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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

yipee i am first 😃
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Damm ...
!!!!
Geet pe Maan chhilaya .. to Geet already confused hai .. apni identity aur pregnancy ko leke ...
Maan ki stern reaction .. Pata nahi ..
kya ..
Kare ...
Yamini Aur samar engaged ..
why I think ki... Yamini ko bhi to as a bait use nahi .. karenge MAd King of neotopia aur samar...
waise .. iss
samar ko to koi nahi badal sakta ..
huh...
Apni maa ko marne ke plan ko support kia ..
Dono witches ki powers .. kaha gayi ...
any Clue .. !!!
Dono witches ki evil side .. gone yay ..
ek aur .. support ..
hehe Maahira ki Mom aur Razia dono spirits ban ke help .. karengi ..
Cool ..
Vikram getting cured ...
by moonstone .. holy water ...
Maahira suspect the medicine .. and now right medicine will get Vicky cured...
RK confessed to Madhu about his wrong act...
Hope Vicky will not be mad on his baby brother ...
Arjun kaha hai...!!!!!
Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new thread


every thing is ok now
rk feeling guilty giving wrong medicine to vicky
yamini going to marry samar hope she is not in any danger
vickram is recovering slowly
maan accept god of war in him
maan ask geet how she come to know about him in stren voice which is not his nature

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CONGO ON NEW THREAD DEAR...
IT WAS AWESOME READING LAST 4 CHAPTERS AT A STRETCH,...ND WOHH WOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KYA DRAMA ACTION THRILLER ...
IT WAS ONE HELL OF A ROLLER COSTER RIDE ...REY...
HERE I WOULD LIKE TO START WITH EACH CHARACTER...

OH BY THE WAY .. I LIKE THE NEW WAY OF UR CS...ND YEH BACHE...AA GAYE...I MEAN DER PICS..
SO STILL CONFUSION ...ANNIE IS ON ITS WAY .. I MEAN SHE WILLBE GEET KA DAUGHTER NA ..
DEN WAT ABOUT ...TRISHNA ..D SANAYA...
MADHU KE LIYE KAUNSA BABY HAI😳
BABY SAY YAAD AAYA...
FINALLY GEET IS AWARE...DAT ...SHE IS PREGNANT ...ND SEEMS LIKE ELSA TOO IS AWARE...OF THE SAME..
BT MY DOUBT Y SHE TOLD HER TO B CAUTIOUS...I KNOW ITS A CRIME IN SUPERNATURAL WORLD...TO GET PREGNANT BEFORE..WEDLOCK...ND CONSIDERING ..THE MONSTER..DANGEROUS IS HER DADAJI..I CAN GUESS THE PUNISHMENT SHE WOULD GET..
ND I THOUGHT DIS WILL BE D FIRST THING SHE WILL SHARE WITH MAAN WHEN SHE MEETS HIM..
BT YAHA TOH FULL TO ROMANCE AND LOVE WAS AT ITS PEAK...
AUR HO B Q NA...ITNE DINO BAAD JO MILE HAII
MANEET..BT DUHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAAN GOT TO KNOW DAT SHE IS AWARE ABOUT HIS POWERS..OH GOD ...I HOPPE HE WONT GET MORE ANGRY WITH RK FOR WAT HE DID..
OKAY I KNOW WHAT HE DID IS REALLY ...WRONG..FROM HIS SIDE..ND NO AMOUNT OF JUSTIFICATION CAN SAY DAT IT IS OKAY OR IT WAS JUST THE SPLUR OF MOMENTS..
DAT MADE HIM TO DO ALL DIS...

MAAN...
OHH WOW ..SO HE HAS GOT THE POWERS OF AMULET ...
WOW WOW WOW ...Y I STILL FEAL ...THE MISSING PART OF THAT PROPHESY IS LINKED WITH MAAN..AS OF NOW ..ONLY MAAN KA IDENTITY IS STILL HIDDEN AND WRAPPED ..ND NOW HE HAS GOT THE ULTIMATE POWR OF ICE ALSO...

I SO LOVED THE WAY HE PUNISHED ..DAT DEVIL WITCHS...DEY DESERVED IT..
BT NOW AM BIT WORRIED..WITH HOW MAAN GONA REACT ...TO RK ..FOR WAT HE DID...


