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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Mr Brown Eyes

If only Pari was here she'll be like 'Dreamy' lol. But the title in itself has a charm, it evokes the curiosity factor. Ok hand on my heart, I love this Geet for what she is, a walking enthusiast. So my regards for her is high 😆 I myself can't manage these leisure walks. I'd be like her friend, 5 mins till bus/train etc
You'll forever chatch me running, falling and running again 😆 so reading of such a Geet is nice

Homesick, this I can relate to. I miss my mummy's cooking more so miss my favourite spicy wings and donner from my favourite takeout 😭 not exactly a foodie but now you've got me thinking of only food 😆

Maan cane as the helping aide, the types everyone falls for but only a few lucky ones have the privilege to befriend, I sure I'm glad Mr brown eyes has his eyes set on Geet. So hoping for her sake, her walks and food after his intrusion would be of better standards 😆

Thank you for an amazing OS

(Also could you maybe post all the links to your OSs on one thread I.e. WOL or something so it'll be easier to read them all. I noticed you were on an OS trirade so would like to be a part of that )
😃

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

how did I miss this?

i love getting lost in your web of words ❤️

Superb 👏

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow such an Awesome OS

Just loved it

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Lovely and sweet.

It seems to have been love at first sight for Maan. Geet is so sweet and innocent. He asks for a date she ask if they can get chicken tikka. Lol.

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

REVIVING The thread in Process~ Keeping it alive by comments!!

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Outstanding os
👏 Beautifully written
Totally dreamy.
Absolutely flat over mr brown eyes

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

This is such a sweet os...😳

Divya is interesting😆.. and I can understand why geet would find her irritating..I would too for I am a person who would just stay in a moment and live it and any distractions are not cool..and calculating the time for doing everything..poor geet thinking when divya will time when and how many time she pees😆😆

Maan helped geet on the first meeting..that's a sweet gesture and divya staring at him..some girls can focus on admiring the other sex any time..like in any situation, no matter what..they will always notice the good looking guys..

Geet missing her family...aww, that's something everyone goes through when they go away from the family and maan was so sweet talking to her and getting a little too much touchy feely😆😆

Such a long message for just asking her out😆 and he sure has guts to ask her just after she ran away when he kissed her😆..

And finally, a very sweet ending.. 😳😳

lovely and beautifully written os..just to bought a smile on my face after the shitty day that I had..

Lookign forward to more from you..👏👏