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Posted: 9 years ago

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now really going to sleep..

Tama nd Dona..
lots of love..


yeah bye di n tama you too/...
main bhi chali ab 😆
kal milti hu 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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A Babe In The Woods

( Lots of Thanks and love to Donaa for this lovely banner )

Lying here in d dark i keep in thinking ...what mistake i have done .. what is wrong with me ...why i m like this ... cursed ..

Is it a sin .. to love .. to live ..why i m not allowed .. to see even a small happiness .. of my own ...

Lying here .. in dark .. give me light ..give me love ..give me happiness .. O Lord .


*****

Time passes, memories fade, feelings change, people leave, but hearts never forget .

When a day starts none cn predict that how it ended ,, many things cn change in a blink , than a day is much longer ..


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 28

Part - 29

Maan sat near her quietly ,, he was not looking at her but his eyes wr at her swelled hand ,, he slowly caressed that ,, his this action affected Geet nd she folded her fingers clinching sheet between them ,, Maan at once held her hand nd opened her fingers.

Maan: G e e t ,no, don't do this , it'll start bleeding again ,, ( he looked at her worried ) plzz don't .

Geet : nd plzz u go .

Maan : why Geet , when u want to punish them ,then why r u not ready to talk about that past ?

Geet: why do u want to talk about that , to save him nd his wife ?

Maan: no .

Geet: then ?

Maan : i want to talk about others nd u , who suffered nd still suffering .

Geet: i don't think nd find that others r suffering,, throwing parties , enjoying nd living a happy life never count in suffering .

Maan: this is not d real side of their life ,, they wr helpless nd still they r ,,we too wanted to punish him , but situations wr against them nd they wr bound to follow what other wr deciding .

Geet try to trust us once ,, we r not lying , u have some MU related to us nd i want to clear that , bcoz of one's wrong action we cn't accuse nd blame d whole family.

Geet smirked : Mr MK why r u doing this now ? it's too late now ,, if i m blaming then i have reasons ,, but right now i m taking action against d person who hit me last night , nd where i m wrong here ? Do u want any settlement for this ?

Maan still caressing her hand nd fingers ,, Geet tried to pull her hand but he didn't left nd tightened his grip ,, Geet was not getting his this side of behaviour ,,where as Maan was not able to talk directly ,, he wanted to make her believe that he nd his elders wr not supporting Dev nd NT but d elders wr fearing for their respect like they wr fearing yrs back .

Maan : u have all rights to punish ur culprit , but it cn hurt my parents nd DM ,, Geet last time i faced a big lose nd don't know what i'll face this time ? Why they nd me r getting punishment without our fault ? where r we wrong ?

Geet: nd where i m wrong Mr MK ? if u nd ur elders wr or r not at fault then what was my fault now nd then ?

Maan : u r not at fault Geet , but i don't know , why NT hit u ?

Geet: it'll be clear soon , when police tightened it's noose over her .

Maan: nd again elders'll face d punishment .

Geet snaped irritated: don't spoil ur nd my time nd tell me clearly Mr MK , what do u want from me ?

Maan hurt: i want plzz spare my elders from this mess .

Geet annoyed: how it's possible Mr MK , that lady belongs to Khuranas Or indirectly u want to bargain ?

Maan sadly: Geet they cn't bear this shame .

Geet smirked nd nodded her head: cool , but cn bear a girl's pain who was not at fault ,,( in anger) i heard u enough , now leave mr MK .

Maan hurt: i cn 't ,G e e t .

Geet annoyed nd irritated : show ur real side nd clearly said Mr MK , u want to save her , him nd ur family ,, trying to force again for settlement seeing me alone ,, nothing change ,,OK fine , speak about ur offer .

Maan hurt nd helpless: i just want to spare elders ,i m ready to bear any pain , u cn punish me if u want .

Geet with anger : twisting or playing with d words cn't change d main reason mr MK ,, ur nd ur family's purpose is same ... to save those criminals ,, better u stop this drama nd leave , i m fed up now nd ur presence is irritating me .


