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CHAPTER 5


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, RELIGIOUS STORIES AND TERMS; MEDICAL TERMS, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, LEGAL TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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"Mujhe Dadimaa, Dad aur Vicky se baat karni hogi."(I'll have to inform Dadimaa, Dad and Vicky about this!)

Maan entered the conference room to find Rishabh Singhania yelling at some one on the phone,"Maine tumse kahaa thaa ki jaanch partaal ke bina kissi ko bhi Gudiya ke paas matt aane dena. Sid abb mai tumse ghar aakar baat karonga tab tak tum ghar par rehna aur khabardaar jo woh Gudiya ke paas aaye toh! Abb mai rakhta hoon meri meeting hai." (I had told you that without proper investigation, not to let anyone near Gudiya. Sid I'll come home and talk to you, till then dare you let him come close to Gudiya! I'll call off now as I have a meeting.)



Rishi disconnected the phone and apologised,"Sorry to keep you waiting, Mr. Khurana!" Soon the meeting started and Rishi was giving presentation but Miss Singh was not present much to Maan's dispointment. After the presentation was over, Sasha got up and asked,"Mr. Rajsinghania Sir, architecturally this plan will not be do able. Because..."
"Miss Gupta, its possible if..." The arguement continued till Rishi was again disturbed by a phone call which he was about to disconnect but seeing the number immediately picked up and said,"Haan Maa. KYA?? Mai abhi aata hoon!" (Yes Mom. WHAT? I'll come at once.) Rishi disconnected the phone and said, "I'm sorry gentlemen, I have to excuse myself as there is a family emergency. Mr. Khurana, my staff will soon contact you." Rishi ran out of the conference room stunning both RC & KC staff. Maan also left with KC staff for his Mumbai office. As the journey was too long, his thoughts went back to the first time he saw Geetika Singh.

FLASHBACK

A WEEK EARLIER
Maan who was a believer that girls and women are an emotional burden and one is better without them, was today was in a trance by seeing a girl's beauty and grace. When he saw Geetika dancing on the stage he felt he has found the girl of his dreams, his life partner. Through out Geetika's performance he felt that Geetika is only dancing for him. By the time she finished her performance his heart had decided to make Geetika his legally, socially and physically but his brain refused to listen to his heart. He had even captured Geetika in his phone making sure that his grandmother and father are not aware of this. After the program was over he so wanted to go back in his room and in privacy adore, worship and admire his love, Geetika. Her milky white completion, her beautiful hazel eyes, her slender neck, her perfectly rounded assests, her slim waist, her graceful dance poses etc. but with his grandmother and father's continous going on commentary, he was unable to do so. Hence when he reached their hotel suite he was irritable, annoyed and frustrated!

Location: HOTEL SUITE IN A SIX STAR HOTEL , MUMBAI
Khuranas were back in their hotel suite after the Janmashtami celebrations. Throughout the journey back home, Savitri Devi kept saying that she has found an ideal bahu in Geet. Ranjit also kept saying that he finally found a new talent in form of Geetika to show the world during his Indo-Taiwanese cultural tour. Finally once inside the suite, Maan blew up,"Aap dono koi aur baat nahi kar sakte siwaiye meri shaadi aur cultural tour ke!" (You both have nothing else to talk except my marriage and Indo-Taiwanese tour.)

"Maan aap itne gussa kyun ho rahe hain? Shaadi aapki nahi Vicky ki ho rahi hai Geetika yaani Geet se. Maine to Geet ka haat bhi uske maa-baap se maang liya hai Vicky ke liye." (Maan why are you so angry? I'm not talking about your but Vicky's marriage with Geetika or Geet. I have even asked for Geet's hand in marriage from her parents.)

"KYA??"
"KYA??"
"KYA??"
There were different tones with the questioning of "what?" but surprise was the same. Ranjit was taken aback, Maan was furious and his male ego had been rubbed the wrong way and Vicky was crestfallen that his freedom will now be lost. "Maa yeh aapne bachut accha kiya. Kya aapko maloom hai ki Krishankant aur mai ek hi college mein padhte the. Aaj Janmashtami ke karyekram ke kaaran zyadaa baat nahi kar paaye magar agar samadhi bann gaye toh aur kareeb aa jaayenge." (Maa that is excellent. Did you know that Krishankant and I have studied in the same college. Today due to Janmashtami festivities we could not talk much but once he becomes our relative we have become closer once again!)

Maan was now fed up with this wedding talk and left. After Maan left, Vicky went to Savitri Devi and said disheartedly, "Dadimaa, kya aap mujhe itna naa pasand karti hain ki mujhe aap shaadi naam ki kaid mein kaidi banna rahi hain." (Dadimaa, do you dislike me so much that you have got me imprisoned in this jailed called marriage!)

