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patikaddi1976

@patikaddi1976

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Posted: 7 years ago

#751

haal e dil ladkiyonki rula Diya. geet struggling with her emotions. what is it at the last? Ayush and geet

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#752

emotional update... geet is feeling very lonely and unwanted... she needs some solace and that she is thinking she will get it from ayush... she wants to go back to her parents. but will they accept her decision... what ayush do now, will he take geet with him...

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#753

loved th updt vry much bt didn't understand many things...geet is feeling low for herself...at first not achieving her dream n now her husband's past life...but actually who is jasleen n what kind of relationship actually maan shared with her...i think it's not som normal lov story type...bt y geet was typing such words to ayush...she never loved ayush or she was...hope she will b ok in th morning...will maan remember th last night...me still confused tht iss love story suru hui k nehi i mean ok thy r husband wife n care for each other...but kuch kuch ho rahe ya nehi i didn't understand

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parini

@parini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#754

Nice story

Read it in a go

Make me emotional

Pls update it fast

Egerly waiting

Pls pm me its update

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#755

Geets POV was well described

Her failures have made her pity her

She thinks she would have lived her husband one day

But now when she knew he had a women

She thinks her married life is also a failure

A sec of suicide thought when ur mind is disturbed

U did justice

How she thought of her family than ending herself

Chats with ayush

Has she decided to leave maan n go to HP

Nice part

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Commelina

@Commelina

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Posted: 7 years ago

#756

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 7 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: Commelina
RES

Waiting eagerly

😃

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 7 years ago

#758

Oh...you updated part 49 and i missed...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 7 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: Commelina

thank you, really, for the support. 🤗

It is for readers like you that I write. ❤️

Thnx

🤗

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 7 years ago

#760

Part 49 - Very beautifully written about geet turmoil. She was full of hope that one day she will get what she deserved. She knows she was failure in her study or in others but she expected little success in her life. She dreamt about her married life which also gone disappointed when she came to know about her husband's love for another woman. She was hopeful that one day both will come to terms to like each other and eventually love. But all her hopes were doomed.

I liked how you wrote her state of mind from her anger on her fate to understand his mind to heartbroken to losing hope to fighting her inner thoughts to suicide and to finally living maan and go to her mother's place.

In all this she found aysuh as a ray of hope. She talked and sort of said good bye to him. He sensed something bad happened bet them. He too was sad that all ended bet them. Why he never tried to reach her and confess his feelings.

She having a dream of hope again but why she is seeing ayush.?

Seems maan is going to find her in such state. hope he would be in sane sense and forbid her from her going away from him.