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part 203 & 204...

awesummm updatesss👏👏

oh teri ..babaji ye geet ka kya ho gya h ..🤣
ek movie ne geet ka kya halat kr di h 😆😆😆
aajkl uska dimaag kahan kahan ghumta rhta h ☺️
loved the part where sundari prepare all the healthy dishes for all the family nd everyone relished them fully ..
while they also teased nakul too😆
nice trick to feed fruits nd veges to geet bd her kutty😉
maan told vicky to join colg bt vixky is not ready to join the colg in this age ..
geet to understnd his problm bt she also knows maan ..
she told dadi nd dadi too agreed with vicky nd asked to geet to make maan understnd ..
nd geet too make maan realize it ..
maan felt he fail again to understand his brother bt geet dont let him becoz she knows he the best brother anyone hv😳
loved the teaseing where geet teased him saying she will make him her brother if not fallen foe him😆😆
nd maan then get naughty nd do kuchi koo😉😉
nd the way geet hving thoughts now a days she get more aroused bt control herself rushed from him ..bt calmed herself..
jbse geet ne movie dekhi h uska mind corrupt ho chuka h 😆
always get naughty thoughts nd her dream ..i lterally shocked reading that part ..call phone nd its pouch ..🤣seriously yar nalini geet se kya kya krwa rhi ho ☺️😆
she totally lost in her lala land of maan hotty looks nd avoiding him ..
she feels so desparate to b with maan bt knows her limits bt the restlessness keep her awake all night ..
she so lost in herself ..annie to felt surprise to see her so silent ..
ab aisi thoughts k sath vo maan k samne kaise rhe ..
upar she uske samne maan doing his excercise nd showing his 8 pck abs to behari geet ka kya hoga..😆😆
maan felt worried to her lost nd not the bubbly geet ..ab geet kaise bataya aur kya bataye ki use kya ho gya h 🤣
she just said she is hving hedache nd maan took her in her ars nd led to her room ..
while all get worried to know that she is not well ..
poor maan here he want to b with mishty nd everyone just push him aside saying they will take of her nd he should go to office..
maan announced his decision to everyone about vicky joing office nd doing his ug by correspndence ..
vicky is suprised nd happy to know nd hugged geet while maan thinking he will get it😆
office part was awesum ..
maaneet nd their office romance 😳😳
...
ab kya kahaun uske bare ..☺️


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nxt parts abhi read krne baki h .wil read them nd then i will comment ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting for part 207
can you updated it today
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR U R LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL..MUAH


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FRIENDS PLS READ TE TRANSLATION OF TE SONG WHICH SUIT FOR GEET'S MIND SET..
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( THANKU PRIYA DII,LOVE U SO MUCH

FOR TIS BEAUTIFUL BANNER)


- 207



Geet rush to her room she closed te door and stand holding her thumbing heart, her face was flushed and her whole body is warm feeling his scent all over her, she hugged herself..she felt some twist inside her stomach, she want to dance, twirl, shout, she became crazy

She want to hear a melody song which will be prefect for tis night as she did't get sleep..she on te set and a lovely romantic melody was running, she was surprise as te song was her mind set right now, te song was like te heroine will sing and roam around thinking abt hero, te song is abt te girl's desires, her yearning everything she will pour in tat song

Geet will never hear like tis song, she will hear melody but not tis kind of songs but today she want to hear tis song which voicing her yearning desires for Maan

Hearing te lines she felt yes she is also living in same dilemma being near him she cant even feel him nor touch him..She was like a Water Drop on a Dry Leaf.. she fall thud on her bed, she took her pillow and hugged it on her chest thinking how she became very silent in front of him, te girl who is non stop bak bak, who won't even close her mouth for a sec now speechless in front of her love, Her desire not letting her to voice her feelings to him

Maalaiyil Yaaro Manathoda Pesa


( Who was there at evening to talk with my heart )



Marghazhi Vadai Medhuvaga Veesa



( The december wind flew very gently )


Dhegam Poothathae OH.. Moogam Vanthatho..


