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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: MariumChoudhary
Love you Miss.Kawaii take care

arrey ruko ruko😆

spam nahi karo. Let others comment. Phir kar lena😉

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#532

Part 42 - Nice twist. Mujhe to lagta hai geet se jyada maan restless hai. Just he was mastered in hiding them from all. he could say anything to his mother or father. He could not deny if they forced him little. He will be ready to marry Sharma girl. Now he must be missing his dadima who would have understood with his facial expression. I wanted to ask ...just one curiosity...kya dadima ne ye jan liya that ke maan ko geet pasand hai..?

But he just poured out his frustration on geet. She was easy target. And it shows, at least, she was very close to him after dadima.

She sensed that something was bothering him. She tried to know from him. Oh...they were not talking from that incident. I knew that this will happen. But she forgot soon and missed and seek that old maan back.

Ana was happy to share this news to geet.

She was not over thru's her marriage and RaJa's marriage yet. Then how will she digest maan's marriage. She was restless whole trip.

She got insecure to lose him, to lose her massiha / guide...is this the reason that she was so much restless?...as there is no love from her side, which she yet to realize. Hope this Miami trip will do some wonders for her.

Aishu pehle geet apne pairo pe to khadi ho jaye. She has no goal or aim in her life. She was lost like in her dream. She always looks at maan for some kind of help. She was dependent on him. Kab tak maan ye karta rahega. She has to be confident and show him that she can achieve by herself.

Ye marriage twist to beech me aa gaya. I think she will again run away if maan say yes.

Will she able to tell him what was bothering her and if he comes to know the reason how will he react..?

I liked last para... Monster caring for his little tornado.

Waiting for next, already.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#533

About your Yay' & Ho'. It changes with every update. Sometime I feel maan was right and sometimes geet. As you know maan was very matured and well established man. He can analyse things very easily, can guess what will happen ahead. He was almost perfect man.

And you were writing from geet's point of view and I can see diff shades of emotions of geet, her struggling for each thing, her thinking, how she always get effected by maan, or if anybody made her understand in simple manner. And most importantly he realization of love for maan, that yet to come. So I vote for Ho'. Would like to read more about her and to get more about maan thur' her eyes. Lol.

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#534

Fabbb..one yr
Geet fighting with her feeling now
Knowing abt maan marrige proposall..
She still not know abt it
Bt what abt maa
He know his feeling
Thn why he not told his mom abt Geet
Is he to Ni sure abt itt
M eagerly waiting for itt 😃

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#535

Hi aishuuu

chalo tum kahti ho to maan leti hoon ki mujhe bi chance milega wahaan jaane ka.. tum bhi chalna mere saath😛

mujhe last udate me geet waisi hi lagi to maine bola,,I m always ready to accept the criticism open heartedly so as a reader I say what i think about the update...Nothing personal..

In this update I see some plus points and some minus points.. actually like other readers i don;t see the story update wise,,I see the story as a whole..

Geet was dreaming a night mare ,,She was lost and could not find anyone though she could hear the voice of ana.. and then she heard the most desired voice..It was Maan..He guided her but she could not see him...

There maan found his mother in his room at morning and he guessed that something was running in her mind..

Mother son moments were so adorable..maan was like a child in front of his mother not as some business man

Then she showed him their antique khandaani ring which was being herited by the elder bahu since many generations.. She asked him to think about marriage as it was the high time.. She also declared that she wanted to meet some girls..

At office-

geet adored her boss with a smile and when he caught he asked her about that too

Maan was not very nice with her that day..

geet thought that he was still not out of the effects of that confrontation..

She got the news from ana about the girls whom they have selected for maan to choose his life partner ..Foe a moment she was shocked to hear about his marriage..

She was on the way to Miami and she noticed that man seemed not interested in marriage as he was not much excited..

Maan called her and she was back to the original world from her thoughts

he even touched her after days and she felt good.. he talked about something and cut the call..Geet asked about it and he told that he was to meet some family frinds -Sharmas..

and geet recalled that ana was talikg about some Sharma family for his wedding..

She was disturbed through out the whole journey..Maan tried to talk but she was nit read y to talk ..She did not know why she was behaving like that..Maan knew her well..and was well aware of it that she was disturbed for soemthing..She leaned back on the back of her chair and slept..maan saw her in awkward position and slipped near her to give support to her hanging head...

Now about my plus points

I loved the moment between maan and his mother..as it was shown for the first time in this FF..Other wise he was always pampered by dadi..

Maan though was upset but was still protective towards her...he tried to make her easy but as usual she was again disturb though the reason was very valid this time😆😆😆

ana and geet did not share much space in this update and kabir was completely gayab.. so no talks

about them..

Now few minus points which i felt..Remember I felt not because you were not right..😆

As i said in the beginning I see the story as a whole not update wise..So I missed the connectivity between last update and this update...I mean you left at their confrontation in last update and started this update after three day gap..

