A Fight for my daughter....Part 13 coming up.22dec/2019

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#181

maan is smiling

n dadi asks the reason behind his smile

maan cries saying how he met geet

n how he came to know about his children

then about maansi n her cute antics..

which brought smile in his face

maansi says about maans behvior to geet

n how all were shocked seeing him smile

geet feels the pinch in her heart

morning again maan came to see maansis anics

she gave a gud expanation n offerred him chocolate again

making him smile

dadi meets with her

n she too loves her

ufff...this villain

hope maan comes to her rescue

nice part

Edited by vrinda22 - 8 years ago

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

awesome update

geet is the reason for all this in maan's life

and now mansi is the reason of smile for maan

hate karan

lets see what will happen

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#183

wow lovely update..te way mansi ki entry made my maan feel peace and happy and dadi was happy to see her grandson smile was lovely..te way mansi ki explanation regarding laughing omg maan how u manufactured tis piece im seeing jr version of geet in mansi..omg karan better be away from my maan ki mansi then u will meet u r hell..i love te update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

lovely update! superbly written! Mansi makes Maan smile! update soon

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

It was nice part. Maan was smiling remembering mansi. Dadi was also amazed seeing Maan. He narrated how he met with geet n how mansi brought smile on his face. Geet was feeling guilty when mansi told them how maan laughed after long time. Dadi came to meet mansi. Omg that karan is also in the kc. Mansi got scared seeing him. Waiting for next dear.