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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

All happening in one of d areas of Chandigarh where middle class family is enjoying their Sunday mornings like any other family. This house is also running with d normal pace like any other house

Old doing religious work, man of d house reading newspaper, woman in d kitchen preparing special Sunday brunch and as usual children still sleeping

Elderly woman asked her daughter in law that whether children are awake or not
Lady said no Maaji both are sleeping as u know both were tired one was studying and other u know doesn't want to get up early on his off day

Elderly women said to his DIL that do tell ur son to talk to me when he is awake
DIL said ok Maaji I will tell him
Man of d house said can some one give me a cup of tea and lady said no u already have it two times now u will get nothing
He said ok if u don't want to give then fine i will tell nakul to make tea for him
He called nakul and asked him to make tea for him

When nakul was about to move woman said nakul u will not make tea for raj and if u do so then forget ur next week vacation which u wanted
Nakul got frightend and leave d place as he knows how strict his madam is

Raj: Arpita this is not fair u can't threaten him
Arpita: of course I can dear and if u want something special in lunch and dinner then sit quietly else u will get boiled food
Raj: Sweety u can't threaten me I m ur husband not ur servant neither ur children
Arpita: But u know u behave more like a kid so better u understand or forget anything
Raj: this is not fair maa see wat ur daughter is Doing with me and u r laughing

Dadi: wat can I do u both fight like a kid when ur own son is at d age of Marriage and dare u say anything to my daughter she is right so no more arguments
Raj stay quiet and moved to d tv room to watch tv

Dadi: Arpita beta can u pls wake maan pls I need to talk to him and he has to leave in d evening so I need to talk it's very urgent
Arpita: maa do u think it's rt time to talk to him
Dadi: yes beta this is d rt time and I m saying for d last time u both will not say anything, now go and wake him up

Arpita went to maan room to wake him up, he was sleeping like a baby on his stomach so his mom came near him and moved his hand in his hair and said wake up beta ur dadi is calling u
Maan: mom pls just 5 mins u know how deprive I m of sleep pls mom let me sleep
Arpita: I know beta but see d time it's already 12 so get up fast u have ur train in d evening, so get up fast and come downstairs ur dadi is waiting for u
Maan: is Annie awake
Arpita: no
Maan is thinking something and said mom u go I will wake her
Arpita warn her not to do any mischief with her
Maan said don't worry mom I will not do anything

Arpita went and maan went to washroom to freshnup and after that he went to his little sister room who was sleeping with all d books scattered on d bed

First he kissed Annie on her forehead and then he collected her books and arranged it on her study table after that he smiled that it's time to take revenge baby

He pick up d jug of water from side table and poured it out on Annie
Annie screamed and get up with her jerk to find who did this she was rubbing her eyes when she saw her big brother laughing on her
Annie : Bhai u did this I will not leave u
Annie started running behind maan and both were running in d whole house

Both went downstiars and he hid behind his mom and told her that pls tell this chipkali to stay away from me

Annie said I m chipkali now u see wat I do she pick up d glass of water and throw it out on maan but maan bend down and it straight went to nakul

Maan and Annie said sorry to nakul and again running in d whole House
Maan went to his dadi and told her to stop Annie but Annie said that Bhai throw d jug of water on me

Dadi look at Annie and maan with angry voice and told both in stern voice that STOP IT
Both stand straight and they knew if dadi is angry then both are gone

She told Annie to go in her room and fresh up and told maan to come with her

Dadi: maan wat was that why u always tease ur little sister
Maan: dadi u know I love her and I like to tease and u know how much I miss her and u all when I m in delhi

Dadi: That doesn't mean that u tease her ok leave it I need to talk to u something important
Maan: yes dadi mom told me that u need to talk to me
Till then Annie came and sit next to his dadi and complained about his brother
Dadi told maan to say sorry to her
Maan said sorry and both hugged each other and then their mom called them to have their food

Maan looked at Dadi and she said u both go i will talk to u later

Both went and on d Dining table both were teasing a lot and all d elders were watching the sibling love

PRECAP: DADI TALKS TO MAAN

PS: SO FRIENDS THIS IS MY FIRST PART DO TELL ME HOW IT IS
I KNOW THIS WILL BE BOARING AS THERE WAS NO GEET BUT THIS WAS IMP TO SET D BASE
GEET WILL COME SOON
PLS LIKE AND COMMENT

NEXT PART
Edited by lovemaaneet90 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb family time!!
Maan teasing aanie..both r fighting like kids!!
What Dadi want to talk with Maan?eager to know!!
Loved this update!!
Plzz continue soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice banner and awesome family .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Like first part didyou post it at fb too yesterday I read it same banner name
That way ask
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hira2010

