MG FF: Forever Together Part 2 Pg 13 4th Nov 2016

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Hi friends,

Thank you for still remembering and waiting for my stories. There are many stories which i have to complete so i am doing it one by one. Some of my friends have asked me to update forever together so i am starting with it. Even i have started typing after a long time and this one is light hearted story i am happy to start with it. I will update only one story at a time. I hope everyone understand me and support me like before.

I have posted only 3 parts before.. Now i am re-posting them again as the previous thread is closed.



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TRUST and LOVE are two main things in any relationship, If we handle the relations with love and care then the life will be a total bliss. It takes time to understand some people, but understanding life partner is very important. And the time between engagement and marriage is very precious. It is the time where we can understand each other. This story is all about the journey of 2 individuals, how their life changed after the entry of the life partner in their life. This story is all about the LOVE AND TRUST.


PROLOGUE


A 23 years old geet is running in the whole house while her mom is chasing her with a glass of juice in her hand. Her mom stopped running as she is panting heavily. "Main choti bacchi thodi nah u tumare peeche peeche bhaagne ki. Mujhse nai hoga baba mujhse nai hoga. Main tumari bauji ko bulati hu (I am not a kid to run behind you. I can't run anymore, I will call your dad)" told her mom and sat on the couch still panting. Geet pouted and looked up complaining to her babaji as usual. "What is this babaji? I don't want to drink that pathetic juice, my fever is also gone now. But no one will listen to me"

"Enough geet, stop complaining to babaji. Tuje aisa dekhkar kya sochenge wo log. Kam se kam cooking tho seeklo shaadi se pehle. Par tum kuch karti bhi nahi tumare peeche hum idhar udhar bhaagna hai. Tum choti bachi nahi ho, ab ghar ka kaam bhi karna seekho (What will they think seeing you like this. At least learn how to cook before marriage. You don't do anything and we have to run behind you for everything. Now you are not a kid, learn how to do household things)" told her mom frustatingly.

Geet's eyes welled up with tears; she didn't speak anything and went to her room closing the door harshly. "Mujhe nai karni koi shaadi. Aap sun rahe ho na babaji (I don't want to marry anyone, are you listening na god)" and she is crying lying on the bed. Geet's mom opened the door and saw her crying. She felt her eyes too welled up seeing her princess crying. "Geetu" called her mom. Geet got up and sat on the bed making grumpy face wiping her tears. Rano (Geet's mom) sat beside her and wiped her tears.

"Meri bachi ro kyun rahi hai (Why my princess is crying?)" asked rano. Geet is looking at her from corner of her eyes. Rano saw that and smiled. "Actually I thought to prepare chocolate cake as my son-in-law is coming today. When my geet is angry on me I can't do anything" told rano seriously. Instantly geet jumped from her bed and told "No mumma, he likes chocolate cake very much, please prepare na" asked geet making baby face but soon realized what she told and blushed hard. "Acha???" teased rano. Geet rushed to the washroom blushing hard and to avoid teasing from her mumma.


Here is the prologue. I hope you like it. Please do let me know your views.

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Love you all

Chinni



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Nice prologue dear waiting for update dear continue soon
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Welcome back!!😃
Awesome Prologue😊
Looking forward to read this!!
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Congrats dear
Nice concept
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
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Fabulous prologue 😃 👏 geet is a totally pampered child of her parents and is also engaged and her would've loves to eat chocolate cake 😛 eagerly waiting to meet her would've 😳 and read this amazing concept and maaneet's journey.Continue soon 😊
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WOW!! quite interesting start ...loved it
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Arrange marriage or love marriage??
Geet was blushing :V

Well waiting eagerly for it :D
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interesting prologue...
waiting for first part...

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