A Fight for my daughter....Part 13 coming up.22dec/2019 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Riajia21

Hi buddy thank u for the new story and new concept. Maan is 40 years old.. He is coming to his office in his usual style... Every staffs are wishing him.. But he doesn't care ... Vikranth is selecting the PA.. Maansi is coming for the interview who is the victim of acid attack... She doesn't lose her hope and confidence...She still face the world bravely . She got selected in the interview...

By reading the story & teaser, I think Maansi is the daughter of Maan... Maan and Geet got separated... Waiting for further updates...


Hi...thankyou...well..you have quite good assumption of how the story goes...😉...let see how it unfolds...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: snehapriya

Daughter is gonna unite their ego headed parents I guess.


Thanks for commenting...let see..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow lovely update..te way my maan ki entry was lovely..he is 40's and his brother helping him in business..now mansi who is she, but she is acid victim and wants to help her mother..i love te update yar


Hey...thanks for commenting...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story.
Awesome update. You are right as there is none of the story on this subject on GF.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabslocks

Congrats for new story.

Awesome update. You are right as there is none of the story on this subject on GF.


thanks for commenting..yes there is no story on this line..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved the story. The title of the story made me want to read it. I'm usually scared to read new stories, for the fear of it not being complete. But like I said the concept & your title pulled me towards it. I couldn't stop myself. Hope to read the next chapter soon!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bina_a

I loved the story. The title of the story made me want to read it. I'm usually scared to read new stories, for the fear of it not being complete. But like I said the concept & your title pulled me towards it. I couldn't stop myself. Hope to read the next chapter soon!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!


Thank you so much for commenting...will update the story every 2 days...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Typing...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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will b waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Note...Maan and Geet will meet in next part probably. i am making base for the story...

After the interview, Maansi left KC and was waiting for the person to pick him up. She was blabbering profound curses on him for being late again...

Maansi " Lagtha hain aaj bhi late hone waala hain...aaj iska khair nahi...". She was still cursing him, when a guy around 18yrs tapped her shoulder. She turned back and gave a glare to him. " Sorry baby...please...aage se late nahi hoga...please...chalo tumhare liye diary milk" saying he took out the chocolate infront of her eyes. Seeing her favorite diary milk her heart melted and took it...

Guy " Thank god...abhi keliye meri behan ka wrath se bach gaya...dhekhana hain jaane ke ke baad kya drama karegi..."

Mansi " waise Rahul bhai ghar nahi jana hain kya...ya phir yahi line marne ka irada hain...." saying she nudged him towards the parked bike not bothering the people around...

Half way through the journey, Mansi asked him "bhai...aapko kuch puchna hain...kahi bhool tho nahi gaye..."

Rahul " nahi...tho...." saying he concentrated on road ...In his mind " I know tumhe job milgaya...main tum se nahi pucha... you are angry" he chuckled.

Mansi thinking " aap mere job ke bare me nahi poocha...I am angry...ghar jane ke baad aapka khair nahi" she smirked.

Upon reaching, Maansi stormed into to the house shouting for her mother Geet.. "Mumma...mumma...where are you...mujhe aapse complain karna hain.." who was cooking for her favorite persons in her life...

Wiping her hands Geet came came out of the kitchen only to see her daughter sitting in grumpy mood... " kya hua..Maansi..."Geet asked softly

Maansi turned her face sideways saying " main nahi bataungi...aap hi jaanlo"

Geet " tum bataogi tho mujhe pata chalega na...chothi bacho ki tarah behave mat karo...mujhe bhi bohot kaam hain...please.."saying she pampered her..

Rahul came inside says, " mumma pampering kuch jyada nahi hua kya?'

Maansi who was still angry on her brother gave deadly glares to him...having left no option he decided to reveal the secret of theirs, " Mumma, Maansi ko job milgaya..." Mansi was surprised how could her twin brother tell that she got a job and it was no surprise to her because he always read her eyes and she is always proud of him for being so caring towards her and their mother.

Hearing him Geet looked towards Maansi only to get a wide smile from her heart after 3years...she said.. " phir bhi Mansi..main chahthi hu ki tum pado..."

Mansi said " Nahi mumma...main chahthi hu ki main padoongi aage woh bhi khud ki kamayi se..."