Like first part didyou post it at fb too yesterday I read it same banner name
That way ask



Yes before this I have started on fb but someone told me that u should start on if so I have started it here
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update! well written! nice intro into Khurana family! Dadi wants 2 talk 2 Maan! his mom awakens him! Maan goes 2 wake up Annie! he takes revenge n awaken her by pouring a jug of water on her! Annie upset! Maan n Annie fight! Dadi stops them! Maan n Annie share a wonderful bond! Maan stays in Delhi! update soon! pls add me 2 ur pm list! thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start ..
like the happy family ..all are together . liked the khurana siblings bond in this . waiting for next .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

After having their brunch Annie went to his room for study and maan went to dadi room to talk

As he knocked her room she said to come inside and sit
He came and sit beside dadi and asked dadi wat she wanted to say
Dadi: maan wat I m going to say pls listen to me carefully and don't take any decision in haste
Maan: dadi u r scaring me pls tell me wat u want to say pls don't hesitate to say anything

Dadi said u know maan that delhi and here in Chandigarh I always go to one orphanage where Sunita is in charge of delhi branch and u know she is my childhood friend
Maan: yes dadi I know wat happen last month I have gave d donation which u told me, do Aunty need anything I will give as soon as I reach delhi

Dadi: no beta its nothing like that last month when I came to delhi and in her orphnage i saw one girl she was very simple and beautiful
She was under d guardiance of Sunita as she is an orphan becoz her parents died when she was at d age of 18 and her family throw her out of their family

Maan: dadi wat u r trying to say do that girl need any help, tell me I will help u know I can't say no to u or Sunita Aunty
Dadi: no beta its not like that me, raj and Arpita want that u should get married to that girl
Maan was shocked after listening to his dadi
Dadi: Maan last week Arpita asked do u have somebody in ur life and u only said that u don't have anyone

Maan was still in shock and was not uttering a single word

Dadi: beta u have to get married u r 28 and this is r rt age to get married u r earning Gud
Even u have ur own house in delhi wat else u want and moreover that girl will get a home which she deprived from so many years

Maan: I know dadi but it's so sudden
Dadi: we are not forcing u beta, at d end decision will be urs if u don't like that girl then we will not force u and yes I m asking u again u don't have anyone in ur life

Maan: no Dadi I have no one in my life, ok tell me wat is her name and wat does she do
Dadi: she is a fashion designer, she also lives in delhi, she lives by her own. If u want u can meet her whenever u want

Maan: dadi can I ask u something
Dadi: of course beta
Maan: dadi does girl know about this proposal
Dadi: yes beta
Maan: so wat is her decision and I hope that no one is forcing her
Dadi: beta no one is forcing her and she is ready to meet u
Even we all want that u both Should meet each other and then take a decision
Maan didn't said anything
Dadi show him d photograph on her phone but maan didn't said anything and she said that she will send d pic on his phone
Now u go and take some rest and do tell me wat u have decided

Maan went to his room and was thinking wat Dadi has said
Annie came to his room and saw his brother in deep thought so decided to ask
Annie: Bhai wat happened to u, did Dadi scold u
Maan: no bacha she scold me actually she
Maan was in dilemma whether to tell Annie or not but Annie was more of his best frnd then his sister

Maan: bacha actually Dadi gave me a proposal of a girl and I m confused wat to do as it was all of a sudden
Annie: Bhai I m sure Dadi haven't Forced u
Maan: no she haven't and u know she will never
Annie: then wats d prob ok tell me about that girl

Maan said u know Sunita Aunty she use to live with Aunty in her orphanage but now she works with some company as a fashion designer and lives by her own self in delhi
Annie: Bhai I think u should meet her and then decide wat u want
U never know wat will happen after that so think upon that
Annie: did d girl know about u
Maan: yes she knows
Annie: then wats d prob Bhai go and meet her

PRECAP: MAAN DECISION

PS: THANK U FOR UR SUPPORT ON PART 1
I HOPE U ALL WILL GIVE ME SUPPORT AND LIKE AS WELL AS COMMENT ON THIS TOO
ITS A KIND REQUEST TO EVERYONE PLS DONT GIVE ONE WORD OR ONE LINE COMMENT THEN I DONT KNOW UR VIEWS
I M NEW SO WILL LEARN NOTHING IF U GUYS DONT COMMENT PROPERLY

NEXT PART
Edited by lovemaaneet90 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sona have patience. Dont loose heart... Very soon you would get what you deserve ❤️

awesome up shona but me waiting for new one 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dragon-Heart

Sona have patience. Dont loose heart... Very soon you would get what you deserve ❤️

awesome up shona but me waiting for new one 😉



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