Maan face hung ,, his heart was crying seeing his parents nd DM in that broken state ,,again their lives wr in mess nd no escape ,, he knew well that Geet was right at her place ,, she deserved justice , nd both her culprit must be punished , but in all this few more lives wr suffering .

Maan who never felt defeated at business front but at personal front he was facing defeats ,, mainly for his elders who wr not at fault but facing d worst of their lives he wanted to stand with Geet , but she was not allowing nd trusting him .

Geet was observing him , there was only pain in his eyes ,, Geet's heart wanted to trust him , bcoz she knew that he too sacrifices his happiness nd faced d lose without any fault .


Maan: Geet i want to stand with u in this fight , i'll help u nd SU to get those culprits ,, just trust once.

Geet: O really , OK mr MK , i'll trust u if u bring that NT nd ur so called bro here , infront of me ,, only this help will prove that how much u want to help me ,Go nd prove Mr MK.

Maan gulped knowing that it was really tough , but he had to prove him for d sake of his family ,only then he cd hope any favour from her ,, he nodded .

Maan: sure ,i'll nd very soon come to u with +ive reply.

Geet : time'll show , all d very best Mr MK nd bye.

Maan understood that now he had to go ,, halfheartedly he looked at her nd then step back ,, his heart didn't want to leave her alone in that state , but to gain her trust he had to work hard .

Maan: bye Geet nd TC .

He slowly left d room ,, geet looked at closed door nd sighed thinking that how life was playing with her ,, again that B****** slipped from her hands nd she was sitting helplessly here ,, but how long ,now its time to fight openly ,, these Khuranas drama cdn't stop her now, but something stirred in her heart.

Geet remembered elders Khuranas hung faces sply Maan's pained eyes,, she cdn't trust them but one thing also clear that they wr not thinking much for that NT nd her hubby Dev ,but fearing for their respect ,,any one cd fear ,, she gave a 2nd thought to her decision to file d case against NT ,, police had their ways nd power ,nd if SU honestly stood with her then she cd try to keep Khuranas name away from it ,, with d help of SU she cd twist some facts to protect khurana elders nd Maan ,,she didn't like to drag Maan's name in all that nd she cd save her remaining respect too.

Maan reached in KC in a foul mood nd found d whole office was in a relaxing mod ,,he stood at d entrance nd glared all around then shouted .

Maan : what is happening here ?

All startled nd rooted at their places ,, they wr caught red handed nd even lost d courage to wish their boss .

Maan: i m not paying u for gossiping ,, everybody back to work nd remember if next time i found any of u like this then that'll be their last min in KC .

He moved towards his office ,, Adi who was in his cabin heard Maan's angry voice nd rushed out ,, he met him in corridor nd wished him scared hell.

Adi: gg good morn,, nai g good afternoon sir .

Maan: Adi in my office , nd call Shasha .

Adi: y yes ssir .

Adi went in a cubic nd called Pinky to make an announcement for Shasa,, he then rushed to his cabin , collect some files nd moved in Maan's office .

Maan: Adi find a best pvt detective agency nd fix a meeting with that ASAP.

Adi: dd detective age n... sir ?

Maan: yes nd quick , go .

Adi: ji sssir ,here r d files , u have to read them nd sign .

Maan: hmm ,i'll ,u go nd where is Shasha ? do u reschedule my meetings ?

Adi: yes ssir , pinky did that .

Maan: Ok call pinky with my planner , nd u do what i said .

Adi: ssir what happened to ge ,, miss singh ?

Maan: she is not well so took leaves for few days .

Adi left confused ,, here Maan sir was giving her information nd Geet was not picking her phone, even she didn't send her leave application ,, what happened to her ?

Shsha heard her name nd she got a shock listening that she had to report MK sir in his office ,, after strolling nd showing her authority on KC staff she was enjoying like an owner nd sipping coffee in cafeteria,, she almost puck her hot coffee when she heard that MK sir was in his office nd summoned her ,, she left d coffee there nd rushed to her cabin ,, Tasha who was also gossiping like other nd back to her work after getting MK's warning .

S: OMG!! Tasha MK is back ,why didn't u inform me stupid ?

T: how cd i ma'am ,i also got his scoldings .

