MANEET 5S - WILL NEVER LET YOU GO**COMPLETED PG 1** 2/11/16

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WILL NEVER LET YOU GO


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"Don't...don't you dare to touch me with your disgusting hands...stay the hell away from me" Geet screamed, backing off from Maan. She was extremely infuriated. Her eyes were burning in rage, anger and fury, setting the entire atmosphere around, on fire of her burning gaze.

"Geet listen..." Maan tried calming her down stepping closer to her. But she was too antagonistic to listen to his anything at that point of time. She looked more broken than angry. Geet was a very calm and composed woman. She hardly talks in loud voice with anyone. But he had embittered her to the extent that she was burning in pain and disgust.

"Geet please listen sweetheart...I can explain" Maan pleaded her to give him one chance to explain. It was breaking him seeing her in extremely painful state.

Turning around, her voice echoed in the hall, "There is nothing left to listen Mr. Maan Singh Khurana...you did what you wanted to...now I will do what I want to." Her tone reflected the pain of betrayal.

Maan was staring at her back. "What do you mean?" he asked hoping that she would not say, what he was afraid of.

"I want divorce" she made a statement without any emotions in her tone. The pain she was feeling wasn't letting her to breathe.

His legs trembled as he heard her demanding a divorce from him. His wife...his Geet...who used to say that she could not bear even a minute away from him...who used to say she loved him more than anything else...who was ready to fight the whole world to stay with him...was now asking a divorce from him? No longer wished to stay with him? It just broke everything within him.

She wiped the constant falling tears from her eyes. She could not afford to present herself weak in front of him. She turned back to him and gazed at him. His face had turned pale. He indeed looked terribly hurt and broken.

For a moment, she hated herself for his condition but she was brought back to reality soon as her mind played the flashes of what he had done with her. No...she could never forgive him...for hurting her...for breaking her...for breaking her trust...for betraying her...for disgusting their relation...for disrespecting her love.

"I am going Maan" she said before making her way towards their bedroom to collect her clothes and other things.

She couldn't move further being stopped by his hold on her wrist.

"Wait" he said calmly.

Geet started struggling to get free from his grip. He tightened it more saying, "I said wait" His eyes met her. If she would have been his previous Geet, she could have hugged him right that moment burying her face into him and embracing his worries within her.

"You will not go anywhere" he said firmly still holding her in his grip.

"I can't stay with you" she said emotionlessly without looking at him.

He laughed bitterly. "Says the one who can't bear even a moment of separation from me...Anyways, you will not go anywhere...if you want I will shift to guest room but you will stay here...in this house only"

"You are no one to force me"

"I am your husband...we are yet to be get divorced" he reminded her that they were still married and rightfully and lawfully he was still her husband.

"We will soon get" she uttered avoiding his gaze, while trying to free her hand.

"I will not let you go away from me" he told her with a confident smile on his face kissing back of her palm.

"You will forcefully keep me here?" she jerked his hand before asking.

"I can never force anything on you sweetheart...you yourself will come back running into my arms" he was way much confident that he would never let her to walk away from his life. He had faith in their love that no matter what but the vows they had taken together around fire, they would never break them. They cannot...neither he can nor she.

"In your dreams" she said walking away from him.

"Time to convert dreams into reality sweetheart" he said making her to turn back at him. She stared at him for a moment feeling his words.

Soon coming back to reality, she ran upstairs in her room. Closing the door, she walked near the bed. She took their photo frame caressing their photo with her fingers making it faint due to tears drops falling over it.

"Why did you do this? Why? Did I fail to love you? Did I fail to fulfil my duties as a wife? Whyyy?" she screamed in agony falling down on her knees. Today she had lost her everything. He was her life. He was her entire universe. It was he she was living for and today she had lost her reason to live.

Walking towards the wall, Maan roamed his fingers over their portrait in the hall. "I am sorry Geet...I know you are hurt a lot because of me...but trust your Maan, sweetheart...Your Maan only and only loves you, Geet...I can never and will never betray you...I know what I did, had broken you but trust me I had no other options...I had to do it."

FLASHBACK:

Geet entered pushing the door of hotel room and her heart broke into millions of pieces by the sight she witnessed. Her eyes caught her husband there, lying on the hotel bed on top of Naintara.

Maan instantly got up seeing Geet there. Naintara gave an annoyed look to Geet saying, "What is she doing here baby? Didn't you tell her that, tonight is our night? Ask her to leave right now...I dont want any disturbances"

Maan looked helplessly at Geet. "Geet leave" he said keeping hard stone on his heart.

Geet stood there staring in disbelief at her husband who was lying there in some other's woman's arms and now was asking her...his wife, to leave from there to let them alone to spend their time together. He cursed himself for saying that to her but he had to do that.

Geet ran from there holding tears in her eyes leaving behind a helpless Maan.

After an hour, when he came back home, he saw Geet standing there...lost into their photos hanging all over the wall.

