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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

When Maan said after so much of suffering is this d kind of happiness he deserves I got scared whether he will reject the baby.but thank god..he is happy .the only insecurity is whether he can be a good father.ofcourse childhood experience may have effect.RK RV training scene was thrilling.i want to point out the dialogues I liked-

ur supernatural powers should be an extention to ur natural technique, not obvious weapon to defeat ur enemies

more we use our powers more weak we get...We must conserve our energy for desperate times...So, u must learn to defeat ur enemies without ur powers.

Good to hear maan saying that he wants his brother back n he cant risk his life.

God of war doesn't want Maan to forgive RK as he sinned.God of war wants only war btw d brothers.Bcz he feels that maan is misusing his power by doing that.Maan saying that he 4gave RK as he is his brother n he luvs him.I am touched by it ..maan luvs RK now also after a big fight.loved it.But will Maan gets brainwashed by God of war n fights against RK?then it will be very painful.Maan inviting RK back home...apologizing to him was emotional.I found one sentence very significant ie Madhu realizing that she failed to understand RK's pain while her sis geet could.1st when RK refused to 4give I became upset.but then his dialogue gave me relief- Ur place is in my heart , not on my feet.

Wow.I cud even imagine his cute angry face.

And I also feel that the beast wish to suffer and die.

Though short I found Vicky mahira scene romantic.Adi's luv 4 gayatri.so cute.but felt very sad that she died.painful luv story.rishbala fight was a shock.A simple kiss made RK so angry.Can't blame RK completely as any man wud react d same way.so sad that RK mu madhu sultan n blamed her.poor madhu was shattered.after when RK left I thought rishbala luv story is becoming tragic n I felt sad.but later RK apologizing n rishbala union was emotional n lovely.




U didn't understand Adi's story...😲...HE WAS LYING TO VICKY...🤣

I am sending u that part of my story...Read the highlighted part again...

"When I was 12, I was engaged to Gayatri the Princess of Dordale... She was very timid and u know, a perfect daughter of her parents...Although , everyone liked her , yet I could never bring myself to like her...She used to look at me with those love-sick puppy eyes which irritated me a lot...I remember her calling froggy breath' ...Gosh! I was a complete jerk at that time... he smiled.

"U still are... I said with an amused expression.

"Point taken... he chuckled.

"So, what happen? U fell for her? I asked him.

"Not exactly...The day after our engagement, she asked me to meet him near the beach...She said she would be waiting for me till I come... he breathed out as I saw raw pain flashing in his eyes.

"U didn't go... I whispered.

"Not that I intend to...I was asleep in my room...Next day I got the news that a huge storm hit last night which destroyed the area near the beach...She died there , waiting for me to come for more than 5 hrs... he exhaled out as his face became red.

"It was not ur fault... I whispered sadly.

"Is it? he whispered mocking himself.

"She should have been alive if I went to meet her on time... He said.

"U didn't know... I tried to make him feel better.

"It doesn't matter... he shook his head.

"Whenever grandpa introduces me to a prospective bride, I could only think that how can u start a life with a girl and be happy when u snatched it from someone else?' I gave him a sympathetic look.

"I respect the purity of the ritual of marriage...When I can't bring myself to love my bride, then how can I keep her happy? he said.I looked at him and for the first time, I saw the real Adi behind the mask of a rude, arrogant, manipulative playboy.

"How long will u punish urself? I asked him.He gave me a sad look and whispered, "Until I find her...But it's not possible...So, may be forever...

We sat there in silence as the atmosphere turned heavy just as our hearts.I looked at him as he looked at me with sadness.Then his expression gradually changed to a devlish grin.

"U lied... I mumbled in shock, making him burst in fits of laughter.

"Oh my god, u are so easy to get... He kept on laughing; clutching his abdomen.

"U know...I will get u for this... I glared him and then turned my face away in anger.

"Such an annoying person... I puffed my face.

"Oh come on...Don't be angry... He nudged me, making me slap his hands away from me.

"Okay, I am sorry... he said, but I simply gave him my best glare making him pout his lips.

"Why did u lie? I asked him finally, looking at him annoyed.

"I just wanted to teach u that u should not trust anyone blindly...especially those who tells a sob story...Always use ur instincts and then verify them... He winked at me , making me ponder at his words.



