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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

First time I read this story
It was something related to reality
How the teenager landing themselves
A big problems
Their age their desired
And how they hiding all there messs from family and parents and society
Thinking they didn't not support and trust them
Maybe some think they will kill if they open their mouth
Here geet conditions worse then maan
Good thing he did not left her
Simply I want to read this story
After tanha its attracted me
I want to know how maan cop up with all this
What ever your decision
Please add me for this story
I will comment here or fb

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anjeeborg

@anjeeborg

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Nice and emotional update
Bring and ma'am both r thinking about themselves feeling bad for geet
Continue writing

You r a fantastic writer
Please write for it loyal readers who always likes and comments on it update
Nothing is wrong with it writing

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

prolouge means main plot of story

update means part of story

i love your stories n a regular reader

this is only i can say rest is up to you

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Don't stop writing...I love ur stories...It's that I am very less active in IF...but whenever I come either I update my stories and get busy in sending pms or I send u blank message to read and then comment on ur story...So , u will always heard from me and get my blank pm to read and comment ur stories...I can be late by 4-5 days but I surely read ur work...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

hi thanks 4 da pm n note! I dnt see any difference! u r a wonderful writer! so pls continue! thanks

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Hi dear,
U r a wonderful writer with his story it shows traditional effect as well as the emotions related to a daughters baabul.
Pls do continue the story.

Edited by alekhika20 - 8 years ago