"Chup reh badmash! Shaadi ka rishta humne Maan ke liye maanga hai magar agar hum usse shaadi karne ko kehenge toh woh saaf manna kar denge iss liye hum naa chahte hue bhi aap ko bali ka bakara banna hoga." (What nonsense! I have asked Geet's hand for Maan but if I would have told him that he would have immediately refused. Hence, unfortunately I had to use you as a scapegoat!)

NEXT DAY
Khuranas were having breakfast when Maan said, "Dadimaa, mai ladkiwalon se dulha banke miloonga jiss se mujhe Vicky ki honewali biwi aur uske parivaar ke baare mein sab patta chal jaaye! Dadimaa, Dad aur Vicky aap iss baare mein unko kuch nahi battaenge jab tak mai naa kahun." (Dadimaa, I want to meet girl's family and the girl as a bridegroom so I can assess suitability of Vicky's future bride and her family! Dadimaa, Dad and Vicky you are not going to tell them the truth till I say so!) Then Maan left with his smarting ego.
Once Maan left, Savitri Devi burst in laughter surprising both Ranjit and Vicky.

"Maa aap haas kyun rahi hain?" (Maa why are you laughing?)

"Iss liye kyunki Maan ke dil aur dimaag mein jung chidhi hai." (Because there is a battle going on between Maan's heart and brain!)
"Matlab?" (Meaning?)

"Matlab yeh Vicky beta ki tumhare Maan bhai kaa dil Geet ko apna chuka hai. Aur woh tumko yaa kissi bhi ladke ko Geet ke saath dekh kar possessive aur jealous ho raha hai. Magar uska dimag usse pyaar karne se rok raha hai. Aakhir khaar iss umar tak jab uska dimaag ek businessman ki tehra sochega toh usse pyaar kaa ehsaas kaise hoga? Aur hummein ek parivaar ke roop mein usse issi pyaar ka ehsaas dilaana hai. Vicky beta aap humari madatt karenge naa?" (Meaning this Vicky, that your Maan bro's heart has accepted Geet as his. Hence, he cannot stand you or any other man with Geet and he becomes extremely possessive and jealous. But Maan's brain is stopping him from falling in love. Afterall if till now (in his thirties) he analyses everything from his brain as a businessman then how will he feel the lovely feeling of love? But we as his family, have to make him realise this beautiful emotion of love.)

"Haan Dadimaa, zarur. Agar meri thodi acting karne se mere bhai ke akeli aur beirang zindagi mein rang bhar jaayen toh main zarur aapki madatt karunga." (Yes Dadimaa definitely! If by my acting, my brother's lonely and colourless life can be filled with some colours why not? I will definitely help you.) Savitri Devi gave Vicky an affectionate hug and kissed his forehead.

TWO DAYS LATER
Khuranas had just finished their breakfast as it was weekend so everyone was enjoying their leisure time including Maan, when their suite bell rang. Vicky was spending the weekend with his friends. Maan opened the door and was shocked to see Krishankant and Radharani. After pleasantries were over, Radharani came with folded hands said, "Maaji aur Bhaisaheb humara parivaar aapke samaridh (illustrious & prosperous) parivaar se judne laayak nahi hai. Iss liye aap apne pratibhashaali (intelligent), purusharthi (hardworking) aur tejasavi (illustrious) suputr (son) ki kissi rajasi aur apki tehara samaridh parivaar mein vivaah karaa dijiye!" (Maaji and bhaisaheb, we are not worthy of alliance with your illustrious & prosperous family. So please look for alliance for your intelligent, hardworking and illustrious son in a family of your equivalent illustrious stature.) Radharani said getting emotional.

Stunning Maan and Khurana elders. With continous emotional and pratical suggestions finally Krishankant and Radharani opened up and narrated the decision made by Geet's brothers. They also said how much brothers' and sister love one another! Finally Maan who was sitting quitely and listening to the discussion but was unable to bear the thought of Geet going to some other home by marrying some stranger spoke,"Uncle, Aunty kya aap dono ko mai Geet ke liye sahi jeevan saathi lagta hoon?" (Uncle, Aunty do you consider me good enough as your daughter's life partner?)

"Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho beta? Tumse accha Geet ke liye koi jeevan saathi ho hi nahi sakta!" (What are you saying son? There can be no better groom then you for our daughter!) Radharani at once said.

"Toh phir theek hai. Mai Geet ko apna bannake hi rahonga, yeh mera vaada hai aapse. Magar yeh kaam mai akele nahi kar sakta, ismein aap sabko mera saath dena hoga!" (Good. Then I promise, that Geet will be my bride. But for this you all will have to help me as I can't do this alone.)

"Hum tumhara saath denge beta. Tum battao ki hummein kya karna hoga?" (We will definitely help you. Tell us what do you want us to do?) Krishankant said.