So , now u understand that Adi was lying...He wanted Vicky to hint that tragic sob story told by anyone is not always true...That can be a lie to deceive someone or to gain sympathy , hinting that his father King of Neotopia was doing the same to him since childhood...

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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n great updates! well written! Maan happy Geet is pregnant bt scared as well! he thinks abt his past! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
At first for some reason I thought Maan will bail out he will either deny or will tell Geet they too young but glad to note that he is honest with her telling her his fears the fact that his childhood memories still bother him but at the same time it really seems as if Geet has matured she has become more understanding and actually cares which is so different from that arrogant spoilt Geet
Madhu looking in search of RK and Geet tells her he is training in Neotopia and now Maan wants his brother back he feels its because of him and Madhu so just the two of them should go to RK making Geet disappointed .
The God of War approaches Maan but this time he wants to punish RK and Maan refuses , while I reading that I felt if RK gets punished for misusing his powers then Vikram too will have to be punished for not controlling his powers and Maan and Geet also must be punished 😆
but Maan chooses to just be him for now
RK and Maan's scene these two have such deep love for each other that not been together breaks them completely
I was a bit confused on RV and Dev's conversation
is Misha Rv's sister
Dev it seems he still longs for NT but is he not dating Ananya
I like Adi and Dipali's bond while I'm looking forward to seeing Mahira and Vicky come together the best appreciating part of Vicky now he is learning to understand relations he seems so much happier been in the company of these people that he once had come to destroy but now it feels as if they all part of one family
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan in the desert did not want to accept the ice phoenix and because of that he suffered a lot in pain then he accepted it just at the right time but now once again he choses his brother over justice so the ice phoenix now resides in him will protect him but Maan is been wrong because he is now been bias he is choosing who to punish and whom not to punish

I for some reason feel Dev dating Ananya has to do with the fact that Naintara entered her body that's the only reason he is attracted to Ananya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part maan is happy with geet pragent
N both rk n madu forgave rk rk comes to ask forgavness from rk but rk hurt n left
But last rk finally forgaves him
Madhu confesed to rk that how she going to kiss sultab but he is nice not took advantage of her rk hury n keft madhu uses her power to sent msny madhu s to search rk
Rk come madhu told him she only loved him sge is drunk on druken state dhe only see him in sultan
N nothing more than that rk gulity finally ther mu cleared good maan n geet engaged
Madhy tels rk they should marry rk tell she seen geet n maan thats wy she feeling like that
Dhen both r full ready than they marry nice contine soon dear waiting gor next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 112
Superb Update
Loved Maan,s reaction seeing Geet pregnant, he remembered his painful childhood and was scared what if he would not be a good father but Geet assured him, loved it
Maan and Madhu came to know about RK in Neotopia and both felt guilty, Maan was determined to bring RK back and in Neotopia RK,s training session going on
God of War and Wisdom told Maan that he is doing wrong by taking RK,s side as he is sinner and Maan will to choose one Lord or Maan and Maan choose himself and not ready to leave RK at any cost, loved it
But RK ka dream tu kuchh aur hi future plan ker raha hai
Maaneet and Madhu reached Neotopia and Maan-Madhu both pleaded for forgiveness and RK forgave nd came back home, loved it
RV came to know about KD,s death but mujhe Dev ki golmol baatein samajh nahi aayi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Chapter 112

Superb Update
Loved Maan,s reaction seeing Geet pregnant, he remembered his painful childhood and was scared what if he would not be a good father but Geet assured him, loved it
Maan and Madhu came to know about RK in Neotopia and both felt guilty, Maan was determined to bring RK back and in Neotopia RK,s training session going on
God of War and Wisdom told Maan that he is doing wrong by taking RK,s side as he is sinner and Maan will to choose one Lord or Maan and Maan choose himself and not ready to leave RK at any cost, loved it
But RK ka dream tu kuchh aur hi future plan ker raha hai
Maaneet and Madhu reached Neotopia and Maan-Madhu both pleaded for forgiveness and RK forgave nd came back home, loved it
RV came to know about KD,s death but mujhe Dev ki golmol baatein samajh nahi aayi



I am sending the part of Dev & RV's convo. in black and the explanation is in red:

"I was imagining what it would feel like to rid the world of the devil who tortures innocents... -Dev's dialogue...

