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don't know what to say

u can write in same concept but

copy word to word story of other

is that good or bad ...


i got this information long back and


try to talk with her but she say its her

writing


if its her writing than I AM SORRY

BUT NOT THAN SHE SHOULD BE SORRY


The writer name is



shawon_maaneet


her story on geet forum


Maaneet os: Hey baby Come Here 18+, Epilogue- page 77 (COMPLETED)

link


on forum



blog link

PART 1 IN BLOG


BLOG LINK

its protected with word baby word




her story first part

It's Saturday night in the busy city of New
York and it's time for my hunting game again.
It's 10 o clocks and I'm ready to start the
hunt. I'm a 22 year young woman. I'm 5'6
with light brown skin. I have green eyes and
no they are not contacts and I have long black
hair that goes to the middle of my back and
no it's not weave. I'm a curvy woman with big
breasts and an even bigger butt to match I'm
roughly 130 lbs, but I have toned muscles
because I go to the gym four times a week.
But let me explain my situation okay.. so
every day I go out to find my own personal
sex god.
Yeah I know that sounds weird but I just want
to find that one dude who meets my
expectations. I have been doing this for about
a month now and I'm starting to lose hope
i've found three guys but no luck. well you
might be wondering what am I going to do
after I find him well I'm not going to do
anything he's going to be the guy I call on
when I want some good dick and that's it, I
don't believe in marriage or love because
people are always getting there hurt broken
and people are always getting divorced so
what's the point in trying to find love? But
yesterday I actually thought I found my sex
god... until he f**ked it all up.
so back to the now. I'm a college student
at NYU in my senior year studying business I
get straight A's, and am here on a full
scholarship.
I go to the club for about an hour or so
everyday well except Sunday and Mondays.
But today is Saturday and I'm looking hot in
this sexy red strapless dress that clings nicely
to my every curve and rocking my new Coach
purse and new pumps. I walk in the club and
immediately I get looks of want and winks and
smiles from different guys and even some
girls. I walked toward the bar and ordered an
apple martini. I was there about 2 minutes
when Mr. eye shooter aka trey walked in and
began to scope out the crowd no doubt
looking for me. But I leaped from my chair
and head into the crowd trying to blend in as
much as possible. I didn't realize I wasn't
paying attention to where I was going until I
ran into something that felt like a big wall.
I stagger backwards but a hard hand grabs
my elbow and straightens me. I look up and
look into the most beautiful eyes I have ever
seen by far, they were a shade of gray and
blue mix. "Oh my." is all I manage to say as
my eyes drifted from his eyes to the rest of
him he was at least 6 foot and looked to be
mixed and had nice M shaped full lips he's
voice wrapped around me as he said in my ear
"Are
you okay?". "Huh?" was all I managed to say
"Are you okay?" he repeated. "Oh I'm alright
I'm sorry I bumped into you." God, he was so
close I could feel the heat radiating off of his
body. His body was smoking I glanced down
and saw he was built not steroid protein
drinks built but like and I go to the gym
regularly kind of built.
"Well I'm not." He says I look back up to him
in confusion. Then I'm aware he still has my
elbow and we're standing awfully close. "What
I mean is I'm not sorry you bumped into me." I
look up to him and put on my best flirtatious
smile and raise one eye brow and say "Why is
that?" He looked at me then looked around
and said "Do you mind if we go somewhere a
little quieter and talk?" "Sure." With that he
pulls me by my elbow that he was holding the
whole time. We head toward the back were
they have little secluded areas where people
can sit and chat in their own little booths. We
took one that wasn't occupied and sat down.
When we were settled and we were sitting
across from each other I put on my best flirty
face on and looked at him and gave his a
flirtatious smile and said. "You were saying?"
He looked at me for a second and flashed me
a very white smile and said "What I was
saying is I'm not sorry you bumped into me
because I'm glad to have meet such a
beautiful woman." that made me smile harder.
I add "I'm I glad to have met such a..." fine?
Sexy? Beautiful? "Handsome man." I finished.
"well thank you but I'm just going to ask if
you have a boyfriend because there's no way
in hell a beautiful woman like you doesn't
have a man." he says.
I laugh and say "Nope I'm completely single,
but I should be asking you the same question
because there's no way such a handsome man
like yourself is single." He chuckles and says
"Yep I'm single and as you can see ready to
mingle." Then I take a good look at him and
see he has a nice low clean cut and I scan
over him with my eyes and look at his rock
her body and stop just below his waist line
and I immediately I get wet because I notice a
bulge coming out the front of his jeans. I
gasp and lookup at him and notice he's doing
the same thing I was just doing. He's roving
my body with his eyes and he stops his gaze
at my clear to see big breasts.
Then I decide to use my line and say "Do you
want me as much as I want you right now?"
He then locks eyes with me and says "More
than you'll ever know." I get up to leave when I
see Trey again and sit back down quickly and
try to cover my face with my hair. Then he
surprises me by saying "Is that a friend of
yours?" I look up at him and see him jerk his
thumb in Trey's direction. "No he's actually
the reason I bumped into you I was trying to
make sure he didn't see me." I look back up at
his face and see him thinking, then he
abruptly says "I'll be right back." and he gets
up quickly and walks into the crowd, gladly he
doesn't go to Trey like I thought he was going
to do.
A minute later I take a peek at the direction
Trey is in to make sure he hasn't seen me yet
and I see he's talking to some big guy who
looks to be the bouncer of the club. Trey looks
angry and then the next thing I know I see the
bouncer dude shoving him toward the exit and
Trey smack his hands off him and storm out.
Right then Mr.Gorgeous comes back. Dang I
need to figure out his name. But first I ask.
"Did you do that?" he looks at me and says
"Yeah I hope you're not mad or anything it
just looked to me like he was getting on your
nerves so I asked my buddy Jeremy if he
could do me a favor and escort him out." I
look at
him and we lock eyes and I lean over and
sweetly kiss him on the lips and with much
difficulty pull away after a second and say
"Thank you." That kiss even though it was
short it sent a giant heat wave through my
body and gets me even more wet. Damn. "My
pleasure." He says in a deep husky voice.



