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Prologue:

She looked at her hands adorned with Heena which was darkening by every passing second with her would be husband's name carved in it. She had heard her Mother Nd Taiji telling that darker the shade of her Mehendi the more Love she'll get from her husband. And as this thought crossed her mind she just hid her face between her palms feeling shy of her own thoughts nd teasing of her cousins nd friends for her first night were not helping either thus making her blushed nd aroused all at the same tym. It's her marriage in few hours nd then she'll be bounded with someone who was a stranger for her till now but after few hours he'll be the owner of not only each nd every fiber of her body but of her heart nd soul too, he'll be her soul mate for not only in this birth but in all the next 7 births nd the mere thought was giving her goosebumps all over her body in the anticipation of all those beautiful moments nd memories that they will create together.

She is Geet, Geet Handa, Daughter of Mohinder nd Rano Handa nd Granddaughter of Amardeep Handa who runs a small-scale industry in Shimla. She is an Apple of everyone's eyes in the family including her brothers' nd Darling of her Daarji due to her lovable nd soft spoken nature. Her Daarji was the only one who had selected groom for her nd she had no objection either for she knows that her Daarji will select only the best for her. Till now he had never made any restrictions on her then be it for studies or anything nd now also she knows that he had selected her groom after making sure that she will have a happy future with him nd hence she just agreed to what he had said. She had seen his photograph nd also when he had came to see her. He seems to be quiet reserve because he didn't talked much to her when they were left alone making her wonder whether he likes her also or it is just that he was agreeing for this alliance just for the sake of his family. But nevertheless she'll make him hers with her love nd care nd will soon gain a place in his heart just like she had in the heart of her family members.

Baarat has came, Mandap was set, nd it was tym for her to come down. Her friends nd cousins accompanied her as she walked down the stairs with her lashes down blushing. She so much wanted to look up at her groom for once especially then when her friends were going so ga ga over his looks but then it won't be look good for a bride to check out her groom so shamelessly like this right, nd anyways after few hours she'll get this right officially to check him out whenever nd wherever she wants nd then no one will be able to stop her from doing so, she thought nd mentally smacked herself for her own shameless thoughts.

She stood before him with her head bowed down after putting garland around his neck waiting for him to do the same but to her surprise it didn't came. 2 minutes, 5 minutes, 10 minutes, 15 minutes but it didn't came, is her groom is more shy than her, she thought as she finally looked up at him only to find a dilemma, a confusion in his eyes while his face was depicting his restlessness nd nervousness nd before she could read further she saw him removing the garland that she had put around his neck thus shocking her nd everyone present over there.

"I can't do this marriage. I am sorry." His words made the ground slip beneath her feet making her to stumble two steps backwards as she looked at him with her wide eyes shockingly. If it was not her sisters behind her then she would have fallen for sure. Was he kidding? No, his expressions doesn't seems so

"Beta, ye Aap kya keh rahe ho? Ye Mazaak ka waqt nahi hai." She heard her Daarji speaking gently yet sternly.

[Beta what are you saying? It's not a gud tym to joke]

"Dekhiye, I know that it's not the right tym or place to say this but I can't do this marriage (He said looking at her Daarji nd her family present in the hall before turning to look at Geet.) See I know it's shocking for you but I can't marry you. You had no lackness in you but I had some personal reasons nd I can't bind both of us in this loveless marriage nd compromised relationship of whose burden we both have to carry for throughout our lyf. I can't do this injustice to both of us. Trust me, you'll get a better lyf partner who'll love you a lot but it's certainly not me. I am Sorry, Please try to forgive me." He said to Geet before removing his Pagdi nd getting down from the Mandap.

The house which was filled with happiness nd joy few minutes back is now filled with sadness nd tensed atmosphere as everyone is trying to digest the fact. And Geet, to say that she was shocked would be an understatement as she was totally numb with the turn of events. Without her own knowledge she got down from Mandap nd walked towards her room with her numb legs. She could hear the murmuring among the guests, she could hear the cries of her mother, she could hear the comforting words of her Taiji to her mother, She could hear her brothers arguing Him, she could hear her Daarji, her father, her Tauji nd his family trying to make him understand; but she felt nothing, nothing at all for her mind was just wandering on two sentences said by him which has shattered every dream, her every happiness. She wished it all turned out to be a worst nightmare nd when she opens her eyes then everything would be perfect just like she had thought to be but Alas! It didn't nd at the end instead of getting married she had become the bride whose groom has just deserted her on the Mandap itself just before few minutes of the marriage. The day which has to be the most beautiful day of her lyf has turned out to be the most worst day of her lyf that will haunt her throughout her lyf.


Ok Please Don't kill me for this... I know I was supposed to be update "Kehna Hi kya" And "Destined To be"... But due to my Typhoid I couldn't type it down... And i Had to give this update today itself... But don't you all worry as I'll definitely give "Destined To Be" and "Kehna hi kya" in this week itself...



This update actually this whole story is dedicated to my darling baby Priya aka priya1111.... Shonu ab teri katti cancel😆😆... Maine apni poori jaydaad i mean poori story tere naam kar di😆😆


Ok First thing Updates will be a bit slow for this as i have to finish two of my ongoing stories first... But i'll update it soon... Don't worry will not take a year😆😆



So keep commenting nd ya long long comments or else i wont update soon😡


Samjhe ya Samjhaoon😉


P.S.S Also i had created a new page for the notification of my updates of all FFs as i was having some problems while accessing the Group... Kindly like it to get the quick notification of my update... here's the Link


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Aakriti😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the new SS! fab surprise! 😃Always a pleasure 2 read something written by u! 😊intriguing prologue! Feeling 4 Geet! she is getting married n has woven dreams! bt this is shattered at the mandap wen the groom refuses 2 marry her! she is shocked n hurt! he explains bt he shld have not agreed to marry her if he felt that way! her family is stunned! waiting 4 cs and update! thanks 4 da note regarding updates bt pls also continue a thing called love! thanks
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Akku on new start 🤗

interesting pro.
waiting 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS on starting a new story
and I sincerely hope you complete this.😉🤣

Lovely start chuhiya...
Poor geet...her most beautiful day was ruined.
who is this stupid guy? pehle nahi bol sakta tha?😡😡
badnaami hui wo alag but the scar he left on her heart will remain forever.🥺 my poor baby...
I wonder if that guy was Maan or someone else.🤔

updt the first chapter soon.

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update
congtrs foe new story
is maan or someone who leve geet at marrige stage when he dont want get married to geet why hell first he say yes to this alliance geet is having some dreams for this marrige but all her dreams sahttered
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice starting. cant wait to read more.
Edited by Nav2010 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice start dear
what yaar he left her
just before the marriage
poor geet
eagerly waiting for next update
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Hope groom is not maan if he was not sure he should have not said yes he as broken her married
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm
Congrats on new story..
INTRESTING PROLOGUE
Par groom koun hai yeh nahi reveal kiya...
Was it maan!!???
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
waiting for update

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