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soch_ti

@soch_ti

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Love could be this soft... I Didn't Knew...

Lovely peice. Gussy wussy... Expression of love... Him.. Her... Them...

Thank you.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

hi Congrats on the new OS! thanks 4 da fab stupendous OS! superbly written! His feelings and love beautifully expressed! he loved someone n let them go! he gt married n promised 2 be the best husband! Love happened along the way! She is his everything! he is truly blessed to have a wonderful family! 😊👏⭐️

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

So Maan's dumb. Was in love with someone else and even married to her but knowing she was forced into the marriage, he waited for her to feel the same for him while she was falling for another. And I can say that he truly did love her as he also let her go when she was in love with someone else and even got her married. That must have been way painful and heartbreaking. Can't even imagine what he must have went through while his love marry someone else. But he wished her happiness despite having his heart broken. What a man. <33 <33

His diary entries were sweet. First I thought it was just a habit of keeping diary but later when he marries again and Geet writes an entry that she knows her husband can't express his feelings through words, it clicked me that Maan cannot speak. I was wondering why he didn't confess his love to his first wife if he was so in love with her. I understood that later.

Glad Maan found love again and was also healed from all the hurt and heartbreak. And he was blessed with two bundle of joys whom he loved just as much.

Who says one can't fall in love twice and not feel the same way again for another person?

I loved the style of this OS. Very different and unique.

-Sanjana!

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Fabulous writing. Such a beautiful choice of telling a long story by a diary writings. Was thrilled to know whether it was Maan or Geet writing it. The cute romance and trust of maaneet was evident in just few words. My words cant explain your marvellous writing. Splendid job'''

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

I noticed that all the entries he has written down are expressed to his first love and not addressed to the diary itself. Makes me wonder if a part of his still pines for her? He says he is madly in love with his wife now but yet remembers his first wife every time he writes something in his journal. So I'm just wondering.

It also kind of reminded me of your other OS "because I loved you so" that we were discussing few days ago and you said you'd planned another end where Maan marries again but still pines for Geet. So it is making me wonder if that's what you did here? 😆

Edited by BrainEaterOwl - 8 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

wow lovely beautiful os ji..te way my maan writing his dairy and sharing his life from his first love to his last,how geet came into his life and build a beautiful castle was lovely beautiful..now my maan ki complete life with his wife and two angels was lovely blissed..i love te os so much

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

so beautifully written.

first I thought geet is the one writing but it was maan..

geet loves to read his dairy reasing how much maan love her..

loved it

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

a brilliant piece of writing again,

i love the verse form, it is difficult i must say

but it was seamless while reading,

it was quite emotional

u stole my heart with this one,

hope to get more of this type.

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Just love this OS ❤️
Maan married n loved someone else,, it's good you didn't show any other character in this shot.. 😉
She left him for her love,, Love the idea of diary entries 😃
Then he got his New wife,, His family,, His love which he deserved 😳
Aww love their small bickering about geet getting pregnant lol,, He made her preggers so early haha 😆 😳
I so much love this OS