MONDAY MORNING
Maan and his team arrived at Rajsinghania Constructions to find Geet or Miss Singh in side hug with Mr. Rishabh Rajsinghania, and his one hand caressing her head. Maan felt extremely betrayed and hurt but kept his professional front and finished the meeting. Unknown to Maan himself the feeling of betrayal continued with him the whole night making him unable to sleep and finally burst out on Geet for no fault of hers! His ego and pride was immensely hurt when he saw Geet with another youngman. He was heart broken when he realised that the girl whom he likes and wanted as his life partner, does not have a good character (according to Maan)!!

PRESENT TIME

TEN DAYS LATER AT RAJSINGHANIA CONSTRUCTIONS' LOBBY
Rishabh had fixed a meeting today with Khurana Construction regarding the Government Project. Maan reached early as he was restless to see his obession. Yes his obession, Geet. In these ten days Maan understood two things -- one that he is strongly attracted or obessed with Geet and cannot see her with any other man and second that he cannot let Geet marry his kid brother, Vicky as Geet is only HIS!



As soon as he got down from his luxurious car he was greeted with a sight that he was longing for past ten days. But today she was standing with her head covered near an idol of Lord Ganesh and a pooja thali in her hand.





His joy was short lived when he found her standing with a handsome muscular man in a formal suit but without shoes. He went near them and heard their conversation,"Dekho, abb se jab pooja yaa archana karo toh bhagwan ke samaksh sar dhakk kar aana. Samjheen??" (Now see, every time you do any prayer or offering to God please cover your head in front of the God. Understood?)

"Haan kintu hum toh abhi avivahit hain iss liye sar..." (Yes, but I'm unmarried, so...)

"Hum jaante hain kintu vidhata ke samaksh vivahit athva avivahit sab yuktiyon atharva streeyon ko sar dhakkan chahiye. Abb chaliye kariyale kaa samay ho raha hai!" (I know that, but in front of Almighty married or unmarried girls and women should cover their head. Come now lets leave as its time for office.)
Maan was standing speechless seeing Geet with yet another man!!


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CHAPTER 6

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, RELIGIOUS STORIES AND TERMS; MEDICAL TERMS, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, LEGAL TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!

HALF AN HOUR LATER AT RAJSINGHANIA CONSTRUCTIONS' (RC) CONFERENCE ROOM
Maan with KC staff entered the Conference Room, to find RC staff, Ms. Singh and a tall muscular handsome man (whom Maan saw in the lobby). Once everyone sat down the tall muscular handsome man started by introducing himself, "Good morning and a warm Welcome to Mr. Khurana and staff of Khurana Constructions. I'm Neelkanth Rajsinghania, GM Finance. We are today going to discuss about the budget of the Government Project. I'll be assisted today by Mr. Jadhav and Miss Singh. Due to a family emergency our CEO, Mr. Rishabh Rajsinghania will not be joining us."



The morning turned to evening showing no end to the discussions. RC had arranged for lunch and tea for KC staff. As today's meeting was regarding the budget, mainly the discussion was between Neel, Adi and Mr. Jadhav making Maan's eyes, heart and brain free to wander in the direction of Geet. It seemed as if luck was on Maan's side as Geet was sitting opposite him. Geet was today dressed in a saree. Due to light breeze from the pedestal fan, the fabric was again and again moving away from her midriff for a fraction of a second displaying her slender and curvaceous midriff. Geet's milky white skin of her midriff was arousing Maan to no end specially when she got up and moved around. Maan was getting aroused and hardening more and more each passing minute when he saw her exposed skin. Making Maan want to gather Geet in his arms and march off to a private & secluded place where he could make passionate love to her till Geet's whole body was red and blue with his love.



LATER THAT EVENING AT 5:30 pm.
The discussion/arguements refused to stop. Geet saw her watch and saw that it was past her office hours. She discreetly whispered in Neel's ear as Adi was presenting. The reason Geet wanted to leave was not because the discussion was getting too technical but Geet was very uncomfortable since morning, seeing Maan's deep, piercing and penetrating gaze on her, making her feel restless as if Maan was mentally undressing her. She whispered something in Neel's ears and discreetly slid out of the conference room so as not to disturb RC or KC staff. But Maan who was watching Geet like a hawk since morning noticed her departure. Maan's temper, possessiveness and jealousy again arose seeing Geet coming close and whispering to Neel. Once Geet left the conference room, so did Maan on pretext of getting an important phone call. Although Maan had got out of the conference room but did not know where to find Geet.







He was debating what to do when he saw two smart and stylishly dressed youngmen standing next to a Mercedes Benz C class Cabriolet talking amongst themselves "Arnie, where is Gudiya? We are getting late."