I LOVED DAT FIGHTING SEQUENCE...IN DAT SAND ..DAT WAS THRILL AS IF I WAS WATCHIN IT LIVE IN FRONT OF ME...

RK...

YAAR KITNA REDEMPTION KAREGA ..YEH..FIRST VICKY...CHALO ATLEAST NOW HE IS AWARE DAT HIS ...BROTHER IS GOOD TO HIM...ALL SAY HIM SAVIOUR..BT IS HE REALLY THE SAVIOUR ..I DOUBT ...AUR NAHI TOH KYA..HE IS ONE WEAK...GUY..EMOTIONAL..
ND GUSSA TOH NAAK PAY REHTA HAI..
ONLY THING I CAN SEE.IS LOVE FOR HIS MAAN ND MADHU..

NOW I THING..AFTER MAAN KNOW S THE TRUTH OF HOW HE TORTURED GEET AM SURE HE IS REALLY GONNA GIVE HIM...PUNISHMENT ..ND MY CONFUSION DEN HOW COME GEET AND RK BE IN ONE TEAM YAAR..AS PER GEET KA DREAMS...


MADHU...SHE IS ONE ..LOVLY LADY..I MEAN SHE IS ALWAYS WITH RK ..COME WHAT MAY..IN THICK AND THIN...I ADORE DER LOVE..HOPE SHE WILL BE ABLE TO BE WITH RK ..AFTER
VICKY AND MAAN KA REACTION


VICKY...
FINALLY MAHIRA AND VICKY ARE TOGEHTHER...OKAY NOT IN REAL SENSE,.BT ATLEAST NOW FOR VIKRAM ...SHE IS WITH HIM..SPARKS ARE FLYING ...WHEN DIS TWO ARE TOGHETHE.R CANT WAIT TO SEE..DER START OF STORY...


THE WAY HE TRIED TO SAVE ALL RK ...MAHIRA...FROM THOOSE WITCHES DAT WAS SO SCARY..FOR A MOMENT I THOUGHT ..DEY GONNA BADLY HURT ...VICKY...

ADI..HE CONFUSES ME...SOMETHIME..BT HE IS TRUE TOO HIS HEART..

WHO IS DIS ARJUN AND SIMON YAAR..PLEASE LET ME KNOW ..I FORGOT ..Y DIS TOO HAD BEEN HIGHLIGHTED TO MUCH ..FROM LAST TWO PARTS..
AM CONFUSED😕😕😕 ARE DEY LINKED TO MAAN OR ANYONE IN PARTICULAR..


VIKRAM...😲 GOT HE GAVE ME THE SHOCK OF LIFE..WITH D WAY HE BEAHVED WT MOHINI...I SWEAR...
WITCHES ...DAT FIGHT..DOSE AMULETS ...EVERYTHING WAS NOTHIN IN FRONT OF
HOW CRUEL VIKRAM HAD BEEN A REAL MONSTER...
I THOUGHT HE WOULD HAVE KILLED HER..
THANKS TO SAMEER WHO CAME BACK IN TIME...WARNA ...SOMETHING REALLY BAD WOULD HAVE HAPPENDE...ND VIKRAM WOULD HAVE REALLY REGRETED IT...



SAMAR..ND YAMINI...YAAR... I AM NOT COMMENTING ON DEM

AS OF NOW IT SEEMS LIKE OUR RISHBALA...MANEET VIKSAM ALL GONNA JOIN DIFFERENT COLLEGE..SO WILL SAMAR WOULD BE A PAIN KYA😕😕

RV...HE HELPED MADHU..BT IS HE FALLINF FOR HER..OH DEN PLEASE NO..
WAISE ...RISHBALA KA STORY IS ON BED OF THRONES AUR KAANTE NAHI CHAHIYE...INKE LOVE STORY MAIN...


AMAZING PARTS... DEAR...