S: ok , now tell me d folder of bP is ready nd d presentation if MK asked to see ?

T: yes folder is ready but have to check about d pres... ,, here is d folder( she handed Shasa a folder)

S:Ok,do it fast ,, u r not doing ur work properly Tasha , wasting time in gossiping .

Tasha looked at her stunned ,,who was blaming to whom ?

Shasa took d folder nd moved towards Maan's office thinking .. that bahanji took d leave without information ,, good chance to fuel MK against her ,, with a smirk she knocked at d door nd entered after getting reply.

Sa:Good AN MK.

Maan:shasa ,is this d way to handle d work behind me ,, ur whole team was gossiping with others ,, why didn't u see that ? where wr u busy?

Shasa startled , but play smart : w wo MK ,i went to check at upper floor ,i made them to work but u know now a days they didn't take my words seriously ,, that PS miss singh has spoiled all nd provoked othere not to listen me ,,she said who give me right to order other employee in ur absence ,, she never listen me nd today she took leave without any info ,, MK she is spoiling d discipline in office .

Maan : don't blame others for ur faults ,, i know about miss singh nd will see that myself , 1st tell me about d pending pres... , i m coming in 5 min, go nd get everything ready .

Sa(disappointed) : yyes MK.

She rushed back nd collided to Pinky when going out ,, crap .

Sa: stupid , cn't u see pinky ?

Pinky: sorry ma'am , but it was u who bumped to me ...

SA: shut up nd don't argue with me ,, living with that bahanji u to forget how to talk to ur Sr ?

Pinky: sorry ma'am.

Shasa glared her nd went to her cabin ,, pinky entered in MK's office nd handed him his schedule ,, Maan checked that nd sent her back ,, pinky went out but again bang to Adi who was entering in office .

Pinky: sssorry Adi sir .

Adi : hehe , it's ok pinky .

P: sorry sir, it's my mistake .

Adi: my pleasure .

P: jiii ?

Adi: wo u said sorry na, now go .

Pinky looked at him confused nd Adi entered in office thrilled ,, wow!! What a day ,pinky collied to him ,, hope it happen again nd again everyday.,, he was standing lost near Maan's table lost in his la la land .

Maan: Adi did u find any agency ?

Adi:****

Maan: A d iii , i m talking to u ,( kya ho gaya sabko)

Adi startled: yyyes ssir , here is d number .

Maan:Fine , nd now come for presentation .

He had a very tight schedule nd wanted to finish everything fast so that he cd visit Geet at night too ,, he didn't know d actual reason but his heart was restless nd wanted to stay with Geet .


Precap--- A tough time for Maan ...

Part - 30

sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nighty night di 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😲 o teri... 😆😆
gabbbar singh ka famous dialogue ...
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hahaha... kuch yea haal hai😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

🤣 bad luck comes in three perfect hai iss mamle me 😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



now really going to sleep..

Tama nd Dona..
lots of love..



ja so ja beta
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Posted: 9 years ago
chal dona main bhi chali...
kal milte hai...

gn
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice part
khuranas wanted to talk geet but were hurt n helpless seeing geet's avoidance
maan fed geet her breakfast
geet was so irritated wid maan's presence

waitng fr nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
very interesting n emotional story
read all parts in one go
n love ur writing very much ... u wrote it brilliantly
love it

geet suffered a lot... maan too suffered but still geet faced all alone with her family betrayal...
in Society n Respect name all played with geet life...
like it when rajji encouraged geet to fight for herself...

most heart touchy... geet disgusted herself... everytime u wrote that i felt crying... ur words made feel her pain

geet face all n now she some close to her justice...
i love her determination n clear n cut talk with khurana's(part 27) all were tongue tied bz geet was Right...

maan suffered a lot n lost his life ... felt bad for him too...
sam fiasco was hard blow for maan...

part 28

geet go to know about many things ... maan n khurana still her past experience didnt let her trust them... no one can...

elders still in same state n worried for their name

maaneet part was very nice... maan taking care of geet bearing her anger... like it

both started feeling something for other...
but still way to go...

eagerly waiting for maaneet talk

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