FLASHBACK ENDS:

"I know Geet what have I done, is not forgivable in your eyes and you are absolutely right in your place. But you have to trust your Maan, Geet...you have to trust your Maan...I will gain your trust back Geet...I will gain you back and that's your husband's promise to you wifey" A very determined Maan made a promise to himself.



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PART FIVE

And he was right indeed! This was way too much for her to handle. She couldn't take it. She fell down on floor, on her knees. She started crying, hiding her face in her palms. Her sobs echoed in the hall. Shifting towards her, he pulled her in his embrace. She started protesting but he hugged her more tightly. She finally put her arms around him, seeking warmth of his love. She was badly crying.

"I am sorry Maan. I am so sorry. I didn't trust you. I said so much to you. I even asked for a divorce. I..." her voice was all shaking. She was stammering not knowing how ask him for forgiveness.

"Shh...Geet...look at me" he asked her to look at him pulling her out of hug. She was staring at ground. She couldn't dare to meet his eyes. He made her look towards him, holding her chin. He wiped tears rolling down her cheeks. Her eyes met his. She could see only and only love for her in them. His eyes were enough to let her know how much he loves her.

"You are not at fault. You get it? You are not wrong. You did no mistake. Anyone at your place would have reacted that way only. Even my behaviour increased your doubts. It's me who made you think and react that way. You will not blame yourself because it's not your fault." He wanted to make sure she would not blame herself because she was right at her place. She was already so sensitive and all what happened these days had already affected her so much. He didn't want her to stress herself more.

"I just couldn't bear it when I saw you with Naintara. She had called me saying, you two are...together. And if I want to see it with my own eyes, I should come to that hotel. I didn't want to doubt you but just wanted to prove her wrong so I came there. And when I saw you with her, I was shattered. And even you asked me to leave from there which broke me even more and I just..." she told him how Naintara had called her and told her about coming at hotel.

Maan clenched his fist and gritted teeth in anger. He knew Geet could never doubt him. It was all pre-planned. He was wondering how did Geet landed at that hotel room. It was all Naintara's plan. Naintara had made sure to made Geet to react that way. She had forced Geet to think that. She had created such circumstances in which Geet had been trapped. Naintara knew Maan would never leave Geet so she planned things in a way that Geet, herself would leave Maan.

But that time, Geet was more important for him than that Naintara and her evil disgusting acts. He kept his hand on Geet's cheek caressing her saying, "Sab bhool jao Geet, ab se hamari zindagi ki ek nayi shuruwat hogi...hamare bete ke sath"

Geet's face lightened with a glow on his mention about their son. She squeezed his hand and said, "Maan, I want to see him. Please take me to him. Our child Maan...our kid...our son! I just can't believe this. Our son is here. Now he will stay with us. I will play with him, I will sing lullaby for him, and I will tell stories to him. He will be happy with us na... "she was so happy and overwhelmed that she didn't realise what she was talking. She was just letting out her happiness and he was happily taking it.

"Bas Bas Bas...yes he will be very happy with us. Let's go to hospital. He has just gone on you. His eyes, his nose, his everything is just like you." Maan was equally happy and shared the same excitement which Geet did. They both were actually too overwhelmed with the parental feeling they were getting by knowing about their kid, their essence.

"Let's go Maan. I can't wait to see him. I can't wait to take him in my arms Maan. Let's go." Geet was getting eagerly impatient to see her son. He nodded with a soft smile, which soon turned into a wide grin, getting up with her.

They walked out, making their way towards the car, with a pleasant satisfaction over their faces. The mere thought of meeting their baby was enough to plan their whole life with him ahead. His arrival would be completing their life. He would be completing them.

AT HOSPITAL:

Maan took Geet to the room, where their son was kept. Geet stopped at the door. Her gaze fell upon him...her child. She couldn't hold herself back. Her essence was right there, in front of her eyes. She felt like she has gotten everything in the world. Everything seemed so beautiful. She owed god for that. She couldn't thank god enough for returning her kid back to her. She was a mother now...mother of the bundle lying in front of her, on hospital bed. That feeling was incredible; something which cannot be explained but only can be felt. She could not express the kind of joy and happiness she was feeling in her heart, by the mere thought of getting to be with her son. Seeing him, took her all the pain away, she felt in past one year after losing him.

Her senses came back, when she felt a tug at her wrist. Maan, pulled her softly and walked towards him with Geet.

"Congratulations Bhabhi" Aman smiled at Geet. She nodded.

"Maan, I will leave now. Take care of Bhabhi and this little one" Aman told Maan, by keeping his hand on Maan's shoulder before he left. Aman knew, Maan and Geet need some alone time with their son. So he preferred leaving.

Taking slow steps, Geet finally reached to him. He was asleep due to effect of medicines. Maan was right. He was a Xerox copy of her. His features had exactly gone on her. She touched his little face, with her palm and she felt beatific at that moment. She went numb by actually feeling him.