BITTUJI ..IS REALLY A CUTIEPIE...SO HAS HE ALSO COME TO OUR WORLD..
WAITN FOR MAAN ND VICKY KA REACTION
ND MORE ON GEET KA PREGNANCY...
BECHARA MERA RK...GAYA ..AB ...IS DER NO HAPPINESS IN HIS LIFE...FIRST HE WAS IN PAIN ...AS MADHU LEFT HER..COZ OF THE REASON HE WANTED TO B TRUE TO HIS LOVE..ND USKA CONSEQUENCE ...OF WHAT ALL BBLUNDER HE DID..NOW HE WILL HAV TO BEAR THE RESULT..OR SAY PUNISHMENT.
HOPE HIS REDEMPTION WANT BE MORE PAINFUL..
I WANT TO SEE...OLD MAAN ND RK BONDING ...WITH GEET AND MADHU..WITH ADDED ADDITION OF VIKIRA...ND VIKSAM...ALL NJOYING ...TOGETHER..OHH AND ALSO BITTUJI..HEHEH😃


WAITIN FOR NEXT PART.
I LOVE DIS STORY..ND WILL BE WIAITN FOR NEXT PART..
SORY FOR BEEN LATE...
REALLY HAVIN HECTIC SCHEDULE...KI HARDLY OPEN LAPPY IN A MONTH..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desire6

CONGO ON NEW THREAD DEAR...
IT WAS AWESOME READING LAST 4 CHAPTERS AT A STRETCH,...ND WOHH WOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KYA DRAMA ACTION THRILLER ...
IT WAS ONE HELL OF A ROLLER COSTER RIDE ...REY...
HERE I WOULD LIKE TO START WITH EACH CHARACTER...

OH BY THE WAY .. I LIKE THE NEW WAY OF UR CS...ND YEH BACHE...AA GAYE...I MEAN DER PICS..
SO STILL CONFUSION ...ANNIE IS ON ITS WAY .. I MEAN SHE WILLBE GEET KA DAUGHTER NA ..
DEN WAT ABOUT ...TRISHNA ..D SANAYA...
MADHU KE LIYE KAUNSA BABY HAI😳
BABY SAY YAAD AAYA...
FINALLY GEET IS AWARE...DAT ...SHE IS PREGNANT ...ND SEEMS LIKE ELSA TOO IS AWARE...OF THE SAME..
BT MY DOUBT Y SHE TOLD HER TO B CAUTIOUS...I KNOW ITS A CRIME IN SUPERNATURAL WORLD...TO GET PREGNANT BEFORE..WEDLOCK...ND CONSIDERING ..THE MONSTER..DANGEROUS IS HER DADAJI..I CAN GUESS THE PUNISHMENT SHE WOULD GET..
ND I THOUGHT DIS WILL BE D FIRST THING SHE WILL SHARE WITH MAAN WHEN SHE MEETS HIM..
BT YAHA TOH FULL TO ROMANCE AND LOVE WAS AT ITS PEAK...
AUR HO B Q NA...ITNE DINO BAAD JO MILE HAII
MANEET..BT DUHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAAN GOT TO KNOW DAT SHE IS AWARE ABOUT HIS POWERS..OH GOD ...I HOPPE HE WONT GET MORE ANGRY WITH RK FOR WAT HE DID..
OKAY I KNOW WHAT HE DID IS REALLY ...WRONG..FROM HIS SIDE..ND NO AMOUNT OF JUSTIFICATION CAN SAY DAT IT IS OKAY OR IT WAS JUST THE SPLUR OF MOMENTS..
DAT MADE HIM TO DO ALL DIS...

MAAN...
OHH WOW ..SO HE HAS GOT THE POWERS OF AMULET ...
WOW WOW WOW ...Y I STILL FEAL ...THE MISSING PART OF THAT PROPHESY IS LINKED WITH MAAN..AS OF NOW ..ONLY MAAN KA IDENTITY IS STILL HIDDEN AND WRAPPED ..ND NOW HE HAS GOT THE ULTIMATE POWR OF ICE ALSO...

I SO LOVED THE WAY HE PUNISHED ..DAT DEVIL WITCHS...DEY DESERVED IT..
BT NOW AM BIT WORRIED..WITH HOW MAAN GONA REACT ...TO RK ..FOR WAT HE DID...


I LOVED DAT FIGHTING SEQUENCE...IN DAT SAND ..DAT WAS THRILL AS IF I WAS WATCHIN IT LIVE IN FRONT OF ME...

RK...

