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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Nice prologue dear but it's little bit confused Geet is negative in it want to read it waiting for your update dear

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Congrats for new story just loved it Geet betrayed maan and now she is with dev

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Sanjida Tamanna

@tamanna121

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Congrats dear for a new story
Wow its a very different concept..
Its seems very interesting to read further..
Maan is coming back..
But geet is in her brother-in-laws's bed..why??
Very curious to know all the mystery..
Loved the starting of a new story..
Thank u so much for pm

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turbulence

@turbulence

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Interesting prologue. So maaneet were married and have a son. But was maan killed by dev and geet?

How come maaneet have a son then? Dev convinced geet to be with him or it was a forced marriage?

And now dev is enjoying with geet on weekend. She is having hangover. How much she drinks! And suddenly the phone call!

It seems like maan, though. No doubt, maan is truly back. Perhaps he hadn't died. Seems the betrayal and revenge game will start now. But who looks after maaneet's son? Doesn't geet care about her own baby?

Dev is on the verge of a nervous breakdown! Well, i hope he has it soon. Wanna see him dead already.

All in all, fabulous start. Another bombshell after piya bawari. Looking forward to this one. Please post updates soon.

Want to read more of your fantastic writings. Hope to see them up soon.

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

khi geet ne maan ko cheat toh nhi kiya na 😲

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Congrats on new story so geet is maans widow who is cheating on maan with dev she is a mother who refuse to acknowledge her son who is gonna be heir of khurana seems she and dev killed maan but his call came and geet is hell scared she is sleeping with her bil and is sure the guy is maan who is coming for her