(MG-SS)MLS SEASON 5(OBSCURE LOVE)THREAD 4 (PARTS 24--31)

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Wow great story please update soon

I'm really looking forward to the next part of your story and great charpter and tesaer and i hope everything is going to be ok soon

I wonder who is after geet and her sister.

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

ohh who is behind dis galsss.

Nd der she gonna take leeena ka help...

It is good na if maan would hav revealed it to het...

Atleast she would hav not taken any drastic steps

Lovly part..cont soon dr

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#253

geet has voiced her feelings but maan still not giving name to them...

wonder from whom maan is protecting geet and gia...is it their brother cz before leap i remember while geet was going back maan saw someone...

waiting for next part...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

thanks 4 da pm n fab update! well written! This Leena😡Geet takes her advise! Maan has yet to reveal his feelings! update soon

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#255

Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
Waiting

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Fantastic update. I like how Geet can read Maan and tell that something is bothring him. I also liked that she tried to confront him bout it even though she didn't get too far in her quest. Also liked that Geet doesn't trust Leena and so she doesn't jump at the opportunity to escape. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#257

wow lovely superb update..te way leena trying to trap girls but geeteknow abt tis leechs who wants my maan he he he.. te way my maan was discussing abt some thing related to his geet and lost in his though and his geet know him in and out and wants to talk with him but he is very adamant and twisting her with his own words was lovely..my maaneet scenes was lovely..te way he smiling at her and holding her and kissing her forehead..i love te update so much yar

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#258

wow lovely teaser,geet dont take any steps without informing my maan

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#259

What just why geet!!! Always find something or anything danger :|

Now from whom maan is protecting them!! Why she'll be !?.:/.

Something related past or new stalker :|

Why could maan told her the truth

Now she gonna escape following leena peenas direction -_-

Till now geet only once took any brave decision by refusing Leena but that won't last long. -_-

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#260

Gia telling Leena that Geet knows MK and the entire gang as they all helped her out before while Geet calls Maan by his name making Leena suspicious as to whom he is MK or Maan

I feel there will be some kind of trouble that Leena will get MK into

she wants Geet away so she can give MK all her attention and he'll also pay attention to her

Geet feels that Maan is been stubborn by not confessing and he still says he is just attracted to her

now who is after Geet

Teaser is interesting