet turned to the waiter and said yeh hota hain agar mujhe koi buri azar se dekhta hain toh... chalo bahar niklo... Get lost ...

Karan held the waiters hand and dragged him towards the door and pushed him outside... The waiter was pleading him to spare him and not to do this.. but he was not ready...

Karan came to his friends after sending the waiter away...

Geet to Khosla yeh mat sochna hume pata nahi chalega agar tum usse phir se job pe rakhoge toh ... mere aadmi hamesha yaha nazar rakhenge... woho ladka ek baar bhi yaha dikha toh ussi waqt healty ministry ko phone jaayega... yaad rakhna... Geet said pointing her finger to khosla..

Geet said to her friends... come on guys.. ab mujhe yaha nahi rehna.. yaha ka khana nahi khana...

Every body left from there after creating a scene... and loss to the owner and the waiter...




Part # 3B... next Week...





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Hello All...


I Know I am yet to give an update of Humsaaya... but I am stuck Everywhere... Kahani aage hi nahi badh rahi hain aur ghar pe bhi kaam zyada hogaya hain.. achanak se...🥱


This was in my mind for months and this cameout now.. I wanted to post it on 5 th itself... but had to travel and couldnt post then...


This is to the Girls who did an awesome job on the Anniversary thread... P2, Sanju and Preeti... and to All my Friends...❤️


First Part will be coming Soon... till then post your comments on the topic ' Impressions'




Index ---

Part # 1 on Page # 4 Link

Part # 2 on Page # 9 Link

Part # 3A on Page # 14 Link

Part # 3B on Page # 18 Link





Edited by -indu- - 8 years ago
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wowie new story😃

prologue tho bhari bharkam quote se shuru kia

update tho daalo 😳

kisne kiske baarein mein galat impression paal rakha hai😛

will be waiitng
Edited by -lakshmi- - 8 years ago
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arey waah tu daaldiya... par iss beech mein hs ko bhoolgayi😡uski baari kab aane waali hai..
aur yeh kitne saal mein complete hone waali😛😆

prologue tho impression se related diya.. aur tu bhi yeh jaldi complete karke good impression paa lena hum sab se ...abhi tak teri reputation bohut kharaab chalrahi hai😆
Edited by priya111111 - 8 years ago
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Congrats Indu for the new SS..
will be waiting for the update

sorry net is kacchuwe ka bbi baap ...to mushkil se khul raha hai forum
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thanks 4 da pm! fab update! superbly written! Love the intro of the Handas n Khuranas! Geet lives with her extended family! they r a close knit family! Maan coming 2 see Geet! her cousins help her get ready! Maan is the only son! he is pressurized 2 go n meet her! Sargan comments that Maan is an angry young man! waiting 4 Maaneet 2 meet! pls update asap😊

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Posted by: muskanp

8 years ago

~dhundlae aks~ page 114/115 May 14th 2022

Dhundlae aks Koi dhundla sa ek aks meri aankhon mein rehta hai, Koi bechan khawabon mein rehti hai, Ek manoos si awaz mujhe sone nahi deti, Koi...

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Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

MG-inayaat ya ibadaat/part 28/29/30-pg87/88/90- 30 aug

Hello everyone i know i already written many stories whi complete nhi ho paa rhi hai and i start one more actually, i written this for OS...

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