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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh Geet feel bad for her but she needed to know the fact and truth . Loved both parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Maan told geet the truth... Geet very much hurt
Jiya n geet bonding 👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Guys!!!
Thanks for your patience and sorry to keep you waiting!!!

Had a hectic week... Yet again!!!

Working on chapter 8 now ^^


Thanks for your lovely feedback ^^
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part ..
Good that Maan told the truth to Geet ..
She deserved to know that ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Guys!!!
Sorry For Keeping You Up And Thanks For Your Patience😳😳😳
Thanks For Your Feedback On The Previous Part😛😛😛
Without Much Ado Here Is The Next Chapter!!!





CHAPTER 8


"Vicky... I really don't want you to go on telling this to your friends. Get this clear," Maan warned Vicky as he finished telling him the whole thing. The expressions he carried on his face conveyed to Maan how bad he was feeling for his friend. Yet he had to ensure himself that stays between them. Apart from him, Jiya and now Vicky as well, no one should come to know about that. He was clear on that stance.



"Don't worry Bhai," Vicky said, slowing blinking, to give him the assurance he needed. "I won't tell them. In fact, I won't even talk to Geet or Jiya on that matter," he convinced Maan.



"Hmmm!!! Good. Now go to bed. Remember you've got your class with me tomorrow. Make sure the sypnosis for your thesis is all prepared and good," he reminded him.



"Sypno... Oh shiiite!!!" He cursed, biting his tongue as Maan shook his head at him. As expected, he thought to himself. "All the best Vicky Boy," he teased, turning around and walked to his room.



"Good night bro," he heard Vicky say behind his back.


Good night!!! As if sleep was what he needed at that time. At that moment, all he had on his mind was Geet and Geet only. He wondered how would she react in the morning. Would she even come to class??? Poor soul, his heart went out for her.


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"Aaahhh," Geet stirred in her sleep with sunrays falling on her as Jiya pulled the curtains in her room, the following morning. They had a class to attend, in less than an hour and that too with... Maan!!! Nikki and Pari were all ready and already arrived at their place, waiting for them and here Geet was still asleep!!!


"Wake up Geet!!! You've got around half an hour to get ready," she told her, pulling the covers from over her.


Rubbing her eyes, Geet, reluctantly sat up. Her head felt heavy, she realised. Then it dawned upon her. Her meeting with Maan. The revelation. Her coming back home. Telling Jiya everything. How much she cried. She must have cried till she slept, she concluded. Oh and she dreamt of him too. Did she??? Yes, she must have, because she could vaguely remember him in her proximity. And suddenly, she felt as if her eyes were welling up again as she thought about what all Maan told her. But the tears didn't drop. They didn't. Jiya was fast enough to wipe them even before they dropped. She looked up at her and prepared herself for another break-down session but Jiya stopped her.



"No Geet. You can't let yourself be affected by that. Uss baat ko bhool jaao. I know. I understand Ke jitna aassaan hai mere liye kehna utna hi mushkil hai tumhaare liye karna. But you can't put your life to a standstill just because of that. And think of it like this. You always had the prejudice that your father disliked you because of your looks. But aisi baat nahi hai. I know it's wrong to justify what he did but at least you know the reason now. If ever this was kept hidden from you al throughout your life, in some way or the other, you would have always hated Uncle for his bias behaviour towards Sam. At least, you're free now. You're free from those unwanted relations," she tried reasoning her.
(No Geet. You can't let yourself be affected by that. Forget that matter now. I know. I understand that as much as it seems easy for me to tell you this, it's equally difficult for you to do it. But you can't put your life to a standstill just because of that. And think of it like this. You always had the prejudice that your father disliked you because of your looks. But that was not the case. I know it's wrong to justify what he did but at least you know the reason now. If ever this was kept hidden from you all throughout your life, in some way or the other, you would have always hated Uncle for his bias behaviour towards Sam. At least, you're free now. You're free from those unwanted relations.)



"No Jiya. I'm not. I'm still living off her," she said sadly.


"Don't worry Geet. We've got barely a semester left. After that, we'll start working and then you won't even need Sam," she tried making her understand.



