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Posted: 8 years ago
hi there! lovely write ups by T Peru n Keepdreaming!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MGMahika



Maji matha satakli 😡


kya huya teri maaji ko

yaar jaroori nhi toh opost 2 ki tino image le

koi bhi lele


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Posted: 8 years ago
Itni vayanak story likhungi ki
Sabke rongte khade ho jayenge 😈
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Posted: 8 years ago


fill the form

1)GF most active member of the year...
Me and all my regular readers ..

2)GF most active writer of the year..
Singh24 , Richa Kapoor , dquo1 , Nailini akka and few more ..

3)gf most active reader of the year who comment regularly..
Me and all my readers ..

4)any writer you missing and he/she come back to continue the story share the name with us or in another words any two inactive writer name And which story u miss from this writer writing..
Sdilife19..

5)Story of the year..
Every story ..

6) best concept of story which you like most share with us..
Not able to recall any story ..

7) which story you make us cry so much..
I don't cry much so no story for me which made me cried ..

8) comedy story..
sugar n spice ..

9)horror story ..
Don't read such stories so no ff for me ..

10) romantic story ..
Many are there , can't name one ..

11) any five best story u like this year so much and always waiting for updates ..
I actually never wait for any story update because doesn't get that much time from personal life to even think about any of the story ..

12)grey/suspense story..
Lust for revenge 3 ..

13) any two new writer name jiski story u read..
Pixelflower ..
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Chalo finally I did something for this thread even if its a form only ..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

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Maan and Geet had arranged marriage and it has been 2 weeks to their marriage, Geet and Vicky are college friends. But now Geet was saying continuously sorry to him bec Vicky take her to dico as she want to see it, so he take her there secretly but Maan came to know as he was there to sign a deal, one of his client force him to come there and there he saw Geet was dancing with Vicky and laughing at his stupid jock, seeing them he can't control his anger he went toward them. When they saw him Vicky and Geet both were shocked, they made baby face and now home with him but inside lava was bursting, firstly he got angry on Vicky but now it's Geet turn.

G. Maan plzz maan jaiya naa plzzz sachii Maan Vicky mujay wahan laa kar gaiya tha plzzz I am sorry (listening to her Maan give her hard look but she made baby face and said him) plzzz I am sorry please.

M. Really Geet thumian pata hai wahan kasay loog hotay hain aur oopar saa woh idiot Vicky thumian ley giya aur tum challi gaii bina mujay batay unfortunately agar kuch hoo jata too. (she pout at him then said)

G. Plzz Maan kuch howa tooo nahin naa plzzz maan jio na main sach main sorry hoon aur sachii ap joo kaho gayye main karoon gii plzz jii (Listening to her Maan smirk and then said.

M. Really Geet tum woh karo gii joo main kahoon gaa (she cutely nodded her head and then Maan give her packet and when she open it her mouth shape was 0, she look at him who was looking at other side controlling his laugh, she poke his shoulder and ask him.

G. Maan yeh kya hai (controlling his laugh, Maan look at him he said her.

M. Geet yeh dress hai aur tum mujay yeh pehan kar dheakoo gii phir thumian sorry milay gii (Geet should him her cute anger and said him.

G. Dush Dannav, Saaru, Aakru, Maan ap bohat burray hoo (pointing finger toward him she said) aur yeh dress main nahin panno gii aur nahin chiya ap kii sorry sarru ( saying this this she throw the dress and then went to sleep but Maan laugh at her seeing her cute angry face.

Heheheh friends ignore the mistake

I try to write this but par itna aacha nahin hai.

Loo dii I try but Do tell me kaisa hai...



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MGMahika

Guess the scene 1st




1)Reception party
2)Bachelor party night
3)Phone fighting
4)Geet come to know Maan is Balwant Singh
5)Maan is cooking and Geet in office
(Boy's in house husband and girls are wife)🤣




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

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Geet look at Maan who is getting ready to go to office and thinks' aaj kal janab kuch jayada hi time let's hai tayair hone main..majra kya hai..
Geet- Maan today I also want to go with you...
Maan at once said no ...
Maan _ no baby it's not right for you to go out at this condition...
Geet fumed hearing him...' this condition' inki baje se hi hua hai...She looked at her 7 month baby bump and pout...
Geet- I'm sure he has got someone hot and sexy...main bhi dekhti hoon mera siba woh kiske saath muah kaala kartehai...
she at once Dial her enemy Sasha..
hello Sasha hope everything is fine
Sasha frowned at other side as first time Geet is talking so nicely...
Geet- actually Sasha I called u to tell a important thing.. please take care of Maan... woh actually kal hi him doctor ke pass gaye the air pata chala ki unhe Shaun flue hua hai...please take care of him...okay...saying she cut the call...
and after 1 hour got the result her hubby is before her pleading where she is enjoying her favourite ice cream... after getting the call Sasha at once canceled all meeting nor just that...she told all stuff about his disease and everyone said him to go home ...when he asked he was shocked to hear the reason...
but now his wife is adamant not to clear this mess...