Geet " Mujhe pata hain tum kyun kar rahi ho aisa...and you did not say me you were going for interview. Maine sach main socha tum log picture dhekhne gaye"

Mansi " please mumma...I want to do this"

Geet mumbled " Stubborness runs in family" enough for them to hear..

Both Rahul and Mansi Shouted " What"

Nodding negatviely, Geet changed her topic and said... " Waise Mansi...why were you angry.?"

Maansi remembered why she was angry and gave a serious look to Rahul...

Rahul knows this is not going to end and said " Sorry baby..please...aage se late nahi aaonga..." Geet gave an angry look to him... " Hey bhagwan...help me"

Rahul " mujhe pata chalgaya tumhe Khurana Constructions main job milgaya...jab tumhare aankon main dhekha tho...isiliye nahi poocha...please " he said buttering her.. Mansi melted and said... " its ok...". While Geet has a plethora of emotions hearing Khurana Constructions may be after many years. Mansi joined KC. This is not going to be easy...she thought. She did not want Mansi to go there but at the same she does not want to disappoint her seeing her happy after a long time. She felt, the past is resurfacing. They went to have their lunch...

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Some where in outskirts of Delhi, young man around age 25 was drinking heavily with couple of his friends Raj and Vishal...and enjoying the suffering of young girl. He is Karan Oberoi, who enjoys raping young girls and if they resist, he pours acid on them destroying their beauty. There will be no proof for his actions, if some one complains his friends make sure that he will be proved innocent. Just then, another person entered shouting Karan sir...

Karan " Why are you shouting, don't you know you are not allowed unless you are invited" said throwing his glass of whiskey and strangling his neck..

The person said " I know sir I am your informer, but I am here to give you a news which you were waiting for 3 years"

Alerted Karan asked him, " What is it?"

Informer " Geet Singh is in Delhi, with her son and daughter. Her daughter is still looking hot even with a scarred face." he said smirking.

Hearing him, Karan said " Good job, Paul, your money will be credited today, keep informing about their routine." Nodding informer left.

Karan gave a dangerous laugh along with his friends and shouted " Get back to action guys..they are not going to be spared this time."

Back in Khurana Constructions,

Vikranth went to Maan's cabin knocking his door.

Vikranth " Bhai, are you free?"

Maan who was engrossed in Oberoi's construction file, kept aside asked him to sit..

Maan " Yes Vikranth, are the interviews done?"

Vikranth " Yes bhai, I wanted to talk about that"

Maan "ok go head"

VIkranth " We have selected a girl and tomorrow she is joining. Her name is Mansi Singh"

Maan " ok... no problem. Make sure you ask my secretary Rhea to give her job duties and about the projects files that are going on and the ones that are archived"

Vikranth "alright bhai, and another thing is she a 18yr old who is a victim of acid attack."

Maan said " You know Vikranth, our comapany values work and ethics not how the person looks, that is least important for us. I am proud that you did not reject her"

Vikranth was happy and left saying he will meet later.

At 6 PM both left for KM. They were welcomed hearing loud noises of a young girl 15yrs Pari " mujhe jana han, mujhe jana hain..." arguing with Meera, Vikranth's wife and dadi Savitri supporting her grand daughter.

"Kaha jaana hain meri pyari Pari ko" Maan said. Hearing his voice, Pari with a wide smile " Bade papa..." and hugged him.

Vikranth made a pout " mujhe nahi milega kya"

Pari " aapko bhi milega lekin pehle bade papa ko" saying she hugged him and gave kiss on his cheeks.

" Veerji, iske baato main mat aayeyi...pehle aap dono fresh hojayi, baad mein baat karenge.." Meera said taking taking their bags from them.

Nodding they left to freshen up. Pari made a crying face but Meera glared her and said we will discuss this later.

Maan went to his room, lying on the bed he said " Geet"...He closed his eyes thinking of past and woke up hearing the door being knocked.

" Veerji dinner is ready" Meera said...

" Coming Meera" he said and went to freshen up.

Precap... Father- daughter meet...Will Maan recognise her?

Daughter teaching Father how to use Microsoft Excel...😆...kya sach mein Maan ko excel use karna nahi aata...😲..😆😆 ...

Stay tuned...



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