"You're not understanding Jiya. Pehle baat alag thi. Abhi mera dam ghutta hai yeh soch kar Ke main uss Ke ehsaanon pe jeerahi hoon. Yeh ghar, yeh sab kuch zeher lagne lagi hai mujhe," she said, nearly crying as she buried her head in her palms.
(You're not understanding Jiya. It was a different matter earlier. Now I feel suffocated when I realise that I'm living off her favours. This house, everything disgust me now.)


And Jiya could understand her. She knew what she was going through. She wondered how she could help.



"Geet!!! Tum chaho toh we can shift to Dad's penthouse. University se thoda door hai but we'll manage. Lekin Sam ka kya? What if she gets to know?" She suggested and voiced her query.
(Geet!!! If you want then we can shift to Dad's penthouse. It's a little far from University but we'll manage. But what about Sam? What is gets to know?)


And Geet realised she was indeed right. She can shift to another place but what about her other expenses. Food, transport, exams, books... Ahhh she had sooo many things on which she heavily depended on Sam. How much she hated that at that moment. Na chah Ke bhi she will have to live off her, she sadly concluded.



"It's ok Jiya... Thanks for your help. But don't worry I'm ok now," she assured her. "Thanks for being with me," she said again, taking her into a hug. At least someone truly cared about her, she told herself. He also does, her heart whispered.



"Jeeez!!! I've got a quarter hour to get ready. Leave me. I need to shower," she said breaking the hug and dashed into the washroom.


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"I'm ready Bro. Let's go," Vicky said as he stood in front of Maan's bedroom, putting on his watch.


Receiving no reply, he looked up to Maan. What was he upto? He thought to himself. Maan was searching for something. Under the bed, on the bed, down, in his pockets, his suitcase. Aisa kya ho sakta hai? (What could be the matter?) He wondered.


"Bro!!!" He called out a bit louder. "What are you upto???"


"Vicky. Tum gaari mein jaake baitho. I'll just come," Maan said without looking at him..
(Vicky. Go and sit in the car. I'll just come.)


"But what are you looking for???" He asked.



"My pen!!!"


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We're definitely reaching late today, Geet told herself as she stood in front of her mirror combing her hair. There!!! I'm done. She said once she was done with her ponytail and quickly proceeded to ally some gloss. Suddenly something caught her sight. There was something beside her bed on the carpet. What was that??? Putting the gloss in its place, she turned around and went towards that *thing*. Bending down, she tried seeing what it was.


A pen!!! But whose??? It looked familiar, she thought to herself. She took it in her hand to take a closer look. There was something engraved. It was his!!! The one she had given him!!! But what was that doing here???


************

"What is it???" He asked her.


"Ohhh!!! A return gift," she replied with a smile.


He twitched his eyebrows at her words.


"You sang for me for my birthday na. So it's a return gift," she explained.


"Ohhh. Thanks Chaashni!!!" He said giving her a side hug.


"Ab kholo bhi!!!" She told him.

(Now open it, will you!!!)


"Ooohk," Maan said. "You seem more excited than me for my gift," Maan joked as he unwrapped the gift. And then he found a rectangular box. To Dearest Maan, it was written on the box. He was sure there was something impressive inside. He could feel it. And he opened the box.



In was a pen. In silver color and there were some wordings engraved on the upper part. To My Rockstar, Maan. He chuckled at those words. He sang a song for her and he already became her rockstar. How sweet was that. Coming from Chaashni, it had to be, he told himself.


And he could see an impatient Geet waiting for his reaction.


"Thanks Chaashni. That was really thoughtful. I... I really love it," he said with a glint in his eyes.


Awww. He was happy. Well, she was too, she thought with a grin.


"I'll make sure I keep this with me forever," he said, putting it back in the box.


"Really???" Geet looked doubtful. Was he serious???


"Of course. Haan yeh baat alag hai that I'll need to keep buying refill ink to feed the pen from time to time," he joked to which Geet giggled.

(Of course. But he's that's another thing that I'll need to keep buying refill ink to feed the pen from time to time.)



"Oh no!!!" Maan suddenly said.



"What???" Geet quizzed.



And he took out his googles and wore them on. "Rockstar ka khitaab mila hai... I'll have to live up to that now," he said jokingly.