In this Dev confessed that he was imagining a world where there would not be King of Neotopia (the devil himself) will be present...He was trying to picture a world where there would be no fear of the devil , no torture on innocents and no hatred in the heart...

Actually , Dev was hurt and having 2nd thoughts of being in King's team as an assassin after seeing that how King easily completed the ritual of KD without letting RV know...it was KD's right that his last rites to be completed by his only living family member RV , but King was too insensitive to even consider it...Being an orphan , Dev values family morals and relationship , so he felt hurt...Moreover he was in the team to destroy RK , but king now only busy with getting the powers of different amulets from the Book of Savior that the Gemini witches gave him (do u remember the fight of Mahira with the demons?)...King was silent and letting RK enjoy , so Dev has no reason to be with King now...He feels lost and confused...He had seen how King is torturing the innocents by gaining the power from the amulets one by one , so he is in doubt whether he is supporting the right person or not?

"Dev? he whispered, staring at me without a blink and trying to decipher the hidden meanings of my words.

RV never expected to hear such thoughts from Dev...When Dev accidentally confessed what was going on inside his mind , RV was shocked.

"Sorry.I haven't been myself lately... I paused.He chuckled at my expression which was a mix of panic and restlessness.

Dev became conscious after speaking and tried to cover up by saying that lately he was behaving differently...

"After Misha died, I used to wake up sometimes 1 or 2 in the morning thinking about what u said... he looked back at me.

In this RV confessed that whatever was going inside Dev's mind also went inside him when his sister Misha died...He used to wake up thinking about a world without King of Neotopia...

"There are things that don't fit in some places... he said, looking away.Then he gazed at me and said again, "U don't fit here...I started to sweat listening to his words.I bet he could hear my heart pounding against my ribs.

In this RV tried to hint Dev that he didn't belong to the team of King of Neotopia...King's assassins were cruel , thoughtless and selfish , but Dev was not like them...He was compassionate , kind and caring...Whatever bad things he did was in his craziness for punishing the person whom he thinks the murderer of his love NT...

"If u ever want to free urself from slavery, contact me... He said with a smirk, looking at me as if he could see me inside out.

RV being RV , a manipulator never lets any opportunity to slide...He tried to manipulate Dev to leave the king's team and join him for freeing himself from king's clutch...

RV was talking about everyone's slavery , not only his under the king of Neotopia...He was preparing himself , and was planning to prepare RK for the D-day to kill King , but only a savior can't do this alone...RV needs an army of strongest fighters...Dev has the power of tracking someone by sniffing his personal belongings like clothes , watch , jewellery or by just touching the person he can say where that person gone before coming to him...This power is rare and unique ...So , he wanted someone like Dev who would be an asset to his team...

"I don't know what u are talking about? I said, my shoulders sagged as I spoke.

Dev still didn't want to get caught by RV...He behaved as if he was clueless about what RV was hinting...

"I bet u know... he smirked again.I closed my eyes and let out a sigh of frustration.

But RV knew why dev was dodging him...

"I am getting late... I said with a grim voice.

"It seems the beast wish to suffer and die... he grinned and then walked away, leaving me thoughtful on the storm he started inside me.

When Dev still didn't let his guards down completely , RV commented that may be Dev wishes to die like a beast while serving the king instead of living his life in his own terms...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the explanation of the dialogues which I did not understand
CH.113
Awesome Update
Mahira confessed her love to Vicky but Vicky denied as he had a curse on him, poor Mahira, Aww!!!!!! Maaneet got engaged in front of everyone, loved it
RK got angry with Madhu bcoz she accidently confessed her kiss to Sultan in drunken state, Uff!!!! RK and his anger, thank God jaldi line per aa gaya, Madhu proposd RK for marriage but RK denied as he needs time and Madhu was disappointed


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Posted: 8 years ago
Chap-112
Marvelous update
maan was happy that he is going to be father
but from inside he is disturbed
maan and madhu decided to bring rk back
god of war wants maan to punish rk
rk decided to go back
RV and dev talk was confusing

Edited by heemasomani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chap-113
Amazing update
maan proposed geet for marriage and geet accepted it
vicky is very happy seeing his family happy and he is happy with them
mahira proposed him and he told her about curse
madhu and rk went for campaigning
madhu told about sultan and rk got angry
after some time he apologized and told about mohini
madhu proposed him for marriage but he said its not correct time
Edited by heemasomani - 8 years ago

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