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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: laughingpearls

Double update wow yaar awesome and emotional update loved it



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

double update awesome super updates...maan worried about geet asking about brusies..but geet talk rudely with maan.yash watched geet ka videos in net..maan angry with that monster and deleted everything..maan know about her abuse..maan tried to confort her but geet not accept maan pamper..onca again monster enter geet family..he blackmailed her..she dropped large amount..maan noticed her passbook..geet know about she trapped and maan also know everything..once again shattered. maan saved her..but geet shout maan..maan understamd he want her in his life..yash enlighten in place..maan pampered geet so much..love it..he give his watch to her..it is lovely sentence about watch..yash reply also funny..naina troubled geet..dev arranged garden..dev such nice guy..geet caught dev lie and thank to him..dev confess his love to geet..precap chudail entry..omg..what will happen..

thanks for pm and continue soon








Hehe shes not that a big chudail hehe 😆



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Mindblowinggg update s...
Thanks for double treat...
finally Maan know about geet being abused...
now Geet also accepted Maan his family...
Maan gave his fav watch to Geet...
Naina destroyed their garden...
but Dev made perfect again...
Geet know Dev made garden perfect again...
now he asked Geet for Date...
looking forward for geet answer...
and Maan reaction...





Hehe her answer will b up soon lol and his reaction too


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Double update loved it maan was worried for geet he was cursing himself he couldn't look after her he asked her to ready dev came to see geet maan smile to see geet has friends he urged her to make friends that way she will be happy maan saw some indecent pics of geet thanks to the monster who abused her maan realize why geet rejected him all the time he got rid of pics but that didn't work much as the monster came to geet and trapped her into coming his home but maan saved her again geet realize how wrong she was thank goodness she won't call him Bhai Yash could see maan love towards geet and tried to make him understand that she had to leave him one day but maan ignoring it he gave her his watch which Naina tried to destroy but dev saved her Naina was jealous of geet and ruined her flowers which dev fixed geet thank him dev asked her out



hehe y would she call him bhai 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree


Awesome, emotional n lovely updates



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Maan know about Geet being aboused
& he again save her for them
Yash was shocked when Maan give his watch to Geet
Thanks for PM
Update soon



Hehe yup hes shocked


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypie

Nice part

dat monster tried 2 harm geet's image bt maan mangad 2 take correct action on time
bt geet was trappd by him bt maan was on time nd dis time he sent dem 2 jail
finally geet startd 2 trust maan
Maan gave her his watch nd when geet's classmate tried 2 destroy it geet ansd her back nd dev 2 supprtd her
when geet saw d garden destroyd she became so sad
maan triec 2 cheer her up dev on d other hand tried 2 fix up her hardwrk
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon



Hmm yup they r gone now


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hottyangel

nice concept.. maan is searching for his sister geet. geet is being abused physically by her foster brother and she is waiting for her brother to come and rescue her...



Its a never tried or tested before topic hehe😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hottyangel

part 2...

emotional update... feeling bad for geet. maan came and took geet away and taking care of her...



Yup they r family in this😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hottyangel

part 3...


nice update... maan is trying to make geet happy.. he spoke with her school principal came to know about her more... maan wants geet to enjoy her life just like all others of her age... he took her to salon and gave her a make over...




Hmm yup her life is miserable


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