MG Ss: A Fragile Heart chptr1A on pg 5 (06/08/16) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1A

Please Maan beta am bugging you to consider marrying Geet said a tearful pleading Gayatri. Fine ma i will marry her has i see you want her has your ideal bahu said Maan using his fingers has quotation marks. The Khurana sent the marriage proposal for Geet. Geet beta take Maan to your room so you can talk in private said a beaming Shoba. No Shoba ma it not necessary said Maan gave his mother a death glare for cutting him of. Maan don't be silly go with Geet and talk in private.

In Geet's room. Am only marrying you for the wellbeing of your unborn child she or he will need a father love. Am so doing this for Satyendra bauji, Shoba ma and Neelam because they have to face the consensuses of your stupid behavior. I think i said what was needed to be said you will find me down stairs.

Three months later Maanneet got married and completed all the wedding rituals. Maan carried Geet to their room. You can use the bed while i use the couch.

In Pratriek's room. Not only Maanneet got married also Praneel got married and Pratriek was not happy about marrying Neelam. I married you not because i love you but because bauji made me. I hate you so much because of you i can't marry the love of my life said Pratriek has he went to shower.

The next day Geet and Neelam prepared their sweet dish which was kheer and they got gifts from everyone. Suraj Pratap gave Praneel a two weeks honeymoon trip in Paris.

In Paris.
Went to surprise Paridhi but he was the one surprise because he caught Paridhi having sleeping with the guy she claimed to be her brother an angry Pratriek left from there and went to a bar and got drank.

The next day he had a hangover and he notice Neelam acting strangely because everytime he accidentally touched her she will flinch and pull her hand back quickly.

Then he notice a scar on her forehead and he came to stand next to her and she ran to the washroom and locked herself in the bathroom.

Recap: what went wrong in Paris Part1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start maaneet married but maan doesnt wanted to marry there prateek also married to neelam thnx 4 update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrtz for new story ..
interesting concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update . So maaneet are married but maan is not happy with this marriage. Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great update! well written! Maan forced 2 marry Geet! Prateek loves Pari bt also had 2 get married! he sees Pari wid a man! he is upset! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Geet is pregnant 😲
Maan decided to marry just for the families sake!!
Here Prateek too not interested in marrying Neelam :( coz he loved Pari
When he saw Pari with some other guy he drank..
Hope he didn't force neelam
Loved the start!!!
Plzz continue soon :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2(Part1)

Maanneet and Praneel have being married for nearly tow months but nothing has change except Neelam's behaviour toward Pratriek.

[SIZE =6]In Maanneet's room[/SIZE]
Maan was sitting on the couch in their bedroom reading a business news paper when Geet came and sat net to him and she smiled at him. Maan just stood up and he was about to live the room when Geet grabbed his hand.

Maan am sick and tired is your behavior towards me please talk to me we are friends right said Geet looking at Maan hopefully. You and i friend ha ha ha. We are not friends we are just co-parents that all. The friendships we had died the day you ran off with your lover living me at mandir waiting for like a fool you are nothing to me but a mother of my child. Don't worry i will love Ansh like my son i won't hold him responsible for his mother deeds said Maan living Geet heart broken has she has started having feelings for Maan.

Time Skip in the Evening
Maan we have to go look for Pratriek before something bad happens to him. Okay you stay here he said walking out of the house and Geet followed him behind when he reached the car he saw Geet behind his tail. Didn't i tell you to stay i will look for Pratriek!! shouted Maan. You did but am coming along you like it or not said Geet calmly. Fine hissed Maan.

Car ride
Geet told Maan what happened between Pratriek and Neelam in Paris. Maan stopped the car near Pratriek when they saw him hugging his knees crying.

Maan slapped Pratriek twice on both his cheeks. I am so ashame that you are why brother!! shouted Maan. Maan please stop it!! shouted Geet. Geet SHUT UP yelled Geet and Geet flinch has she passed out. Geet!! you see what you have cause me to do.

They returned back home. Maan what happened to Pratriek and Geet said Gayatri. See i told that your precious Neelu cheated with the boy we saw and Pratriek went to fight with him said buaji. Buaji if you having nothing positive to say about Neelam than shut your Venom mouth. I was the one who hit Pratriek and yelled at Geet said Maan heading to his room.

In Maanneet's room
Why did you hit Pratriek said Prajan. He forced himself on Neelam said Maan placing Geet on the bed. Everyone gasped. Why Pratriek said SP wanting to bit him up but Maan stopped him. Pratriek began to tell them what went wrong in Paris.

Sorry for the spelling grammar mistakes guys i will try to correct them soon.

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