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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Finally maan found his Puchki
Poor kid look like she suffer a lot
Maan so possessive can't think we'll
Thank yu dear
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago
puchki and maan
loved it
finally he get it
awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
loved it
how maan carved to see his child.bit when she was in his arms he couldn't just bring himself to see her face.
how delicately he hold her.not caring about himself. wrapped her in his coat.
little got scared seeing new faces.she only want her dadi
and hate her father.maan thought she hate him poor he


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part.
Finally puchaki with her real daddy.
I think puchaki referring kewal as bad daddy.
Waiting to read more. Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update,cont soon.
Atlast maan got his daughter back in his life.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I want to read it.. Pw pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
I was so looking forward to this chapter and now reading it was truly worth the wait , you portrayed Maan's emotions so perfect
The old lady just wanted one glimpse of the little girl but a fathers love and possession makes Maan want to keep his child safe within his arms , Adi could understand the lady but for Maan getting his treasure after six years its a normal reaction to just keep his child close to his heart and in his warmth .
the little girl is a replica of Maan and seeing her face he yearns for Geet as he needs her and their child needs her too it seems its the very first time someone shows love to the little girl but the moment Maan mentions the word papa she gets hysterical and like Adi explains its not for Maan but for someone else that treated her badly

Now my only thought is that Geet's father must not try and take the little girl away from Maan misunderstanding him thinking he abandoned Geet and the baby because at that time Maan had to follow whatever his uncle instructed .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Haya1022bmw

I want to read it.. Pw pls


Hey Dear this is one of two regular stories I always update . So to read this u should be regular. In starting I provide few updates. Then it depends upon response.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic update..
It was also a very emotional update..
After seeing puchki maan became numb..
He couldn't understand what to do & what not..
Adi told maan to go near puchki.. Maan went to her but he couldn't see her face..
He became very emotional & in a hurry picked up puchki to take her with him..
This activities made old lady woke up..
She told maan not to take ladoo from her..
But maan told that she is his daughter & he will take her..
Al last old lady convinced & only to take somethings with them as blessings..
Adi & maan took her from there.. In the way maan arranged everything about legal procedure..
All of them went to hotel..maan didn't see puchki's face till then if he became insane after seeing her..
She was sleeping he didn't want to disturb her..
When puchki got up she became afraid at a new place..
Maan consoles her..she asked about dadi.. Maan anyhow conviced her..when he told her about her papa she became wild.. After sometime becoming tired she drifted into sleep..
Loved the whole update very much..
Thanx for pw..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update
maan mat with his daughter with his puchki
she was sleeping with old sick woman who claimed her as her lado
she was very emotionally gave puchki & her belongings which were her memories of six years to maan,maan made sure to arrange for her treatment
after awaking puchki started crying for her dadi but maan & adi some how made her stope from crying
at the name of papa she again cried & said papa gande (2)

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