MG- Tujhey Dhoondon Kahan Part 12 pg 54

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: CRAZYCUTEE
superb update
maaneent r happy married
now maan plane crash
hope maan is safe

thanks for liking

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Part 2

slowly slowly geet open her eyes after few seconds she saw clearly everyone surrounds her meera came forward and check her

oh god geet tum theek to ho na

after gaining conscious she recalled what she heard and than got panic

meera maan !

maan kahan hain?

wo tv py kya kh rhy thy

wo sab ghalat hy na

marey maan ko kuch nhi hoa hy na

kahan hain maan?

mjh maan sy milna hy!

abhi milna hy!

geet relax geet!

dekh tumahri helath k lye yeh theek nhi hy baby k barey ma to soch

and patted her cheecks meera calms her

meera maan mjh maan sy milwa do

and crying bitterly

geeta bacha control kr apney ap ko

naina said with tears

geet beta fikar nhi karo maan ko kuch nhi hoga tumharey dad aur sameer try kr rhy hain

at km hall

acp sahab ap kya kh rhy hain aisa kaisey ho skta hy ap try to karein nhi mjh kuch nhi pata ap smjh kyun nhi rhy hain marey bhai ka kuch pata nhi hy aur ap chahtey hain ma calm ho jaon ap jantey bhi hain ap kis k barey ma baat kr rhy hain wo The Maan Singh Khurana hain unhein kuch nhi ho skta damn it wo mera bhai hy plz ap theek sy dhondhye...

sameer cut the call in frustration and sit on sofa helplessly

sameer kya hoa kya kaha acp ne

asked his dad

dad wo kh rhy hain koi casualties nhi hain koi nhi bacha hy dad wo aisa kaisey kh sktey hain dad ma geet ko kya kahon ga jb wo bhai k barey ma pochey gi

said sameer

beta i know mera maan aisey nhi ja skta pr humain himmat krni hogi tumhari mom k lye geet k lye uski halat dekhi hy humaien unhaein sambhalana hoga

after few days

geet sitting on maan's chair with silent tears and remembering maan

maan ap bht burey hain ap ne apna promise pora nhi kia ma ap sy bht naraz hoon ap ne kaha tha ma wapis arha hoon pr ap nhi aye ap kyun nhi aye maan plz wapis ajaye plz maan plz ma ap k bina nhi rh skti plz maan

with crying and close her eyes and then remember something

flashback

maan kahan hain ap?

geet came on terrace and didn't find maan there

maan kahan hain ap?

ap ne mjh yahan bulaya hy aur khud hi ghayab hain maan plz bahar ayen na ap ne mjh kyun bolaya hy

no reply

maan agr ap abhi aur issi waqt bahar nhi aye to ma chali jaon gi

ap bahar nhi arhy na

ok ma ja rhi hoon

and about to leave when maan hold her hand

geet yaar kahan ja rhi ho

mjh ap sy baat nhi krni

arey jaan itni narzgi

and hold her waist from back

oh my jaan ma to yahin tha

apney mjh bulaya tha aur khud hi ghayab ho gye

arey my sweet heart ma bhala tum sy door ja skta hoon

and nuzzle her neck with his nose

pr maan ap samney kyun hi arhy thy

to tum ne bhi to nhi mjh dhonda

acha idhar ao

he take her to the swing and caressed her face

geet mjh sy ek promise karo gi

wo kya?

wo yeh k ma agr kahin kho jaon aur mil nhi raha hoon to tum mjh dhond lo gi

maan ap kaisi baatein kr rhy hain

plz geet promise me na k ma kahin bhi chala jaon to tum bilkul pareshan nhi hogi aur tum mjh dhond lo gi dhondo gi na mjh promise karo na

ok ma promise krti hoon k ma ap ko dhond loon gi

ma ap ko dhond loon gi

i promise

i promise!!!

flash back ends

i promise that words echoed in her ears and she instantly open her eyes

ma ne ap sy promise kia tha k ma ap ko dhoond loon gi

ma kaisey bhool gyi

ma apna promise pora karon gi maan

ma ap ko dhoond loon gi

and with that aim slight smile came no her face

I AM COMING MAAN

BE READY

MA GMSK AP KO DHONDNEY ARHI HOON!!

Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update, well written! Geet shocked! she recalls the past n decides 2 look 4 Maan! update soon

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update, well written! Geet shocked! she recalls the past n decides 2 look 4 Maan! update soon

thanks😊

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

geet going to find maan

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

maan ko kuch nehi ho sakta...

painful update...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

amazing update

hope geet will find maan

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

poor geet crying alot
Maan is not finded
past was nice
geet now going search Maan
nice update

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Kalpana

@maaneetfavo

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

emotional update dear..geet asking maan..she is crying so much..everyone worried about maan ang geet state..geet remembering maan lovely moments..nobody know about maan wjat happened to maan..i know maan alive..but maaneet separation..really i sad for geet..geet take bold decision..she will find her maan..surely she win her promise..thanks for pm and continue soon dear