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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
nice updates...every thing between maan & geet is moving fast forward. geet seems too confusing soul to me now... sudden humanity turned to love and wait...
story is moving in good pace but still can't enjoy their moments like I used to in general...
too many revelations but nothing is much clear except the back story of maan's family but no traces of real story
will wait to c what more to come.
all parts are almost about geet taking are of maan so nothing I can say in this ... I felt Dev is more normal and the only convincing character in the whole story...all felt more like fictional chars we see mostly in serials too much goodneess and too much confusion...LOL
I think after this comment u may not even feel like sharing me the pwd as I am constantly disliking Maan n geet in one frame but to be true I mellow down a bit in their case but can't digest romance an their ease that much
bhanu_rekhag posted this comment on thread 7.First thanx for ur comment. I could have replied it on thread 7 but it is better to answer here instead of jumbling up comments here n there when I have already started thread 8.
I am glad you reviewed whole updates in according to ur view point .But isn't it too rude to judge whole progress after 55 chapters.Will give answer step by step as you wrote.
1 : U said things are moving with fast pace between both..Really ? Geet took weeks to judge new side of Maan.From professional to family life. How he never claimed kids.How he respected all her decisions.To set this stage where they can open up I sent everyone out of frame and you are saying you don like them in one frame.
What u need I should knit whole plot who should claim kids .I thing kids are just part but real story is what happened between both.How she is struggling with herself if she should take him same person who abused her mentally and psychically when he was not in senses or this man whose whole new personality she discovered .
If it is important to keep them apart in next 50 chapters.Then for again 50 chapters and so on.This is fiction not real life.If they are in one frame there is a reason.Geet is struggling with herself and Maan he is guilty still doesn't ask for forgiveness.
He is discovering who really he is.What is importance of relations.Not just by committing to relations you do justice but to express is also important. Like what happened in hot argument between Vicky and Maan which cleared how much he loves his brothers n Daddi Maa .He had no option to chose one among Daddi or Vicky so he adopted different way . Following Grand Maa and supporting Vicky.But what he got hatred.
This new discovery how he helped Vicky and Diys is alive brought Geet closer to Maan. She found her kids in him.She kept his flash n blood inside her.And she is a woman who desires a man too.But as she did commitment to her only Maan had right to be in her heart n mind ..As love or hatred.
2 : If she is taking care of him what wrong with it.It shows these years made her strong enough to face that man who never cared . He is not any professional criminal but a normal human being and humans do mistakes To correct those mistakes any one deserves a change.
She needed answers so she is here with him. If they are not with each other how confusions could be cleared.
3: Dev seemed only sensible person.But he was doing what NT wanted , then his Daddi askd to find Geet, what Maan asked to find Diya and now what Geet is asking him to do even to consult Nandini.If she asked Nano to come her how she could be a confused soul.She wanted to find out what was reason Dia did so. So that she can help Vicky to move ahead and to love relations with different angle.
4 : For next track this is stage set intentionally.U said only old story was discussed .If old story of Khuraanas past was not discussed how u came to know where Dai Maa stood n what Dia was doing
And there was a valid reason Daddi n Maan disowned Vicky. It was not extremely right .But when Daddi had witnessed what Diya's bua did and how Dai Maa is claming Vicky as own upbringing .At that time how she could have kept mum as not a grand ma but being mother to motherless kids who single handedly started life just for sake of grand kids also handled business until Maan overtook.
5: Yes I am not a famous writer and you can say it flop drama it is upto u . If u think I should stop it give me a valid reason and I ask other readers frank opinion .Plz don praise it as saying me that this is a wonderful story and I am good writer.I need true views instead of praise.Should I stop.?
Lastly I ll change password series but not due to you but as planned.If u wish you can ask for pw.I have no prob and I always welcome frank opinion by readers.You can ask me rude but this is my side of story and why I plotted this till now I wanted to clear.
Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
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