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Madhu

@Madhu_31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Superb update
Beautifully written di :D
Finally maan got a chance to talk with Jr.Khurana ;)
Geet mu maan
Here Maan just told him why he did so..
The dual meaning sentences were superb!!!
Emotions well portrayed!!!
Geet too gave permission to Maan to see Amu any time
Loved the update!!
Thanks for pw :D

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#492

Nice update di
Really dev is sandwiched b/w maan and Dadi!!
This Maan is rude..man ka malik!!
Maan came to meet amu
He bought gift and chocolates too.
Even in this small age he is understanding his mom
Geet is angry and maan is superb angry
He poured whatever he had in his heart
And Geet is shocked to hear it!!!
Loved the update di
Thanks for pw :D

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#493

Nice update

Dev come to know maan want brought cafe double pay

Maan say not interfere his matter

Maan say dev going to dadima and not to say anything to dadima

Maan come to meet amu

Maan some gift for amu

Seeing gift geet angry on maan

Maan say geet he feel those years

Geet shocked to maan remember her and baby

Waiting for next update.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#494

hi thanks 4 da pm n pwd! Chap 6 - awesome update! well written! Maan n Geet's POV well portrayed! Geet is confused! Maan thinks abt Geet! Maan buys the cafe n cafe rest house! Dev perplexed n questions him! Maan warns him! he is nt answerable 2 him! Maan assures Dev! he tells him 2 go back! Dev says he will go to Chandigarh so dadi will nt question him! Maan meets Amu n aolgises! Amu is so cute! Geet angry n writes notes 2 Maan! he reveals wt he feels! Geer shocked! he tells her he will ftech amu frm school!

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#495

Super update
Geet's love for Maan is soo pure!! And so is his for her
Poor geet struggled a lott in her past and now too
Both loved each other but circumstances separated them!!
Grr that Preeti she got all credits for herself
Even they decided to abort maaneet ki baby
Painful life..but she took a stand for herself and their baby
Loved it!!!
Thanks for pw :D

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sairab

@sairab

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#496

Hai..

U ddnt remember if i commented fr part 5.

Coming tu dat update maan seeing his family struggle fr lif. Geets work as cleaner nd amus cute talk nd antics. Den he cm tu see dem at hm nd taking permission frm geet fr vsiting amu as long as he wl b here.

Nw want to read furder

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#497

hi thanks 4 da pm! Chap 7 - wonderful update, superbly written! Geet stunned n confused! Past well incorporated! she had 2 do wt she had 2 do! she cannot see him suffering! she feels complete after they get together! Maan also thinks abt the past! he was unaware! Geet had a tough life! she did everything 4 her son! he wants 2 give them all the happiness! Maan feels bad abt nt being there 4 them! update soon