YAAR KITNA REDEMPTION KAREGA ..YEH..FIRST VICKY...CHALO ATLEAST NOW HE IS AWARE DAT HIS ...BROTHER IS GOOD TO HIM...ALL SAY HIM SAVIOUR..BT IS HE REALLY THE SAVIOUR ..I DOUBT ...AUR NAHI TOH KYA..HE IS ONE WEAK...GUY..EMOTIONAL..
ND GUSSA TOH NAAK PAY REHTA HAI..
ONLY THING I CAN SEE.IS LOVE FOR HIS MAAN ND MADHU..

NOW I THING..AFTER MAAN KNOW S THE TRUTH OF HOW HE TORTURED GEET AM SURE HE IS REALLY GONNA GIVE HIM...PUNISHMENT ..ND MY CONFUSION DEN HOW COME GEET AND RK BE IN ONE TEAM YAAR..AS PER GEET KA DREAMS...


MADHU...SHE IS ONE ..LOVLY LADY..I MEAN SHE IS ALWAYS WITH RK ..COME WHAT MAY..IN THICK AND THIN...I ADORE DER LOVE..HOPE SHE WILL BE ABLE TO BE WITH RK ..AFTER
VICKY AND MAAN KA REACTION


VICKY...
FINALLY MAHIRA AND VICKY ARE TOGEHTHER...OKAY NOT IN REAL SENSE,.BT ATLEAST NOW FOR VIKRAM ...SHE IS WITH HIM..SPARKS ARE FLYING ...WHEN DIS TWO ARE TOGHETHE.R CANT WAIT TO SEE..DER START OF STORY...


THE WAY HE TRIED TO SAVE ALL RK ...MAHIRA...FROM THOOSE WITCHES DAT WAS SO SCARY..FOR A MOMENT I THOUGHT ..DEY GONNA BADLY HURT ...VICKY...

ADI..HE CONFUSES ME...SOMETHIME..BT HE IS TRUE TOO HIS HEART..

WHO IS DIS ARJUN AND SIMON YAAR..PLEASE LET ME KNOW ..I FORGOT ..Y DIS TOO HAD BEEN HIGHLIGHTED TO MUCH ..FROM LAST TWO PARTS..
AM CONFUSED😕😕😕 ARE DEY LINKED TO MAAN OR ANYONE IN PARTICULAR..


VIKRAM...😲 GOT HE GAVE ME THE SHOCK OF LIFE..WITH D WAY HE BEAHVED WT MOHINI...I SWEAR...
WITCHES ...DAT FIGHT..DOSE AMULETS ...EVERYTHING WAS NOTHIN IN FRONT OF
HOW CRUEL VIKRAM HAD BEEN A REAL MONSTER...
I THOUGHT HE WOULD HAVE KILLED HER..
THANKS TO SAMEER WHO CAME BACK IN TIME...WARNA ...SOMETHING REALLY BAD WOULD HAVE HAPPENDE...ND VIKRAM WOULD HAVE REALLY REGRETED IT...



SAMAR..ND YAMINI...YAAR... I AM NOT COMMENTING ON DEM

AS OF NOW IT SEEMS LIKE OUR RISHBALA...MANEET VIKSAM ALL GONNA JOIN DIFFERENT COLLEGE..SO WILL SAMAR WOULD BE A PAIN KYA😕😕

RV...HE HELPED MADHU..BT IS HE FALLINF FOR HER..OH DEN PLEASE NO..
WAISE ...RISHBALA KA STORY IS ON BED OF THRONES AUR KAANTE NAHI CHAHIYE...INKE LOVE STORY MAIN...


AMAZING PARTS... DEAR...

BITTUJI ..IS REALLY A CUTIEPIE...SO HAS HE ALSO COME TO OUR WORLD..
WAITN FOR MAAN ND VICKY KA REACTION
ND MORE ON GEET KA PREGNANCY...
BECHARA MERA RK...GAYA ..AB ...IS DER NO HAPPINESS IN HIS LIFE...FIRST HE WAS IN PAIN ...AS MADHU LEFT HER..COZ OF THE REASON HE WANTED TO B TRUE TO HIS LOVE..ND USKA CONSEQUENCE ...OF WHAT ALL BBLUNDER HE DID..NOW HE WILL HAV TO BEAR THE RESULT..OR SAY PUNISHMENT.
HOPE HIS REDEMPTION WANT BE MORE PAINFUL..
I WANT TO SEE...OLD MAAN ND RK BONDING ...WITH GEET AND MADHU..WITH ADDED ADDITION OF VIKIRA...ND VIKSAM...ALL NJOYING ...TOGETHER..OHH AND ALSO BITTUJI..HEHEH😃


