new os- RUNNING AWAY OR RUNNING INTO EACH OTHER? UPDATED PART 1 PG-5 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 1

There is a hustle bustle and all the relatives running around making final preparations for a wedding. At that moment, a car zoomed into the gates of that house from which a girl around the age of 21 came out with lovely face and most expressive eyes which are presently filled with lot of questions.

Then came a woman seeing the girl

W: Geet bete, you came? (and hugged her) we all are waiting for you. Now go fast and get ready.

G: but mom, what is happening and what are these preparations for?

Geet's aunt: See whose asking? A bride asking about her own marriage.

Geet is shocked to the core listening to them tears rolled down her doe shaped eye.

Then a girl came there and pulled her inside a room and locked it.

Girl: Di (while tears rolling down her eyes too)

G: Chutki (Sam), what is happening her? Meri shadi?

S: Sorry di, I couldn't do anything much.

G: There is nothing in your hand , its my fate (and fell down on the floor crying her heart out.)

Just then there was a knock on the door and Sam opened the door while Geet composed herself where a man entered (geet's step mom's bro and the groom, who tried to force her once) seeing him geet was terrified to the core while some aunt came there and dragged him saying bride and Groom cant meet before marriage.

This was the final blow that geet got for the day. She completely broke down and deeply shaken. Seeing her state sam was crying too.

It's just a day rather say a night left for the rituals to start. When everyone slept Sam came to Geet who was sitting lifeless with Packed bags and broke her revive and asked her to leave as soon as possible. When Geet was hesitant that someone might wake up, Sam told her that none will wake up as she spiked their food and everyone were in deep slumber. Geet at once hugged her little sister who stood as a ray of hope in her dark life. Taking her bags, she silently left her home in hope of a new day and fresh start.

In the other part of the country a young man was practising his martial arts, one can say with a glimpse that how much worn-out he is.

Still he is continuously practising and venting out his pain and sadness of being alone , of being seen only as a billionaire and run around him only for his money. He lost the hope of having someone for himself for him in person as MAAN but not MSK.

After sometime he composed his vulnerable state and wore the mask of rudeness and arrogance hiding his broken form and left from there.

Pre-cape: maan and geet meeting and geet saving maan.

Edited by poojitha96 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update geet came back home to get shocked of her life that her own mom fixed her marriage without even telling her if that wasn't enough her marriage was fixed with her step mom brother geet was shattered that her own mom was ruining her life Sam was sad for her and so Sam made geet run away as there was no way to stop the marriage geet was happy to have sister like Sam here maan was lost in his own agony he has everything a life desire but he was lonely as ppl always loves his money not maan he craved for love and care for a loved one but only surrounded by greedy self centered ppl who only desire his fame and money
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely update geet came back home to get shocked of her life that her own mom fixed her marriage without even telling her if that wasn't enough her marriage was fixed with her step mom brother geet was shattered that her own mom was ruining her life Sam was sad for her and so Sam made geet run away as there was no way to stop the marriage geet was happy to have sister like Sam here maan was lost in his own agony he has everything a life desire but he was lonely as ppl always loves his money not maan he craved for love and care for a loved one but only surrounded by greedy self centered ppl who only desire his fame and money



Geet calls her step mom as mom and gives her the respect a mother deserves but her step mom don't deserve it, geet being a pure soul always tries to respect her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! superbly written! Sam is so caring! she helps Geet escape as Gee's marriage is fixed without her permission! Maan is so lonely! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start 👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for Maaneet meeting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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geet syep mom forcing hr to marry with hr bro who is just disgusting geet younger sis helped hr in running from this hell
maan was feeling loneliness in his life
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OK so she is going to be a run away bride I am guessing! I guess he is going to run into him as she is running away or something totally the opposite of what i am thinking!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new OS..
Maan is waiting for someone who will love him as Maan not MSK..
Geet cruel step mom arranged her marriage with her own brother to whom Geet scared him as he once forced her..
Geet escape frim her marriage with d help of her step sister who is helping her..

Interesting.. Precap.. Geet saved Maan ...update soon..add me in your pm list


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Posted: 8 years ago
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any possibility of you updating?
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wishing you will continue soon

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