MG SS ~With You~ #2 Last Chapter-24 Pg-45 Sept-24th THE END!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Beautiful update di!!

Flawlessly penned

Loved it

Loved the way u have penned geet's emotion in each turning point of her life

Loved geet's bond with Garv and priya too!!

Loved maaneet pain cum romantic moments in their relationship

Their support for each other!!

Will surely miss this ff di!!

Hope u r back with new maaneet ff!!

Will be waiting for it

Thank you for the wonderful update and pm di!!😊

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

Awesome and beutiful part..
Maaneet ka romance fully chalu hai and geet samjha gayi hai kuch scars ko fade hona ma time lagta hai..
Finally maaneet back to home and enjoy their moments with family mostly garv..
Wapas jane time pa geet sad hai and bakula tree ka place par jati hai tree ka warema sochti hai jo uska life ka har ek moment ka witness hai and wanha usa ek new bakula tree dikhti hai and wo khush hai..
Back to us maaneet apne life and romance ma khoya hua hai but garv ko miss kar rahe hai and apne baby ka liya plan karta hai..
Waiting for next pary toh ab nahi write kar sakti story end jo ho gaya aur epilouge toh nahi milega 😔
Thanks for the Wonderfull story..
Thanks for the pm..

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Kawan

@Kawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

awesome update

can't believe the story ended so soon.

geet now can more clearly.and they made a trip to India.

both maaneet got so attached to Garv.and whole family waited for geet to come all well so they could officially give name to Garv.i loved that.

but they had to come back.to complete everything so that they can go back.

seeing bakula tree geet had a new excitement that everything is going to be fine now onwards.

this tree always gave geet a new hope.

loved it.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Part 24 - Lovely ending. With the hope that soon they will get their Garv and complete this incomplete family. I liked that how you showed this little hope in terms of growing new bakula tree in her courtyard.

Maan & geet were gelled so well with garv. Geet wished to have her own baby. Everything was going fine with others. Her badi ma was improving. Everywhere there is hope for living. Liked priya-garv-geet bond. She was not ready to go back.

Loved maaneet romance too. They were with each other in every thick & thin.

Thnx for this lovey story of maaneet.

Will be waiting for your next story.

Pl. continue "Hello Beautiful".

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Wonderful end
beautifully written
loved it

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful SS! superbly written! LP - fab update, well written! Maaneet go 2 India!! Geet happy! she meets Garv! Geet overwhelmed wen Priya says she is Garv's choti maa! Geet n Maan enjoy n return home! Maan teases Geet! she wants a baby! Maan agrees! terrific SS! Maaneet were there 4 each other all the time! so sad no epilogue! can we nt change ur mind??? think abt it pls! thanks😊👏⭐️

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

That was just amazing 👏
Finally everything settled down 😊
The bakula tree was also growing again 😃
thanku for pm

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#268

fantastic update
wow what a start and amazing ending
beautifully written
I am speechless
u r amazing writer
waiting for ur next ff

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gurti227

@gurti227

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#269

Hey ! Sooperb Last update !!
Ok Initially i didnt feel connected to the ff..! Neither did i understood what was going on in the story ! Maybe i always used to read the updates in a hurry !😆 Your writing used to keep me hooked !
Kabhi Kabhi toh i used to go back and read what happened in the previous update and then come back to the present update 😛
I got involved in the story when those tragic incidents happened to the family ! Just loved the way you showed how everyone was there for everyone😃
I love this MAAN ❤️ I love this GEET ❤️ I love WITH YOU ❤️
Will be waiting for your next works !
Isse bada Comment nahi likh sakti yaar ! 😛