WAITIN FOR NEXT PART.
I LOVE DIS STORY..ND WILL BE WIAITN FOR NEXT PART..
SORY FOR BEEN LATE...
REALLY HAVIN HECTIC SCHEDULE...KI HARDLY OPEN LAPPY IN A MONTH..


I LIKE THE NEW WAY OF UR CS...ND YEH BACHE...AA GAYE...I MEAN DER PICS..
SO STILL CONFUSION ...ANNIE IS ON ITS WAY .. I MEAN SHE WILLBE GEET KA DAUGHTER NA ..
DEN WAT ABOUT ...TRISHNA ..D SANAYA...
MADHU KE LIYE KAUNSA BABY HAI😳

ans)Previously decided to use grown up girls as the messengers of god (Annie , Sanaya , Trishna)...But due to 2 pages of comment and hardly 10 comments , I have dropped the idea of showing some important tracks and end the story soon , but updates will be once in a while..

Annie is definitely maaneet's daughter...Trishna is reincarnated Queen Portia of Forbidden kingdom whom the Gods and Goddess of Fate rescued and failed Queen of Neotopia's plan to get the last part of prophesy which Sabina (Mahira's mother and witch of gemini coven)handed over to Queen Portia...


BABY SAY YAAD AAYA...
FINALLY GEET IS AWARE...DAT ...SHE IS PREGNANT ...ND SEEMS LIKE ELSA TOO IS AWARE...OF THE SAME..
BT MY DOUBT Y SHE TOLD HER TO B CAUTIOUS...

ans)No one knows about the baby apart from the doctor and Geet and yes, Elsa...She is nearly 1 and a half month pregnant...no one noticed yet...She has decided to say it to maan , but will she get time to say it?


MAAN GOT TO KNOW DAT SHE IS AWARE ABOUT HIS POWERS..OH GOD ...I HOPPE HE WONT GET MORE ANGRY WITH RK FOR WAT HE DID..
OKAY I KNOW WHAT HE DID IS REALLY ...WRONG..FROM HIS SIDE..ND NO AMOUNT OF JUSTIFICATION CAN SAY DAT IT IS OKAY OR IT WAS JUST THE SPLUR OF MOMENTS..
DAT MADE HIM TO DO ALL DIS...

ans)U must remember now maan is not entirely maan...God of War is his part now...He will be righteous now...not someone who used to forgive RK's every fault without thinking much (like we saw in Ananya's case where RK compelled her and she was abused by goons and later rescued by maan)...But still in somewhere Maan as a brother resides too...let's see...😉




RK...

YAAR KITNA REDEMPTION KAREGA ..YEH..FIRST VICKY...CHALO ATLEAST NOW HE IS AWARE DAT HIS ...BROTHER IS GOOD TO HIM...ALL SAY HIM SAVIOUR..BT IS HE REALLY THE SAVIOUR ..I DOUBT ...AUR NAHI TOH KYA..HE IS ONE WEAK...GUY..EMOTIONAL..
ND GUSSA TOH NAAK PAY REHTA HAI..
ONLY THING I CAN SEE.IS LOVE FOR HIS MAAN ND MADHU..


ans)RK and Geet are similar in many ways...both love madhu and maan crazily...both have anger issues...both can be an idiot at times...both are overprotective...both can be manipulative sometimes...both are stubborn and do whatever they feel like...both are impulsive...both are emotionally vulnerable...