( Did my body blossom or the desire came )



Moogam Vanthathum OH.. Mounam Vanthatho


( As the desire came, the silence came ? )

The room was dark as she did't switch on te light,te only source of light is from te Moon which is glowing..she saw te balcony was open and te wind was flewing inside givng a cool effect to te room, she got up and went to te balcony, she hold te door and feel te air, she giggled

Nenjamae Paatezhuthu Athil Nayagan Paerezhuthu...



( Oh my heart..write poems...Write my hero's name in it )


She saw te garden down and thought to have a walk in tis night, she went down and saw whole KM is very silent,she can even hear her own heart beat, she look here and there to check any one is there after confirming she left to garden

Maalaiyil Yaaro Manathoda Pesa


( Who was there at evening to talk with my heart )



Marghazhi Vadai Medhuvaga Veesa




( The december wind flew very gently )

She removed her and placed her bare foot on te grass, te chillness of te grass passed thru her body and gave her goosebump ,she slowly started to walk, she love tis silent and enjoying te cool wind



Varuvaan Kathal Devan Endru Kaatrum Koora


( The air said my love hero will come )



Varattum Vasal Theedi Indru Kaaval Meera


( Let him come searching me and enter my doorstep without acceptance )

She walking in between te flowers,she inhale te scent


Geet : in front of my Maan's scent u r nothing, she saw te flowers face fell hearing her words, she giggled


She saw a butterfly sitting on a flower and sucking te nectar, she imagined how Maan will suck her lips, her fingers trace her lips without her knowledge and she shied thinking abt him, she try to catch te butterfly but it flew away, she pout , again she try but it flew so high, in tat she hear her bangles making chim chim sounds,

She was shaking her bangles love to hear te sound from it, she felt te bangles singing her inner desire, she know she became crazy but she love to be like tis, she know now no one sees her, so wat is wrong to behave like tis, te bangles was Priya maa's bangles which hinting her tat she belongs to Khuranas, soon going to wed her Maan, her MAAN KI DULHAN, tat thought send a shiver inside her

Valayal Oosai Raagamaga Isaithen Vazhthu Paadalai


( I made the sweet chim chim sound of my bangles as beats as praising song for u )


Oru Naal Vanna Maalai Sooda Valarthen Aasai Kaadhalai


( So one day will come i will put colourful garland around u )



Her hair was flowing in air and hitting her face,she try to push it but before she push, she felt a hand moved her hair away from her face, she was startled to see Maan who was standing and smirking at her, she felt embrassed and wants te earth to eat her alive, she thought did he notice her crazyiness wat all she doing , wen he came, she thought he slept, Geet gasped wen he caress her lips which was trembling


Geet :Maan ,

She raised her hand to touch his cheeks but stop and turned as she was shy to face him,Maan hold her shoulder and hugged her from behind keeping her chin on her shoulder biting her ear lobe

Maan : today my MISTY looking red red can't control myself, rubbing his cell phone on her shuddering her

Geet gasp : Maan and turn to look at him, but there was no one, then it clicked her she was dreaming ,she closed her eyes and fall on te ground

She smell herself and felt Maan's scent on her,with her finger she wrote Maan's name on her chest and closed her face



Nenjamae Paatezhuthu Athil Nayagan Paerezhuthu...



( Oh my heart..write poems...Write my hero's name in it )



Morning



Te sun rays fall on Geet's face breaking her sleep,she open her eyes and saw she was sleeping in te garden thinking abt Maan



Maalaiyil Yaaro Manathoda Pesa


( Who was there at evening to talk with my heart )



Marghazhi Vadai Medhuvaga Veesa


( The december wind flew very gently )

She smile and went inside, thinking not to face anyone, but Anni saw her and confused to see her still in her party dress and she is cuming from outside, she thought now only both are cuming, but she saw bhai going to gym, her thought alert her wen she saw Geet's blushed face which was red, she smirk


Anni hold Geet's hand breaking her trance,Geet saw her


Anni : wat Geet still lost in mahi mahi haan


Geet : how u know


Anni : oh then some thing happen in u r long drive, Geet bite her tongue thinking she blabbered and gave a sheepishly smile


Anni : say me wat he did last night haan


Geet : nothing,she passed her and saw Maan who was cuming from other side


He was in his vest and track pant, Geet eyes just struck on him like eat him alive, Anni saw her and smirk seeing her drooling her bhai, a naughty thought clicked her, she took a glass of water and poured on her face startling her