"Yash bhai, we have to give her time as she must be changing since she can't go dressed in her behenji avataar to "Fire and Ice Club" (FICTITIOUS NAME)!" The man named Arnie replied and then suddenly exclaimed excited,"THERE SHE IS!"



Forcing Maan to look in the direction Arnie was looking. Geet had transformed into ultra mod and stylish girl. Dressed in black skinny jeans; black figure hugging top; off white jacket; 6 inch black stilettos and hair gathered high on the crown of her head. Maan was extremely confused as he had only seen Geet in her traditional Indian attire so far. Geet was looking extremely hot and sexy. With lot of difficulty, the hormones which Maan had supressed came back to the forefront again making him begin to harden. As he was very inquisitive about the relationship between two men and Geet he decided to follow the trio.

Location : FIRE AND ICE CLUB, 6:30pm.
As Maan already knew where the trio were going, he immediately changed his office attire and reached Fire and Ice Club before trio reached. Soon the lights dimmed, and Geet started dancing with the man named Yash. They danced one dance after another dance.





After sometime Yash and Geet changed their dresses and danced again.







Maan was burning by now in anger.



Maan in his this anger, started dancing with other girls present there.



He was as it is drawing attention from the opposite sex in his see through black shirt.



After three hours of dancing Geet was tired and decided to use the washroom before they could head for home. As Geet was leaving the washroom, her way was blocked by a drunk and lecherous youngman. Geet politely asked him to leave her way but he ignored. After 3-4 times asking, when that man didn't leave Geet, she side stepped and tried to leave but he caught hold of her hand. Maan was looking for Geet but unable to find Geet inside the disco came towards the restrooms and found her way being blocked by a ruffian looking guy. The man held her hand but soon he was lying on the ground, Geet had used a move taught by Veer and that lecherous man was now lying on his injured backside on the floor. Seeing their friend beaten his other comrades came but before they could attack Geet, Maan came to the rescue. Between Maan and Geet, three men were down on the ground with broken arm or leg but other four of the ruffians were not playing fair. Maan was alone and they were four but he was putting up a good fight making all four together unable to touch Maan, thereby making Geet look at him impressed and in awe as even her own Veer bhai-sa could not have handled four ruffians by himself, two maybe! Yash and Arnav finally decided to come out of disco seeing that Geet had not returned till now. When they reached near the washroom and saw what was going on and Geet filled them in with details they also joined Maan and within 5 minutes all ruffians were down. Yash called Veer and reported the incident. Meanwhile Arnav was highly impressed with Maan's stylish outfit, dance and decent behaviour. Besides which Arnav and Yash were highly oblidged to Maan and thus said, "Thank you, Mr..."

"MAAN SINGH KHURANA!"

"Gudiya you know him?"

"Arnie, Mr. Khurana's company is doing a project with Rajsinghania Constructions!"

"We are really thankful to you Mr. Khurana for saving our sister Geetika."

"Bhai-sa, mai washroom ho kar aati hoon." (Bhai-sa, I need to use the washroom!) Geet said pointing to her dishevelled appearance.

Once Geet left, Maan politely broached the topic."Oh so you are Miss Singh's brothers! Mr. Singh, I don't like to interfere with your familial values and expectations but I would like to forewarn you that your sister's respect and dignity is at risk."

"WHAT? Who dare raise a finger on our sister?" Yash said in anger.

"The closeness between Mr. Rishabh Rajsinghania and Ms. Singh; and also between Mr. Neelkanth Rajsinghania and Ms. Singh in front of the world and society are being misunderstood. Thereby Miss Singh's character is being maligned. I suggest you make her work some where else besides Rajsinghania Constructions. I hope you will not consider me impertinent as I have only the welfare of your sister in mind!"
Before the brothers could decide whether to rebuke Maan or thank him Veer arrived. Yash and Arnav explained what happened. When Veer turned to ask Maan his statement regarding the incident, he was stunned. Veer immediately saluted in Maan's direction.

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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Superb. Continue soon. Thanks for pm
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Excellent updates
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Nice updates
Maan start to like Geet
& become possessive for her
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Awesome updates..
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Amazing update
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hi thanks 4 da pm n double fab updates! superbly written! So dadi wants Geet 4 Vicky! Maan stunned! Maan attracted 2 Geet! Maan sees Geet her bro n mu! Geet leaves the meeting sensing Maan's gaze on her! Geet with Arnie n Yash! Maan sees Geet in a modern avatar! Maan helps Geet! Arni thanks him n says Geet is theor sister! Maan tells them that ppl assume something else! update soon
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poor maan is in for a shock only met his 3 bros rest r gone be a huge shock
Geet is awed by him intriguing
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nice update
maan higjly obsessed with geet nd he dnt want her to be with anyother man
maan saving geet
geet is also awed with his moves
eagerly waiting for next

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