NOW I THING..AFTER MAAN KNOW S THE TRUTH OF HOW HE TORTURED GEET AM SURE HE IS REALLY GONNA GIVE HIM...PUNISHMENT ..ND MY CONFUSION DEN HOW COME GEET AND RK BE IN ONE TEAM YAAR..AS PER GEET KA DREAMS...

ans)RK and Geet's relation is my favorite part while writing...I love them...U can say I am obsessed with them as u can see in My Prince Charming too...Whenever I write about them , I can sense a forbidden feeling...and I LOVE IT!!!
They remind me of Bonnie and Damon


MADHU...SHE IS ONE ..LOVLY LADY..I MEAN SHE IS ALWAYS WITH RK ..COME WHAT MAY..IN THICK AND THIN...I ADORE DER LOVE..HOPE SHE WILL BE ABLE TO BE WITH RK ..AFTER
VICKY AND MAAN KA REACTION

ans)Madhu has changed after mutation...She is not the same person who took away every pain of NT's betrayal from RK...She can forgive RK for what he did to Vicky as Vicky is her teacher , not someone close to her...but will she forgive for what RK did to Geet?


VICKY...
FINALLY MAHIRA AND VICKY ARE TOGEHTHER...OKAY NOT IN REAL SENSE,.BT ATLEAST NOW FOR VIKRAM ...SHE IS WITH HIM..SPARKS ARE FLYING ...WHEN DIS TWO ARE TOGHETHE.R CANT WAIT TO SEE..DER START OF STORY...

ans)I will not show much of their story as I have decided to concentrate to main points of the story and end it...I am really disappointed with u readers...I have seen over 300 likes for some utter nonsense stories ...Looks like my story is worse than them...


THE WAY HE TRIED TO SAVE ALL RK ...MAHIRA...FROM THOOSE WITCHES DAT WAS SO SCARY..FOR A MOMENT I THOUGHT ..DEY GONNA BADLY HURT ...VICKY...

ans) Vicky is badly hurt...his powers are gone...the black smoke sucked all his powers

ADI..HE CONFUSES ME...SOMETHIME..BT HE IS TRUE TOO HIS HEART..

ans)He is gem of a person...the only character who can not be manipulated and very sharp...

WHO IS DIS ARJUN AND SIMON YAAR..PLEASE LET ME KNOW ..I FORGOT ..Y DIS TOO HAD BEEN HIGHLIGHTED TO MUCH ..FROM LAST TWO PARTS..
AM CONFUSED😕😕😕 ARE DEY LINKED TO MAAN OR ANYONE IN PARTICULAR..

ans)When Vicky was imprisoned in Tusk , Simon was the officer who framed him and arrested him...He wanted his brother Arjun and wife back who were taken as prisoner by Neotopian soldiers during a war...But when King of Tusk (Mahira's father) tricked Vicky to sign the papers to release the tusker prisoners , Simon's wife and bro were not among the prisoners who were released...
Arjun is the key to the prophesy...
Maan just delivered the message of God of war to Vicky to find Arjun...


VIKRAM...😲 GOT HE GAVE ME THE SHOCK OF LIFE..WITH D WAY HE BEAHVED WT MOHINI...I SWEAR...
WITCHES ...DAT FIGHT..DOSE AMULETS ...EVERYTHING WAS NOTHIN IN FRONT OF
HOW CRUEL VIKRAM HAD BEEN A REAL MONSTER...
I THOUGHT HE WOULD HAVE KILLED HER..
THANKS TO SAMEER WHO CAME BACK IN TIME...WARNA ...SOMETHING REALLY BAD WOULD HAVE HAPPENDE...ND VIKRAM WOULD HAVE REALLY REGRETED IT...

ans)The magic solution prepared by Mahira using moonstone power will bury the evil effects of Vikram , but it will never be gone...


AS OF NOW IT SEEMS LIKE OUR RISHBALA...MANEET VIKSAM ALL GONNA JOIN DIFFERENT COLLEGE..SO WILL SAMAR WOULD BE A PAIN KYA😕😕

ans) I have cancelled most of Samar's scene as readers only scream for maaneet and Rishbala...

RV...HE HELPED MADHU..BT IS HE FALLINF FOR HER..OH DEN PLEASE NO..
WAISE ...RISHBALA KA STORY IS ON BED OF THRONES AUR KAANTE NAHI CHAHIYE...INKE LOVE STORY MAIN...

ans) RV definitely likes her a lot...but all he cares about his revenge from King of Neotopia and for that he wants RK at any cost...