Geet screamed : Anni


Anni : enough of drooling, bhai wont run away haan, u can have him any time, with a naughty grin


Geet wipe her face : Anni ki bachi I won't leave u, before Geet catch Anni run away,


Geet was chasing her running behind her, but suddenly she bump into Maan who going to his room, her forehead hit on his hard rock like chest


Geet : ouch, rubbing her forehead


Maan gave a stern look : Geet r u a kid playing around, wat if u could hurt urself, where is u thought haan


Geet murmured :on u


Maan : wat


Geet : nothing and left to her room


Maan look at her and thought its one of her nautanki and left to his room..


She was standing under te shower, te cold water was drenching her body calming her burning cells, she never bath in cold water, even in summer times te water should be warm, but today she wants to cool her burning body


Suddenly she felt some twist in her stomach, she hold her stomach, she took bath and came out, she stood in front of te mirror and saw a woman who was glowing in Maan's love..she was looking very different today, she try to hide her blush but it was adamant to stay in her cheeks, she got ready and came down


She wished everyone and sat on te chair, everyone was giving a teasing smirk to her, Maan was just having his bf ignoring everyone's teasing glare..Geet was silently sitting, now and then her gaze move towards Maan who was busy in his food


Rahul : bhabhi how was u r long drive haan


All giggled, Geet head tilt her head down in her shyness,


Anni : after effect is still present


Vicky : oh then have to give medicines for tis hang out


Rahul : no medicines can cure tis hang out


All giggled, Geet cheeks became red in her shyness

Anni hold her heart : bhai wat u done to my Geet, she don't know te meaning of shy but now see how her cheeks became red, too bad bhai


All started to laugh making Geet's plight more worse, Geet can't bear she got up and try to leave te place but Dadi hold her and made her to sit and glare everyone


Sar : if any one tease my baby , then see wat im going to do, all zipped their mouth


Savi :Geet beta have u r bf, leave tis idiots


Geet :no dadi I will have later now im not hungry


Sar :wat happen any problem


All look at her, Maan was worried


Geet :no dadi, im feeling sleepy, wat to do u r grandson kidnapped me for a long drive and spoiled my sleep


All giggled, Maan gave a glare to her who shruggle her shoulder, but he notice she was dull, nowadays she was restless and silent, he is feeling some thing bothering her but don't have time to ask her, last night he got some time with her but he forget in his romance,


Thinking romance his images went to last night where he was sleeping on her chest, he really felt nice to sleep on her and wants to continue till eternity, his thought were roaming around her chest wen ever he see her, now too his gaze move to her chest which she was hiding with her pallu.. He snap his thought and saw all are chatting, he sighed, he finished his BF


Maan :dadi I have imp meeting, night I will be late


Dadi :ok beta


Geet look at him,he node to her and left..Geet sighed and look at everyone who one by one left te place to their respective works..Geet saw no one is there, servant came to take everyone's plate,she stop te servant to take Maan's plate, servant left


Geet sat on Maan's chair and look here and there checking whether some one is there or not,wen she confirms no one is there, she served herself in Maan's plate..she always teased her maa, aunties and grandmother wen they eat from their husband's plate but today she herself wants to have from his plate,


Wen she kept te first morsel inside her mouth, she felt some jolt like Maan's finger touching inside her mouth, she coughed remembering his finger, she felt some one taping her head and saw dadi tapping her head and holding a glass of water,Geet drank te water

Geet was shying : wo wo I was


Dadi : u don't need to give any explanation, I can understand and she kissed her head and left not want to make her more embrass, she had her bf and washed Maan's plate, she saw Nakul going upstairs with two more servants


Geet : Nakul kaka where u going


Nakul : to clean Maan baba's room


Geet thought oh still his room was not cleaned, so many days she try to see all his things now she got a prefect chance how can she miss it


Geet :kaka no need, Nakul gave a look, wo I mean Maan asked me to search his file, so after I get it I will inform u, then u can clean it


Nalul :ok baby he left


Geet sighed and left to his room, she open te door and closed, at once she enter she smell his scent which hit her nostrils, she thought abt te scenes in tat movie which she watched with her sils, how te girl roam around man's room,


