OS:The unexpected! (Completed on pg 4)

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Haan lekin baki logoko pakka hogi😉
Mere stories k updates jo ruk jayenge😆

One part will not hurt any of your readers rather they would be happy to get an extra "complete " story from you😉

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
you are such a tease...and I'm with @-Maaneet-

Thank you dear 😳

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Haan haan team banalo mere piche

But hum akele kafi hai😎

So NO NEXT PART for this😛

Not done😔, we are requesting you so politely 😳

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: _Maaneet_

One part will not hurt any of your readers rather they would be happy to get an extra "complete " story from you😉

Acha thek hai one hour baad will post the next part

But mere hisab se I'll be left asking for one more part after that!

Trust me ye hua hai mere saat and ye usska repeat telecast lag raha hai🤣

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Keepdreaming

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

isn't it good we want to read more...from you

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
isn't it good we want to read more...from you

Nahi ji

Jab sar k upar 10 story ka pressure ho amd update ka door door kak koi umeed na ho...

Tho ask the readers how they feel🤣

Anyway typing the next part

A little more wait please😊

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Acha thek hai one hour baad will post the next part
But mere hisab se I'll be left asking for one more part after that!

Trust me ye hua hai mere saat and ye usska repeat telecast lag raha hai🤣

Love you, you are the best🤗
That depends on what you write, write something which makes it look complete 😉

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Keepdreaming

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Nahi ji
Jab sar k upar 10 story ka pressure ho amd update ka door door kak koi umeed na ho...
Tho ask the readers how they feel🤣

Anyway typing the next part
A little more wait please😊

good to hear I'm not only the lazy one 😆 aap toh pending ranking main bohot upar ho

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Nahi ji
Jab sar k upar 10 story ka pressure ho amd update ka door door kak koi umeed na ho...
Tho ask the readers how they feel🤣

Anyway typing the next part
A little more wait please😊

I feel to tie the writer in front of computer and force her to type the update🤣
Anyways waiting already😃

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Last part!

What a boring day... I don't understand why is auntie taking so much strain for... today there's no festival or isn't Geets birthday he didn't see any sudden occasion to party too... then why is auntie cleaning the house and cooking such a huge meal!!

If Geet comes to know any of this he was sure she would throw a big fit for spending so much... and if given chance she would send the guests serving tea and biscuits!

He was here from afternoon assisting auntie in her work and Geet was nowhere to be seen... his family went to their relatives home for lunch and weren't expected before dinner time..

Maan beta did you notice after leaving that Gadha our Geet has changed a bit?

Changed? Ya she stopped using mobile data coz of the price hike... hmm she eats from my dabba in the lunch time? So ya bit more kanjoos... so changed..

Haan auntie... she changed a lot even I've noticed

You have! Auntie's gave that typical mom wala expression which says i knew it

Maan do you by any chance know the reason? I'm worried beta... she doesn't want to meet any more boys and when i say alliance she explodes like a volcano if you want you can ask our neighbor padma.. I'm sure she heard all the previous night's argument... she said handing him the clean cutlery to place it on the table

Umm.. auntie I'm not sure what the matter is but I'll talk to her...

What will you talk to me about Maan?

They both turned to the door hearing her voice where she stood in her plain white dress looking beautiful as ever

Wo Geet ... Hi how are you? He said giving her an awkward smile..

Hi Maan I'm sure I'm fine and nothing would have happened to me in just few hours... you tell me what are you doing in my house still?

Geet beta is this the way you behave With our guests... don't be rude.. I asked him to stay back and help me

Maa I'm not rude and Maan is my friend not guest so chill

GEET!!

Ok ok.. I don't want to argue now... Maan if you are done here let's go out for a while...

Oh ya.. that would be great... bye auntie see you later... he rushed out of their house before she catches him for some other work

They walked out of their colony in silence... lost in thoughts

Maan i think i have a perfect solution for this problem

What problem and what solution? What are you talking about Geet?

See you still have the loan you have taken for your sisters wedding on your head right.. and now that you have paid most of it the balance amount is fairly less...

Hmm so... you aren't making any sense you know...

Just listen to me ok... see now all you have to do is find a girl with a decent background and one who could offer a bit of financial aid...

Geet do you mean...

Yes maan dowry.. it would solve your problems and it's not something new... anyhow it's about time you get married

GEET! What the hell!!

See Maan there is nothing to get stressed out ok... all you have to do is get married and both our problems will be solved

Wait.. wait... both our problems?

I'm not getting it how...

See my mother thinks i left that Gadha coz of you but you and i know what the obvious reasons are right...

so it's fixed tonight I'll talk to uncle, aunty when they come for dinner at my home and explain the situation to them...

You don't worry Maan I'll personally find a girl for you and will rest only when i see you settled with a family!

The bright smile which she gave him gave him chills down his spine... wonder how his mom would react on such a strange proposition!!