Hi again everyone!! I am Adwika... Some of you may know me or maybe not because I was inactive on forum from last 1 and half year but not my mistake... Yaar padai hai hi aisi cheez joh aache khase person ki enjoyment ki life pe break mar deti hai. Well maine phir se ek one shot likha hai and like last time am dedicating it to everyone of you for being awesome writer and amazing regular reader ( unlike me )...
Maine yeh wali story phir se Gurmeet ki movie Khamoshiyan ke song ke upar likha hai for 2 reason
1. Sachi kahoon toh mujhe who script bilkul acchi nahi lagi thi iss liye maine apne style main likha. Hopefully justice kiya hai
2. Kyunki main apni batch me 1st aayi hoon and wanted to celebrate this news with you...Yaar aap log bhi toh meri extended family hi ho.
Okay ab main aap log apne faltu bakwaas se free karti hoon and request karti hoon ki aap log meri grammar aur spelling mistake ko ignore kare and meri nacheez ko padhe aur agar acchi lagi toh likes and comments de...Pretty please with whipped cream and cherry on top... ab itni pyaari please ko mana mat karna. Please
Arey arey...wait one more thing if you want to read my previous work which was an One ShotBaatein Yeh Kabhi Naa Tu Bhoolna
then the link is attached... Okay now you can finally read it.
Walking alone in an unknown city Maan was looking for a place to stay. Wanting to spend some time alone from city life and just with himself. He started his journey to an unknown destination but now after 10 hours of his unknown unplanned journey Maan was tired with no mobile to get connected to the city, as he forgot his mobile at some restaurant and when he remembered and went there again it was gone, and his last means of convenience, his car ditched him by stopped working in middle of road which he don't know where it lead, he left his car there and started walking and finally he saw a house at distance, he left a sigh of relief and started to walk towards it. He looked around the place but there was no sign of living even though he couldn't deny the fact that the place was looked after properly. He knocked on the door and waited for someone to answer it but even when it was not answered he knocked harder and this time the gate was opened slightly when he stepped inside he didn't saw anyone thought maybe with his forced the gate got opened, he moved inside and looked around the place and saw portrait of woman, maybe in her early twenties looking beautiful
That's my sister, he heard a voice from behind, he turned and saw a woman in her one piece night dress, standing in her glory, Can I help you with something?, she asked checking him out totally
Actually I am looking for a place to stay, He answered unsure not being able to trust the girl, but its fine I will search for some other place, he turned to move
Wait, he stopped in his place and faced her, you can stay here I live here by myself, she told seductively
Wont your sister have any problem?, he asked in confusion
She is dead, She answered monotonously, but he could feel something in her voice but couldn't point at it, he shrugged it off thinking his imagination
Are you sure, you don't mind?, he asked for which he got positive reply
And anyways I was thinking to convert this into a motel ,it's lonely living by myself and it will help me with expenses too, by the way, I am Tanishka but you can call me Tania, she said forwarding her hand
Maan, Maan Singh Khurana. How much will you charge for a room? he asked shaking hands with her
Don't worry, not much or maybe nothing, she said in breathy tone in Maan's ear which left Maan both confused and uncomfortable. Come I will show you your room, saying this she moved towards stairs with Maan following her but as he started to move when he felt someone else presence near him which confused him as he saw no one other than Tanishka he shook his head and started to follow her
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I will see you in the morning, Tanishka said after showing him a room and helping him to settle
Sure and thank you for letting me stay here, He said with smile
The pleasure is all mine, she moved forward and kissed him on his cheek before walking out, but the kiss left him stunned and shocked at his place but was brought by to his sense when he felt gush of wind passed by him, he turned and saw that window was opened but he could clearly remember that the window was closed when he entered and he didn't opened it, this thing again left him in confusion.
But he was too tired from the day happening that he just wanted to sleep and that was what he did, he moved towards adjoining bathroom and got prepared to sleep. After changing he moved towards bed and was asleep in few minutes.
Khamoshiyan aawaaz hain
Tum sun'ne to aao kabhi
Chhukar tumhe khill jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..
Suddenly he heard a voice which broke his sleep, he heard melodious voice singing and started to follow it, it was coming from outside of the house, he left the house and moved towards garden and on swing he saw someone sitting, he made his way and saw a girl sitting there, wanting to see the face of the girl he moved forward and stood in front of the swing and what he saw left him in shocked. The lady was none other than the girl who was in portrait, sitting there with her closed eyes. But Tanishka said she was dead, then how was she here , sitting on the swing and singing?, If she is alive than why Tanishka lied? Is Tanishka lying about her death? Or the girl in front of him is lying to everyone saying she dead ?