Picking him up in her arms, she brought him close to her heart. Embracing him near herself, she relished that moment she had gotten today, which she had lost hope of ever getting before a year. She turned towards Maan and uttered being overwhelmed, "Maan...hamara beta...Hamara beta Maan" She was smiling, laughing through her tears.

Maan placed his hand on her arm, saying, "Yes Geet...our son"

He gave her a side hug, with their son in Geet's arms. They both stood there, savoring the feel of their newly completed family with their son.

"Sab kitna accha lag raha hai na Maan" she said tilting her head little towards him.

"Hmm" he responded in agreement.

"Ab firse kuch galat to nahi hoga na Maan?" her insecurities spoke. The things they have gone through so far, she was scared. She was scared, that something might again happen that would snatch their happiness.

Maan slightly pulled himself a little away from her. He took their son from her arms and laid him down on the bed. He walked back towards Geet. Taking her both hands in his, he looked into her eyes. His eyes were enough to assure her about the things.

"Mai ye wada to nahi kar sakta ke ab kuch galat nahi hoga, lekin ek wada jaroor karta hu, chahe kuch kitna bhi galat kyu na ho jaye, chahe cheeze kitni bhi galat kyu na ho jaye...ham sath me milkar unhe sahi karenge...aur tab tak karte rahenge jab tak ki wo sahi na ho jaye!" he told her, that things may go wrong because not always everything is in your hand. One cannot control destiny. Not always, you can prevent wrongs to happen. But he promised her, even if something goes wrong, they would together, make things right and would make until they get right.

Geet just stared in his eyes which were promising her, assuring her that he would do everything to keep his words, to keep her happy, to keep them happy.

So beautifully ecstatic moment that was! Today a family reunited! Today a mother got her son! Today a father got his essence back! Today a husband got his wife's happiness back! Even destiny must be smiling today!

"What will be name of our son?" Maan was making sure to put Geet's all attention in their family so that she would forget all other things.

Geet squeezed his hand in happiness and excitement about their son's name.

"Ansh" she whispered glancing at him.

Maan smiled. He knew it. His mind went into flashback when they were deciding about baby's name before his arrival.

FLASHBACK:

"Geet, it will be a girl" Maan and Geet were having an argument over their baby would be a girl or a boy.

She narrowed her eyes at him and uttered in a confidence, "It will be a boy...I am the mother and I know it"

"So I am also the father and I also know it'" Maan used Geet's words over her.

She pouted and sat down on the chair. "I said na it will be a boy" her voice softened with her face fell little down.

Maan went near her. Kneeling down in front of her, he said, "It doesn't matter it will be a girl or a boy. Whoever it will be, it will be ours. Our child...our kid...And we will love him the most and will give him all the happiness in the world"

"You know Maan, why I want a boy?...Because I want a little version of you. I want a son just like you. You are the best and he will be too." Geet's words left Maan stunned, beyond limits. She wanted a son, for him, just like him. Her love for him was something which never failed to amaze him.

He planted a soft yet a passionate kiss on her forehead, expressing his gratitude towards her for coming into his life. She surely had changed his perspective towards life. Her arrival in his life made him believe that there is nothing more beautiful than love.

"Maan, I will name our son as Ansh!" Geet exclaimed showing her excitement about their kid's name.

"Ansh" Maan repeated her with a joy shining on his face hearing the name.

"Yes Ansh! Hamara Ansh!" Geet once again repeated the name, stating the reason behind it. She wanted to name him Ansh, as he would be their essence.

Maan embraced his wife silently letting her know about his approval and his overwhelmed heart about her choice of name and the reason behind it. She happily hugged him back. She didn't need his words to understand him. She knew him even better than himself. Even if he didn't say anything, she held the capacity to hear his unsaid words.

FLASHBACK ENDS:

"I am so happy Maan...I love you...you made everything right" she encircled her arms around him while he protectively held her from her waist.

"I love you too sweetheart. Don't you remember what I have said to you...I said I will never let you go, and see I fulfilled what I said...you remember I have said I will not let our child go...and see I brought him back...Anything for you, everything for you!" Maan made a reminder to her that he had done the things he had promised to her. He had promised her that he would not let her go away from him and today she was with him. Once, he had promised her the same about their child and today he fulfilled that one too. Their life would be perfect now with their son, Ansh!

END OF THE STORY

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Nice start
Waiting to read more
Y Maan did this
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interesting starting...

loved it...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Congo 4 new story very painful start
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welcome back! Congrats on the TS! sad painful update! well written! Geet upset n wants a divorce! she wants 2 leave! Maan says he will stay in the guest room! Maan will nt give divorce! Seems like some mu! Geet saw Maan with NT! update soon
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what a dhamakedar entry yr
dono ka divorce kra ke entry lrni thi seriously
but maan nd naintara in bed nd geet saw them really shocked to know
eagerly waiting for next
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