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ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#141

very nice part
loved it dear
waiting for more

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#142

awesome update

maaneet got married.

geet was not happy at all.she loved vikram but he turned out to be bad person.

she was so upset.but maan blamed her.she should have known before falling in love with her.uff maan bhi na.

I hope they clear their misunderstanding soon

loved it.

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#143

sounds interesting! wanna read more!

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Fabolousss
Interesting part..
Geet confrontation with maan osmmm n
U write it so brilliantly.. 😊
All are trapping each other. N now this Dr uff.. 😡

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Lovely prologue!!

Loved it😊👏

Spectacular CS!!

For the first tym I have read ur writings!!⭐️

Beautifully penned

Maaneet got married

Geet is cheerless with her marriage due turn of events that took place in her life

Maan was happy to have geet as his wife and was attracted to her beauty

Geet though was enduring some deep sense for maan could nt give in vowing to her love for her ex

Maan was skeptical abt geet's behavior and her justification for his question regarding her talk in the phone

Geet hid from maan abt her ex

Vikram wanted to take assistance of geet's situation but maan saved her!!

Maan felt dejected and betrayed as Geet hid such a important news of her life

Maaneet confrontation!! Geet blasting on maan and adding to her messy life even doc is blackmailing her.

Maan's agony and said geet that he will handle situation!!

Geet is confused with his weird behavior !! Quoting to his possessive nature

Looks like maan endures geet a lot!!

😊

The title tangled is surely justified in maaneet's chaotic and muddled life

Will be waiting for the next update!!

Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#146

awsemm maneet married maan attraction to geet

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Amazing update..

Waiting for next update..

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soma.gurti

@soma.gurti

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#148

awesome update di...n sorry 4 late comment...
so maaneet gt married bt geet is nt happy coz she loved someone...bt i reception n 1st ni8 she feel something 4 maan...
geet went to meet virkam...vikram try to R*** her...maan save geet...he want to hate her bt her love is bigger then his hatred...

that cheapo dr...blackmailing geet...

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rajshrip

@rajshrip

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Rakhi love the story concept of Tangled. 👏👏👏I am looking forward how they fall in love from a marriage of convenience. 😳

So upsetting for a mother to feel helpless about her daughter's marriage. aww maan is looking forward to the marriage. Geet feels something too but is denying it.

I am intrigued to know who is ringing geet. Maan in romance mood but geet needs time to understand her feelings. so sweet when he asked if he could lift her ghungaat.

lol when geet said that he has galat timing.😆 Maan is such a tease when he came so close to geet and told her to stop day dreaming.

How dare vikram blackmail geet and hit her.😡 So glad when maan came and rescued her. I loved his protectiveness. How could maan not believe geet when she told him the truth about vikram😭

Even the doctor is blackmailing geet😲😲. Good that geet told maan few facts about him having double standards.👏

Maan was trying reverse pychology to make geet open😆. I am so impressed rakhi with this surprise. 👏👏 Love how maan comforted geet.

look forward to the next chapter😃👏🤗

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#150

Teaser for new Update

Mrs Khurana I don't know u came here with salwar suit ..

Geet turn n retort what is wrong with salwar suit..

Maan leaned on him n said nothing is wrong..I like u with everything n even will like without everything ...

Geet turn pink when maan's lip give a quick lick on her ear n said I said about salwar suit cause its swimming pool so dress will be like one piece two piece or nothing...

Geet pushed him n said u r incorrigible...Maan smirk n said thank u baby...I know m too se** sply like this way n u loved to see n came ...u might be wet also hmmm..

Geet look stunt n eyes turn wide when maan replied pee loon teri teri...Geet turning crimson red with this

Hope u all like it

If anyone miss the previous update

here is the link

I have updated my FF "ll Tangled ll Maaneet SS Chapter 1 Page 20 Dt 21.10.16 "

Chapter 1 :- Page 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4720320/del-the-post?pn=20

Love

Rakhi