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN




Yup this is something, of my taste without any contest etc..I m available for these things..Now coming to this situation.. Lets go


Maan : Geet ! I fired u , hence u came to KM, stole my all formals..How dare you ?

Geet :Sir, thand paayo .I stole 4 good cause, 4 KC Hospital Trust Auction ? Actually to raise more funds . MSK's attires definitely ll raise more money

Maan : What a great idea ? How dare u ? Taking revenge on me.How I'll go to office tomorrow.

Geet : Sir , everything 4 ur benefit.

Maan :R u crazy ?

Geet : Not me, U Sir

Maan : What ? Kya, kya bolla tumne ?

Geet : Aaa cc tually u say na k "yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi ".I don want to b reason of this. Without formals you ll stay at home for couple of days. Ur mind needs a break. I can't c u turning insane.

Maan: I think not me you are mad.

Geet : Sir plz don stress ur brain.. Even KC Hospital Trust se physiatrists aa rahe hai.. Aapko thanks kehne.. Ur cloths raised great funds. You should meet them..

Maan : What do u mean ? Why to meet them ha?

Geet : Simple they need you, n u need them..

Maan : Geet I ll not spare u ...

she slipped from place...screaming 😲

Geet :Sir I have spared you. Coz not you fired me but I left u..Take care Sir..

She left him confused.What she meant after all...Now tell how it was 😆
Due to word limit I wrote straight dialogues without their expressions, acts n setup etc...


A different Storyline I really enjoyed these dialogues by both Maan and Geet
it was Hilarious and so Fantastic
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Posted: 8 years ago
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IT was few months for maaneet MARRIAGE...Maan the famous casinova was finally tied to the girl who ruled his heart from the moment thier eyes met...And today was the great msk bday...So his dear wife arranged a grand party for him to surprise her hubby but the actual surprise well rather schok was received by her when she saw her husband few flings walking in to the party if that was not enough they dared to kiss his cheek and hug him ...Him..Her husband Infront of her..Like a perfect host she maintained her cool through out the party...But she kept her eyes only on her husband who was behaving just behaving as smooth as butter but in real he was not she knew well. Msk was sweating inside thinking the ways his wife may react to his stunt he just invited them to make his geet feel j...But it turned out disaster ,the over excited girls threw themselves on him,making him aware that he was surely gonna die in his wife hands...Her smile which always looks cute to him today it was making him feel most dangerous... He kept waiting for the party to end to manofy his geet..To his surprise she slept even before he enter the room.. Next morning he had a imp meeting scheduled as next week there was presentation of few crores project...Which willb a mile stone in KC history.so he left... At night when he returned he smelled something was burning ,he ignored thinking nakul again made some disaster and went to check the file which adi send to home regarding the project neither he got the file nor the burning smell left.. Confused he came out to search only to find geet was in garden and she was enjoying the fire...Fire..On reaching close he found she was burning few boxes...And few more steps he came across a gift wraper.which was half burnt by a sticker showing 'with love sam'..It took him few seconds to realise geet burnt his bday gifts well most probably the gifts he got from his ex girlfriends...He gulped seeing her smile.. Maan: geet... Geet: arey maan aap kab aaye... Maan: geet woh..Mein..Kal.. Geet: kuch kehne KHI ZAROORATH NAHI hai ,mein jaanthi hoon AAP muje j feel karane khey liye kiya...Par maan Jo sach hai woh sach hai...Armaan was my first crush chahe woh riddhima seh pyar kahre,armaan is best She said with a dreamy look. Maan: geet Maan eyes turned with red with anger again she is praising about that stupid hero before him. Even before maan could utter a word... Geet: waise maan aap khi khi plan full on flop hui,Maine aap khi saari gifts jaala DAALA,AUR haan woh kuch file BHI padi hui thi kuch red color KHI couch par...Maine USS seh daal Diya AAG mein...Woh kya hai naa yeh stupid gifts JAL NAHI rahe they... Maan at once got alerted file ,red file omg the imp file..He reluctantly asked her praying to b wrong.. Maan: geet kya woh file adi neh.. Geet: haan shayad... Maan: geet woh imp.. Geet: hogi par AAP KHI stunt itna mehanga TOH padni thi AAP koh ..NAHI!!! Geet smirked seeing him burning in rage and left smiling to herself Few steps away she called adi and threatened to shut his mouth and not to attend maan cal for today for which adi agreed shivering. While maan stood there enraged on himself for playing that stupid prank ,and on adi for giving file to geet mostly on geet stupid armaan who was root cause for everything.

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