(I've got the title of a Rockstar... I'll have to live up to that now.)



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She gently caressed the wordings, lost in her thoughts.



"Geet!!! Are you ready or not???" Jiya called from behind.



"Geet!!!" She walked towards her and tapped her from the back. "Why are you sitting down?" She queried and then she noticed the pen. "Pen??? Kiska hai?" She asked her.
(Pen??? Whose is it?)



"Maan yahan aye the kya?" Geet directly asked her.
(Did Maan come here?)



Maan??? Why was she asking??? Is that pen his??? Ab Kya bataaoongi Geet ko!!! (What will I tell Geet now!!!)




"Errr..." She hesitated.



"Aaye the Kya Jiya???" She again asked.
(Did he come Jiya???)



"Actually Geet... Kal raat after you slept... He came to inquire about you and insisted to check on you personally before going. Main mana nahi kar payi toh shayad...tabhi gir gaya hoga... I wanted to tell you Geet but I didn't g..." She tried explaining but she was cut midway by Pari who came to call them.
(Actually Geet... Yesterday night, after you slept... He came to inquire about you and insisted to check on you personally before going. I could refuse and so maybe... Then itself it fell... I wanted to tell you Geet but I didn't g...)



"You both are chatting her and there we are waiting for you. Let's go girls!!! We've got a class with Dreamy in 15 mins and I, for one, do not want to be late," she said the last bit in a trance as she thought about Maan.



Geet's eyes widened at that while Jiya just gave a nervous smile. Shiiite!!! Their first class was with him only. How could she miss that!!!


"Let's go then," Jiya said and quickly moved out of the room, saying her little prayer to have had Pari come at the right time for she really didn't want to be grilled by Geet any time soon.


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Will Geet come??? Maan kept thinking as he sat in his place. He was so keen to see whether Geet would come or not that he entered the class 10 minutes earlier.


And here he was, sitting and constantly looking at his watch. It was one minute to 8 and she was still not there. But she could be late. Her friends are not here as well, he reassured himself. He had a talk with Jiya in the morning and at that time she was not up yet. He wondered how she would be doing.


Stop feeling guilty Maan!!! You did nothing wrong, he chided himself as he once again wondered whether he did right in telling her everything.


Yes!!! It was all for her good. He somehow felt a bit better with that. And with that he proceeded to start his class. He couldn't wait for her forever. For THEM, he corrected himself.


"Like I..."


And then there was a knock at the door.


Ohhh!!! Here they were. How come they were only 3. He could see Jiya, Nikki and Pari. But where was she???



"Can we come in Dre...Sir??? Sorry for being late," Pari said.



And Maan simply nodded.


And then he saw her. She was behind them. Her eyes down, she moved to her place, without looking at him. But he did.


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NEXT


TaDa!!!
So That's It!!!
Hope You Guys Liked It!!!
Likes And Comments Are Most Welcomed😊😛😉
Until Next Time🤗🤗🤗


Edited by ...Zah... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
As soon as I came online you updated!! Feeling really bad for Geet but it's sad how she can't live independently but it's only a small while till she'll move away na? It's so cute how Maan still keeps the pen she gave him ages ago. Wonder why he keeps it with him all the time lol. No MG today :( but patience is a virtue lmfao anyways till your next update!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sara.

As soon as I came online you updated!! Feeling really bad for Geet but it's sad how she can't live independently but it's only a small while till she'll move away na? It's so cute how Maan still keeps the pen she gave him ages ago. Wonder why he keeps it with him all the time lol. No MG today :( but patience is a virtue lmfao anyways till your next update!



I've realised o should keep low expectations!!!

Just when I thought someone else will be first your comment popped up 😆 not that I'm complaining 😉


Thanks for your comment ^^
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update!!
Loved it
Maan said Vicky the truth and asked him nt to spill the beans
Loved jiya's care for Geet
Geet was sad that she was dependent on Sam
Glad Geet shared her sorrow with jiya
Loved the maan still carrying the pen gifted by Geet
Maan was patiently waiting for Geet!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update past is so cute
felt bad 4 geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for the next update
Thank you for the pm!!😊

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