She went to his WR, still his scent was roaming all over te room..she closed her eyes and inhale as much she can, it was like oxygen for her, his smell really making her crazy, she saw te shower and imagine him standing under it nude like they showed in tat movie, she chilled herself and bite her lips for her imagination. She felt a tingling sensational passing all over her body



Karaimel Naanum Kaatru Vangi Vinnai Parkka


( I was enjoying the air in shore looking at the sky )



Kadalmeen Kootam Oodi Vanthu Kannai Parkka



( The sea fishes came n looked at eyes )

She came out and saw his towel on te bed, she took it and smell it, she thought how lucky tis towel, wiping his body, she caress te towel on her cheeks to feel him, te towel had his scent still,her heart yearning for him, her body is squirm like a fish without water yearning for his closeness, like how a fish will swim after finding te water, dido she once wants to open herself and fulfill her desire touching Maan and feeling him once



Adada Naanum Meenai Pola Kadalil Payakoodumo



( I may also dive in sea n swim like a fish )



Alaigal Velli Aadai Pola Udalin Meethu Aadumo



( Will the waves look like a silver dress n dance over my body )



She twirl around te room, she open his wardrobe and throw all te things out, she became mad and laughing, she hit most of te things which fall down breaking, she saw his shirt on te hanger its te same shirt he was wearing yesterday, she took the shirt and smell his scent which made her dizzy,she hug te shirt like hugging him, She was imagine how he hold her waist and his hands roam on her shamelessly


Geet: poda nee romba mosam ( go man u are very bad) and giggled



Nenjamae Paatezhuthu Athil Nayagan Paerezhuthu...



( Oh my heart..write poems...Write my hero's name in it )


She again twirl holding te shirt and dancing around te room, suddenly she trip, she closed her eyes thinking she will surely hit te ground and break her bones but prayed to her babaji thinking nothing should happen to her face but her trance broke wen she didt fall down..she started to calculate with in tis mins she had been touched te ground but wat happen, she open her one eye and saw tat she was hanging and a pair of hands holding her



Maalaiyil Yaaro Manathoda Pesa


( Who was there at evening to talk with my heart )



Marghazhi Vadai Medhuvaga Veesa



( The december wind flew very gently )



Dhegam Poothathae OH.. Moogam Vanthatho..



( Did my body blossom or the desire came )



Moogam Vanthathum OH.. Mounam Vanthatho


( As the desire came, the silence came ? )

She was startled to see him Maan holding her, Geet was staring at him, her gaze was moving from his forehead to his eyes ,then his nose and landed on his lips, her lips went dry seeing his lips which was very close to her , Geet was confused thinking abt her dream, Geet pout thinking he again came in her imagination to tease her


Geet : r u in real or dream ?, she poke his nose with her index finger


Maan : Geet


Geet stood and gasped: OMG u are real i thought u left, why u came?


Maan smirk: why i cant cum, don't forget tis is my room but i should ask u why u came here


Geet was like : wo wo haan why can't i cum here don't forget i also have equal share in tis room, she try to be bold in front of him,with his look she know he didt conveiced with her answers


Geet : wat u giving a look like im hiding some thing,


He stood silently staring at her and his shirt which she was holding in her hand, she saw his gaze on te shirt in her hand and at once she throwed his shirt on te bed,


Geet : i felt bored so thought to clean my future room tats it ok now im going, she abt to move but felt his grip on her pallu, she turn and look at him and his hold..


Geet : leave me


She try to remove her pallu from his hold but he increased his grip on her like if she try little bit it will tear,


She was standing still and shivering, Maan slowly took steps and stand behind her, she can feel his hot breath fanning on her back, his hand hold her stomach and rubbing it,she bite her lips to control herself, she snap his hands and try to move but he turned her


She saw his eyes which was turning dark, she was moving back and he was moving forward..she was shivering seeing his gaze which making something roll inside her stomach


Geet: Maan leave me pls in low tone even she thought to voice it loud but came as a low tone


She just going back and hit te wall, he came near here..she move from te left side, he blocked, she try to move from right he again blocked her..she look at him who lean on her, his whole body rubbing hers, he hold her both hands on either side and locking it..his face was so closed to her face as his hot breath fanning on her face increasing her body temperature..