Edited by sanghita0000 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Where is Arjun..the lost bro of simon?good 2 c vikram recovering.he feels guilty of indirectly troubling his friends.he is breaking down n that scene was touchy.yash comforting him was lovely.vikram got a shock from samar yamini's engagememt.me too shocked.lets c like he said whether she will regret or not.which actress is yamini?I 4got.missing vikram sameera scenes.feeling pity 4 yash while wishing gud 4 samar yamini.y is samar getting hooked up2 yamini?whats his intention?gud 2 c mahira doubting abt medicines.

"Is death so peaceful?" I smiled and wondered, "The why does everyone fears it?"

Very meaningful sentence.

RK guilty of making Vicky sick.gud change in him.loved him confessing it 2 atleast madhu n her advise was gud too.will RK confess?Will Vicky 4give him?

Maan's inner war n inner turmoil 4 d change in him was explained beautifully thru dialogues.Maaneet scene was romantic n passionate.loved maan asking her if she wants 2 share anything with him.so sweet.will geet confess 2 him abt her present condition?

Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapters 106 & 107

So the Ice Phoenix had bonded with Maan is that the reason that before the connection happened he was so ill and weak but he seems calmer with the great power as if this was always meant for him only
Maan is the sky flying and his calmness just intrigues the entire situation
the witches are filled with fear maybe for the first time in their life and when he tells them that they are a disgrace it means he has now the knowledge of everything that has been happening
He tells Vicky to search Arjun and also takes the power away from the witches telling them to live a life of a commoner , did they power now also enter Maan or he does not need they power as he is now a God of War and Peace right .
So Maan ,Vicky , Adi , Mahira and Bittuji came back to the human world
Uncle Yash is back and sees Vikram in pain while he feels guilty that his friends his brothers have not yet returned and he blames himself for that .

Samar and Yamini engaged surely Samar is only doing that for some kind of plan of his so it also means that Dr Rasika must be giving Vicky wrong medication whatever Samar wants now she'll also be doing
In the other world Maan exactly knew everything the witches did wrong but here he cannot tell that the medication is correct or not I would have thought that even when he is normal he would sense any wrong around him as he is God of War and Peace

Oh I'm glad that both Razia and Sultana have gotten their due punishment yes they had once offered innocent souls to the Nyx and the very King that they served now offers them to the Nyx , they now feel and fear the same way all the innocents have felt .
So Razia was given a 2nd chance at life probably because she prayed for the first time in her life and it was done whole heartedly
Oh my word I had forgotten that it was RK that made Dr Rasika perscribe wrong medication to Vicky and not Samar
RK feeling guilty for his act and couldn't face either Maan or Vicky but its great to see that he now trust Madhu and tells her the truth what he has done and she very sternly tells him to confess before Vicky and accept whatever Vicky declares .

Maan entire experience of the Phoenix God entering his sould was so intriguing and his and Geet's reunion was beautiful she knows that he has supernatural powers but does he want to know who told her or is he asking about her pregnancy as she still has not told him anything

These chapters were mind blowing I thoroughly enjoyed them

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Chapters 106 & 107

So the Ice Phoenix had bonded with Maan is that the reason that before the connection happened he was so ill and weak but he seems calmer with the great power as if this was always meant for him only
Maan is the sky flying and his calmness just intrigues the entire situation
the witches are filled with fear maybe for the first time in their life and when he tells them that they are a disgrace it means he has now the knowledge of everything that has been happening
He tells Vicky to search Arjun and also takes the power away from the witches telling them to live a life of a commoner , did they power now also enter Maan or he does not need they power as he is now a God of War and Peace right .
So Maan ,Vicky , Adi , Mahira and Bittuji came back to the human world
Uncle Yash is back and sees Vikram in pain while he feels guilty that his friends his brothers have not yet returned and he blames himself for that .

Samar and Yamini engaged surely Samar is only doing that for some kind of plan of his so it also means that Dr Rasika must be giving Vicky wrong medication whatever Samar wants now she'll also be doing
In the other world Maan exactly knew everything the witches did wrong but here he cannot tell that the medication is correct or not I would have thought that even when he is normal he would sense any wrong around him as he is God of War and Peace

Oh I'm glad that both Razia and Sultana have gotten their due punishment yes they had once offered innocent souls to the Nyx and the very King that they served now offers them to the Nyx , they now feel and fear the same way all the innocents have felt .
So Razia was given a 2nd chance at life probably because she prayed for the first time in her life and it was done whole heartedly
Oh my word I had forgotten that it was RK that made Dr Rasika perscribe wrong medication to Vicky and not Samar
RK feeling guilty for his act and couldn't face either Maan or Vicky but its great to see that he now trust Madhu and tells her the truth what he has done and she very sternly tells him to confess before Vicky and accept whatever Vicky declares .

