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Posted: 7 years ago

#831

Started reading this ff
Loved naughty Geet
Bechara maan
But i really loves this gundi Geet I can understand maan position y he is scared of her and y he is relieved after she went
But time change person and it change Geet also want to see how maan bring naught Geet back
Pls pm me the link

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its_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#832

Omg...

Chapter - 5 :

I just felt like beating that Dev black and blue... How can you do this ???

He got married to Geet just because of his father's will ?

I can't begin to imagine how would that feel as a wife to know such cruel truth about a relationship that's the most important for you.

Maan showed such sensibility & maturity in handling the situation and his way of comforting Geet.

Just loved the way Maan & Tanvi bonded.

Wonderfully written

P.S. can I have the next link please.

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its_me

@its_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#833

DEV !!!

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#834

Oh Gosh !!!

The more I read the more I feel like killing this Dev. 😡

Poor girl suffering for no fault of hers. 😭

It's too painful to see Geet as a silent, timid women.

Chapters 6 & 7 are actually the beginning of their "Yaariyan". The silent bond between two of them will be the foundation a strong friendship.

I'm loving the way Tanvi sticks to Maan. She's such cutie.

Brilliant work !!!

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#835

Chapter 1

First of all this story seems to be a refreshing change from the typical The MSK stories...though I like him the best in his arrogance and all, for once it would be nice to see him being a ploy at hands of the devil Geet Handa...LOL...

This Geet is something...blackmailing him and even made him apologize without any fault of his...that was hilarious...I loved how she made him a fool and for once he started doubting himself that he must have done something with that Richa...loved their cute banter

Loved the way Maan cribbed about her being his neighbor...LOL

I am sure Maan will take his revenge from her soon...

Loving their Cat Mouse chase...

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#836

Chapter 2

Naughty Geet is the troublemaker for Maan but is a sweet angel for the rest of the family members...oh boy Maan is jealous his mother loves that Gundi more than him...poor child...

Hahaha...she wanted a girl and got Maan instead...that is hilarious...nonetheless I liked her idea of getting Geet as her daughter-in-law and Maan's irritation on that thought was cute...

So Maan finally got his revenge by hiding the Kheer...that was lovely

I loved how Geet got Maan's father water and all...and then asked to make tea...that was sweet...am sure these sweet antics of hers is what makes her an angel before the parents...LOL

Oh, the real problem Maan has is that Geet is super brainy...even after the mischiefs, she is able to score well...and he does not want to be compared to his enemy...sounds fair to me...:P

So Maan was able to get one year away from Geet that is...great...freedom after all but Geet did not leave him after that...theirs is a special relationship but I am wondering where are the Yaariyan...they seem to be fighting all the time...

PS: Does your birthday fall on 1st of August...cool...that means its near only...Nice...

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#837

Chapter 3

Haww Maan...he is happy that Geet is going away...he is being mean...but am sure he will miss her...

he is going to realize that he secretly enjoys all the pranks...

Dev seems to be a bad news...I mean sure he is rich and all but he is giving me really bad vibes...

Maan taking care of Geet's parents in her absence was lovely...

She is not visiting her parents and neither asking them to visit her...there seems to be something fishy...I just hope Dev is a nice husband and does not torture her and all...I am just getting those vibes...

She had a baby...am that became the reason for Maaneet's Yaariyan...that was lovely...the whole Girlfriend thing was cute...

But I think Maan can see that there is something wrong with Geet...

I felt bad for Geet's words about girls not being able to enjoy their freedom and stuff...its true...am lucky I did not face any such situation but there are thousands of girls out there who are forced by their families to be a certain way... it is true but sad...

The last lines cracked me up...Maan is so scared of Geet ...he is running away from the prospect of marriage because of Geet...LOL.

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#838

Chapter 4

Dev really is a jerk...so arrogant...rather than being with his family at this crucial moment, he is busy with his business...is business the only reason for him being busy or there is something else to the story? The way he talked to Geet's parents was so rude...what is the use of all this money and business if one does not know how to respect our elders or talk to them...he is making me angry

Parents surprised at the way Maaneet are talking was super cute...Lovely conversation there

Geet not once asking her parents to come over really signifies that she is not ok

I am glad Maan went to New Jersey...He can now probably find out the reason behind Geet's sudden change in behavior...

Loved the bond that Maan and Tanvi have made...I always love Maan with kids...they shared some cute moments

PS: I loved the header concept...they really go with the flow of the update...really nice

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#839

Nice story

Geet is so lively blackmailing Maan to get money

For her icecream and making stories with the girl

She saw him Maan just lost in Geet telling his

Mother Maan's mother loved geet she also felt

Girls r colour full where as boys r boring

Geet shared a lovely bond with maan's parents

Maan Geet and both their parents together seems

To be a family more than friends

Dev behaviour was suspicious he may be handling

A big business or something but Geet didn't visit

Her parents for whole two years and they were

Not invited atleast at the time of geet giving

Birth to her daughter

Maan was thinking of Geet's daughter as his gf

So cute when he met geet he saw a different

Person in front of him instead of bubbly girl

Gifts send by their parents geet was feeling them

It shows she is missing them and longing for love

Tanvi had started a nice bond with Maan

Looking forward to read more of this story

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: its_me
Omg...

Chapter - 5 :

I just felt like beating that Dev black and blue... How can you do this ???
He got married to Geet just because of his father's will ?
I can't begin to imagine how would that feel as a wife to know such cruel truth about a relationship that's the most important for you.

Maan showed such sensibility & maturity in handling the situation and his way of comforting Geet.

Just loved the way Maan & Tanvi bonded.

Wonderfully written

P.S. can I have the next link please.