As an indevisual update it was as great as always is

I just wished to see geet reaction at the beginning of the update...I wanted to know how she took the confrontation? Though you gave detailed in the middle of the update but that place of the update was not appropriate for that ..

Second one is when maan's mother talked about marriage he did n ot react at all.. as everyone can see that he has some feelings for geet.. I know he knows that it's one sided still he did not think for even one moment about geet that time..

I know I m having over expectations from you..but as a reader I can na😆😆That all came in my mind because you are a wonderful writer..so there are great expectations from a great writer..hai na😆😆

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

arrey ruko ruko😆
spam nahi karo. Let others comment. Phir kar lena😉

Tum mujhe nahi rok payogi 😛

I can't control my own self then how can you 😆

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#537

Heyy...Main phir se aa gayi...

sorry Main thodi der ke liye behosh ho gayi thi 😆

Behoshi se yaad aaya pichle kuch saloon mein main kuch 7 ya 8 bar behosh ho gayi aree jeshe heroine's Hote hain 😳

Lekin dukh ki baat ye hain mujhe bachane mere hero Mr.Choudhary nahi aaye unki Mrs.Choudhary ko bachane 😭

Chaddo topic change ye sab toh chalta rahega hum kuch or baat karte hain ...

Next Topic next post 😛
Scroll down please 😉

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#538

Miss.Kawaii I'll come latter network mein Kuch problem hain ...Or mujhe medicine bhi Lena Hain dard bhad raha hain

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

Hi aishuuu
chalo tum kahti ho to maan leti hoon ki mujhe bi chance milega wahaan jaane ka.. tum bhi chalna mere saath😛

mujhe last udate me geet waisi hi lagi to maine bola,,I m always ready to accept the criticism open heartedly so as a reader I say what i think about the update...Nothing personal..

In this update I see some plus points and some minus points.. actually like other readers i don;t see the story update wise,,I see the story as a whole..

Geet was dreaming a night mare ,,She was lost and could not find anyone though she could hear the voice of ana.. and then she heard the most desired voice..It was Maan..He guided her but she could not see him...

There maan found his mother in his room at morning and he guessed that something was running in her mind..
Mother son moments were so adorable..maan was like a child in front of his mother not as some business man
Then she showed him their antique khandaani ring which was being herited by the elder bahu since many generations.. She asked him to think about marriage as it was the high time.. She also declared that she wanted to meet some girls..

At office-
geet adored her boss with a smile and when he caught he asked her about that too
Maan was not very nice with her that day..
geet thought that he was still not out of the effects of that confrontation..
She got the news from ana about the girls whom they have selected for maan to choose his life partner ..Foe a moment she was shocked to hear about his marriage..

She was on the way to Miami and she noticed that man seemed not interested in marriage as he was not much excited..
Maan called her and she was back to the original world from her thoughts
he even touched her after days and she felt good.. he talked about something and cut the call..Geet asked about it and he told that he was to meet some family frinds -Sharmas..
and geet recalled that ana was talikg about some Sharma family for his wedding..
She was disturbed through out the whole journey..Maan tried to talk but she was nit read y to talk ..She did not know why she was behaving like that..Maan knew her well..and was well aware of it that she was disturbed for soemthing..She leaned back on the back of her chair and slept..maan saw her in awkward position and slipped near her to give support to her hanging head...

Now about my plus points
I loved the moment between maan and his mother..as it was shown for the first time in this FF..Other wise he was always pampered by dadi..
Maan though was upset but was still protective towards her...he tried to make her easy but as usual she was again disturb though the reason was very valid this time😆😆😆
ana and geet did not share much space in this update and kabir was completely gayab.. so no talks
about them..
Now few minus points which i felt..Remember I felt not because you were not right..😆

As i said in the beginning I see the story as a whole not update wise..So I missed the connectivity between last update and this update...I mean you left at their confrontation in last update and started this update after three day gap..
As an indevisual update it was as great as always is

I just wished to see geet reaction at the beginning of the update...I wanted to know how she took the confrontation? Though you gave detailed in the middle of the update but that place of the update was not appropriate for that ..
Second one is when maan's mother talked about marriage he did n ot react at all.. as everyone can see that he has some feelings for geet.. I know he knows that it's one sided still he did not think for even one moment about geet that time..
I know I m having over expectations from you..but as a reader I can na😆😆That all came in my mind because you are a wonderful writer..so there are great expectations from a great writer..hai na😆😆

Hello Ji Ek Question hain Aap Etna long comment kaishe karti ho mujhe bhi shika do 😳

Maine abhi tak comment nahi kia...or Aap mujhe competition de rahi ho 😛

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#540

Sono Miss.Kawaii main Jane Bali thi but Maine Kuch dekha Page 83 pe 😲

Ms.Commelina and "Ben Ji" Was there did I say the last name correct 😛

But I've never seen them here on this thread for a second I've thought Am I on someone like you thread phir title dekha correct hain ... 😆

Main Darr gayi thi phir Rashmi ji bhi thi toh dil ko sukoon mila 😳