Maan entire experience of the Phoenix God entering his sould was so intriguing and his and Geet's reunion was beautiful she knows that he has supernatural powers but does he want to know who told her or is he asking about her pregnancy as she still has not told him anything

These chapters were mind blowing I thoroughly enjoyed them


Witches' powers didnot enter Maan...He just took it from them as they never valued it...He doesn't need their powers as he is much powerful than them , but he is new to all this...He needs time to realize everything like Vikram is slowly getting to know his immense power...Maan cannot sense wrongs...He is not god...He has some powers of god , like Jesus who suffered a lot , and had god like powers but not god...According to Bible , Jesus declared, "I and the Father are one, He was saying that He and the Father are of one nature and essence.

Ur doubt that how maan knows that witches have misused their powers? Well , does he need to know it? These witches hurt him and also hurt RK only to get that amulet following King of Neotopia's order...Isn't it enough? Moreover , he had read the History of Neotopia (the book he stole from Vicky's room in the farmhouse when he went to rescue Vikram from Vicky's clutch when Sameera broke up with him)...He knew about Neotopia and how the witches follow King's orders blindly and never hesitates to hurt innocents...

Vikram is not guilty that his friends didn't return...He is guilty that due to their mission to tusk , they missed school for more than a month and are expelled and blacklisted...U already know that Principal Shenoy of Mount college fears Samar and works for him , so naturally , he will be working against Maan and his friends, right? And moreover , which college allows students to take leave for more than 1 month that too during an important inter school preparation?


At the end Maan asking geet about what she was hiding was not about her pregnancy...He has no clue about it just like others (except doctor and Elsa)...He was pissed off that someone shared his dark secrets without his permission...HE IS MAD!!!
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Where is Arjun..the lost bro of simon?good 2 c vikram recovering.he feels guilty of indirectly troubling his friends.he is breaking down n that scene was touchy.yash comforting him was lovely.vikram got a shock from samar yamini's engagememt.me too shocked.lets c like he said whether she will regret or not.which actress is yamini?I 4got.missing vikram sameera scenes.feeling pity 4 yash while wishing gud 4 samar yamini.y is samar getting hooked up2 yamini?whats his intention?gud 2 c mahira doubting abt medicines.

"Is death so peaceful?" I smiled and wondered, "The why does everyone fears it?"

Very meaningful sentence.

RK guilty of making Vicky sick.gud change in him.loved him confessing it 2 atleast madhu n her advise was gud too.will RK confess?Will Vicky 4give him?

Maan's inner war n inner turmoil 4 d change in him was explained beautifully thru dialogues.Maaneet scene was romantic n passionate.loved maan asking her if she wants 2 share anything with him.so sweet.will geet confess 2 him abt her present condition?


At the end Maan asking geet about what she was hiding was not about her pregnancy...He has no clue about it just like others (except doctor and Elsa)...He was pissed off that someone shared his dark secrets without his permission...HE IS MAD!!!
I had never used a face for Yamini as she has not much screen presence ...Let's just imagine Yash as Manav Gohil and Yamini as Priya Bathija
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys , due to less comments and disinterest in the story , I have decided to close this story in a hurry and will try to do it by filling all the loopholes about geet's dreams which is actually preventing me to close it soon...I wish I had never written about those dreams then I could have end it soon...Anyways , I will still try my best to sum it up and end it as soon as possible...

I once told that I have started writing some crime stories , but I am not sure whether I will be posting it or not due to less comments and few likes...That's why I didn't post the 2 crime stories for which I won 2nd prize and critics award because I know the comments will disappoint me like always...Even in my birthday 5th nov , some readers left me...I thought that IF is a place where I can really forget my worries and enjoy , but this is the place where I always get upset nowadays...So , I will finish my stories and stop writing...that would be better...

I will continue to be a reader like before , so writers need not worry

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