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December04

@December04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

That was one emotional update

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December04

@December04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

That was one emotional update

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Dadima is no more

That was unexpected

I literally cried while reading it

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

There is no pain infront whn u not c ur love one infront of ur eyes tht pain that emptiness n most memories died u to..
Very emotional I litteely cried while reading
Hope maan get fine soon
N really like Geet understand him n go to help him take him out of his pain which knw be with him alwz
Bt tht the life we hve to lived
Thnks for pm
Waiting for nxt

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Emotional update..

U make us cry for dadima..

Waiting for next update..

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

very emotional n great update

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

I'm actually missing your regular updates but what to do some times work sucks your whole time i wanna mention one thing important that i love to see your mention of my id before any of your update it feels like privilege 😃
Now come to update it's an awesome but way too emotional update
I cried while reading it 😭
Maan dreamt about his past which shows how much he loved his dadimaa even I love her too but as u decide the story should be in that way only but it make me sad about her death
Maan was attached to her like a son to his mother
It gives him pain but now look who he have besides him, his vulnerability Partner Geet
The way geet answer him , really shakes him
After all who else can better understand his situation then her
Update soon
Waiting
😃
P.S. the kabir being doll 😆 interesting I think geet should tease him on this

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Loved it. So beautiful and sentimental update...did not Oberon the emotional part and kept very subtle especially the flashback of Maan's past Dadima and his dadaji's memories, so cute, his dadajis death and Maans faltering at the tender age of sixteen. So insightful that a teen cannot handle emotions very well and would delve into darkness, Dadi's harsh but gentle heart to bring him out of it, and then in the present Maan and Dadima's convo to let her go...come to terms with the reality that she has to go beyond in her journey and he has to take control of himself...she lethal vent out his sorrow before she left him knowing very well he will need her strength to persevere his sanity and hurt...(although we know that Geet can do that for him too but they are ignorant) and finally Geet did say something so emotional that it did bring him out of his sorrow...

Thnx

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Awesome.. a very emotional n tragic update...

Thanks for update

Thanks for pm..

Continue soon...

I was so involved , I didn't realise when tears were flowing out of my eyes...

U reminded me of my childhood memories... My time with my grandparents... Oh god I miss them a lot ...

U portrayed all emotions so well...

I don't think this was needed but anyways ... It's your story u know better...

After reading that prologue part I thought dadimaa will play cupid n bring them together forever.. but I guess u have plans of your own ...

Past memories of maan showed how much dadimaa meant to him .. he was not a perfect son but he learnt from his mistakes n that my dear is a great deal...

Maan n dadimaa moments were best . . He had a feeling that it's time n he wasn't ready to accept it...

Dadimaa also new it was inevitable... She knew maan . ... She asked him to let go with a smile. ... This part particularly reminded me of my dadu . ... His last days he said I wanna go n I'm going ... Let me go ... N I said no u r not going anywhere ... N next day he was gone in the arms of me n my brother...

Dadimaa is gone n maan has not reacted yet he is confined to his memories with her ... He is not able to cope with the loss ...

Or maybe he isn't ready yet...

Geet is in mansion to help him to deal with it n get over it. .

Maan told her she wouldn't understand or know what it is to loose your loved ones .. n geet's reply was bang on ... Good one geet ...

Edited by maaneetsangel - 8 years ago