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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 43

G-Forget...forget we are married...it's easy to forget isn't it [hinting how he forgot their numerous times marriage and proofs in the crazy night...forgot about her as Tara came]

M-I can't forget it, just like you can't forget everything else...I am going to the deck

Maan uth kar chala jaata hai

Geet doesnt stop him, neither was he expecting her to sop him

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Geet cruise ke deck ke paas ghanto waves dekh rah thi

Geet chup chap jaise uss deep sea men gumm thi her eyes reflecting the depth of the sea

Maan come to stand next to her...Quietly...hoping to enjoy a relax moment with her while she wasn't on tender hooks and he wasn't trying to convince her relax her

Geet wahim khadi hai jaise waqt thahar gaya ho aur wo bhi waqt ke saath theher gai ho

She is revisiting every moment she spent with him, her dreams for them and her aspirations; which would breathe their last today

She feels his presence near him and turns towards him

He's holding a bunch of exotic flowers lowered in his hand

G-Need to say something?

He turns to look at her shows her flowers

M-There's a flower exhibition and seed sale going on ...thought you might be interested in going there

She ignores the flowers and what he says

G-I need to say something

Maan tilts his head questioningly

M-I am all ears

G-I am sorry

She looks at the sea

G-I guess I have been very selfish, not thinking about you

She takes a breath looking the sea

G-I guess we have been in each other's position...life is strange...no? I loved you...you loved Tara...Tara doesnt love you...you don't love me...the same feeling isn't it...I know it's hard to live with it...but you had lived with it for years...same like...I can't give your place in my heart to Talos...you can't give Tara's place in your heart to me...and its fine...perfectly, fine

Maan looks down then back at her

M-I don't love Tara

Geet hasn't looked at him...still looking at the waves

She turns to him

G-It was nice knowing you. Thanks for everything

She extends her hand

Maan grasps her hand

She shakes it a little and then leaves

He doesnt let go of her

M-I don't love Tara and Tara never loved me or even liked me. I didn't get time enough to fall in love with you but I wanted to...really wanted to. I didn't get time enough to understand you more and to fall in love with you but I always liked you; I more than liked you

G- emm..leave my hand..please

M-Tara isn't coming back and I don't want her back; but I am here with you and you don't want me back...two of us had much more between us than Tara or I ever had or could have had.. coz it wasn't real.. but this is...and you are not willing to give this half a chance

G- Leave...please...my hand...

M- Why should I let go of your hand when you offered it to me?

G-We had nothing! I was your little drunk secret, almost a secret keep

M-No! You know that's not true...I was and I am never ashamed of you, why would you be a secret?

G-It doesnt matter Maan...i really hope...someday you get Tara...and someday Tara should really understand your love...and how lucky she is to have a man who loves her so much...I would pray. It was nice knowing a person like you. Thanks for everything. Your mom is also very nice

M-No, I don't want Tara, I dint need Tara and even if she comes back I am not getting back with Tara ever

Geet ke gale men ek chotta s amangal sutra tha, wo nikaal ke de diya

M- A string of beads mean nothing to me i am not a religious man nor a traditional one.Take them off throw them away it would mean nothing

G-Hmm...good...it was the last symbol of the marria-...mistake

She drowns the mangal sutra into the sea

M- That's not a symbol it is just a string of beads...you present marriage with a string? A string of bead is all that this all is to you ?

G- Now...leave..my..hand

M-What if I don't leave it?

G-Huh? You have to leave it. How stupid!

M-Why do I have to leave it? I like holding on it very much thank you

G-Please...Maan leave it...I have to go. What kind of childishness is this?

M-You don't respond well to adult behaviors so I am trying this, and where do you have to go that I can't come?

G-Ladies room

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Posted: 7 years ago
geet is not ready to understand n accept maan's feelings n love for her
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet has been deeply hurt by Maan but now he is trying to mend their relation
I do think she should at least give him a chance
both don't truly know each other , he was always drunk and ended up at her door
while her care turned into love its not her fault neither is it his fault but yes he did do wrong
when he ignored Geet and took Tara back as if she never left him
but now Geet can see he is trying she should at least have a serious talk with him tell him how she feels and what he did to her let him know how he hurt her , just walking away cannot solve anything
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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update, well written! Indeed Maan has hurt her! but he is making an effort and Geet shld give him a chance! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely Update.. 😃
Maan should've get a chance.. he deserve it..
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm. Nice update.
Geet thinking of moments of maaneet togetherness n with that the memories of tara n maan walked out with tara also come. She cant forget those things easily. But now i am feeling she is planning something big thats why asking sorry from maan.
Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Glad to see the ice melting between them!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update

Yes Maan did hurt Geet but now he is also trying he is making an effort
to make their marriage or relation work
Geet should at least speak to him and hear him out then she should take decision
she needs to tell Maan what exactly he did to her and should also know the depth of her pain
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Posted: 7 years ago
maan trying his best to convince geet and assure hr that tara have no place in his life

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