(MG-SS)MLS SEASON 5(OBSCURE LOVE)THREAD 3 PARTS/16--23

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#861

hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent update! superbly written! loved the twist! Maan tells Geet she cannot leave! they argue! Maan taunts her! bt this Geet is different! she is strong! Maan says he will kill het sister! he warns Geet! Shekhar playing matchmaker! Maan is working 4 the police! he is also trying 2 prove himself innocent! nice teaser! update soon

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#862

Nice update dear Mann kept Geet and gia with him to protect but from whom

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#863

Superb update for part 23. Maan so knows Geet that he gets to her just before she crosses the line. Liked Geet's confession although it was unintentional. Also liked the way Shekhar calls him out on his feelings for Geet. Really curious to see what is in store next. Fantastic job as always.

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Arsheela

@Arsheela

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#864

Suspense ...🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

Ok boss will wait for next update

So Maan confess that he do have felling for geet above from attraction and geet too confess that she lost her heart back here and shekher 😆

he really helped maan ... (really welll maan dont think so )...

nice update

MAza aya

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#865

Maan is police informer...

then what was with they killed a girl in a club where he met Geet first...

anyway thoda sa pata chala hai...

so Geet tried to escape but caught by Maan because he knows now after entering this den she have endangered her life...

he wanted Geet to be free with her sister but he is helpless...

very interesting...

thanx for pm...

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#866

Great update 😛 thank god maan stopped geet before she crossed the danger line or would have been shot by his men 😲 so maan is a police informer and he still has very strong feelings for geet but doesn't want to acknowledge it due to the danger in his life all the time. He wants to protect her and that is why he is not letting her go. Eagerly waiting to know about the maan's mysterious past and why he chose this line, which is so dangerous and what does he want to prove. very interesting precap. Eagerly waiting for the next update 😊

Edited by ns.1 - 8 years ago

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#867

superb update...

loved it...

geet tried to escape but maan caught her but also saved her from being killed by his men...

so maan is actually a police informer...wonder did he do that he has to prove his innocence...

waiting for next part...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#868

Wonderful and very informative Update 😉
Geet unknowingly trying to put herself and her sister in danger.. Maan saved her from the guards 😲
He is actually a police informer,, so in this season we get to know about his not being bad guy 😆 😳
I wonder what did he do? So he is doing so much for proving his innocence? 😕 😲
This is getting more interesting.. He is keeping both girls bcs He wants to protect them but from whom? 😕
Waiting for more

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#869

Wow great story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and I'm still in shock that maan is helping the police and i really hope maan help geet and her sister soon. Wow what a chapter and a teaser