and original writer of this


name

Ultimate Pleasure

By: Rachel G


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original story part

It's Saturday night in the busy city of New York and it's time for my hunting game again. It's 10 o clocks and I'm ready to start the hunt. I'm a 22 year young woman. I'm 5'6 with light brown skin. I have green eyes and no they are not contacts and I have long black hair that goes to the middle of my back and no it's not weave. I'm a curvy woman with big breasts and an even bigger butt to match I'm roughly 130 lbs, but I have toned muscles because I go to the gym four times a week. But let me explain my situation okay.. so every day I go out to find my own personal sex god.

Yeah I know that sounds weird but I just want to find that one dude who meets my expectations. I have been doing this for about a mouth now and I'm starting to lose hope i've found three guys but no luck. well you might be wondering what am I going to do after I find him well I'm not going to do anything he's going to be the guy I call on when I want some good dick and that's it, I don't believe in marriage or love because people are always getting there hurt broken and people are always getting divorced so what's the point in trying to find love? But yesterday I actually thought I found my sex god... until he f**ked it all up.

Okay so here's what happened, okay so I go into the club and I see this fine light skinned man with a fresh clean cut and an eight pack and over all a fine ass body, so I go up to him and whisper in his ear while I touch his upper thigh and say my favorite line that I always say "Hey there sexy do u want me as much as I want you right now?" I lean away bite my bottom lip and raise and eye brow waiting for a response. He flashes a mouth full of pearly white teeth and says "You want to find out?" and with that I take his hand and lead him out the club "where's your car?" I ask. "Right over there." he says as he points to a Mercedes Benz.



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her other story

name


Maaneet SS: Falling In Love, Part 3, 4 - Page 33, 13th NOV 2016



link on gf







password love




her wriiting


GEET
"What is your problem?" I yelled at him.
"Problem? Me? I don't have one." He said,
feigning innocence.
"Ugh." I said, and stalked off angrily.
"You don't look very pretty with that frown on
your face." He said, as he followed me down
the hallway.
"Do I look like I care what you think?" I turned
around, furious.
"You do care." He grinned. "I see it in your
eyes."
"You just think that I care because your ego is
too big to realize that some people don't
actually fall for your nonexistent charms. U know ur name should be GK not MK. Now
stop following me and leave me alone." I
turned around angrily and walked away from
him again.
" U mean G for Geet and K for Khurana" Maan said.
"grrr.. no. G for ghamandi and k for khadus. Now leave me alone" geet said gritting her teeth..
"Hmm. I could," He thought out loud, "but
annoying you is too much fun. Nope, I'm
staying." He continued following me down the
hallway.
"You seriously want to drive around in your
car ALL DAY?" I shouted again, after a few
seconds of angry walking.
"Yup," He answered and I could hear the
amusement in his voice. "All day long. And
since I also have to do what you want to do,
you're going to have to do what I want to do."
He said.
"You're going to regret this." I said furiously,
hoping he'd change his mind. "I am going to
make you do the most terrible thing ever."
"We'll see," Maan grinned.
Hi, my name is Geet and welcome to my
nightmare. You probably have no idea who I'm
fighting with and what I'm fighting with him
about so I shall explain it briefly. After my
explanation I shall go back to being furious.
You see, our school has this thing where they
make people who dislike each other spend
time with each other. It's a way of showing
students that everyone has good and bad
aspects. Due to the fact that we would never
admit whom we did or did not like, our best
friends are asked to testify for us. It's
tradition that our best friend does not take
our side and anyways, if your friend tells who
your worst enemy is then as revenge you will
have to say who your friend's enemy is too.
The only problem with this tradition is that
some people have many haters and others
only a few. In that case they make people
team up in larger groups. In my case, the
person I disliked the most had only one
person who disliked him and that was me. The
reason I'm so angry at him now is because he
said that on the day he has free choice and I
am forced to join him in whatever he's doing,
he wants to drive around in his car all day.
ALL DAY! I have to drive around in a car, with
the person I like least in the entire world, for a
whole day! What's more, the school has
decided to send us to hotels all over the state,
so we can see a different place and get to
know each other at the same time. What fun.
"We're going horse riding." I announced a few
days later, hours before we were to leave to
our first hotel.







other wriiter or original writer

Falling in the Snow

Love is in the AirBy: Marline


link





https://Falling in the Snow (Marline) - BookRix












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Sonia.KN thumbnail
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Actually those are original ...readers kick them ..they don like to read those writers 😆
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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN


Actually those are original ...readers kick them ..they don like to read those writers 😆


means i dont get it
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Latest its just a word Mumma instead of a I used u in my new ss ...some one used same I know it is some where my idea copied by else ... n got response..
Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN



Latest its just a word Mumma instead of a I used u in my new ss ...some one used same I know it is some where my idea copied by else ... n got response..



true ...and fact

u know i also read her story baby come and comment also
i dont have idea that time its copy

but when i come to read another story

lauguage kuch ajeeb lagi its means like us as we write

so serch for is copy work or original
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Kya hua ??
Kisna kis ki story copy kia hai ?? ma thik sa samjhi nahi😳
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Originally posted by: Mona_90

Kya hua ??
Kisna kis ki story copy kia hai ?? ma thik sa samjhi nahi😳




shawon_maaneet



copy other story who is not GF writer
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r u in deep shock

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