God so many question which has no answer and all this made him dizzy. He didn't knew how or when he fell down on the ground. But the sudden of someone following voice made the girl jerked herself from her peaceful stance, she looked at Maan and wondered what he was doing here at midnight. Leaving all the thoughts behind she moved him to his room and stayed there with not knowing why, but she felt some pull towards him. She sat on a chair and waited for him to come back to his conscious.
When sometime passed and he still didn't wake up, she left him and started to roam around randomly, like she always do. It was early in the morning when she saw Tanishka leaving the house premises from the terrace but she knew that Tanishka will soon return back here. After all she wants everything as per her. She left from there and was just roaming around the house aimlessly but in all this she didn't notice that Maan was seeing her. Maan was so curious about her but didn't knew how to approach, all this was really messing with his mind, he didn't knew if he is hallucinating her or if she is really in front of him and he was caught off guards when he saw her waving hands towards him, he looked around to see if there was someone else but nope he was alone and when he turned back towards her she just standing few meters away from him when in starting she was at the other end of the room and now here???
Hi! I am Geet, she introduced herself slowly because she doesn't want to scare him more than he already is, which can be easily seen on his face.
Who are you? That were the first three words which came from him after seeing her but before she could answer they were interrupted by another voice
Hey Maan, I see that you an early raiser. Tanishka said as she made her way towards him with seductive steps which made him uncomfortable but he composed himself and pointed towards his left where Geet was standing
Her?... but before he could say something more he was interrupted by Tanishka again
Her name is Geet and she died 4 years back, She told with so much venom in her voice which couldn't go unnoticed but it left him in wonders that how can she say that she is dead when she was standing right beside him but when he turned she was nowhere to be seen. This girl, Geet, was really messing with his head, he shook his head clearing his thought, Leave her. I will prepare breakfast for you but after that I have to leave for town to buy necessities. She informed him and made her way towards kitchen.
Maan saw this as an opportunity to leave from here and went behind her to ask if she could just drive him to town then he would be free from all this weirdness which is happening with him from the time he stepped here
Umm... He coughed to gain her attention Tia, Can you please drop me to the city, actually I don't know the way and if I leave for the city it will be easy for me to get connected to the city. Listening him she stopped chopping and held knife in her hand tightly, he didn't notice it.
Why? You wanted to sometime alone for yourself and you won't get it in the city. Live here for few days and enjoy it and I am here for you, your companion. She was now standing really close to him which was making in uncomfortable, Geet too noticed it but she can't do anything, she doesn't want her to know about her presence and even though she didn't like the way she was close to him but it was only her words which was stopping her to do something because even she wanted him to stay because only he was the light now.
H..how do you know that for what reasons I came here for?... He asked her taking a step back from her creating a distance
There is no other reason one would come to this place. Everyone who comes her just want a life away from city. She took a step towards him but before she could move anymore closer to him they heard a loud bang of window, both turned towards the sound and Maan saw Geet standing there
Geet?, He uttered in shock but his word was more shocking for Tanishka
GEET, GEET ,GEET... MAAN THERE IS NO GEET HERE... SHE IS DEAD, SHE DEAD 4 YEARS AGO. She screamed in frustration and left from there and goes out of house, but what Maan was not able to understand was her frustration for Geet and neither her words. If Geet is dead then why the hell was he able to see her?
He too left from there as he was now alone there but still he was not able to move from the house even when he has a chance but he don't know what is stopping him, he goes to his room and sat on the bed with his head between his hand.
Maan, he heard whispered and he turns towards the voice and saw Geet standing in right front of him. Seeing her he couldn't control his feeling like, frustration, confusion, anger, anxiousness. You know name it and he was feeling it. All type of emotions were playing havoc inside him. He stood and came in front of her standing face to face
Who are you? And why the hell you playing tricks with me?, He asked not able to understand what was happening with him, this house and in his life
I am not playing any trick. She answered softly knowing her emotions won't be understand until he knows everything
Then who are you?, He asked again not knowing what say to her but all he got was silence . He was engulf by silence. A silence which was mocking him, deafening him, making him angry but in reply all he got was silence.
Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan
Getting enough of her silence and moved his hand to hold her from shoulders but she moved a step back, making him more confuse with her behavior.
I am spirit, She said without batting eyes but the reaction was not what she expected. He was laughing, laughing at her, her situation, and this angered her more than anything but not more than that thing. Seeing her eyes splitting fire, he gained controlled over himself and cleared his throat
Spirit? You mean to say you are a ghost?, He asked controlling his laugh but when she gave an affirmative answer he burst out laughing again and started clapping his hand. Nice one. Is this the normal trick you and your sister play on every person who comes here and ask for help?, He asked her in sarcasm tone but he didn't knew what his words was having effect on her
SHE IS NOT MY SISTER, She screamed in anger and without moving an inch from her place, mirror from behind her broke and this shocked not only Maan but Geet too. Maan took a step back from her.
I am going crazy, I am hallucinating. I shouldn't have come to here at first. It's all a trick. Maan just calm down, inhale exhale, inhale exhale. Maan was all the while blubbering to himself not knowing Geet could hear him
You are not hallucinating. I am here- I mean not here but here... God this is so confusing- Maan just listen to me. You are not imaging me nor I am part of your hallucination. As much as I am not here, I am here. She finished not knowing if her words made any sense or not but when she looked at Maan's face she knew he was not understanding her and she knew it was not his fault. If years back someone would have said that she would be able to talk to spirit she would have laughed at their face but now the irony of the situation was that she was the spirit and some guy whom she never met or heard about in her life was able to talk to her and see her. He was the only one who could see her, not her sister or any other person before him could ever see her but he, he was able to feel her too and she wanted to use this for her benefit and she is determined to do it with his help but first she have to make him agree which seems like a difficult task her now.
Maan. Please try to believe, I am not lying. I am a soul, spirit or ghost whatever we used to call it I am that thing right now. I am as much as alive as a dead person could be. I know it will be difficult for you to trust me and I don't know how to make you trust me but just give me a chance to explain because you are the only person who could see and hear and I know I won't be free from this world till I get what I want and in that only you could help. She was explaining herself but when she saw his expressionless face she knew she failed to make him trust. She sighed in defeat and was about to go when he stopped her.
I believe you. Those were only three words but it meant everything to her because he was her light in the darkness. She smiled and stood in front of him with that smile. But before helping you I want to know everything, and I mean everything, from your relationship with Tanishka, your death, you becoming spirit, me being able to see you and in the end but not least why should I help you? What motive you have?, Her smiled was lost till the time he finished but she couldn't deny the fact he was human and it won't be easy for him to believe her, especially when she is a spirit but, But to make him believe her and to have his trust so that he could help her she has to reopen her wound which weren't healed yet and never will.
Kya uss gali mein kabhi tera jaana hua
Jahaan se zamaane ko guzre zamaana hua
Mera samay toh wahin pe hai thehra hua
Bataaun tumhe kya mere sath kya kya hua
My like was perfect like any other, but I didn't knew it came with an expiry date. I was studying in Tennessee when I was informed about of my parents death and I tried to reach to my parents as soon as I could but it was late, too late to even see them. Their funeral was already over before I could leave from there. And no one would answer me about anything. How they died or, or anything, they hide everything from me. She was speaking but she was lost in her past where she was alive, A- and then they told me about th- this house, they told me that this house belong to me, my parents wanted to give me this but I didn't knew they told me about this to make their plan successful.
When I came here somewhere in my heart I started to get attached to this place, this place calmed and soothed my crying soul and made me feel close to my parents but then that day-, She was so lost, it was like she was living that moment again, her eyes were black and was staring at distance, that was until Maan touched her hand and brought her back to her sense. Oddly it should have felt awkward for any of them instead they found solace from that touch.
What happened that day Geet?, He asked even though somewhere he knew that it was not something joyous in fact it must be just opposite of it, it was like a dreading fact for him but a horrendous reality of her which she lived. And to understand her, help her he need to know it from scratch. Even though now he knows something big happened with her but he want to know it so he could punish the culprit.
That day I wasn't feeling well, in fact from last few days I vomiting at every other oddly hours. But that day she forcefully took in the backyard and he was there with dagger in his hand an- and they ju- just kill- killed me I couldn't even save myself. A lone tear escaped from her eyes.
Who were they Geet? And how did they killed you? Why couldn't you save yourself Geet?, He was shaking from anger he was terrified to even know what had happened with her but he wanted to know. He wanted to know everything.