MG OS: 'Adhoori Si Ek Kahaani' ~ Reposted

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

I've read this one already😃

Thanks for reposting though...

Revision ho gaya😆

Nice story... Geet ka unconditional love... And bichara Maan

Ye Maan Singh khurana ko kuch hona and hoping for his recovery and stuff... Mujhse digest hi nahi hota yaar😆

I always want him to be the knight for our geet...😉

Once again a very Nice story...

Do keep writing😊

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wowww it was FAB👏👏

Geet's selfless and pure love for maan was clearly reflecting..

Thanku for pm

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

hi thanks 4 da pm! superb emotional OS! beautifully written! Fab banner! loved reading this again! Poor Geet! she is living 4 Maan! he has MPD! she helps him! she takes care of him! 👏⭐️

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

fabulous one..
I had read it before..
the three different personalities are distinctly different..
apparently it looks Geet is flirting with them, but after the last lines, one can understand how much difficult it is for her, while she is actually taking care of each one of the personalities of Maan with equal zeal, love and attention..
not only that but she is creating some beautiful moments for them and herself relishing these moments of being with him.
it is very difficult to know what is going on in Maan's mind, but he would definitely find Geet as one lovely, caring person by his side every where, all the time.

hope that Geet will get her Maan back soon..it is painful to see her sadness, but leaving that aside, she stands up to face the new day with new hope and courage.

banner is just apt for the one shot..the three different expressions and persona of Maan, and Geet looking at them with love and smile, and tears in her eyes..

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

really sad for geet

didnt expect all 3 characters would be same

geet has been admiring armaan n then angad

she was drooling them

n made them impress on her

but maan is cool n composed

he loves his wfe

n geet too

its sad to know he has personality disorder

n geet is living with him knowing the truth

n handling him n business too

nice os

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Awesome update
Maan is suffering from MPD n geet love is so selfless n strong as she is ready to take any challenge for him

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

I hv read this story earlier

It is heart wrenching on geets part

The story is completely unpredictable, keeps u involved till the last min

Women hv to be strong

A good piece of writing I must say, keep up good writing

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

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a very different kind of story indeed.
MPD usually happens when you are not able to dealwith your current self and wish to have been someone better. and when this feeling grows on you, it shapes up as adisorder.
i was at first surprised to find geet flirting with armaan and then angad and then i was suddenly like- OMG she is married!
but the ordeal that she must be going through every single day is unbearable.
she is strong and her love for him is strong and that is why she has been able to hold on to the tiny thread of hope all this time.
three personalities now... that must be so difficult.
both for the real maan who had undergone the trauma and also for Geet who is struggling every day
but again it is only the love and care from our beloved that can get us out of any misery.
totally kept me hooked aakriti.
loved it.

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago

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priyasree

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Lovely OS

Read before too ...

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Lovely... Mughe laga geet chalu hai in start ... Drooling ... Amy ... Angad ... N ... In last maan ... Phir maan told us she is his wife ... Lol psti ko bhi dhoka ... Maine socha ... Bus ride ek ke sath ...lunch dussre ke sath ... Dinner thesaryke sath ... Kya hai ye madam ...

Uff par tum ne mughe galst sabit kar diya ... Jo dikhta hai vo hameshasahi nai hota ... Flashback reading ...i wad like omg ...poor girl ... Kini musteebat mai hai ye...

Lovely os

Continue karo

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