New MG FF: The Breeze of My Life - Updated part 2 pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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welcome back! thanks 4 da pm! congrats on the new story! superb prologue! will b waiting 4 updates
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nice story
seems interesting
do continue plz
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Congrats for the new story 👏
Interesting prologue
Hope you will complete this 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

congrats on new story nice prologue so it seems maan has come to geets place decided to takke her to police station completely shocking geet update soon dear loving it already

Thanks... keep guessing... 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing prologue
I thinks he is maan
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intriguing prologue.. continue soon
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hi its a month since u posted the prologue! pls update soon

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Character Sketch





Maan Singh Khurana:

25yrs old young businessman ...completed his ME in Civil Engineering... settled in Chennai and is the owner of Khurana Constructions. Strict in work front...

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Dev Singh Khurana

Maan's elder brother 27yrs old ... studied in Chennai..Completed MBA...settled in Delhi and takes care of Khurana Constructions Delhi branch ... Easy in work nature..

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Charumathi Khurana:

Elder daughter in law of the Khurana's Maan's fav bhabhi.. lovely and fun loving..helps her mother in law..

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Ram Singh Khurana:

Maan's father ... the founder of Khurana constructions took all pains in reaching the heights they are in now..

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Ramya Khurana:

Maan's mother and a lovely mother in law...


Geet's Family:


Geeta Vishwanathan


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22yrs old completed her B.Arch ... helps her father in their business in free time.


Vishwanathan:

Geet's father owns an interior show room and office..

very loveable

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Vidhya Vishwanathan:

Geet's mother and professor in a reputed Engg college.


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Edited by --aarthi-- - 8 years ago
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Sorry Guys my laptop was dead and had to travel for vacation and college project work so got held up..
here is the 1st part..

character sketch in page 4

Part 1

Geeta ... Geeta elundiri ma first day ve office ku late ah poga poriya..

(Geeta get up ma are u going to go late for office the first day itself)

Vidhya woke Geeta and went to kitchen to prepare breakfast..

After half an hour Geeta was coming down while her mom was calling her

Geeta first naal office pora poi sami kumbidu ma ( Geet go and pray to God as ur going to join office today)

Geeta: Enn ma first day office poranu poi sami kumbidannuma enna ...sami kumbidanum nu sollunga seiyren. ( Mom y are u asking me to pray by telling I'm going to office etc etc.. Just tell me to pray I'll do it.. not becoz im going to office today)

Vidhya: Idhu enna vidhanavathama kelvi kekura ( Y are u talking like this ) her mom asked irritated with her.Don't cross question and be adamant Geeta.

What is there to be adamant ma.. im just confused with ur way of thinking...

Who will win you in talks I loose go and pray to God.. and then come for breakfast..

Adhellam apovae niraya .. vendiyachu..Breakfast ku enna special ma..she asked raising her eyebrows( Finished praying long back ma..wat is special today for BF)

Poori, Pongal da...

I'll Have Poori ma pongal is to heavy for first day she winked at her mom...

Her mom slightly slapped on her cheeks vallu..

Vidhya served her hot pooris

Wow something smells good said Vishwanathan Geeta's dad who joined them at the table.

Appa first taste panunga aparam parutunga..(dad first taste and then praise) Geeta teased her mom...

Vidhya interrupted their teasing... Geeta its not looking like ur going to office for the first time there is no nervousness in you..

Amma y should v be nervous asked Geeta laughing at her mom..

After composing herself she complained to her dad about her mom..

After listening to Geeta he said..

Oh! She is telling what normal people will feel during first day ma.. she forgot she is dealing with Geeta Vishwanathan teased Geeta's father..

Don't app Geeta said getting irritated with her dad's teasing

Any way congratulations da chellam...and all the best for ur first day at work...Even tho im feeling relieved ill be free from ur torture im feeling sad for ur boss who have to bear u.

Oh! Aporam ..innum sollunga ? (oh then questioned Geet)

Enna appa indha amma than 25yrs ah professor ah pasanga ku irundhu discipline strict adhu idhu nu soluranga na neengalum adhey solringa..

(What dad I thot since mom being a professor for 15 yrs is strict with students.. u to are telling me the same)

What to do baby I have to support my better half to save myself from starving...

Do I look like a joker to u both Vidhya asked getting irritated with their teasing wait today I'll defo keep u starved...

Its ok amma v can have a better food today atleast.. After all God has given us to hands and v can cook too..

Oh shut up Geeta and go get ready for ur office its already 8.30.

Ok cool amma.. im leaving

With the high tied ponytail and fitted salwar and admiration from her mom Geeta left to her office in her scooty.

Vidhya was smiling at her daughter who just turned the corner..

What happened Vidhya y are u smiling asked Vishwa ..

Nothing Vishwa just was thinking abt Geeta.. It seems just like yesterday she joined school and now here she is grown into a young individual who wants to fly in the new world..

What ur saying is true Vidhya.. Sometimes that freedom becomes dangerous in today's world.

Vidhya became confused and alert with wat Vishwa said.

Understanding her thought Vishwa said its general thot oly.

Heaving a sigh of relief she agreed that her daughter not only has beauty and brains but also bid mouth.

She prayed to God that

Here should be no roblem for Geeta.

What are u thinking Vidhya Vishwa asked her..

Nothing Vishwa I was just thinking we should have got her married instead of sending her to job.

Ada enna ma nee ( What Vidhya wat u are thinking)

What we did now is only correct let her enjoy her life for few years otherwise after getting her married we would be waiting for her visiting us.. like her sister Vishaka.. let her be free and later she have to anyways take care of her family..her responsibility will double. Let our baby be wit us for some more time.

Avalukunu ineme than poraka porana enna engeyo poranthutan la.. Avan eppo ninaikirano appo avene mudhichum potiduvan.( No one is going to be born for her hereafter..some1 is already born for her HIS command will get them together)

Vidhya agreed to Vishwa..

Oh.. Its getting late for me too ma..

Send driver back so that I can send ur lunch with him... r I might also come as I have work that side...

And plz do send some men from our shop to as there is some repair works to be done in our kitchen..

Today its not possible dear as we have new order for hotel interiors So men's are into designing latest furniture.

Oh no problem...we'll do house work's later..

With this Vishwa left to their office..

Here Geet parked her two wheeler in the office parking space.. It's a six floor building. Geet took the lift and went to 6th floor where her office is situated...

She came to the 6th floor where she'll be working as junior architect and assistant to the MD of Khurana Constructions and Ceramics.

Edited by --aarthi-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So Geet os basically a tamil girl. Seems more interesting. Geet's father also in a related field of Geet construction. And Geeta is smart and bold too. Waiting for Maan entry. Basically backdrop is Mumbai or Delhi or Chennai?

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