She stare at his eyes and his lips, he was closing te distance between them..she thought he is going to kiss her, she closed her eyes like submitting herself, Maan cheeks touched her cheeks, he lean and kissed her ear lobe, she clenched her pallu


He whisper in her ear : if I could have know u miss me tis much, I would have cancelled all my meetings and stayed with u,u don't have to romance my shirt, instead of my shirt i could have been dancing with u


It took few mins to register his words, she open her eyes and saw Maan who standing little bit away and laughing seeing her face.. she felt embrassed thinking she caught got but don't know wat he have seen


Actually Maan left to KC but on te way he remember he forgot his imp file, he could have asked any servant to bring but he want to see his MISTY who was restless


But wen he enter his room shocked to see his MISTY dancing with his shirt, he chuckled to see her and felt touched thinking she missing him but wen she trip and abt to fall he hold her, he nearly want to bite her cheeks wen she asked its dream or real..So she is dreaming abt him even in day time not bad..He raise his invisible collar thinking abt his charm and thought to tease her, so blocked her but seeing her face he can't control and bursted into laugh


Geet who was already embrassed now felt frustrated thinking why he is laughing and more over she got doubt whether he saw her smelling his towel..if he did wat he will think abt her she is very desparate, not like tat but something in her making her to think like tat..wen he near her she thought he is going to kiss her but wen he moved and laughed it add oil to her feelings and increased her frustration


Maan : u r face omg


Geet : just shut up, she turn to leave


But before she does he hold her and pulled her on him which made her to fall on him


Maan : why so hurry haan, she try to wriggle, wen im not there u are romancing my shirt but now im real u r pushing me..why my dress is more hotter than me haan, she didt reply just pushing him keeping her hands on his chest, he hold her waist and pulling her more on him..


Geet : Maan leave

Maan saw her chest which was heaving up and down, her pallu was not in place as he can see her bare skin which is peeping from her blouse, he lean on her and kissing her neck


Maan : now I know wat u no means yes u hug me more heina .


Maan have locked her under his hard frame, he was just leaning on her,crushing her soft chest with his hard chest and His hands were playing on her waist and one hand in her back squeezing her muscles in her back, she was totally under his mercy even though she try to not respond to his touch but her body reacting to his touch, her each cell making her crazy.


Maan : wat ever u try u can't stop me Geet, squeezing her stomach, Geet moaned in pain biting her lips, tats my charm, with a smirk slighty biting her skin breaking her trance.


His words just ignite her frustration already she is in verge, his words just add oil, she got irritated and annoyed , he hugging her giving pain to her chest and his hand squeezing her stomach which was paining a lot her chest, she cant bear it anymore,using all her strength she pushed him and slapped him,not hard but it made him startled and lossened his grip on her


Maan : Geet


Geet eyes welled up: I said leave me why u always using u r strength on me, why u forcing me,Maan was hurt with her words, always have only one thought will roam in u r mind wen ever im near u haan, why u doing tis to me, pls leave me alone pls

Maan was shocked and hurt with her words, he was just playing with her but her words hit his ego and her out burst made him to think tat he went over board, he saw her who was crying, it prickled too see her tears, he want to hug her and sooth but her words hit his ego and he just clenched his fist,


Maan : im sory and left to KC


Geet startled with her own behaviour she is te one who started and wen he moved on she burst on him but wat she will do nowadays she is not herself, she look at her hand which she slapped him, she saw te flower vase and pushed it hurting her palm which gave a small cut but blood started to flow, she sat down holding her stomach and crying, burying her face on her knee, thinking abt her frustration which was due to her monthly cramps

PRECAP : MAANEET ? 😕😕😕

NEXT PART : 208, PG - 40


Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago
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superb update
maaneet moments r superb
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superb song
omg geet slap maan and it hurt his ego
what will happen now
poor maaneet😭
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Awesome update
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Hayee that's my favorite Song 😊😊😊
Bechari Geet super frustrated with herself that net result was what she never expected.. poor soul has upset her Maan
Maan will be extremely guilty for hurting her ...waiting to see what Geet does to rectify her mistake which was not in her control poor soul 😕😕

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