MG SS Ye Rishtha Kya Kehalatha hai? UPT Epilogue Sep 15 pg 52 - Page 21

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sorry for such late response

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 33


Beautiful Part


Geet is just not sure about Maan actually

she cannot believe and she has not seen this

lover boy side of Maan

he now is confident about his feelings for Geet

while she is still so overwhelmed

and does not know how to respond to Maan

while he waits for her answer or approval

I totally loved how he told her all he wants is just her Geet

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ghsp2fan

Yes but this has come to the end and am into the other one now...

So this is waiting.....

oh ok.... will wait for the next update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 34


Maan is so confident now about his feelings

but Geet at this point is confused

but there is no fault to her

she is naïve and everything that has been happening

is all new and different

she knows that something has changed between herself

and Maan

she has noticed his gentle side , his protective side

but I guess Maan though he wants to hear Geet's true feelings

he knows that she is confused

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Posted: 5 years ago

@ghsp take care and be safe

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Posted: 5 years ago

ahh when can you update?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks khwaish...🤗


You too stay safe....

Every one follow social distancing for ur own good even after lockdown is lifted..

Stay safe guys...

Having some network issues.. logged in after a long time...

Too busy in quarantine being a mom...

Will update ASAP...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Read ur full ss and loved it totally unique

Excited to read further please update next part soon 😊

Stay safe

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part - 34


OH.....

Maan keeps staring Geet as she tries hard not to look into his mystical eyes for those are the only armour of MSK that works its magic everytime against her...

While Geet is very good at verbal counters, Maan is a silent killer...

He may be a man of less words but nothing can escape from his MRI eyes... They always set such a trap where there is zero escape chances... Geet knows that Maan has the magic to read her mind thru her eyes... Though she is still confused with her own feelings she can't deny the fact that she can't think of a single reason to say no to Maan while there are a thousand reasons otherwise...

As Geet slowly comes out of her trance she realises her plight and is embarrassed....

She pushes Maan away and rushes back into the washroom...

Geet starts yelling at Maan inorder to conceal her feelings...

Geet: aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet shouts from inside.... She is all confident that Maan has crossed the line and would be apologetic... Poor Geet doesn't know MSK...

Maan is least bothered by her tone and starts knocking....

Geet is surprised.... This man is crazy...

Maan: Geet, darwaza kholo

Geet: kya?

Maan: abhi darwaza kholo aur bahar aao

Geet: aap toh pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: tum pehle bahar aao aur phir dhekthe hai ki kaun pagal ho jaatha

Geet: pehle aap jao

Maan: mein toh nahi jaanewala hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: dadi kab se wait kar rahe hai, tumme toh koi parwa hi nahi

Geet: toh aap pehle mere kamre se jao

Maan: mein kyun jaoon? Ye mera ghar hai

Geet: aapka ghar ho saktha hai par ye kamra toh mera hai, aap abhi mere kamre se jaao

Maan: Geet, jab ye phura ghar hi mera hai toh ye kamra bhi mera hi hotha haina? Toh mein jahan bhi chahoon reh saktha hoon

Geet: aap se poocha to aap kahenge ki yahan ka hawa bhi aapka hai

Maan: tum toh bahut samajdhar ho Geet, ab dekho toh yahan ka sab kuch mera hi hai, yahan jo bhi hai woh MSK ka hi hai, ye ghar, isaka samaan, yahan ke log, jaise yahan ka sare servants mere hi hai, aur dadi bhi meri hi hai, ab tum hi bathao Geet yahan aur kaun kaun hai mere?

Geet: mujhe kya patha? Yahan toh sab kuch aap hi jaanthe ho

Maan: waise toh tum teek kehthe ho Geet, mein toh sab kuch jaantha hoon, koi chahthe bhi mujhse kuch bhi chupa nahi saktha

Geet: batein karna toh koi aap se seekhe, mein bhi kaise bhool gayi ki mein the great MSK se baat kar rahi hoon

Suddenly Geet opens in the door, comes out and goes to the wardrobe to take out her night suit...

She just gives Maan a royal ignore and pretends to act as if Maan is invisible to her...

As she tries to get rid of her towel Maan finally gives up and leaves...

After a quiet dinner with dadi Geet is on her way to the OH....

Maan stops her in the middle by blocking her way...

Geet tries to get away but Maan catches hold of her hand and pulls her closer...

Geet closes her eyes and melts in his hold...

Maan in his husky voice...

Maan: Geet, tumme achanak kya ho gaya? Mujhse aaise kyun bhagthi rehthi ho? Kahin aaisa toh nahi ki ab tummara kaam ho gaya toh tum sab kuch bhool gayi ho?

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Maan: phir kaisa hai Geet?

Maan keeps playing with her hair...

Geet: woh aap mein

Geet is speechless....

Maan: bholo Geet, kya tum dadi ko akhele chodke chale jaaogi?

Maan has found out from Adi that Geet has planned to go to Hoshiarpur next week....

Geet: woh mujhe jaana hoga, ab toh meri chutti bhi hai

Maan: aaise kaise jaa sakthi ho tum?

Maan gets a little upset with her answer....

Geet: par Maan sir, mere gharwalon toh mera intezaar karthe honge

Maan: toh mere intezaar ka kya hai Geet?

Geet is puzzled....

Geet: woh, aap kya kehthe ho?

Maan: Geet, bas, ab bahut ho chuka hai, ye toh tum bhi jaanthi ho ki tum itni bhi boli nahi ho

Geet looks worried and almost in tears...

Maan didn't expect that from Geet...

He leaves his hold and releases her...

He thinks that he has been harassing poor Geet and forcing his feelings on her too early... He thinks he has lost control of his himself now...

Maan: Geet, koi jaldhi nahi hai, tum jao

Geet doesn't leave... She knows she it's wrong to keep his hopes high.. she knows it's impossible

Geet: woh mein

Maan: it's ok Geet, you go and take some rest, hum phir kabhi baat karenge

Maan leans forward and kisses her forehead....

Maan: good night Geet

As Maan tries to leave but Geet stops him this time...

Maan is worried that he is being selfish in using her vulnerability....

Maan turns and looks at a helpless Geet struggling with her own feelings....

Geet: aap bahut achche ho

Geet trembles as she speaks...

Maan tries to calm her by holding her hands in his...

Maan: tumse achcha koi nahi hai Geet

Geet: woh mein

Maan puts his fingers on her warm lips...... Ssshhhhh

Maan: chup Bilkul chup

Geet looks into his eyes... This time she finds warmth and care in them...

She needed it badly... It's always a mystery how Maan knows her needs without even a word from her just looking at her eyes...

Geet gathers all her courage and utters those words with a heavy heart....

Geet: ye mein nahi kar sakthi

Maan is shocked....

Maan: tumme kya ho gaya Geet? Tum teek toh hona?

Geet: nahi mein teek nahi hoon

Geet breaks down....

Maan: ye tum kya keh rahi hi Geet? Tum kya nahin kar sakthi?

Geet: mein kuch nahi kar sakthi hoon, kuch bhi nahi

Maan pulls her into a hug....

Maan: relax Geet, tum ye kabhi mat bhoolna ki abhi akheli nahi ho, MSK hain tummare saath, hamesha

Geet: aap hamesha mere saath nahi de sakthe ho

Maan: kyun nahi Geet? Mein wada kartha hoon

Before Maan could complete Geet stops him by placing her hand on his mouth...

Geet: nahi, ye mein nahi kar sakthi



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Posted: 5 years ago

34

maan feels guilty to force geet to accept her feelings for him n confess them

geet is asking sorry as she cant do this to maan

maan js upset as geet leaving for hp

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